湖南省衡阳县2024届高三第一次模拟考试英语试题读后续写--森林绝境中的坚守与希望 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Last year, during the summer break, my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the forest. The forest had paths, and we decided that we would hike along the paths and meet at a central point to have a drink later. The whole team had several groups and we had planned on meeting with the rest of the team after three hours. I had a lighter,a partially charged phone, and a bottle of water. We continued on our way towards the deeper part of the forest until we were far from any recognizable trail. After two hours, we were in the deepest part of the forest, and we could not trace our other friends.
All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path, and we all run in different directions. After running for about five minutes,I stood alone in a bush. I had no clue about my surroundings as I had never been.there before.I shouted at my friends’ names loudly, but all was in vain:there was no reply, and the whole place was silent. I was confused and felt like crying as I realized I was alone with nothing to protect myself.With a lot of fear,I tried to trace the part where I had come from, but all was useless:l was lost.
As I walked along the path trying to locate my friends, I realized that I was tired, and nothing was looking familiar. I was out of food, water, and barely had any battery in my phone. I decided to walk through the bushes as the trees had grown so close together. I squeezed myself between the little trees. After some thirty minutes, it started raining heavily. Though I had heavy clothing, I was rained on until I was soaked up.I started freezing and praying to the God for protection and direction out of the forest.
注意;1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues.
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While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise.
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文章大意：去年暑假，“我”和朋友们去森林徒步，计划三小时后在中心点会合。深入森林两小时后，大家走散，“我”还遭遇了一头熊，惊慌逃窜后迷失方向。此时“我”又累又饿，手机没电，食物和水也耗尽，接着又遭遇大雨，全身湿透，寒冷无比，只能祈祷上帝指引出路。
伏笔以及回应
伏笔 1：“我”有一个打火机，为后文点火发信号埋下伏笔。
伏笔 2：森林有路径，暗示“我”试图循径找朋友，却无果迷路。
伏笔 3：“我”大声呼喊朋友名字，没有回应，突出“我”的孤立无援。
伏笔 4：“我”手机电量不足，解释后续无法依靠手机求救。
伏笔 5：携带的水喝完，食物也没了，加剧“我”的困境。
续写要点：
情感线：从极度恐惧、绝望，到燃起希望，最后欣喜若狂。
故事线：第一段写“我”利用打火机点燃树枝发信号，等待救援。第二段写听到远处声响，发现是救援人员和朋友，最终脱险。
主旨升华句：
In the face of difficulties, hope is like a beam of light that can lead us out of the darkness.（在困境面前，希望就像一束光，能引领我们走出黑暗。）
When we are on the verge of giving up, perseverance gives us the strength to move forward.（当我们濒临放弃时，毅力给予我们前行的力量。）
Sometimes, the most difficult moments are also the times when we grow the most.（有时候，最艰难的时刻也是我们成长最多的时刻。）
It is in the struggle that we truly understand the value of life and friendship.（正是在挣扎中，我们才真正理解生命和友谊的价值。）
Never lose hope, because you never know when a miracle might happen.（永远不要失去希望，因为你永远不知道奇迹何时会降临。）
写作示范1：
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. Remembering the lighter I had, I quickly gathered some dry branches and leaves. With trembling hands, I managed to strike the lighter and ignited the pile. The bright flames leaped up, lighting up the surrounding area. I hoped that the fire would catch my friends’ attention and that they would come to find me. Standing by the fire, I felt a glimmer of hope in the midst of my despair.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. My heart leaped with excitement. Could it be my friends I stood up and shouted as loudly as I could. The noise grew louder and louder, and soon I saw the faint figures of people approaching. To my great relief, it was the rescue team and my friends! They had been searching for me all this time. Tears of joy streamed down my face as I rushed towards them. I knew that I had survived this terrifying ordeal, and it was a moment I would never forget.
写作示范二：
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. I rummaged through my pockets and clutched the lighter tightly, as if it were my only lifeline. Scanning the area, I spotted a small clearing where the trees were less dense. Hastily, I collected every dry twig and leaf I could find. My hands were shaking uncontrollably, but I forced myself to focus. After several attempts, the lighter sparked, and a small fire began to crackle. The warm glow against the encroaching darkness gave me a shred of comfort. I sat as close as I dared, praying that the smoke and light would guide my friends to me.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. Instantly, I froze, my ears straining to identify the sound. Was it the wind playing tricks on me, or could it really be someone coming My heart pounded in my chest like a drum. I stood up slowly, not daring to make a sound. Then, faintly but unmistakably, I heard voices calling my name. It was like music to my ears. I yelled back with all my might, my voice hoarse but filled with joy. Moments later, the silhouettes of my friends and the rescue team emerged from the bushes. Relief washed over me in waves as I ran towards them, tears blurring my vision. This harrowing experience had taught me the true meaning of never giving up hope.
写作示范三：
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. Panic threatened to overwhelm me, but I took a deep breath and remembered the lighter. I stumbled around, searching for anything that would burn easily. Finally, I came across a pile of dead leaves and broken branches near a large tree. Carefully, I arranged them into a makeshift pyre. With sweaty palms, I flicked the lighter, and after a nerve-wracking second, a flame burst forth. The fire grew steadily, casting an orange glow that seemed to pierce through the thick forest. I huddled close, watching the flames dance, and hoped against hope that my signal would be seen.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. My body tensed, and I held my breath. Could this be the end of my nightmare I listened intently, and the noise grew louder and more distinct. Voices, shouting my name! Without hesitation, I sprang to my feet and screamed back. I could see the bobbing flashlights now, like stars in the forest. As the figures drew nearer, I recognized my friends and the kind faces of the rescue team. A sob of relief escaped my lips as I was enveloped in hugs. This experience had not only tested my survival skills but also reaffirmed the power of friendship and hope in the darkest of times.
参考答案
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. After many vain trials, it occurred to me that I had a lighter with me. I was wild with joy and decided to build a signal fire by collecting leaves and lighting them up for my friends to see the fire. Although it had been rained on, I was finally successful to light it. Everything in silence, only the howling of the winds and the cracking of twigs kept me company. I couldn’t help wondering what would have gone wrong because I had never had such kind of experience. While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. As the sounds got closer, I realized that those were my friends. I jumped with a lot of joy as tears filled my eyes because I knew I was safe. They shouted my name, and I replied very loudly knowing in my mind that I was saved. It showed me the importance of the use of the markings and of course the quality-calmness while adventuring in the forest. I also thought to myself that my being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.