读后续写--自助餐厅里的暖心一幕：一家人见证并传递善意 讲义-2025届湖北省部分市州高三上学期元月期末联考一模英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our family outing to the all-you-can-eat buffet turned into an evening to remember. The atmosphere was lively and busy, with the noise of plates and the sound of conversations creating a warm and inviting setting. The smell of freshly cooked food floated through the air, inviting everyone to try a little bit of everything. The buffet was a feast for the senses, with steaming trays of dishes from all over the world. The kids were particularly thrilled at the sight of the dessert section, which they had been eagerly longing for all week. Their eyes widening at the array of cakes, ice creams, and pastries, they quickly made plans to sample everything.
As we sat down to enjoy our meals, chatting cheerfully about the various food options, my husband’s attention was drawn to an elderly man standing by the chocolate milk dispenser （分液器）. The man seemed determined, but his hands were shaking, making it difficult for him to fill two glasses. My husband watched him for a moment, a concerned look on his face. “Now, how on earth is he going to carry that milk back to his table ” he wondered aloud, his eyes narrowing in thought. He noticed the man’s expression of concentration and effort, and a wave of sympathy made him restless. The kids, absorbed in their plates, hadn’t noticed, but my husband’ couldn’t look away.
I glanced at my husband and raised my eyebrows（眉毛） with a knowing smile. He immediately understood my silent message. The next moment, without a word, he got up from his seat and approached the elderly gentleman. I watched as he gently placed a hand on the man’s shoulder; offering a kind smile. I felt a warm wave of pride and admiration for my husband. His kind-hearted nature always managed to shine through in moments like these, making me realize how lucky I was to have him by my side.
注意：
1．续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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“May I help you with that ” my husband asked kindly. ___________________________________________
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As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. ________________________________
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文章大意：一家人去自助餐厅用餐，氛围热闹，美食琳琅满目，孩子们对甜品区满怀期待。用餐时，丈夫注意到一位老人在巧克力牛奶分液器前手抖难以倒牛奶，面露关切，“我” 心领神会，丈夫起身走向老人，准备帮忙，“我” 为丈夫的善良暖心之举感到骄傲。
故事山分析：
开场：描绘自助餐厅热闹欢快、美食诱人的场景，一家人开启用餐，营造轻松愉悦开端，吸引读者融入情境。
上升：聚焦老人倒牛奶困境，丈夫留意且内心纠结，紧张氛围渐起，吊起读者好奇心，想知后续发展。
转折：“我” 与丈夫无声交流，丈夫起身相助，打破前文老人的窘迫局面，情节转折，凸显人性温暖。
下降：无明显下降情节，故事走向温馨收尾。
结局：丈夫助人后回座，一家人继续用餐，给人意犹未尽之感，留下温暖余韵。
伏笔及续写中的回应：
伏笔：开篇渲染自助餐的热闹忙碌，“The atmosphere was lively and busy...” 。回应：后续老人的出现融入这热闹场景，却又因手抖与周围格格不入，形成反差，更突出老人需要帮助，为丈夫行动铺垫。
伏笔：提到孩子们对甜品区的热切渴望，“The kids were particularly thrilled at the sight of the dessert section...” 。回应：与成人关注点对比，孩子关注美食，成人留意他人困难，丰富故事层次，且后文可借孩子反应侧面烘托氛围。
伏笔：丈夫对老人倒牛奶时 “a concerned look on his face” 及内心独白。回应：直接促使他起身帮忙，是行动的导火索，续写中可深化其助人后的内心感触。
伏笔：“我” 与丈夫的眼神交流，“I glanced at my husband and raised my eyebrows with a knowing smile.” 。回应：体现夫妻默契，为丈夫行动助力，续写可展现这种默契如何延续影响后续互动。
伏笔：强调丈夫善良本性，“His kind-hearted nature always managed to shine through...” 。回应：在助人情节中充分展现，续写可通过他人反馈强化这一印象，如老人感激、旁人赞许。
续写要点：
第一段：续写老人对丈夫帮助的反应，或惊讶感激，或感慨万千，可描述老人颤抖着道谢，提及自己因身体原因独自出门不易，引发丈夫更多关怀，两人简单交流，展现温情。
第二段：描绘一家人用餐后续，孩子询问经过，丈夫简单讲述，大家受触动，氛围更温馨，还可写周围人目睹后投来赞许目光，升华友善氛围，传递正能量。
情感线：开场一家人沉浸美食的喜悦，接着丈夫因老人困境揪心，“我” 对丈夫有欣赏骄傲，老人受助后有感激，最后一家人因善举感染，情感从个人享乐转为共享温暖，在互助友善中升温，让读者感受人性美好。
故事线：
一家人前往自助餐厅，被热闹氛围感染。
孩子们期待甜品，大人们准备用餐。
丈夫发现老人倒牛奶困难，面露担忧。
“我” 与丈夫默契交流，丈夫起身帮忙。
丈夫帮助老人，老人有所回应。
一家人继续用餐，受善举影响氛围温馨。
主旨升华句：
A small act of kindness in a bustling world can be like a beam of light, illuminating the darkest corners of someone's day.（在喧嚣世界里，一个小小的善举如同一束光，照亮他人一天中最黑暗的角落。）
Kindness is not measured by its grandeur, but by the warmth it spreads and the hearts it touches.（善良不以其宏大来衡量，而以它所传递的温暖和触动的心灵来评判。）
In the simplest of moments, our humanity shines brightest when we choose to reach out and help.（在最平凡的时刻，当我们选择伸出援手去帮助他人时，人性最为闪耀。）
True kindness is contagious, spreading from one heart to another, and making the world a better place, one act at a time.（真正的善良具有感染力，从一颗心传递到另一颗心，一次一个善举，让世界变得更美好。）
Sometimes, the most meaningful encounters occur when we least expect them, reminding us of the power of kindness and connection.（有时，最有意义的邂逅发生在我们最不经意的时候，提醒我们善良和联系的力量。）
写作示范两篇：
第一篇：
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“May I help you with that ” my husband asked kindly. The elderly man looked up, surprise and gratitude in his eyes. His hands, still trembling slightly, relaxed a bit as he said, “Oh, thank you so much, young man. I've been having some trouble with my arthritis lately, and it's been a struggle to do even the simplest things.” My husband gently took the glasses and filled them with the chocolate milk, his movements slow and careful to avoid spilling. He then accompanied the man back to his table, making small talk about the delicious food and the pleasant atmosphere. The old man's face lit up as he shared a few stories from his youth, and my husband listened attentively, a smile on his face.
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As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The kids, who had finally noticed the exchange, were full of questions. “Dad, what were you and that grandpa talking about ” my youngest asked. My husband simply replied, “Just helping a friend in need.” The atmosphere around our table seemed even more warm and inviting than before. A few nearby diners had also witnessed the act and gave us approving looks. It was as if that one small act of kindness had spread a wave of good feeling throughout the restaurant. We all felt a sense of contentment as we finished our meal, knowing that kindness truly has the power to make a difference.
第二篇：
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“May I help you with that ” my husband asked kindly. The old man was visibly startled at first, then his eyes softened with relief. “Thank you, son. I don't get out much these days, and with my shaky hands, it's been really hard.” My husband smiled reassuringly and proceeded to fill the glasses, chatting amicably with the man. “This buffet is quite a treat, isn't it There's so much to choose from.” The man nodded, adding, “Yes, but it's even better with kind people like you around.” As they walked back to the man's table, my husband helped him with his chair, ensuring he was comfortable. The man's gratitude was palpable, and it warmed my heart to see.
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As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. We could still feel the afterglow of the kind act. The children, sensing the mood, were unusually quiet and well-behaved. I leaned over to my husband and whispered, “You did a great thing.” He shrugged modestly. Soon, the conversation picked up again, but this time it was laced with a newfound sense of community. People around us seemed more friendly, and we all basked in the warm glow of kindness. It was a simple moment, but one that would stay with us for a long time, a reminder of the beauty of human connection.
续写参考范文:
“'May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly,. The elderly man looked up, his eyebrows raised in mild shock but then relief washed over his face as he sighed softly. He nodded appreciatively, his eyes conveying his gratitude. "Thank you, young man," he said, his voice trembling slightly. My husband and the elderly man walked side by side, their steps harmonizing, creating a heartwarming scene of mutual respect and kindness. When they reached the table, the elderly man grasped my husband's in a firm, heartfelt handshake. With a warm smile, he said, “"You're a good man, thank you once
again." My husband stayed for a few minutes, engaging in polite conversation before returning to our table.As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The mood around our table was even more cheerful, and the kids, who had observed the interaction, were full of questions and comments about how nice it was to help someone in need. “That was so nice, Dad!" one of them exclaimed, eyes wide with admiration. Our dinner that night was not just about the food but about the small act of kindness that can make a big difference in someone's day. It reminded us that in the midst of our busy lives, taking a moment to help others is a simple yet profound way to connect and spread a little joy.