应用文语料积累
求助信
Para1 点明写信目的,清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助
Para2 具体讲述自己的困难和对自己的影响,再提出请求
Para3 诚恳地提出希望,表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢
范文展示
假定你是高中生李华,你看到外教Catherine在个人博客开设了“Growing Pains”栏目,请你给该栏目写一篇帖子,内容包括:1.你成长中的烦恼;2.你希望获得的帮助。
Dear Catherine,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student, and I’m delighted to have added my voice to your special column on "Growing Pains" . Along the journey of my growth, I’ve had my share of headaches, too.
The academic pressure is my greatest challenge at present, especially when it comes to science subjects. I find it so difficult to move forward in my learning as to doubt my ability. Additionally, despite my strong emphasis on getting along with my friends, at times I'm bothered by misunderstandings, leaving me at a loss how to better address them.
I would appreciate it if you could provide me with some guidance on how to strike a balance between study and life, and manage interpersonal connections. Your advice will be a great treasure to me.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
首段常用语
① Hearing you have much experience in ... , I am writing to ask you for help.听说您在......方面很有经验,在此我写信向您求助。
② I have some difficulty in doing ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做......方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
中间段常用语
First, I find it quite challenging to… Besides, it is also hard for me to… What's more, ...(分层次说明自己的困难).
I have been attempting to foster a more positive environment at home, but have struggled to make progress.
What bothers me most is that I don’t know......
结尾常用语
I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.我想知道您能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果您能帮我,我真的感激不尽。
I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.(表示感激) Looking forward to your reply.(表达期望)
Your generous help is bound to be of great benefit. Looking forward to your reply.
建议信
Para1 表明写作原因和写作目的
Para2 具体的建议及理由 (3条建议)
Para3 希望采纳,望问题早日解决
范文展示
假定你是某学习杂志的编辑李华,收到一名学生关于学习压力的匿名信。为了帮助这名同学缓解学习压力,提升自我能力,请你写一封回信,内容包括: 1. 表示理解; 2. 提出建议。
Dear Unknown Friend,
I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from stress. I really relate to your anxiety since it is common to us teenagers. My advice is as follows.
First of all, what I strongly recommend is that you do something enjoyable that can free you from academic pressure, such as listening to music, doing exercises and so on. In addition, it is crucial to develop a well-structured study plan and schedule daily tasks accordingly. Further more, it is advisable to join various clubs or interest groups of your school, which facilitates making more like-minded friends while enriching your extracurricular activities.
I do hope my suggestions will be of some help to you. I hold a firm belief that you can enhance your self-development and become more excellent.
Yours,
Li Hua
首段常用语
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble doing sth, which is quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are of help to you.很遗憾听说你在做某事方面有困难,这是很正常的。下面的一些建议可能会对你有一些帮助。
Learning that you are worried about ..., I’m writing to offer some suggestions on how to.....得知你在担心......,我写信来提供一些关于如何......的建议。
I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice about.... Here are a few suggestions./ The Following are my suggestions./My advice is as follows.我非常高兴收到您的来信,询问我关于……的建议。以下是我的一些建议。/以下是我的建议。/我的建议如下。
中间段常用语(提建议常用句式)
It’s strongly recommended/suggested/required that you (should) do sth.and in this way you can...(效果)
强烈建议/建议/要求您...这样您就可以...
If I were you, I would… 如果我是你,我将会........
Please bear in mind that you are supposed to hold a positive attitude to the difficulties you might meet in your life.请记住你应该.......
Another thing worth mentioning is that you can...
另一个值得提及的是你可以......
It is vital/crucial/beneficial/advisable/preferable to do sth.
It would be a wise choice if you do sth.如果你做...,那将是一个明智的选择
尾段常用语
① Hopefully, my above-mentioned suggestions can be of benefit to you/adopted, and I believe all the difficulties can be settled properly.
希望我以上的建议能够对你有用/得到采纳,同时我相信所有的困难都能够对你有用/被妥善解决。
② I would appreciate it if you would take my suggestions into consideration seriously. Looking forward to hearing about your progress!
如果您愿意认真考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
③I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/beneficial/ practical. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.希望这些建议能对你有帮助/有益/可行。如有任何问题,请随时和我联系。
邀请信
Para1 表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请
Para2 说明邀请的具体原因,邀请活动的时间、地点及活动内容等
Para3 期待对方接受邀请
范文展示
假定你是李华,你班计划在周末组织农场研学(agritourism), 请给你的外教Chris 写封邮件邀请他参加,
内容包括:1. 活动时间和内容;2. 注意事项。
Dear Chris,
Learning that this weekend will witness a meaningful agritourism in the nearby farm, I’m writing to send my sincere invitation.
As scheduled, we will set off from school at 8 am on Saturday and return at 3 pm. What is arranged for the morning is a lecture about latest agriculture technologies and a tour around the farm to learn about various plants. After lunch, everyone has an opportunity to experience farming in person. Hence we are supposed to wear clothes and sneakers suitable for outdoor activity, and follow instructions during the process
I’m convinced it will be significantly beneficial to you. Looking forward to your participation/ attendance.
Yours
Li Hua
首段常用语
Knowing that you are keen on ..., I’m writing to invite you to participate in...得知你对……很感兴趣,我写信邀请你参加……。
On behalf of our class/ the Student Union, I have the honor to invite you to deliver a speech on the topic of…(主题)/ participate in...(活动名称)
Knowing that you have much experience in__________, I am writing to invite to participate in ______________, as the judge/lecturer.
得知你在.......方面有经验,我写信邀请您作为嘉宾/讲师参加......
“喜欢”的高级表达:be keen on..., be crazy/enthusiastic about..., be fond of..., be fascinated by..., have a preference/affection/passion for..., show your interest in...
“参加”的高级表达:take part in..., participate in..., be engaged in...,
get involved in...
中间段常用语
① Here is a brief schedule (about the activity). First and foremost,…. What's more…. Last but not least,… 这是关于这次活动的简要日程安排。首先,……其次,……最后,……
②The activity is going to be held+地点+时间
这个活动将在某时某地举行。
Starting at时间and lasting (for)时长,this activity will be held in地点
The activity is scheduled to last approximately three hours, from 8:30 am to 11:00 am.
时间地点表达方式
周六下午: on Saturday afternoon 周日下午5点: at 5 p.m. this Sunday
从上午8:30到11:00 last three hours, from 8:30 am to 11:00 am
在学校餐厅:at/ in the school canteen/ dining hall
在操场:on the playground 在校园里: on campus
在晚会期间:at/ during the party 在报告厅: in the lecture hall
③Besides, a wide range of activities will be held, including the competitions between different classes, which will be the highlight of this show.(这将会是这场演出的亮点/定语从句).
④We are going to climb the mountain, admiring the splendid view of nature.(欣赏大自然的壮丽景色/非谓语动词作状语).
⑤A wide variety of appealing activities will be held, ranging from ... to...
⑥It can promote the traditional Chinese culture as well as improve our ability to appreciate art.它促进了中国传统文化并且提高了我们对艺术的欣赏能力。
尾段常用语
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you.
I would appreciate it if you could confirm your coming/participation at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to your attendance /involvement.
I do hope you can accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
模板
Dear_____,
I’m sincerely writing to invite you to______ on behalf of___. There will be a _______at/in _______(地方) on _______. We would be honored to have you there with us.
During the activity, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in (开始介绍活动内容). First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举行的活动二). I know/believe you are very interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理由).For one thing________(希望受邀人参加的理由一). For another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二). The activity would not be complete without you (总结受邀人参加的必要性).
If you’d like to participate, please let us know at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
活动介绍类作文
主要类型:书信类&非书信类
书信类
Para1: 写作背景+目的
Para2:活动要点1-2-3
Para3:结束语(意义/感受)
非书信类
Para1: 活动总体介绍(活动目的、名称、主题theme)
Para2:活动时间地点+内容
Para3:活动意义/感受
范文
假定你是李华,上周六下午你校在学校礼堂举行了消防逃生演练(fire drill)。请你给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括: 1.参加人员 2.演练过程 3.活动意义注意:1.词数80左右;2.格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Saturday witnessed a rewarding and unforgettable activity, a fire drill, aimed at raising our safety awareness.活动及目的
To begin with,we attended an informative lecture where the firefighter showed us what to do in case of a fire,how to prevent the fire and how to use different kinds of fire-fighting equipment. Then came the fire drill. As soon as the fire alarm went off,all of us students ran downstairs one by one. Eventually, we reached the appointed place safely, waiting for further instructions. 活动安排及内容
We benefited a lot from the activity. Through the drill,not only did we learn how to escape in an emergency but we also had a deeper understanding of campus safety. 个人感受/收获(总+分)
关于“活动目的”的表达
Aiming to do sth.
With the aim/purpose/intention of doing sth.
In an effort to do sth.
句式
活动目的+名称
With the purpose of____________, our school held an event/activity named____________.
Aiming to____________, our school will hold an event(活动) whose theme is____________________(以...为主题).
活动时间 +地点
时间+witnessed(目击;见证) a (competition/activity…) organized by... +地点, in which sb. took an active part.
As scheduled, a performance/activity/exhibition was arranged 时间+地点,which was beneficial to us.
例:为了增加我们学生对植物的了解,上周末我们学校在校园里组织了一项有意义的活动,主题为“Getting to know the Plants Around Us”,高三学生全部参加。
升级表达:Aimed at promoting us students’ understanding of plants, last weekend witnessed a meaningful activity with the theme of “Getting to know the Plants Around Us” organized by the Students’ Union, in which all the students in Senior 3 took an active part.
活动过程
The activity will start/begin with a___________________. After that, all the _______will____________________, which will give______a chance to_____________.What matters most is that________and_____
这个活动将以[内容1]开始。之后,所有…将[内容2],这将给…一个机会去[主题]。最重要的是[意义1和意义2]。
It will start with_________, closely followed by__________. The highlight of the activity was a________________. And_______will put a perfect ending to______________.它会以[活动内容1]开始,紧接着是[活动内容2]。活动亮点是…。而[活动内容3]将为[活动名称]画上一个圆满的句号。
活动注意事项
What's more, you need to be informed of the following requirements. Firstly, Please make sure to do... Secondly, you are expected to do...
All participants are required to. .. 所有参与者都被要求…
活动意义感受
Undoubtedly, the activity was a success. Not only did it give us a chance to deepen our insight into Chinese traditional culture, but also it brought us relaxation and entertainment.
I benefited a lot from the activity. Not only did it broaden my horizons, but also it enhanced my love for art.
The activity turned out to be a rewarding experience, from which we benefited a lot.
修饰活动的形容词
beneficial;informative;instructional;enjoyable;entertaining;educational;
rewarding;unforgettable;memorable;valuable;absorbing;appealing
活动意义万能句式
sth. can arouse motivate/stimulate the awareness of...
sth. can cultivate/foster/facilitate our ability to do...
sth. can enhance/strengthen/deepen our understanding of...
sth. can arouse our interest in... /curiosity for...
sth. can provide an excellent opportunity for us to gain a deeper sight into...
sth. can offer us a feast for our eyes.(视觉盛宴)
万能意义短语
enhance our interpersonal relationship and our communication skills提升人际关系和沟通技能
promote further academic ability and progress in study提升学术能力促进学习进步
foster our global vision and horizon 培养我们的全球视野
motivate our comprehensive quality 激发我们的综合素质
sharpen our relevant knowledge and experience提升我们的相关知识和经验
foster the sense of belonging/the sense of commitment/a sense of achievement 培养归属感、责任感、成就感
enhance our perseverance and willpower 增强我们的毅力和意志力
boost our self - confidence提升我们的自信心
improve our mental and physical health 改善我们的身心健康
cultivate our team spirit 培养我们的团队精神
感谢信常用句式
I hope this email finds you well! (问候语)
Words fail to express my gratitude for your warm hospitality/kindness.
I am writing to extend my sincere thanks to you for your splendid hospitality(盛情款待) during my visit to your hometown.
It was with your help that I made such rapid progress in English. (强调句型)
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意,我会非常高兴。
道歉信常用句式
Thank you for your invitation to London during the winter vacation. However, I am terribly sorry that I will fail to make it.
I am writing to make an apology to you for my being unable to...
I am writing to apologize to you for my absence from our appointment.
Many apologies again for all the inconvenience I’ve caused you.
Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.
Please accept my sincerest apologies.
推荐一本书(UNIT8话题作文 )
Dear Tom,
I am very delighted to know that you are interested in the four great classical novels of Chinese literature. If I can make just one recommendation to you, it will definitely be A Dream of Red Mansions. Written by Cao Xueqin in Qing dynasty, it describes the fall of a large, wealthy family. It also portrays the beauty of women from all angles and the love between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. I am fascinated by the book because of its vivid language, attractive plot and the historical elements. In addition, it is of great value in understanding the Chinese traditional cuisine, medicine and architecture.
We can talk about it more after you finish reading it. Hope you will enjoy reading it.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 推荐理由相关
- be rich in(富含……)
- broaden one's horizons(拓宽某人的视野)
- enhance one's understanding of(增强某人对……的理解)
- cultivate one's creativity(培养某人的创造力)
Not only can it teach you knowledge, but also it can shape your values(塑造你的价值观).
What makes this book outstanding is that...(使这本书出色的是……)
2. 书籍特点相关
- thought - provoking(发人深省的) - well - written(写得好的)
- vivid description(生动的描述)
- with a fascinating plot(有着迷人的情节)
3. 开头句型
I read a lot of books, ranging from science fiction to biographies. Of all the books I have read, my top preference is XXX.
4. 结尾句型
I highly recommend it to you and hope you will enjoy it.(我强烈推荐给你并希望你会喜欢。)
I’m sure you will benefit a lot from reading it.(我确定你会从阅读它中受益很多。)