读后续写--感恩铸就职场机遇：乔恩的求职逆袭之路 讲义-江西省吉安市六校协作体2025学年高三上学期1月联考英语试题
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“Did you write your thank-you notes ” I asked my son, Jon. “Not yet, Mom,” Jon replied, rolling his eyes. “I’ll do it when I get back from Jim’s house.”
“Sorry, that’s not going to happen!” I snapped. “You’re not leaving this house until you’ve written a note to everyone you came in contact with during your interview.” “Even the receptionist who was rude to me ” Jon asked with a puzzled expression. “Especially her,” I said.
Jon had just finished interviewing with his first- choice company. It was a rare opportunity considering that jobs were in short supply. After an hour, Jon came out of his room and handed over eight thank-you notes. To my delight, they were all sincere and heartfelt — even the one to the receptionist who had been less friendly.
Before Jon left to visit his friend, he turned to me and announced, “Mom, I’m pretty sure that a thank-you note to the CEO or the receptionist isn’t going to land me this job. But if it makes you happy, then it’s worth it.” Jon was twenty-one years old, and I felt foolish telling a grown man what to do, but I also didn’t want him living in our basement for the rest of his life!
Ten days after the thank-you notes were mailed, Jon received a call from the company that he had interviewed with. When his cellphone rang for the second time, I asked, “Jon, why don’t you want to answer a phone call ” “Oh, they’re just calling to let me know that I didn’t get the job,” Jon said sadly. “I’m sorry to disappoint you, but they only give you a call when you get the job.” I explained.
For days, Jon had been worried that his school loans would be due after graduation and that he didn’t have a job lined up. He had thoroughly convinced himself that he didn’t get the job, but I knew better. Jon hesitated to answer the cellphone. But after my efforts, Jon finally gave in and went into the next room to make the call.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
儿子乔恩刚结束一家心仪公司的面试，就业形势严峻，这份工作机会难得。妈妈要求乔恩给面试接触过的每个人写感谢信，包括态度不好的接待员，乔恩虽不情愿但照做了，写得真诚用心。十天后，公司来电，乔恩认定是未被录取的通知而不敢接，在妈妈劝说下才接听。最终乔恩得知自己被录用，而这一惊喜转折与那些感谢信息息相关，让乔恩和妈妈都感慨万千，也凸显出感恩细节在求职中的重要意义。
二、伏笔与回应
伏笔：妈妈坚持让乔恩给包括不友好接待员在内的所有人写感谢信，暗示感谢信可能有特殊作用。
回应：续写中公司因乔恩真诚的感谢信，尤其是对不易被关注的接待员也表达感谢，认可他的为人与专业，决定录用他，体现出感恩细节影响结果。
伏笔：乔恩认为给 CEO 或接待员写感谢信无助于获得工作，与后文感谢信起关键作用形成反差。
回应：他得知被录用原因后，认识到自己想法错误，明白了感恩细节的力量，完成观念转变。
伏笔：乔恩面试结束交上八封感谢信，为后文公司提及感谢信 “脱颖而出” 做铺垫。
回应：公司来电肯定感谢信，侧面反映出乔恩在众多求职者中因感恩细节获青睐，前后呼应。
伏笔：乔恩不敢接电话，笃定自己未被录取，使悬念升级，增强故事张力。
回应：接听后得知被录用，惊喜感加倍，突出这份工作到来的意外性与感谢信的关键地位。
伏笔：妈妈虽觉对成年儿子提要求有些尴尬，但坚持让他写感谢信，预示妈妈的坚持有深意。
回应：结果证明妈妈正确，妈妈的坚持促使乔恩养成感恩习惯，收获理想工作，彰显家长引导的重要性。
三、续写要点
（一）第一段
故事线：我靠在墙边，听到乔恩接听电话。先是一阵短暂沉默，接着他倒吸一口气，随后声音因激动而颤抖，连声道谢，言语中满是惊喜与难以置信。挂了电话，他飞奔出房间，脸上洋溢着灿烂笑容，迫不及待要与我分享喜悦。
情感线：乔恩从接电话前的忐忑、笃定失败，到得知录用后的惊喜、兴奋，情绪瞬间转变，内心满是意外收获工作的激动。
（二）第二段
故事线：我微笑着问乔恩获聘原因，他眼中闪烁光芒，告诉我公司对感谢信印象深刻，称赞他的真诚、周全，尤其提及对接待员的感谢与众不同，展现良好品德与职业素养。乔恩感慨妈妈坚持正确，明白了感恩细节意义重大，我也欣慰他成长，深知生活中小事蕴含大能量。
情感线：乔恩心怀感恩，对妈妈的坚持从抵触转为认可、感激；我为乔恩成长、努力得到回报而喜悦、自豪，彼此情感升温，感恩氛围浓厚。
四、主旨升华句（英文）
Gratitude is the key that unlocks unexpected doors, leading us to opportunities we might otherwise miss.（感恩是开启意外之门的钥匙，引领我们走向可能错过的机遇。）
In the pursuit of success, it's the small acts of kindness and thoughtfulness that often make the biggest difference.（在追求成功的道路上，往往是那些小小的善举与体贴之举带来最大的改变。）
A simple thank-you note can carry more weight than we imagine, reflecting our character and paving the way for future achievements.（一张简单的感谢信可能比我们想象的更有分量，它反映我们的品格，为未来成就铺路。）
True professionalism is not just about skills, but also about showing appreciation in every interaction.（真正的专业精神不仅关乎技能，还在于每次互动中表达感激。）
Sometimes, the things we do that seem insignificant at first can turn out to be the turning points in our lives.（有时候，起初看似微不足道的事情，最终可能成为我们人生的转折点。）
五、写作示范
第一篇
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. “Hello This is Jon.” There was a momentary hush, and then his voice cracked with emotion. “I got the job Oh my god, that's incredible!” He stammered, clearly overcome with shock. I could visualize his wide eyes and gaping mouth. “Thank you so much for giving me this chance.” His words tumbled out in a rush. After a few more hurried exchanges, he ended the call and burst through the door, his cheeks flushed with elation.
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. “Mom, you won't believe it. They said my thank-you notes set me apart. They loved how I took the time to acknowledge everyone, even when it wasn't easy. It showed I was a person of integrity and respect. I never thought something so small could matter so much.” Jon looked at me, his gaze filled with newfound respect. “I'm so grateful you made me do it. This changes everything.” I nodded, my heart swelling with pride. It was a lesson neither of us would forget: that gratitude has the power to transform lives.
第二篇
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. “Hi, yes, this is Jon.” Silence reigned for a split second, then a sharp intake of breath. “Really I'm hired Thank you!” His voice soared with jubilation. I could sense his body tensing with excitement. “I truly appreciate it.” He gushed, his words dripping with gratitude. After wrapping up the call, he barreled into the room, a grin splitting his face from ear to ear.
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. “Mom, they told me it was the thank-you notes. They were struck by my sincerity and attention to detail. Writing to the receptionist especially caught their eye. It signaled that I could handle any situation with grace. I realize now how wrong I was to doubt it.” Jon's eyes sparkled with revelation. “I understand the value of these little things now. Thanks to you.” I smiled back, knowing that this moment was a testament to the power of kindness and gratitude. It was a victory not just for Jon, but for the principle of giving thanks.
One possible version:
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. “Yes, I’m still interested,” he said. There was a long pause, and then Jon cleared his throat and added, “Yes, I look forward to receiving the welcome packet in the mail, and thank you again for this opportunity.” I tried to pretend like I hadn’t heard, but I was not that good of an actress. I grabbed Jon’s arm, and we danced around the kitchen happily.
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. Even if he was so excited and satisfied, he hesitated for a moment and replied cheerfully, “Thanks, mom. I must owe it to the thank-you note. Obviously, the best thank-you note makes a difference.” Jon got it. Actually, I got my first job by writing a thank-you note to everyone I met during the interview. And I’m sure that, one day, Jon will be sharing the power of a thank-you note with his children.
“Did you write your thank-you notes ” I asked my son, Jon. “Not yet, Mom,” Jon replied, rolling his eyes. “I’ll do it when I get back from Jim’s house.”
“Sorry, that’s not going to happen!” I snapped. “You’re not leaving this house until you’ve written a note to everyone you came in contact with during your interview.” “Even the receptionist who was rude to me ” Jon asked with a puzzled expression. “Especially her,” I said.
Jon had just finished interviewing with his first- choice company. It was a rare opportunity considering that jobs were in short supply. After an hour, Jon came out of his room and handed over eight thank-you notes. To my delight, they were all sincere and heartfelt — even the one to the receptionist who had been less friendly.
Before Jon left to visit his friend, he turned to me and announced, “Mom, I’m pretty sure that a thank-you note to the CEO or the receptionist isn’t going to land me this job. But if it makes you happy, then it’s worth it.” Jon was twenty-one years old, and I felt foolish telling a grown man what to do, but I also didn’t want him living in our basement for the rest of his life!
Ten days after the thank-you notes were mailed, Jon received a call from the company that he had interviewed with. When his cellphone rang for the second time, I asked, “Jon, why don’t you want to answer a phone call ” “Oh, they’re just calling to let me know that I didn’t get the job,” Jon said sadly. “I’m sorry to disappoint you, but they only give you a call when you get the job.” I explained.
For days, Jon had been worried that his school loans would be due after graduation and that he didn’t have a job lined up. He had thoroughly convinced himself that he didn’t get the job, but I knew better. Jon hesitated to answer the cellphone. But after my efforts, Jon finally gave in and went into the next room to make the call.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
儿子乔恩刚结束一家心仪公司的面试，就业形势严峻，这份工作机会难得。妈妈要求乔恩给面试接触过的每个人写感谢信，包括态度不好的接待员，乔恩虽不情愿但照做了，写得真诚用心。十天后，公司来电，乔恩认定是未被录取的通知而不敢接，在妈妈劝说下才接听。最终乔恩得知自己被录用，而这一惊喜转折与那些感谢信息息相关，让乔恩和妈妈都感慨万千，也凸显出感恩细节在求职中的重要意义。
二、伏笔与回应
伏笔：妈妈坚持让乔恩给包括不友好接待员在内的所有人写感谢信，暗示感谢信可能有特殊作用。
回应：续写中公司因乔恩真诚的感谢信，尤其是对不易被关注的接待员也表达感谢，认可他的为人与专业，决定录用他，体现出感恩细节影响结果。
伏笔：乔恩认为给 CEO 或接待员写感谢信无助于获得工作，与后文感谢信起关键作用形成反差。
回应：他得知被录用原因后，认识到自己想法错误，明白了感恩细节的力量，完成观念转变。
伏笔：乔恩面试结束交上八封感谢信，为后文公司提及感谢信 “脱颖而出” 做铺垫。
回应：公司来电肯定感谢信，侧面反映出乔恩在众多求职者中因感恩细节获青睐，前后呼应。
伏笔：乔恩不敢接电话，笃定自己未被录取，使悬念升级，增强故事张力。
回应：接听后得知被录用，惊喜感加倍，突出这份工作到来的意外性与感谢信的关键地位。
伏笔：妈妈虽觉对成年儿子提要求有些尴尬，但坚持让他写感谢信，预示妈妈的坚持有深意。
回应：结果证明妈妈正确，妈妈的坚持促使乔恩养成感恩习惯，收获理想工作，彰显家长引导的重要性。
三、续写要点
（一）第一段
故事线：我靠在墙边，听到乔恩接听电话。先是一阵短暂沉默，接着他倒吸一口气，随后声音因激动而颤抖，连声道谢，言语中满是惊喜与难以置信。挂了电话，他飞奔出房间，脸上洋溢着灿烂笑容，迫不及待要与我分享喜悦。
情感线：乔恩从接电话前的忐忑、笃定失败，到得知录用后的惊喜、兴奋，情绪瞬间转变，内心满是意外收获工作的激动。
（二）第二段
故事线：我微笑着问乔恩获聘原因，他眼中闪烁光芒，告诉我公司对感谢信印象深刻，称赞他的真诚、周全，尤其提及对接待员的感谢与众不同，展现良好品德与职业素养。乔恩感慨妈妈坚持正确，明白了感恩细节意义重大，我也欣慰他成长，深知生活中小事蕴含大能量。
情感线：乔恩心怀感恩，对妈妈的坚持从抵触转为认可、感激；我为乔恩成长、努力得到回报而喜悦、自豪，彼此情感升温，感恩氛围浓厚。
四、主旨升华句（英文）
Gratitude is the key that unlocks unexpected doors, leading us to opportunities we might otherwise miss.（感恩是开启意外之门的钥匙，引领我们走向可能错过的机遇。）
In the pursuit of success, it's the small acts of kindness and thoughtfulness that often make the biggest difference.（在追求成功的道路上，往往是那些小小的善举与体贴之举带来最大的改变。）
A simple thank-you note can carry more weight than we imagine, reflecting our character and paving the way for future achievements.（一张简单的感谢信可能比我们想象的更有分量，它反映我们的品格，为未来成就铺路。）
True professionalism is not just about skills, but also about showing appreciation in every interaction.（真正的专业精神不仅关乎技能，还在于每次互动中表达感激。）
Sometimes, the things we do that seem insignificant at first can turn out to be the turning points in our lives.（有时候，起初看似微不足道的事情，最终可能成为我们人生的转折点。）
五、写作示范
第一篇
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. “Hello This is Jon.” There was a momentary hush, and then his voice cracked with emotion. “I got the job Oh my god, that's incredible!” He stammered, clearly overcome with shock. I could visualize his wide eyes and gaping mouth. “Thank you so much for giving me this chance.” His words tumbled out in a rush. After a few more hurried exchanges, he ended the call and burst through the door, his cheeks flushed with elation.
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. “Mom, you won't believe it. They said my thank-you notes set me apart. They loved how I took the time to acknowledge everyone, even when it wasn't easy. It showed I was a person of integrity and respect. I never thought something so small could matter so much.” Jon looked at me, his gaze filled with newfound respect. “I'm so grateful you made me do it. This changes everything.” I nodded, my heart swelling with pride. It was a lesson neither of us would forget: that gratitude has the power to transform lives.
第二篇
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. “Hi, yes, this is Jon.” Silence reigned for a split second, then a sharp intake of breath. “Really I'm hired Thank you!” His voice soared with jubilation. I could sense his body tensing with excitement. “I truly appreciate it.” He gushed, his words dripping with gratitude. After wrapping up the call, he barreled into the room, a grin splitting his face from ear to ear.
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. “Mom, they told me it was the thank-you notes. They were struck by my sincerity and attention to detail. Writing to the receptionist especially caught their eye. It signaled that I could handle any situation with grace. I realize now how wrong I was to doubt it.” Jon's eyes sparkled with revelation. “I understand the value of these little things now. Thanks to you.” I smiled back, knowing that this moment was a testament to the power of kindness and gratitude. It was a victory not just for Jon, but for the principle of giving thanks.
One possible version:
I leant against the wall and heard everything he was saying. “Yes, I’m still interested,” he said. There was a long pause, and then Jon cleared his throat and added, “Yes, I look forward to receiving the welcome packet in the mail, and thank you again for this opportunity.” I tried to pretend like I hadn’t heard, but I was not that good of an actress. I grabbed Jon’s arm, and we danced around the kitchen happily.
I asked Jon the reason why he got the job with a smile. Even if he was so excited and satisfied, he hesitated for a moment and replied cheerfully, “Thanks, mom. I must owe it to the thank-you note. Obviously, the best thank-you note makes a difference.” Jon got it. Actually, I got my first job by writing a thank-you note to everyone I met during the interview. And I’m sure that, one day, Jon will be sharing the power of a thank-you note with his children.
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