读后续写--河边的追逐，力求将东西物归原主 讲义 - 江苏省宿迁市2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题
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Race at River’s Edge
When we arrived in Tournus, my cousin Gabriel and I parked our bikes and walked to the town square. We’d just ridden 33 kilometers, and we were starving. We planned to get lunch and then ride back to Macon, a small city in France on the Sa ne River. I was spending the summer there with Gabriel’s family. It was market day. Locals are busy filling their baskets with groceries. Tourists hunted for souvenirs. Gabriel and I bought a long, thin loaf of bread and some cheese I’m obsessed with. It tastes awesome.
As we ate, I noticed a girl wearing a USA Basketball T-shirt. She smiled at us. Basketball is big in France too. You can even watch NBA games on TV. The girl stopped to shop with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike.
I saw them again by the river. They sat on a bench enjoying their snacks in front of a long, narrow riverboat named Voyageur, which had docked (停靠码头) earlier. Then they boarded the boat. It was preparing to leave. As the ship started to pull away, I spotted a colorful shopping bag on the bench. The girl had left it!
I looked up. Some passengers were gathering on the upper deck of the riverboat, including the girl and her mom.
I held up the bag and waved it to get their attention while Gabriel called to them.
When the girl noticed the bag, she opened her mouth in surprise. But her face fell as the boat started to pull away from the dock. She didn’t think she’d get her stuff back.
“Maybe we can throw it to her, Hugo! ” Gabriel said.
“It’s too light, ” I said. “It would end up in the river. We have to find a way to return it! ”
Running alongside the boat, Gabriel learned from a sailor that the boat’s next stop was Macon—our destination as well.
“Do you think we can keep up ” I asked.
Gabriel laughed. “We’re about to find out! ”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答案纸的相应位置作答。
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
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We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ”
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文章大意：“我” 和表哥 Gabriel 骑行 33 公里到 Tournus 后，在集市买了食物，正吃时发现一个穿美国篮球 T 恤的女孩，之后又在河边见她和妈妈登上一艘名为 Voyageur 的船，船开时女孩落下彩色购物袋。“我们” 想归还，得知船下一站是 “我们” 也要回的 Macon，于是决定追赶，想办法把袋子物归原主。
伏笔与回应：
伏笔：“我们” 刚骑行 33 公里又饿又累。回应：后续却毫不犹豫地全力追赶游船，突出归还物品的决心，不顾身体疲惫也要做正确的事。
伏笔：女孩落下购物袋时船已启动。回应：这引发 “我们” 焦急追赶，才有后面一路的艰辛追逐与坚持，让故事充满紧张感。
伏笔：看到女孩穿美国篮球 T 恤，“我” 留意到她。回应：因这份留意才会及时发现落下的袋子，促使故事围绕归还袋子展开。
伏笔：“我们” 得知船下一站是 Macon。回应：给 “我们” 追赶提供可能，让故事有了合理发展方向，不然 “我们” 可能放弃归还。
伏笔：集市很热闹，人来人往。回应：在热闹集市中 “我们” 仍关注到女孩，体现 “我们” 细心，也为故事开端铺垫，若集市冷清可能遇不见女孩。
续写要点：
情感线：第一段，从决定追赶时的坚定，途中体力不支的疲惫、焦急，怕追不上的担忧；第二段，以为失败的失落，到看见女孩的惊喜、兴奋，归还成功后的自豪欣慰。
故事线：第一段写 “我们” 奋力骑车追赶游船，克服路途上的困难，如体力消耗、道路崎岖等；第二段写到达 Macon 后找到女孩，归还袋子，收获感谢。
主旨升华句：
“A small act of kindness can travel miles, just like our chase after the boat to return what's lost.”（一个小小的善举可以传播很远，就如同我们追逐船只归还失物。）
“In the race against time and distance, our perseverance to do the right thing shone through.”（在与时间和距离的赛跑中，我们坚持做正确事情的决心熠熠生辉。）
“True friendship is tested and strengthened when we go out of our way for others, as Gabriel and I did.”（当我们为他人不辞辛劳时，真正的友谊得到考验与强化，就像我和 Gabriel 所做的。）
“Even in the face of challenges, a determined heart can bridge any gap, be it between a boat and the shore.”（即使面临挑战，一颗坚定的心可以跨越任何鸿沟，无论是船与岸之间的距离。）
“Kindness knows no boundaries, and our pursuit to return the bag proved that it's worth every effort.”（善良无界限，我们归还袋子的追求证明了一切努力都是值得的。）
写作示范：
第一篇
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
The sun was high and unforgiving, beating down on us as we pedaled with all our might. Our legs quickly grew tired, but the thought of the girl's disappointed face spurred us on. The road was uneven, and we had to swerve to avoid potholes while keeping an eye on the boat in the distance. Gabriel led the way, shouting words of encouragement. Sweat poured down our faces, but we didn't dare slow down.
We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ”
My heart leaped with joy. We ditched our bikes and rushed towards the dock. The girl and her mom were just getting off. When she saw us, her eyes widened in disbelief. “You guys actually chased us all the way here ” she exclaimed. We handed her the bag, panting. She rummaged through it and pulled out a small token, pressing it into our hands. “Thank you so much. This means the world to me.” We grinned at each other, knowing our efforts had been worth it.
第二篇
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
Wind whistled past our ears as we sped up, our bikes creaking under the strain. We passed by the beautiful French countryside, but had no time to admire it. I could feel the weight of the bag and our responsibility. Gabriel's face was set with determination, his muscles tensed as he pumped the pedals. Every now and then, we'd lose sight of the boat and panic, only to spot it again.
We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ”
A surge of energy coursed through me. We abandoned our bikes and sprinted forward. The girl and her mom were walking away from the dock. “Wait!” we yelled. They turned around, surprised. When we handed over the bag, the girl beamed. “I thought I'd never see this again. You two are heroes!” She gave us a big hug. At that moment, all our exhaustion vanished, replaced by a warm sense of accomplishment.
【答案】
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set oft. Without hesitation, we grabbed our bikes and quickly calculated the time it would take to beat the boat to Macon. It would be close, but if we rode fast enough, we just might make it. Gabriel and I jumped on our bikes and started pedaling as hard as we could. The wind blew against our faces as we raced along the river's edge, the boat visible in the distance. The road was narrow and uneven at times, but we pushed forward, determined to return the girl's bag. With each passing minute, my legs burned, but I couldn't give up.
We finally got to Macon, thinking we'd failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, "I see them!" I saw Gabriel waiting by the dock, a triumphant grin on his face. The boat had just arrived, and the girl was joyfully holding her shopping bag, waving to us in gratitude. My cousin Gabriel and I were very happy. We not only helped others, but also surpassed ourselves. The sunshine was bright, and our mood was also bright.
Race at River’s Edge
When we arrived in Tournus, my cousin Gabriel and I parked our bikes and walked to the town square. We’d just ridden 33 kilometers, and we were starving. We planned to get lunch and then ride back to Macon, a small city in France on the Sa ne River. I was spending the summer there with Gabriel’s family. It was market day. Locals are busy filling their baskets with groceries. Tourists hunted for souvenirs. Gabriel and I bought a long, thin loaf of bread and some cheese I’m obsessed with. It tastes awesome.
As we ate, I noticed a girl wearing a USA Basketball T-shirt. She smiled at us. Basketball is big in France too. You can even watch NBA games on TV. The girl stopped to shop with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike.
I saw them again by the river. They sat on a bench enjoying their snacks in front of a long, narrow riverboat named Voyageur, which had docked (停靠码头) earlier. Then they boarded the boat. It was preparing to leave. As the ship started to pull away, I spotted a colorful shopping bag on the bench. The girl had left it!
I looked up. Some passengers were gathering on the upper deck of the riverboat, including the girl and her mom.
I held up the bag and waved it to get their attention while Gabriel called to them.
When the girl noticed the bag, she opened her mouth in surprise. But her face fell as the boat started to pull away from the dock. She didn’t think she’d get her stuff back.
“Maybe we can throw it to her, Hugo! ” Gabriel said.
“It’s too light, ” I said. “It would end up in the river. We have to find a way to return it! ”
Running alongside the boat, Gabriel learned from a sailor that the boat’s next stop was Macon—our destination as well.
“Do you think we can keep up ” I asked.
Gabriel laughed. “We’re about to find out! ”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答案纸的相应位置作答。
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ”
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：“我” 和表哥 Gabriel 骑行 33 公里到 Tournus 后，在集市买了食物，正吃时发现一个穿美国篮球 T 恤的女孩，之后又在河边见她和妈妈登上一艘名为 Voyageur 的船，船开时女孩落下彩色购物袋。“我们” 想归还，得知船下一站是 “我们” 也要回的 Macon，于是决定追赶，想办法把袋子物归原主。
伏笔与回应：
伏笔：“我们” 刚骑行 33 公里又饿又累。回应：后续却毫不犹豫地全力追赶游船，突出归还物品的决心，不顾身体疲惫也要做正确的事。
伏笔：女孩落下购物袋时船已启动。回应：这引发 “我们” 焦急追赶，才有后面一路的艰辛追逐与坚持，让故事充满紧张感。
伏笔：看到女孩穿美国篮球 T 恤，“我” 留意到她。回应：因这份留意才会及时发现落下的袋子，促使故事围绕归还袋子展开。
伏笔：“我们” 得知船下一站是 Macon。回应：给 “我们” 追赶提供可能，让故事有了合理发展方向，不然 “我们” 可能放弃归还。
伏笔：集市很热闹，人来人往。回应：在热闹集市中 “我们” 仍关注到女孩，体现 “我们” 细心，也为故事开端铺垫，若集市冷清可能遇不见女孩。
续写要点：
情感线：第一段，从决定追赶时的坚定，途中体力不支的疲惫、焦急，怕追不上的担忧；第二段，以为失败的失落，到看见女孩的惊喜、兴奋，归还成功后的自豪欣慰。
故事线：第一段写 “我们” 奋力骑车追赶游船，克服路途上的困难，如体力消耗、道路崎岖等；第二段写到达 Macon 后找到女孩，归还袋子，收获感谢。
主旨升华句：
“A small act of kindness can travel miles, just like our chase after the boat to return what's lost.”（一个小小的善举可以传播很远，就如同我们追逐船只归还失物。）
“In the race against time and distance, our perseverance to do the right thing shone through.”（在与时间和距离的赛跑中，我们坚持做正确事情的决心熠熠生辉。）
“True friendship is tested and strengthened when we go out of our way for others, as Gabriel and I did.”（当我们为他人不辞辛劳时，真正的友谊得到考验与强化，就像我和 Gabriel 所做的。）
“Even in the face of challenges, a determined heart can bridge any gap, be it between a boat and the shore.”（即使面临挑战，一颗坚定的心可以跨越任何鸿沟，无论是船与岸之间的距离。）
“Kindness knows no boundaries, and our pursuit to return the bag proved that it's worth every effort.”（善良无界限，我们归还袋子的追求证明了一切努力都是值得的。）
写作示范：
第一篇
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
The sun was high and unforgiving, beating down on us as we pedaled with all our might. Our legs quickly grew tired, but the thought of the girl's disappointed face spurred us on. The road was uneven, and we had to swerve to avoid potholes while keeping an eye on the boat in the distance. Gabriel led the way, shouting words of encouragement. Sweat poured down our faces, but we didn't dare slow down.
We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ”
My heart leaped with joy. We ditched our bikes and rushed towards the dock. The girl and her mom were just getting off. When she saw us, her eyes widened in disbelief. “You guys actually chased us all the way here ” she exclaimed. We handed her the bag, panting. She rummaged through it and pulled out a small token, pressing it into our hands. “Thank you so much. This means the world to me.” We grinned at each other, knowing our efforts had been worth it.
第二篇
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
Wind whistled past our ears as we sped up, our bikes creaking under the strain. We passed by the beautiful French countryside, but had no time to admire it. I could feel the weight of the bag and our responsibility. Gabriel's face was set with determination, his muscles tensed as he pumped the pedals. Every now and then, we'd lose sight of the boat and panic, only to spot it again.
We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ”
A surge of energy coursed through me. We abandoned our bikes and sprinted forward. The girl and her mom were walking away from the dock. “Wait!” we yelled. They turned around, surprised. When we handed over the bag, the girl beamed. “I thought I'd never see this again. You two are heroes!” She gave us a big hug. At that moment, all our exhaustion vanished, replaced by a warm sense of accomplishment.
【答案】
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set oft. Without hesitation, we grabbed our bikes and quickly calculated the time it would take to beat the boat to Macon. It would be close, but if we rode fast enough, we just might make it. Gabriel and I jumped on our bikes and started pedaling as hard as we could. The wind blew against our faces as we raced along the river's edge, the boat visible in the distance. The road was narrow and uneven at times, but we pushed forward, determined to return the girl's bag. With each passing minute, my legs burned, but I couldn't give up.
We finally got to Macon, thinking we'd failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, "I see them!" I saw Gabriel waiting by the dock, a triumphant grin on his face. The boat had just arrived, and the girl was joyfully holding her shopping bag, waving to us in gratitude. My cousin Gabriel and I were very happy. We not only helped others, but also surpassed ourselves. The sunshine was bright, and our mood was also bright.