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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was 8:00 am, and Amy pulled up her car beside a quiet park. While her kids, the student movie-makers, jumped out of the car and started unloading equipment to make a film in the park, she sat in the driver’s seat, reading a book.
She suddenly felt a little sad. These kids used to need a parent’s advice, help and caring. Now, as older teenagers, they were making their own decisions. She was just their driver. Anything else that she might be able to give to them was unwelcome and not required.
Emptied of its movie-related contents, the car only had bags of snacks and water and some personal items left. Amy’s job, as the driver, was to stay within calling distance with the keys so that if anything was needed she could open the car. Amy got out of the car, looking around for a place to sit down to finish reading her book in the fresh air.
It was early, but the sun was already beating down, and Amy didn’t want to sit in the heat. She found a park bench against a wall, in the shade. She noticed that a man was sitting on one end, but there was plenty of room for at least two more people.
When she was slowly walking in the man’s direction, the man noticed her. He thought she probably was just having a walk around and wouldn’t come to sit by him. He had just spent the night on the bench. Besides dirty clothes and hair, he had a smell of body sweat. He knew he was an unwelcome person. Usually, people wouldn’t even look at him, let alone sit by him.
“What if the lady asks me to leave and sits here by herself ” the man wondered. It was a hot day, and it wasn’t easy for him to find another place to sit out of the sun. Moreover, he hadn’t eaten any food for so long that he didn’t have much strength to move around.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench.
第二段：Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy.
一、文章大意
Amy 开车送孩子到公园拍摄电影，孩子长大独立让她有些失落，觉得自己从孩子成长中的引导者变成单纯的司机。在公园等待时，她想找个阴凉处看书，看到长椅一端坐着个邋遢的陌生男子，男子因自身形象不佳且常遭人嫌弃，担心 Amy 赶他走。Amy 起初未在意男子，沉浸阅读后察觉男子异样，心生同情。男子最终鼓起勇气向 Amy 求助食物，Amy 不仅没嫌弃，还热情帮助，两人交流中，Amy 感悟到孩子虽不再依赖自己，但还有他人需要她的善意，传递出人与人之间温暖相助的美好。
二、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Amy 送孩子到公园后，孩子自行卸设备拍电影，不再需要她的建议与帮助，暗示 Amy 内心的失落与角色转变，促使她离开车子寻找自我空间，才有后续与男子相遇情节。
回应：续写中 Amy 在帮助男子过程中，意识到自己虽在孩子处 “失宠”，但能在他人身上发挥作用，完成自我价值的重新找寻，填补内心失落。
伏笔：男子邋遢的外表，穿着脏衣服、头发凌乱且散发汗味，让他认定自己不受欢迎，为他初见 Amy 靠近时的紧张、担忧被驱赶做铺垫。
回应：Amy 不仅没避开，反而给予帮助，打破男子预设，以善良回应他的不安，化解其内心恐惧，两人隔阂消除。
伏笔：Amy 注意到长椅在阴凉处且有位置，选择走向它，推动她与男子同坐一条长椅情节发展，也为两人近距离互动创造条件。
回应：同坐长椅使 Amy 近距离观察到男子不适，引发同情，进而促使男子有机会开口求助，故事得以推进。
伏笔：描写天气炎热，太阳暴晒，既解释男子不愿离开长椅另寻他处的原因，又侧面烘托他处境艰难，急需帮助。
回应：Amy 基于此理解男子困境，毫不犹豫提供食物和水，让男子熬过酷热，解决当下难题。
伏笔：男子长时间未进食，身体虚弱无力挪动，突出他的窘迫，强化他向 Amy 开口求助的合理性，使故事转折不突兀。
回应：Amy 的及时援助雪中送炭，让男子生存状况改善，后续交流互动更显温情，升华人与人互助主题。
三、续写要点
（一）故事线
第一段：Amy 看到男子窘迫模样，主动搭话，轻声询问男子状况，男子略带羞涩讲述自己流浪经历，Amy 静静倾听，期间递上纸巾让男子擦拭汗水，两人距离拉近。
第二段：男子吃饱喝足恢复些许精力，对 Amy 敞开心扉，聊起过往美好回忆与如今落魄缘由，Amy 不时给予安慰鼓励，分享自己育儿感悟，最后分别时，彼此微笑祝福，男子重拾生活信心，Amy 也满怀温暖离开。
（二）情感线
起始 Amy 因孩子独立感到失落、孤独；遇到男子后，从最初的不在意到察觉异样后的同情；男子从害怕被驱赶的忐忑，到获得帮助后的感激；最终两人交流后互相温暖，Amy 重获价值感，男子找回希望，共同达成情感的正向升华。
四、主旨升华句（5 句英文）
“In the most unexpected encounters, a simple act of kindness can be the beacon that guides lost souls back to hope.”（在最意想不到的相遇中，一个简单的善举可以成为指引迷失灵魂重回希望的灯塔。）
“Kindness knows no boundaries of appearance or social status; it has the power to bridge the gap between hearts.”（善良不分外表与社会地位的界限，它有能力弥合心灵之间的鸿沟。）
“Even when we feel insignificant in one aspect of life, there are always opportunities to make a difference in someone else’s.”（即使我们在生活的某个方面感觉微不足道，总有机会在别人的生活中发挥作用。）
“A small gesture of humanity in a vast world can create ripples of change, spreading warmth and restoring faith.”（在广阔的世界里，一个小小的人性举动可以掀起变革的涟漪，传播温暖，重拾信念。）
“True connection is forged not in comfort and familiarity, but in reaching out to those in need with an open heart.”（真正的联系不是在舒适和熟悉中形成的，而是在向有需要的人敞开心扉伸出援手时铸就的。）
五、写作示范
（一）
第一段：
Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench. She stole a quick glance at the man, his haggard look tugging at her heartstrings. After a moment’s hesitation, she softly asked, “Are you okay It seems you’ve had a rough time.” The man looked up, startled, then nodded shyly. As he began to share snippets of his story – lost his job, family troubles – Amy listened attentively, passing him a tissue when she saw tears welling up. The heat seemed less oppressive as a bond started to form between them.
第二段：
Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy. “Ma’am, I don’t know how to thank you enough. You see, I used to have a good life, but things went south.” Amy placed a gentle hand on his shoulder and said, “We all face setbacks. You’ll get through this.” She then opened up about her own struggles with her kids growing up. Their conversation flowed, filled with shared laughter and mutual understanding. As they parted ways, the man’s eyes sparkled with newfound hope, and Amy left with a heart full of the warmth that comes from giving.
（二）
第一段：
Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench. She noticed the man’s trembling hands and the defeated look in his eyes. Sympathy washed over her, and she initiated a conversation. “It’s a tough day, isn’t it Would you like to talk about it ” The man hesitated, then mumbled about being homeless for weeks. Amy nodded understandingly, offering him a sip of her water. Their dialogue continued, and the man seemed to relax a bit, realizing he’d found an empathetic ear.
第二段：
Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy. “Ma’am, you’re an angel. I haven’t talked to anyone like this in ages.” Amy smiled and replied, “We’re all in this together.” She shared her experiences of finding purpose beyond parenting, inspiring the man. He, in turn, told her his dreams before life derailed. By the end, they exchanged contact info, promising to keep in touch. Amy knew she’d not only helped a stranger but also discovered a new way to fill her own life with meaning.
读后续写参考答案
Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench. She found that the man was looking at her strangely. She looked at him and quickly noticed his messy clothes and hair, and she was soon confronted with a strong unpleasant smell of body sweat. The man appeared embarrassed, thinking, “If she asks me to leave, I’ll leave.” To his surprise, Amy just smiled at him. They both sat there quietly. Amy was reading while the man was watching the filming. Finally, the man was so hungry that he felt he would faint soon.
Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy. “Excuse me, miss,” he began hesitantly, his voice barely above a whisper. “I hate to ask, but could you... possibly spare something to eat I’m so hungry.” Amy immediately set the book aside, “Of course, I can help.” Then she stood up and walked quickly to her car, returning shortly with bags of biscuits and a bottle of water. The man’s eyes widened in gratitude as Amy handed him the food and water. “Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.” Amy smiled warmly, her heart lifting to see the positive impact her simple act of kindness had had on the man.
It was 8:00 am, and Amy pulled up her car beside a quiet park. While her kids, the student movie-makers, jumped out of the car and started unloading equipment to make a film in the park, she sat in the driver’s seat, reading a book.
She suddenly felt a little sad. These kids used to need a parent’s advice, help and caring. Now, as older teenagers, they were making their own decisions. She was just their driver. Anything else that she might be able to give to them was unwelcome and not required.
Emptied of its movie-related contents, the car only had bags of snacks and water and some personal items left. Amy’s job, as the driver, was to stay within calling distance with the keys so that if anything was needed she could open the car. Amy got out of the car, looking around for a place to sit down to finish reading her book in the fresh air.
It was early, but the sun was already beating down, and Amy didn’t want to sit in the heat. She found a park bench against a wall, in the shade. She noticed that a man was sitting on one end, but there was plenty of room for at least two more people.
When she was slowly walking in the man’s direction, the man noticed her. He thought she probably was just having a walk around and wouldn’t come to sit by him. He had just spent the night on the bench. Besides dirty clothes and hair, he had a smell of body sweat. He knew he was an unwelcome person. Usually, people wouldn’t even look at him, let alone sit by him.
“What if the lady asks me to leave and sits here by herself ” the man wondered. It was a hot day, and it wasn’t easy for him to find another place to sit out of the sun. Moreover, he hadn’t eaten any food for so long that he didn’t have much strength to move around.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench.
第二段：Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy.
一、文章大意
Amy 开车送孩子到公园拍摄电影，孩子长大独立让她有些失落，觉得自己从孩子成长中的引导者变成单纯的司机。在公园等待时，她想找个阴凉处看书，看到长椅一端坐着个邋遢的陌生男子，男子因自身形象不佳且常遭人嫌弃，担心 Amy 赶他走。Amy 起初未在意男子，沉浸阅读后察觉男子异样，心生同情。男子最终鼓起勇气向 Amy 求助食物，Amy 不仅没嫌弃，还热情帮助，两人交流中，Amy 感悟到孩子虽不再依赖自己，但还有他人需要她的善意，传递出人与人之间温暖相助的美好。
二、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Amy 送孩子到公园后，孩子自行卸设备拍电影，不再需要她的建议与帮助，暗示 Amy 内心的失落与角色转变，促使她离开车子寻找自我空间，才有后续与男子相遇情节。
回应：续写中 Amy 在帮助男子过程中，意识到自己虽在孩子处 “失宠”，但能在他人身上发挥作用，完成自我价值的重新找寻，填补内心失落。
伏笔：男子邋遢的外表，穿着脏衣服、头发凌乱且散发汗味，让他认定自己不受欢迎，为他初见 Amy 靠近时的紧张、担忧被驱赶做铺垫。
回应：Amy 不仅没避开，反而给予帮助，打破男子预设，以善良回应他的不安，化解其内心恐惧，两人隔阂消除。
伏笔：Amy 注意到长椅在阴凉处且有位置，选择走向它，推动她与男子同坐一条长椅情节发展，也为两人近距离互动创造条件。
回应：同坐长椅使 Amy 近距离观察到男子不适，引发同情，进而促使男子有机会开口求助，故事得以推进。
伏笔：描写天气炎热，太阳暴晒，既解释男子不愿离开长椅另寻他处的原因，又侧面烘托他处境艰难，急需帮助。
回应：Amy 基于此理解男子困境，毫不犹豫提供食物和水，让男子熬过酷热，解决当下难题。
伏笔：男子长时间未进食，身体虚弱无力挪动，突出他的窘迫，强化他向 Amy 开口求助的合理性，使故事转折不突兀。
回应：Amy 的及时援助雪中送炭，让男子生存状况改善，后续交流互动更显温情，升华人与人互助主题。
三、续写要点
（一）故事线
第一段：Amy 看到男子窘迫模样，主动搭话，轻声询问男子状况，男子略带羞涩讲述自己流浪经历，Amy 静静倾听，期间递上纸巾让男子擦拭汗水，两人距离拉近。
第二段：男子吃饱喝足恢复些许精力，对 Amy 敞开心扉，聊起过往美好回忆与如今落魄缘由，Amy 不时给予安慰鼓励，分享自己育儿感悟，最后分别时，彼此微笑祝福，男子重拾生活信心，Amy 也满怀温暖离开。
（二）情感线
起始 Amy 因孩子独立感到失落、孤独；遇到男子后，从最初的不在意到察觉异样后的同情；男子从害怕被驱赶的忐忑，到获得帮助后的感激；最终两人交流后互相温暖，Amy 重获价值感，男子找回希望，共同达成情感的正向升华。
四、主旨升华句（5 句英文）
“In the most unexpected encounters, a simple act of kindness can be the beacon that guides lost souls back to hope.”（在最意想不到的相遇中，一个简单的善举可以成为指引迷失灵魂重回希望的灯塔。）
“Kindness knows no boundaries of appearance or social status; it has the power to bridge the gap between hearts.”（善良不分外表与社会地位的界限，它有能力弥合心灵之间的鸿沟。）
“Even when we feel insignificant in one aspect of life, there are always opportunities to make a difference in someone else’s.”（即使我们在生活的某个方面感觉微不足道，总有机会在别人的生活中发挥作用。）
“A small gesture of humanity in a vast world can create ripples of change, spreading warmth and restoring faith.”（在广阔的世界里，一个小小的人性举动可以掀起变革的涟漪，传播温暖，重拾信念。）
“True connection is forged not in comfort and familiarity, but in reaching out to those in need with an open heart.”（真正的联系不是在舒适和熟悉中形成的，而是在向有需要的人敞开心扉伸出援手时铸就的。）
五、写作示范
（一）
第一段：
Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench. She stole a quick glance at the man, his haggard look tugging at her heartstrings. After a moment’s hesitation, she softly asked, “Are you okay It seems you’ve had a rough time.” The man looked up, startled, then nodded shyly. As he began to share snippets of his story – lost his job, family troubles – Amy listened attentively, passing him a tissue when she saw tears welling up. The heat seemed less oppressive as a bond started to form between them.
第二段：
Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy. “Ma’am, I don’t know how to thank you enough. You see, I used to have a good life, but things went south.” Amy placed a gentle hand on his shoulder and said, “We all face setbacks. You’ll get through this.” She then opened up about her own struggles with her kids growing up. Their conversation flowed, filled with shared laughter and mutual understanding. As they parted ways, the man’s eyes sparkled with newfound hope, and Amy left with a heart full of the warmth that comes from giving.
（二）
第一段：
Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench. She noticed the man’s trembling hands and the defeated look in his eyes. Sympathy washed over her, and she initiated a conversation. “It’s a tough day, isn’t it Would you like to talk about it ” The man hesitated, then mumbled about being homeless for weeks. Amy nodded understandingly, offering him a sip of her water. Their dialogue continued, and the man seemed to relax a bit, realizing he’d found an empathetic ear.
第二段：
Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy. “Ma’am, you’re an angel. I haven’t talked to anyone like this in ages.” Amy smiled and replied, “We’re all in this together.” She shared her experiences of finding purpose beyond parenting, inspiring the man. He, in turn, told her his dreams before life derailed. By the end, they exchanged contact info, promising to keep in touch. Amy knew she’d not only helped a stranger but also discovered a new way to fill her own life with meaning.
读后续写参考答案
Soon, Amy stopped by the bench and sat on the other end of the bench. She found that the man was looking at her strangely. She looked at him and quickly noticed his messy clothes and hair, and she was soon confronted with a strong unpleasant smell of body sweat. The man appeared embarrassed, thinking, “If she asks me to leave, I’ll leave.” To his surprise, Amy just smiled at him. They both sat there quietly. Amy was reading while the man was watching the filming. Finally, the man was so hungry that he felt he would faint soon.
Gathering his courage, the man turned to Amy. “Excuse me, miss,” he began hesitantly, his voice barely above a whisper. “I hate to ask, but could you... possibly spare something to eat I’m so hungry.” Amy immediately set the book aside, “Of course, I can help.” Then she stood up and walked quickly to her car, returning shortly with bags of biscuits and a bottle of water. The man’s eyes widened in gratitude as Amy handed him the food and water. “Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.” Amy smiled warmly, her heart lifting to see the positive impact her simple act of kindness had had on the man.