2025年中考英语热门话题写作话题 职业与梦想（含解析）
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2025年中考英语热门话题写作话题
考情分析
考查角度及考查频率 近 8 年未考
全国考查角度 介绍自己的梦想及如何实现 对未来职业的选择及理由
写作指导
五步写作法——审列扩连查
毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，从下面两个职业中选择一个你所喜欢的理想职业，写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
Items ( 条目 ) A teacher A scientist
Reasons be good at communicating love kids be interested in science invent new products
How to do that get a good education learn how to teach children ... study science hard do science research ...
提示：
1. What do you want to be when you grow up
2. Why do you have such a dream
3. How are you going to do that
注意事项：
1. 词数100左右。必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My dream job
We all have dream jobs._______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1） 审人称：第一人称
2）审时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
3）审文体：说明文
4）审主题：自己喜欢的职业
定要点 1：介绍理想职业
定要点 2：有此理想的原因
定要点 3：实现理想的做法
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段（Beginning）：引出主题：介绍理想职业是什么。
中间段（Body）：陈述选择这一职业的原因并逐条阐述理由。
结尾（Ending）：如何实现梦想：具体做法。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：介绍理想职业是什么
[一般句] I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
[高分句] As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up. /I dream of being a scientist when I grow up. (as for me;dream of)
中间段：逐条阐述选择这一职业的理由
【理由一】 [一般句] I have become very interested in science.
[高分句] I have been very interested in science for a long time. (be interested in)
【理由二】 [一般句] I want to invent new products and hope to discover new things.
[高分句] 1. （不定式表目的）
结尾：实现梦想的具体做法
【做法一】[一般句] I’m going to study science really hard.
[高分句] I’m going to make great efforts to study science well.
【做法二】[一般句] I will read many books about science.
[高分句] I’ll read as many books about science as possible. /Books about science will be on my reading lists.
【做法三】[一般句] My dream will come true if I work hard.
[高分句] 2. (I believe, as long as)
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文] My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I have been very interested in science for a long time. It’s my dream to invent new products to improve people’s life and to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take action right now. First, I’m going to make great efforts to study science well. Second, I plan to do science research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books about science as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe that as long as I put my heart into it, I will achieve my dream.
第五步 查全文 得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
素材积累
1）理想职业：我长大后想要成为一名工程师。I want to be an engineer when I grow up.
当提到未来职业，我最喜欢的职业是飞行员。 When it comes to the future career, my favorite job is to be a pilot.
2）自我提升：实现梦想 achieve/realize one’s dream=make one’s dream come true；梦想做某事dream to do sth. ；成功做某事 succeed in doing sth. ；尽力做某事 try to do sth./make great efforts to do sth.
；丰富我的学识 enrich my knowledge；拓宽我的视野 broaden my horizons ；学习一些生活技能 learn some life skills；获得责任感 gain a sense of responsibility/duty
3）名言激励：有志者事竟成。Where there is a will, there is a way.
心中有目标，风雨不折腰。If the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
这个世界总会给梦想家让路。The world always makes way for the dreamers.
实战演练
假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。词数100词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.
Li Ping
参考答案
【高分句】
1．It's my dream to invent new products to improve people's life and to discover the mysteries of the world.
2．I believe my dream will come true if I work hard./I believe that as long as I put my heart into it, I will achieve my dream.
【实战演练】
时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 人称：以第一人称为主 要点：梦想职业是什么(what)，为什么选择该职业(why)，谁影响你选择该职业(who)，选择该职业的经历(how)
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job.
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children.Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher.She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.With her help, I made great progress in English.I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up.
Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
考情分析
考查角度及考查频率 近 8 年未考
全国考查角度 介绍自己的梦想及如何实现 对未来职业的选择及理由
写作指导
五步写作法——审列扩连查
毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，从下面两个职业中选择一个你所喜欢的理想职业，写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
Items ( 条目 ) A teacher A scientist
Reasons be good at communicating love kids be interested in science invent new products
How to do that get a good education learn how to teach children ... study science hard do science research ...
提示：
1. What do you want to be when you grow up
2. Why do you have such a dream
3. How are you going to do that
注意事项：
1. 词数100左右。必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My dream job
We all have dream jobs._______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1） 审人称：第一人称
2）审时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
3）审文体：说明文
4）审主题：自己喜欢的职业
定要点 1：介绍理想职业
定要点 2：有此理想的原因
定要点 3：实现理想的做法
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段（Beginning）：引出主题：介绍理想职业是什么。
中间段（Body）：陈述选择这一职业的原因并逐条阐述理由。
结尾（Ending）：如何实现梦想：具体做法。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：介绍理想职业是什么
[一般句] I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
[高分句] As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up. /I dream of being a scientist when I grow up. (as for me;dream of)
中间段：逐条阐述选择这一职业的理由
【理由一】 [一般句] I have become very interested in science.
[高分句] I have been very interested in science for a long time. (be interested in)
【理由二】 [一般句] I want to invent new products and hope to discover new things.
[高分句] 1. （不定式表目的）
结尾：实现梦想的具体做法
【做法一】[一般句] I’m going to study science really hard.
[高分句] I’m going to make great efforts to study science well.
【做法二】[一般句] I will read many books about science.
[高分句] I’ll read as many books about science as possible. /Books about science will be on my reading lists.
【做法三】[一般句] My dream will come true if I work hard.
[高分句] 2. (I believe, as long as)
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文] My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I have been very interested in science for a long time. It’s my dream to invent new products to improve people’s life and to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take action right now. First, I’m going to make great efforts to study science well. Second, I plan to do science research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books about science as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe that as long as I put my heart into it, I will achieve my dream.
第五步 查全文 得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
素材积累
1）理想职业：我长大后想要成为一名工程师。I want to be an engineer when I grow up.
当提到未来职业，我最喜欢的职业是飞行员。 When it comes to the future career, my favorite job is to be a pilot.
2）自我提升：实现梦想 achieve/realize one’s dream=make one’s dream come true；梦想做某事dream to do sth. ；成功做某事 succeed in doing sth. ；尽力做某事 try to do sth./make great efforts to do sth.
；丰富我的学识 enrich my knowledge；拓宽我的视野 broaden my horizons ；学习一些生活技能 learn some life skills；获得责任感 gain a sense of responsibility/duty
3）名言激励：有志者事竟成。Where there is a will, there is a way.
心中有目标，风雨不折腰。If the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
这个世界总会给梦想家让路。The world always makes way for the dreamers.
实战演练
假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。词数100词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.
Li Ping
参考答案
【高分句】
1．It's my dream to invent new products to improve people's life and to discover the mysteries of the world.
2．I believe my dream will come true if I work hard./I believe that as long as I put my heart into it, I will achieve my dream.
【实战演练】
时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 人称：以第一人称为主 要点：梦想职业是什么(what)，为什么选择该职业(why)，谁影响你选择该职业(who)，选择该职业的经历(how)
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job.
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children.Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher.She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.With her help, I made great progress in English.I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up.
Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping