江苏省南京市2024-2025学年高二上学期期中英语试卷读后续写--杰克的成绩逆袭之路 讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The night had deepened and all was quiet. But Jack was burning the midnight oil, busy with his revision work, determined to improve his grades. A wave of tiredness crept over him; he stretched his arms and drank another cup of coffee. He felt refreshed and continued to work hard. He knew he couldn't let his recent failures define him.
That morning, as the test papers were handed back, Jack was shocked to find that he got the only D in his class. Though he didn’t do well in his lessons, the unexpected grade hit him hard. Most of his classmates got their desired grades, their laughter and chatter feeling like a painful reminder of his failure. He couldn't help but recall that he always passed exams with C, and in his parents' eyes, he was a total failure. This painful reality weighed heavily on him. Staring at the glaring D grade on his paper, Jack felt he should do something. He couldn’t continue down this path. He needed to change.
From that day, he was more focused and eager to learn in class. He raised his hand more often, contributing more, and his assignments showed his hard work and dedication. His teacher, Ms. Green, impressed by his efforts, praised him in front of the class. His classmates started to see him differently too, giving him friendly smiles and support, which boosted his confidence. Everyone noticed a big change in Jack, except his busy parents.
After a month of hard work, the day of the next exam finally arrived. Jack walked into the examination hall with confidence, feeling well prepared and ready to face the challenges ahead. As he worked through the test, everything seemed to flow smoothly. When the bell rang, he felt he could make it this time.
Two days later, the results were announced. Jack was excited to see his amazing grade — B+. “Well done, Jack! We are all so proud of you!” Ms. Green said. After school, Jack rushed out, eager to show his parents his B+ grade.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!”
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents’ doubts.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：杰克深夜苦学，想提升成绩，然而考试仍仅得 D，这让成绩本就不佳的他深受打击，在父母眼中更是失败者形象。此后他奋发图强，课堂表现积极，作业认真，老师同学都认可了他的改变。一个月后考试，杰克自信应考，取得 B + 的好成绩。他急切想与父母分享喜悦，可父母忙碌未重视，杰克无奈求助老师，老师告知家长后，家长道歉，杰克重获支持继续奋进。
伏笔与回应：
伏笔：杰克深夜苦学，决心提升成绩。回应：后续他课堂积极、作业用心，最终考出 B + 成绩，学有所成。
伏笔：杰克考 D 心情低落，认为自己是父母眼中失败者。回应：考出 B + 后父母起初忽视，后经老师沟通，意识到孩子努力，给予肯定，改变杰克在父母心中形象。
伏笔：老师表扬杰克努力。回应：这让杰克信心倍增，促使他更努力学习，为取得好成绩助力。
伏笔：同学对杰克态度转变，给予友好支持。回应：在他后续学习中，同学的友好营造良好氛围，利于他持续奋进。
伏笔：父母忙碌，常不在家。回应：杰克考出好成绩他们都未重视，引出后面杰克向老师求助，推动情节发展。
续写要点：
情感线：第一段，杰克满怀激动与期待，到家后父母忽视使其失望落寞；第二段，向老师求助时委屈难过，老师帮忙后，父母道歉，杰克转为喜悦欣慰。
故事线：杰克回家报喜遇冷，无奈向老师求助，老师与家长沟通，家长了解情况后向杰克道歉，家庭氛围重归温馨。
主旨升华句：
“Hard work is the key that can unlock the door to success, even when the journey seems long and arduous.”（努力是开启成功之门的钥匙，即便旅程漫长艰辛。）
“Never underestimate the power of a child's determination, for it can transform their world.”（永远不要低估孩子决心的力量，因为它能改变他们的世界。）
“In the pursuit of progress, a little recognition can fuel one's spirit to reach greater heights.”（在追求进步时，一点认可就能点燃一个人迈向更高处的精神。）
“True success is not only measured by grades but also by the ability to persevere and grow.”（真正的成功不仅以成绩衡量，还在于坚持和成长的能力。）
“Family support, like a lighthouse, guides us through the stormy seas of challenges.”（家庭支持就像灯塔，指引我们穿越充满挑战的汹涌大海。）
写作示范：
第一篇
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!”Jack sprinted into the house, his face flushed with excitement. He clutched the test paper tightly, imagining the proud smiles on his parents' faces. But as he entered the living room, he found them engrossed in their work laptops. “Mom, Dad, look!” he exclaimed, waving the paper. His mother glanced up briefly, murmuring, “Just a minute, honey.” Minutes ticked by, and finally, with a sinking heart, he placed the paper on the coffee table.
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents’ doubts.
With a trembling hand, he dialed the number. When Ms. Green answered, Jack choked back tears as he recounted the scene. Ms. Green soothed him and assured him she'd handle it. The next day, she visited Jack's parents at their workplace. She detailed Jack's journey, showing them his assignments and progress reports. His parents' eyes widened in disbelief. That evening, they came home early, arms full of Jack's favorite snacks. “We're sorry, son. We should've been there for you.” Jack's eyes welled up, but this time, with happiness.
第二篇
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!”Jack barged into the house, heart pounding with anticipation. He'd rehearsed this moment a hundred times in his head. But the house was silent, save for the ticking of the clock. He searched room by room, only to find his parents' coats hanging by the door, a sign they were still out. Dejected, he left the paper on the kitchen counter and slumped onto a chair.
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents’ doubts.His voice cracked as he told Ms. Green what had happened. Ms. Green empathized and promised to act swiftly. She called Jack's parents immediately, her voice firm yet kind. She told them about the late-night study sessions, the raised hands in class. The next evening, his parents sat him down. “Jack, we didn't know. You've been so brave and strong. We're proud of you.” Jack felt a warmth spread through him. From then on, with his parents' newfound attention, he soared even higher in his studies.
参考答案
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!” Jack burst into the living room, his face glowing with excitement. "I got a B+ in the exam!" His parents exchanged surprised glances, and their disbelief was evident. "How could that be " His dad asked, frowning. “You've never done that well before. ”Reflecting on his efforts during countless days and night, Jack felt kind of hurt but quickly continued indefense of himself. “I've been studying really hard, Mom and Dad. I promise, I didn't cheat. ”
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents' doubts. “Ms. Green, my parents are skeptical about my B+grade. Could you please talk to them They don't believe I could have improved so much on my own. "Ms. Green assured Jack that she would have a heart-to-heart talk with his parents, emphasizing his hard work and dedication. After several days, when he saw the delicious meal that his parents had prepared for him to express their apology, nothing could express his delight.
The night had deepened and all was quiet. But Jack was burning the midnight oil, busy with his revision work, determined to improve his grades. A wave of tiredness crept over him; he stretched his arms and drank another cup of coffee. He felt refreshed and continued to work hard. He knew he couldn't let his recent failures define him.
That morning, as the test papers were handed back, Jack was shocked to find that he got the only D in his class. Though he didn’t do well in his lessons, the unexpected grade hit him hard. Most of his classmates got their desired grades, their laughter and chatter feeling like a painful reminder of his failure. He couldn't help but recall that he always passed exams with C, and in his parents' eyes, he was a total failure. This painful reality weighed heavily on him. Staring at the glaring D grade on his paper, Jack felt he should do something. He couldn’t continue down this path. He needed to change.
From that day, he was more focused and eager to learn in class. He raised his hand more often, contributing more, and his assignments showed his hard work and dedication. His teacher, Ms. Green, impressed by his efforts, praised him in front of the class. His classmates started to see him differently too, giving him friendly smiles and support, which boosted his confidence. Everyone noticed a big change in Jack, except his busy parents.
After a month of hard work, the day of the next exam finally arrived. Jack walked into the examination hall with confidence, feeling well prepared and ready to face the challenges ahead. As he worked through the test, everything seemed to flow smoothly. When the bell rang, he felt he could make it this time.
Two days later, the results were announced. Jack was excited to see his amazing grade — B+. “Well done, Jack! We are all so proud of you!” Ms. Green said. After school, Jack rushed out, eager to show his parents his B+ grade.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!”
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents’ doubts.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：杰克深夜苦学，想提升成绩，然而考试仍仅得 D，这让成绩本就不佳的他深受打击，在父母眼中更是失败者形象。此后他奋发图强，课堂表现积极，作业认真，老师同学都认可了他的改变。一个月后考试，杰克自信应考，取得 B + 的好成绩。他急切想与父母分享喜悦，可父母忙碌未重视，杰克无奈求助老师，老师告知家长后，家长道歉，杰克重获支持继续奋进。
伏笔与回应：
伏笔：杰克深夜苦学，决心提升成绩。回应：后续他课堂积极、作业用心，最终考出 B + 成绩，学有所成。
伏笔：杰克考 D 心情低落，认为自己是父母眼中失败者。回应：考出 B + 后父母起初忽视，后经老师沟通，意识到孩子努力，给予肯定，改变杰克在父母心中形象。
伏笔：老师表扬杰克努力。回应：这让杰克信心倍增，促使他更努力学习，为取得好成绩助力。
伏笔：同学对杰克态度转变，给予友好支持。回应：在他后续学习中，同学的友好营造良好氛围，利于他持续奋进。
伏笔：父母忙碌，常不在家。回应：杰克考出好成绩他们都未重视，引出后面杰克向老师求助，推动情节发展。
续写要点：
情感线：第一段，杰克满怀激动与期待，到家后父母忽视使其失望落寞；第二段，向老师求助时委屈难过，老师帮忙后，父母道歉，杰克转为喜悦欣慰。
故事线：杰克回家报喜遇冷，无奈向老师求助，老师与家长沟通，家长了解情况后向杰克道歉，家庭氛围重归温馨。
主旨升华句：
“Hard work is the key that can unlock the door to success, even when the journey seems long and arduous.”（努力是开启成功之门的钥匙，即便旅程漫长艰辛。）
“Never underestimate the power of a child's determination, for it can transform their world.”（永远不要低估孩子决心的力量，因为它能改变他们的世界。）
“In the pursuit of progress, a little recognition can fuel one's spirit to reach greater heights.”（在追求进步时，一点认可就能点燃一个人迈向更高处的精神。）
“True success is not only measured by grades but also by the ability to persevere and grow.”（真正的成功不仅以成绩衡量，还在于坚持和成长的能力。）
“Family support, like a lighthouse, guides us through the stormy seas of challenges.”（家庭支持就像灯塔，指引我们穿越充满挑战的汹涌大海。）
写作示范：
第一篇
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!”Jack sprinted into the house, his face flushed with excitement. He clutched the test paper tightly, imagining the proud smiles on his parents' faces. But as he entered the living room, he found them engrossed in their work laptops. “Mom, Dad, look!” he exclaimed, waving the paper. His mother glanced up briefly, murmuring, “Just a minute, honey.” Minutes ticked by, and finally, with a sinking heart, he placed the paper on the coffee table.
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents’ doubts.
With a trembling hand, he dialed the number. When Ms. Green answered, Jack choked back tears as he recounted the scene. Ms. Green soothed him and assured him she'd handle it. The next day, she visited Jack's parents at their workplace. She detailed Jack's journey, showing them his assignments and progress reports. His parents' eyes widened in disbelief. That evening, they came home early, arms full of Jack's favorite snacks. “We're sorry, son. We should've been there for you.” Jack's eyes welled up, but this time, with happiness.
第二篇
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!”Jack barged into the house, heart pounding with anticipation. He'd rehearsed this moment a hundred times in his head. But the house was silent, save for the ticking of the clock. He searched room by room, only to find his parents' coats hanging by the door, a sign they were still out. Dejected, he left the paper on the kitchen counter and slumped onto a chair.
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents’ doubts.His voice cracked as he told Ms. Green what had happened. Ms. Green empathized and promised to act swiftly. She called Jack's parents immediately, her voice firm yet kind. She told them about the late-night study sessions, the raised hands in class. The next evening, his parents sat him down. “Jack, we didn't know. You've been so brave and strong. We're proud of you.” Jack felt a warmth spread through him. From then on, with his parents' newfound attention, he soared even higher in his studies.
参考答案
“Mom and Dad, I have good news to share!” Jack burst into the living room, his face glowing with excitement. "I got a B+ in the exam!" His parents exchanged surprised glances, and their disbelief was evident. "How could that be " His dad asked, frowning. “You've never done that well before. ”Reflecting on his efforts during countless days and night, Jack felt kind of hurt but quickly continued indefense of himself. “I've been studying really hard, Mom and Dad. I promise, I didn't cheat. ”
Jack phoned Ms. Green, hoping she could remove his parents' doubts. “Ms. Green, my parents are skeptical about my B+grade. Could you please talk to them They don't believe I could have improved so much on my own. "Ms. Green assured Jack that she would have a heart-to-heart talk with his parents, emphasizing his hard work and dedication. After several days, when he saw the delicious meal that his parents had prepared for him to express their apology, nothing could express his delight.