读后续写--拉里去哪儿了?—— 全班总动员的蜥蜴大搜寻 讲义-山东省青岛市四区联考2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题

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名称 读后续写--拉里去哪儿了?—— 全班总动员的蜥蜴大搜寻 讲义-山东省青岛市四区联考2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In our classroom, we have something called a job wheel. Our teacher put all the jobs on a small inside circle, and he put everyone's name on a larger outside circle. On the first day of every month, we turn the wheel to see what our jobs will be.
All year, I'd been wishing to be part of the pet-care team, and last month, my wish finally came true! Along with Miguel and Imani, I'd be taking care of our class pet, the lizard(蜥蜴) Larry! We took turns sharing responsibilities: giving him fresh water and food, cleaning his terrarium(育养箱), checking the temperature, and singing him songs. We were taking great care of him.
But one morning when we came in, Larry was nowhere to be seen! We made sure that we had put it in the terrarium and closed its door before leaving the classroom. We were so anxious that we went to the teacher's office to find our teacher. As soon as we told him what happened, he called for everyone's attention and let us take a 10-minute break for Operation Lizard Hunt. Leave no stone or notebook unturned!
The search began. Even with our entire class searching, we did not find Larry. All the students were disappointed and everyone was silent the whole day. I couldn't think about anything else for the rest of the day. What if he gets outside and wanders into the street Or he gets picked up by people who doesn't know what kind of treats Larry likes Sometimes when I'm stressed, my mind turns into a worry machine. By the end of the school day, I was panicked so much that I felt like I could barely breathe! Miguel and Imani were also upset and guilty. When we told our teacher how worried we were, he agreed to let our pet-care team stay a few minutes late to do one last search for the day
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly we heard a noise from the ceiling.
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When Larry entered the terrarium, we found the secret to its escape.
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一、文章大意
在教室的 “工作轮盘” 机制下,“我” 终于如愿加入宠物照料小组,与 Miguel 和 Imani 一同照顾班级宠物蜥蜴 Larry。一个月里,大家认真尽责,轮流承担喂食、换水、清洁育养箱等工作。然而某天早上,Larry 离奇失踪,尽管确定前一晚已妥善安置,同学们还是焦急万分。老师发动全班展开 “蜥蜴大搜寻”,但一整天过去仍无所获,“我” 满心担忧,脑海中充斥着各种可怕设想,Miguel 和 Imani 也陷入沮丧与自责,最后老师同意宠物照料小组放学后再做一次搜寻。
二、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔:教室有 “工作轮盘” 决定每月工作分配。
回应:引出 “我” 渴望加入宠物照料小组的心愿,为后续照顾 Larry 及因它失踪而焦急铺垫,续写中因这份责任心促使大家全力搜寻。
伏笔:“我” 一直期盼照顾宠物,上月愿望成真。
回应:体现 “我” 对宠物照料工作的珍视,所以 Larry 失踪时格外揪心,续写中这份热爱驱使 “我” 不放弃寻找。
伏笔:同学们离开教室前确认关好育养箱。
回应:强调 Larry 失踪的离奇,引发读者好奇,续写中发现育养箱漏洞时与之呼应,解释失踪原因。
伏笔:老师发动全班搜寻无果,大家一整天情绪低落。
回应:烘托紧张氛围,凸显事态严重,续写中找到 Larry 时的欢呼与之形成对比,强化喜悦感。
老师同意宠物照料小组放学后再搜寻。
回应:为故事转折提供契机,续写中正是这次搜寻迎来转机,推动情节迈向高潮。
三、续写要点
第一段:
情感线:从极度焦虑、近乎绝望,瞬间转为惊喜、充满希望。听到天花板传来声响时,心猛地一提,目光急切搜寻,看到 Larry 后,紧张情绪稍缓,燃起找回它的希望之火。
故事线:循声抬头,发现 Larry 趴在天花板灯具上,爪子紧抓以防掉落。同学们迅速分工,有人跑去借梯子,“我” 和 Imani 在下方张开手臂准备接应。Miguel 取回梯子后,小心翼翼攀爬靠近,最终成功将 Larry 捧在手中,全班欢呼。
第二段:
情感线:由找到 Larry 的喜悦,转为反思的平静,最后收获成长的欣慰。看到 Larry 回箱,庆幸之余,开始探究失踪缘由,找到漏洞、修补后,内心满是责任感与团队凝聚力带来的温暖。
故事线:将 Larry 放回育养箱时,发现侧面一个此前未留意的小孔,Larry 想必由此逃出。大家自责疏忽,赶忙用胶带修补,再次确认 Larry 状态良好。离开教室时,彼此约定日后照顾要更细心,深知这次经历让团队更默契,对责任有更深领悟。
四、主旨升华句
Responsibility is not just a task we take on, but a commitment that binds us together, especially when things go wrong.(责任不只是我们承担的一项任务,更是将我们凝聚在一起的承诺,尤其在事情出错时。)
In the face of challenges, it's our unity and perseverance that light the way to solutions, just like how we found Larry.(面对挑战,是我们的团结与毅力照亮了解决问题的道路,就如我们找回 Larry 那般。)
Sometimes, the scariest moments lead to the greatest growth, teaching us to be more vigilant and cherish what we care for.(有时,最可怕的时刻会带来最大的成长,教会我们更加警惕并珍惜所关心的事物。)
Every setback is an opportunity to learn, and our journey to find Larry was a lesson in teamwork and attention to detail.(每一次挫折都是一次学习的机会,我们寻找 Larry 的过程就是一堂关于团队合作与注重细节的课。)
True care means not giving up, even when the odds seem against us, as we did for Larry.(真正的关爱意味着永不放弃,即便形势不利,就像我们为 Larry 所做的那样。)
五、两篇写作示范
第一篇
Suddenly we heard a noise from the ceiling. My heart leaped into my throat. Was it really Larry I craned my neck, and there he was, looking down at us with his beady eyes, as if playing a game of hide-and-seek. Without hesitation, the class sprang into action. Emily rushed to get a broom, intending to gently coax Larry down. Meanwhile, Tyler and I stood on desks, arms outstretched, ready to catch our slippery friend. As Emily slowly waved the broom, Larry inched his way along the ceiling beam. With a final leap of faith, he landed right into Tyler’s waiting hands. A collective sigh of relief filled the room.
When Larry entered the terrarium, we found the secret to its escape. There, hidden behind a fake plant, was a small crack in the glass. It must have squeezed through during the night. We felt a mix of guilt and relief. Guilt for not noticing the flaw sooner, and relief that Larry was safe. Quickly, we taped up the crack and added some extra decorations to block any future escapes. As we left, we high-fived each other, knowing this adventure had brought us closer and taught us the importance of thoroughness.
第二篇
Suddenly we heard a noise from the ceiling. It was a faint scratching sound that sent shivers down my spine. Could it be Larry All eyes shot upward, and there, perched precariously on a ventilation grate, was our beloved lizard. The class gasped. Jake immediately grabbed a chair and stacked it on top of a desk to reach higher. Imani and I held the chair steady, our palms sweaty with nervousness. As Jake climbed, he whispered soothing words to Larry, trying to calm him. Inch by inch, he got closer. Finally, with a deft hand, he snatched Larry off the grate. The classroom erupted in applause.
When Larry entered the terrarium, we found the secret to its escape. A small section of the terrarium lid had come loose overnight. Larry, being the curious creature he is, must have pushed it open and wriggled out. We were mortified by our oversight. But instead of dwelling on it, we fixed the lid, double-checked all the seams, and gave Larry an extra treat. This incident made us realize that even the tiniest details matter when it comes to caring for something precious. We walked out of the classroom that day with a newfound sense of pride in our team.
【答案】Suddenly we heard a noise from the ceiling. It’s hard to believe that with everyone in our whole class searching, not one of us had thought to look up. But there was Larry, peeking out from a vent, just as happy as could be. Luckily, Mr. Jones is on the tall side, so all he had to do was stand on a desk and reach up with his arm, and then Larry could climb right onto his hand! The next thing we knew, our little escape artist was back in his terrarium, safe and sound.
When Larry entered the terrarium, we found the secret to its escape. When we tucked Larry in for the night, we saw that his favorite climbing tree had tipped over just enough to lift the corner of the terrarium lid a bit. Larry escaped from the hole. We repositioned the tree and put heavy books on it. The next morning, Mr. Jones brought in a secure terrarium cover. Our song about Larry still makes me smile when I think about it. So, making up a song or poem can make you focus on other stuff and help you feel better.
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