人教版八年级上册期末书面表达复习课件(共34张PPT)

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八上期中复习课件
Unit 1-Unit 10书面表达复习
Complete the diary about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
Wednesday, _______20th
Today the weather was ____________.I went to _________________________________________
______. It was ______________________. We ______________________________________.
I liked this place because __________________
_________. For dinner we had ______________.
It was __________.
In the evening, I felt really _______.
August
hot and sunny
Tian’anmen Square/the Palace Museum/ a Beijing
hutong
interesting/beautiful
took some photos / bought something special
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
important
Tian’anmen Square
the Palace Museum
a Beijing hutong
时间
I learned something
unit 1
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分析旅游日记结构
Wednesday, _______20th
Today the weather was ____________.I went to _________________________________________
______. It was ______________________.
We ______________________________________.
I liked this place because __________________
_________. For dinner we had ______________.
It was __________.
In the evening, I felt really _______.
August
hot and sunny
Tian’anmen Square/the Palace Museum/ a Beijing
hutong
interesting/beautiful
took some photos and then bought something special
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
important
}
}
所感所思
时间
I learned something
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to Tian’anmen.
It was interesting.We took photos there.
I liked this place because I learned something important. For dinner, we had Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired.
Beginning
Body
Ending
Diary
(记叙文)
Activity
Weather
Person
Place
Date
Reason
Feeling
Feeling
How to write a diary(内容)
假如你是Peter, 学校正在招募志愿者，帮助老师为同学们检测体温，工作时间是早上7：00-8:00， 请写一封申请信。
要求：（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to_____________________
__________________________________________
Yours，
Peter
unit 2
Beginning：
Main Body：
Ending：
Outline
1.致意：Dear Sir or Madam,
2.引入话题：I’d like to …/ I want to volunteer as…
1. 我乐于助人，经常帮助老师
2. 我擅长照顾别人
3. 我早上有空，住在学校附近，可以提早到校。
1. So I hope I can get this job.
2. If you need my help, please call me at.../ e-mail me at...
Here are my reasons：
Task 1:Make an outline
1. So I hope I can get this job.
2. If you need my help, please call me at.../ e-mail me at...
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to help to take the students’ temperatures. Here are my reasons.
First of all, I’m ready to help others. I always help my teachers when they are in need . Such as handing out text books, cleaning the classroom and so on. Secondly, I am good at taking care of people. I often help my parents babysit my little sister. Then, I live nearby. I can get up an hour earlier to get to school so that I can do the job from 7:00 am to 8:00 am. Last but not least, I want to play a role in keeping our school safe .
So I hope I can get this volunteer job. If you need my help, please e-mail me at Peter@. Thank you!
Yours，
Peter
本文结构完整，层次清晰，开门见山地提出要申请的工作，条理清楚地阐述了申请的理由最后提出希望，留下联系方式，符合应用文体的交际实用性。
unit 3
写作指导
相似方面: 用be both或 likes句式结构来描述
2.不同之处: 用比较级形式，用正确句式对比两人的不同
习题检测
I have two friends, Tom and Jerry. In some ways they are the same. They are both tall and thin. Tom is as quiet as Jerry. They both like playing basketball,and we often play basketball together. But in some ways we are different. Tom is more outgoing than Jerry. Tom has shorter hair than Jerry. Tom likes listen to music ,but Jerry likes watching Tv. They are both my good frends.
Possible version:
There is ________________ at Tai’erzhuang Ancient Town.
Beginning
Body
Tai’erzhuang Ancient Town is ___________________.
Ending
What to write about
unit 4
Write, polish, show
____in Zaozhuang (Title)
Beginning
Body
Ending
Zaozhuang is a/an______ city. There’re many good places/things ______.
Tai’erzhuang Ancient Town is _____________. You can
There is ______________ at Tai’erzhuang Ancient Town.
The most famous foods are _____________________.
Everyone can find_______________ in our city.
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Welcome to Zaozhuang!
假如你是Jim，常到镇上的三家商店购物，请根据提示，运用学过的比较级或最高级的句型描述三家商店的不同。不少于80词。
开篇介绍：引入话题并介绍自己最喜欢的一家商店
篇中展开：介绍第二家商店
篇末介绍：介绍第三家商店
Jenny’s Department Store the most fashionable(时尚的) clothes, the best service, the most expensive
Carol’s Department Store the most popular store, not the cheapest, not the most expensive, the friendliest clerks(售货员)
Ham’s Bargain Store the cheapest, the worst
There are three stores in our town. Of the three stores, I like Jenny’s Department Store best. Because it sells very good things. It has the most fashionable clothes. And it has the best service. However, people don’t often shop there because the things are the most expensive.
I also like Carol’s Department Store because it is the most popular store near our school. The things there aren’t the cheapest or the most expensive. And it has the friendliest clerks.
As for Ham’s Bargain Store, I don’t like it. Though it is the cheapest, it isn’t the most popular. In fact, lots of things there are the worst in town.
What’s the name of the movie
What’s the kind of the movie
What is the movie about
What does he think of the stars/movies
What’s his suggestions建议
Movie review
Beginning
Body
Ending
The movie is about a village girl, Mulan. She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army.
I think the actress played Mulan’s role well. The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie.
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan!
unit 5
How to write a movie review
name and kind
What’s your suggestions建议
Movie review
Beginning
Body
Ending
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you can choose....
.......is a/an…movie. …....comes from…
content内容
opinions about movie/stars/music
The movie is about…....
I think the actress/actor......
I like.....very much.
↓
引出话题
分析现象
表明观点
Do you like watching...
There are more and more... on TV recently, such as...
Different people have different ideas.
Some think that it’s fun to...
However, not everyone enjoys them, because...
And some students even give up...
As for me, ... so... that...
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↓
↓
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Writing guide
The name of the movie: The Lion King
The kind of movie: cartoon
What the movie is about: The main character in the cartoon was Simba, his father was the king. And his uncle Scar wanted to be the king, so his uncle killed his father. With the help of his friends, Simba came back to the forest and beat his uncle. At last, he became the ture king.
What you think of the movie/stars: fantastic
Mulan is an exciting action movie.
It comes from an old Chinese story. The movie is about a village girl, Mulan. She dresses up like a boy and takes her father's place to fight in the army. I think the actress played Mulan's role well. The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie. I like Mulan very much. The movie shows her love for her family, friends and country. If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan!
name/kind
outline(梗概，概要）
opinion（观点）
suggestions
Mulan, action movie
come from
Is about
dress up
take her father’s place
I think
I like
the movie
If you plan to
want to
choose
Tense(时态）
simple present(一般现在)& simple past(一般过去）
Movie review
新的一年就要来临了，你准备好了吗 请你以“New Year’s Resolutions”为题写一篇文章，内容包括:
1. 你的新年决心是什么
2. 你打算如何去实现它们
3. 你对来年的愿景。
写作要求:
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右
My New Year’s resolutions
unit 6
我的另外三个计划
计划一: improve physical health
计划二： improve relationships with my family and friends
计划三：how to do better at school
1.多吃蔬菜
2.不再熬夜
3.多做运动
1.帮助父母做家务
2.多和朋友玩游戏
1.制作每周计划
2.学好数学和英语
Writing tips
Point Analysis
Structure
Tips：
1.总-分-总 结构。2.一般将来时
Body
Beginning
Ending
How to share your resolutions
Resolutions are …
They may help to …

The first resolution is about…
I am going to…
I think…
Because…
The second resolution is about …
What
Why
What
How
Why
Conclusion sentence.
What
Sample writing:
Resolutions are promises to yourself. They may help to make you a better person and to make your life easier. I am going to make four resolutions.
The first resolution is about my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity so I am going to learn to sing. I think this will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together.
Beginning(开头)
What
Why
What
Why
How
Body(正文)
What do you think your life will be like in 20 years
I think I will live a ________ life. I’ll be a _________. I’ll live in ________, because_________________________. I’ll go to work by ________, that’s because ___________________________________. In my free time, I think I’ll like _________________, because I believe _________________.
I want to_____________, that’s why ______________________________.
happy
doctor
my hometown
I want to live with my family
bike
the hospital will be close to my home
reading books
reading makes a full man
keep healthy
I will often cilmb mountains on weekends.
unit 7
主体
开头
结尾
What will your life be like in the future
工作: I think I’ll be...
地点: I’ll work in ... I’ll live in ..because______
业余生活:
In my free time, I’ll ...
观点: There’ll be ....
…
I ’m sure I will…
and, but, because, so, though, what’s more, however…
My life in 2042 will be…
linking words:
Tips：
1.总-分-总 结构。
2.一般将来时
sample
What will your life be like in 20 years I think I’ll live a happy and full life.
In 20 years, I think I’ll be a doctor. As a doctor, I’ll save many people’s lives and help them live in healthy ways. I will go to work by bike, because it will be friendly to the environment. I want to live with my parents, so I will live in my hometown. In my free time on workdays, I will like reading books, because I believe reading makes a ful man.
On weekends, I will climb mountains with my friends in order to relax myself.
That’s my future life. I am sure I’ll have a wonderful life through my hard work.
Steps步骤
Yunnan
Rice Noodles
Beginning开头
Main part 正文
Ending结尾
In Yunnan, many people eat…
Now, it’s time to enjoy…
Ingredients原料
First, wash, cut…up
Next, cut…into…
Then, make…
Finally, put…into…
Then, cook…
Structure of the passage
一般现在时态；
主要用祈使句
rice noodles, chicken soup, chicken, lettuce…
unit 8
How to Make zongzi
Do you like zongzi Can you make it by yourself Let me tell you how to make it.
First, mix some meat, sticky rice, salt, and sauce together. Then, fold the reed leaves like a funnel and fill the leaves with the sticky rice and meat mix. When it is ready, tie up the leaves with string. After that, put zongzi in a pot, cook it a few hours . Finally, place them on a plate. you can enjoy them.
Is it easy to make zongzi It's time to make it for your family. I'm sure they will like it.
【写作指导】本题要求写两个小作文，一个是邀请他人参加聚会或活动的信函；另一个是答复伙伴的邀请信。
首先, 认真阅读邀请信所包含的内容：聚会或活动的类型；举办的时间与地点；客人是否需带礼物；客人是否需答复此信；何时及如何答复此信。
参照3a写一个包含上述内容的邀请信，注意运用提示词语。
【话题分析】本单元的话题是“邀请”，与此相关的写作题目往往以发出邀请、接受邀请或拒绝邀请的信函为主。无论是向别人发出邀请还是因故谢绝别人的邀请，都应语气委婉。写作时应注意邀请函的格式，一般包括称呼语、正文、结束语及签名等。
unit 9
what(activity)
How to write an invitation
event
被邀请人(whom)
邀请人(who)
正文(body)
Invitation
Salutation (称呼语)
Signature(署名)
when
bring anything
when & how to reply
where
体裁
应用文
时态
一般将来时
Pre-writing
Let’s practice.
Dear friends,
I would like to invite you to my birthday party at my house. It will be on Sunday the 2nd.
There is food and drinks. You can enjoy music or movies. After this, we can play some games together. It will be very interesting. You can bring your families or friends.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Please reply in writing to this invitation by Saturday the 1st.
Mike
假如你是Peter，你的好友李华在英语学习上遇到了一些困难。他想让你提一些关于提高英语的建议，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向李华介绍提高英语的方法，帮他提高英语水平。
1.多看英语报纸和杂志；2.用英语跟老师和同学交流； 3. 听英文歌，看英文电影；4. …
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. you asked me how to improve your English. Here is my advice.
unit 10
Beginning
Body
Ending
As we know that problems in our
life are quite common. ...
Outline
You’d better ask your teacher for help
Dear _______,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life.
You should read more .....
If you … your English will …
…is a great way to
Let’s learn some useful phrases and sentences.
You should do sth.
You’d better do sth.
It’s best to do sth.
If you…, you will…
I’m glad you trust me so much that you share your problems with me.
I will try my best to help you.
I understand you and I want to give you some advice.
提建议
愿意提供帮助
While-writing
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. you asked me how to improve your English. Here is my advice.
First of all, you should read more English newspapers and magazines in your free time. What’s more, you’d better ask your teachers for help. In addition, If you listen to English songs and watch English movies, your English will be better. At last, keeping a diary in English is a great way to help you learn English well.
I believe that if you keep trying and never give up, your English will be better and better. I hope that my advice can help you a lot.
Yours,
Mike