中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit1 Where did you go on vacation
写作题目
假设你的名字叫小明。你很喜欢旅游，你和家人去年夏天去了长城。请以“The visit to the Great Wall” 为题，
写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
时态：一般过去式 人称：第一和第二人称复数
段落布局 要点 目标短语 句子
第一段：开篇点题，介绍人物和旅游的时间和地点 1.我的名字叫小明，我非常喜欢旅行 like doing sth
2.去年夏天，我和我的家人参观了长城 go to sp
第二段：介绍旅游
地点，时间，名胜
古迹和有乐趣的事 3.那天的天气非常好 be fine
4.我们一大早就坐公交车去了 go there by bus
5.当我们到达长城的时候，有很多的游客 there were...
6.当我和我的家人去长城时，我们看到了
美丽的风景 go onto
7.我们都惊讶了这么美丽的风景 be amazed by
8.我们拍了很多的照片 take photos
第三段：描述旅行
后的感受 9.我们玩的很开心 have a good time
10.时间过得很快，很快我们就必须回来了 have to /go back
11.旅行后我很累，但我真的很喜欢参观
长城 be tired
enjoy doing sth
范文中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit1 Where did you go on vacation
写作题目
假设你的名字叫小明。你很喜欢旅游，你和家人去年夏天去了长城。请以“The visit to the Great Wall” 为题，
写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
时态：一般过去式 人称：第一和第二人称复数
段落布局 要点 目标短语 句子
第一段：开篇点题，介绍人物和旅游的时间和地点 1.我的名字叫小明，我非常喜欢旅行 like doing sth My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling
very much
2.去年夏天，我和我的家人参观了长城 go to sp Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with
my family.
第二段：介绍旅游
地点，时间，名胜
古迹和有乐趣的事 3.那天的天气非常好 be fine It was fine that day
4.我们一大早就坐公交车去了 go there by bus We went there by bus early in the morning.
5.当我们到达长城的时候，有很多的游客 there were... When we got there, there were many other visitors there
6.当我和我的家人去长城时，我们看到了
美丽的风景 go onto When my family and I went onto the Great
Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景).
7.我们都惊讶了这么美丽的风景 be amazed by We all were amazed by how beautiful it was.
8.我们拍了很多的照片 take photos We took quite a few photos there.
第三段：描述旅行
后的感受 9.我们玩的很开心 have a good time We had a good time there.
10.时间过得很快，很快我们就必须回来了 have to /go back The time flew by, and soon we had to go back.
11.旅行后我很累，但我真的很喜欢参观
长城 be tired
enjoy doing sth I was tired after traveling, but I really
enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!
范文
My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much.Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.
It was fine that day.We went there by bus early in the morning.When we got there, there were many other visitors there.When my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景).We all were amazed by how beautiful it was.We took quite a few photos there.
We had a good time there.The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!
