Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 单元写作 幸福的秘密课件(共14张PPT)

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单元写作 幸福的秘密
Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
写作维度
本单元的写作题目是“幸福的秘密”，相关内容有以下几个方面：(1) 提出不同的观点：幸福的秘密是什么 (2) 对不同的观点进行归纳总结。
写作支架/ 模版
幸福的秘密 开篇点题
分述不同的观点：财富、地位、爱心等
表达自己的观点
黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)
开头段 ① Happiness is important to every one of us.
② Happiness is everywhere in our life.
③ But different people have different opinions about happiness.
中间段 ① Some people think the key to happiness is money.
② Others think that giving love to people makes them happy.
③ There are many poor people around us.
④ When the poor receive our help, their lives will be better and better.
⑤ When we see the smiles on their faces, we must feel even happier than them.
结尾段 ① So I think true happiness comes from the love.
② As Plato said, “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.”
③ What’s your opinion
经典例题(从经典例题学会审题)
英语课上，老师要求你以“The Secrets of Happiness”为题来谈一下“幸福的秘密”。
要求：1. 语句通顺，语言规范；
2. 书写工整，时态正确，段落清晰。
3. 可适当发挥，70 词左右
The Secrets of Happiness
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审人称：第一人称
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审体裁：议论文
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审时态：一般现在时
审要点：幸福、
爱心、感受
精彩范文[从教材内外积累好句]
精彩范文展示
The Secrets of Happiness
Happiness is important to every one of us. It is everywhere in our life. But different people have different opinions about happiness.
Some people think the key to happiness is money. Others think that giving love to people makes them happy. I agree to the second opinion. There are many poor people around us. We should try our best to help them. Then we can see smiles on their faces. When we see the smiles on their faces, we must feel even happier than them.
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教材原句：①But love, in fact, is the key to happiness.(教材P5)
So I think true happiness comes from the love.
As Plato said, “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” What’s your opinion
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教材原句
②Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.(教材P13)
【亮点词块】
· be important to... 对……很重要
· agree to... 同意……
· try our best to help them 尽我们的最大努力帮助他们
【高分句子】
· Some people think the key to happiness is money.
一些人认为幸福的关键是金钱。
· Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.
幸福源自于做好事和帮助他人。
实战演练
请根据下面的提示，以“My Happiness”为题写一篇100 词左右的英语作文，可适当发挥。
要求： 1. 幸福无处不在恰如“美无处不在”。
2. 考试没有考好害怕见父母。
3. 父母给予了大量的鼓励。
4. 我的感受。
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范文参考
My Happiness
Happiness is everywhere just as “Beauty is everywhere”. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad grade at a math test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened. They said to me, “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can do better next time. ” I was touched and decided to work harder. I felt happy.
Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
熟记本课时的词汇
熟读教材的内容
完成本课时的课后作业。
作业1
作业2
作业3
课后作业