读后续写：硬汉骑手的温柔心 讲义-2025届高三英语二轮复习写作专项
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读后续写：硬汉骑手的温柔心 讲义
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary （纪录片） about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia（徽章） that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1） 续写词数应为150个左右；
（2） 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
原文解读与续写思路
原文讲述了一位热爱动物的女士独自去参加救助动物纪录片的故事。在前往活动的路上，她遇到了一群外形“凶悍”的骑士，这让她感到恐惧和不安。然而，这次经历最终让她感受到人与动物之间的美好联系，并对骑士们有了全新的认识。这个故事的情感转折点在于从“恐惧”到“释然”，再到“感动”。续写时需要抓住以下要点：
人物心理：恐惧、犹豫到释然。
情节转折：骑士身份反转，从让人害怕到展现他们善良的一面。
情感升华：通过骑士的行动传递人性善良和动物保护的主题。
主旨点题：升华人与动物和谐共处的重要性。
第一段：内心冲突与转折
续写开头：
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
情感描写（固定句1）
描写主人公看到骑士时的恐惧与紧张。
示例：A wave of panic surged through me as I noticed the room was filled with bikers.
细节描写（非固定句）
展现骑士们的外貌与主人公的观察。
示例：The leather jackets, heavy boots, and intimidating stares made my heart race even faster.
动作链推进（固定句3）
通过主人公的动作，推动情节向下一步发展。
示例：Clutching my ticket tightly, I quickly found a seat at the back, trying to remain unnoticed.
冲突铺垫（固定句4）
预示情节转折，暗示骑士们并非主人公想象的那样。
示例：But as I settled in, I noticed a biker carefully adjusting a projector and another gently patting a small dog by his side.
情感推进（非固定句）
主人公从恐惧到疑惑，为转折做铺垫。
示例：Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind—maybe I had misjudged them.
第二段：情感升华与主题点明
续写开头：
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
情节转折（固定句5）
揭示骑士的真实身份，带来情感的转折点。
示例：No sooner had the film started than I realized the bikers were passionate animal rescuers, dedicated to saving abandoned dogs.
环境描写（非固定句）
描写放映厅温暖的氛围，为情感升华铺垫。
示例：The room was filled with the soft hum of the projector, and the bikers watched the film with quiet reverence.
动作与情感结合（非固定句）
通过骑士们的行为展现他们的善良和对动物的热爱。
示例：During the screening, one biker cradled a tiny puppy, his rough hands gentle as he fed it from a small bottle.
结局升华（固定句9）
主人公感悟人与动物的和谐，情感得到升华。
示例：
By the end of the evening, I felt a wave of gratitude and warmth, realizing that true kindness often comes in unexpected forms.
主题点睛（固定句10）
点明故事主旨，传递动物保护和善良的意义。
示例：
This experience taught me that compassion transcends appearances and that everyone can play a role in making the world better for animals.
续写范文
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. A wave of panic surged through me as I noticed the room was filled with bikers. The leather jackets, heavy boots, and intimidating stares made my heart race even faster. Clutching my ticket tightly, I quickly found a seat at the back, trying to remain unnoticed. But as I settled in, I noticed a biker carefully adjusting a projector and another gently patting a small dog by his side. Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind—maybe I had misjudged them.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. No sooner had the film started than I realized the bikers were passionate animal rescuers, dedicated to saving abandoned dogs. The room was filled with the soft hum of the projector, and the bikers watched the film with quiet reverence. During the screening, one biker cradled a tiny puppy, his rough hands gentle as he fed it from a small bottle. By the end of the evening, I felt a wave of gratitude and warmth, realizing that true kindness often comes in unexpected forms. This experience taught me that compassion transcends appearances and that everyone can play a role in making the world better for animals.
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary （纪录片） about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia（徽章） that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1） 续写词数应为150个左右；
（2） 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
原文解读与续写思路
原文讲述了一位热爱动物的女士独自去参加救助动物纪录片的故事。在前往活动的路上，她遇到了一群外形“凶悍”的骑士，这让她感到恐惧和不安。然而，这次经历最终让她感受到人与动物之间的美好联系，并对骑士们有了全新的认识。这个故事的情感转折点在于从“恐惧”到“释然”，再到“感动”。续写时需要抓住以下要点：
人物心理：恐惧、犹豫到释然。
情节转折：骑士身份反转，从让人害怕到展现他们善良的一面。
情感升华：通过骑士的行动传递人性善良和动物保护的主题。
主旨点题：升华人与动物和谐共处的重要性。
第一段：内心冲突与转折
续写开头：
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
情感描写（固定句1）
描写主人公看到骑士时的恐惧与紧张。
示例：A wave of panic surged through me as I noticed the room was filled with bikers.
细节描写（非固定句）
展现骑士们的外貌与主人公的观察。
示例：The leather jackets, heavy boots, and intimidating stares made my heart race even faster.
动作链推进（固定句3）
通过主人公的动作，推动情节向下一步发展。
示例：Clutching my ticket tightly, I quickly found a seat at the back, trying to remain unnoticed.
冲突铺垫（固定句4）
预示情节转折，暗示骑士们并非主人公想象的那样。
示例：But as I settled in, I noticed a biker carefully adjusting a projector and another gently patting a small dog by his side.
情感推进（非固定句）
主人公从恐惧到疑惑，为转折做铺垫。
示例：Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind—maybe I had misjudged them.
第二段：情感升华与主题点明
续写开头：
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
情节转折（固定句5）
揭示骑士的真实身份，带来情感的转折点。
示例：No sooner had the film started than I realized the bikers were passionate animal rescuers, dedicated to saving abandoned dogs.
环境描写（非固定句）
描写放映厅温暖的氛围，为情感升华铺垫。
示例：The room was filled with the soft hum of the projector, and the bikers watched the film with quiet reverence.
动作与情感结合（非固定句）
通过骑士们的行为展现他们的善良和对动物的热爱。
示例：During the screening, one biker cradled a tiny puppy, his rough hands gentle as he fed it from a small bottle.
结局升华（固定句9）
主人公感悟人与动物的和谐，情感得到升华。
示例：
By the end of the evening, I felt a wave of gratitude and warmth, realizing that true kindness often comes in unexpected forms.
主题点睛（固定句10）
点明故事主旨，传递动物保护和善良的意义。
示例：
This experience taught me that compassion transcends appearances and that everyone can play a role in making the world better for animals.
续写范文
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. A wave of panic surged through me as I noticed the room was filled with bikers. The leather jackets, heavy boots, and intimidating stares made my heart race even faster. Clutching my ticket tightly, I quickly found a seat at the back, trying to remain unnoticed. But as I settled in, I noticed a biker carefully adjusting a projector and another gently patting a small dog by his side. Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind—maybe I had misjudged them.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. No sooner had the film started than I realized the bikers were passionate animal rescuers, dedicated to saving abandoned dogs. The room was filled with the soft hum of the projector, and the bikers watched the film with quiet reverence. During the screening, one biker cradled a tiny puppy, his rough hands gentle as he fed it from a small bottle. By the end of the evening, I felt a wave of gratitude and warmth, realizing that true kindness often comes in unexpected forms. This experience taught me that compassion transcends appearances and that everyone can play a role in making the world better for animals.