集福“第四关”：写作福
参考答案
Day 17
（一）例文
Dear Lily,
Long time no see! I’m writing to tell you something about my recent life.
Thanks for your help. My English has improved a lot. I used to be shy and now I am confident and helpful. I joined Environmental Protection Association. I also took part in many activities. I hope I can call on more people to protect the environment and care for our earth. The New Year is coming. My New Year's resolution is to take up a new hobby-soccer. I hope to be on the school soccer team.
What's your New Year's resolution I hear you’re going to take up a hobby. Can you tell me what you plan to do I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
①体材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：根据具体语境，选用一般现在时、现在进行时、现在完成时以及一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写的时候注意不要遗漏任何地方并适当补充发挥，此外应注意在书信主体结束时写出期待回信的话语。
【写作步骤】
第一步：在第二自然段写出前三个要点；
第二步：在第三自然段写出第四个要点及做适当发挥后加上期待回信的话语。
【亮点词汇】
①thanks for (doing) sth 感谢（做）某事
②used to be 过去是
③take part in 参加
④take up 开始从事；做某事消遣
⑤hope to do sth 希望做某事
⑥plan to do sth 计划做某事
⑦look forward to (doing) sth 期待（做）某事
【高分句型】
①I hope I can call on more people to protect the environment and care for our earth. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②My New Year's resolution is to take up a new hobby—soccer. (动词不定式作表语)
③Can you tell me what you plan to do (what引导的宾语从句)
（二）例文
Dear Lu Hong,
How are you I am going to visit a village with my parents around this Sunday. Can you go with us My parents and I will ride our bikes there. It is 8 kilometers away and it will take us 40 minutes to get there. We’ll do many interesting things there. In the morning, we can pick some fruit and vegetables on the farm. Then, we can make a meal to have lunch with the villagers there. In the afternoon, we’ll watch the villagers make tea. Do you want to learn to make tea Then you can come with us. I’m sure that we’ll have a good time.
Please reply before this Friday.
Yours.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当增加细节以完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明本周日的计划；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍具体的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①pick fruit摘水果
②learn to do sth学习做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It is 8 kilometers away and it will take us 40 minutes to get there. (动词不定式作主语)
②I’m sure that we’ll have a good time. (“be sure that...”句型)
Day 18
（三）例文:
Dear Sarah,
I miss you very much. I have been studying in this new school for one year. Let me tell you something about my life.
I was shy in the past, but now I am more outgoing. I make more friends at school. I don’t care friends are the same or different. I become one of the most popular students in our school. On the weekends I often play basketball with my friends. I play it at least twice a week. Sometimes I go to the library on Saturday. The main reason is that there are lots of good books there. I can learn a lot there. For TV shows, I can’t stand soap operas. I like Beijing Opera because it is more meaningful. I plan to watch it once a week. Last week I won the first prize in the singing competition. My dream is to be a music teacher. I am trying to make my dream come true.
How about your life I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Jane
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信；
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，向朋友介绍在新学校的生活；
第二步，从“个人特征、周末活动、文娱爱好及最大梦想”等几个方面重点介绍在新学校的生活；
第三步，书写结语，期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②plan to do计划做某事
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①The main reason is that there are lots of good books there. (that引导的表语从句)
②I like Beijing Opera because it is more meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
（四） In 20 years, I will become a highly skilled doctor who can save lives and heal the wounded. The profession of doctors is highly respected, even though their work can be tiring and busy. If I am a doctor in the future, I would like to live in Hangzhou or Suzhou. Because they are beautiful cities with a long history. I will have an electric car that can reduce environmental pollution. And it will be very convenient for me to work.
In my spare time, I want to study law courses because law is very important in our lives. Also, I want to learn yoga to keep body slim.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为一般将来时；
③提示：根据图片提示所有信息，进行适当发挥。注意文章结构完整、语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍20年后自己的工作以及原因、住在哪里以及交通工具；
第二步：介绍业余时间参加哪些活动以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①even though尽管
②in the future在将来
③keep sth +adj保持……
[高分句型]
①I will become a highly skilled doctor who can save lives and heal the wounded.(who引导的定语从句)
②And it will be very convenient for me to work.(It is +adj+ for sb to do sth )
Day 19
（五）例文
A new year is coming. Here are my parents’ and my New Year’s resolutions.
My father often went to the doctor last year. So in the coming year, he is going to get more exercise to keep healthy. My mother is interested in singing. She is going to learn to sing to make her life more colorful. As for me, I’m going to study hard so that I can get good grades in the coming year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是一般将来时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题——你及你家人的新年计划；
第二步，分别介绍你及你家人的新年计划。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③get good grades取得好成绩
[高分句型]
①Here are my parents’ and my New Year’s resolutions.（here引导的倒装句）
②As for me, I’m going to study hard so that I can get good grades in the coming year.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
（六）例文
June 9th Sunny
Last weekend, the school organized us to go to a farm. The weather was sunny that day. We went there by bus. When we arrived at the farm, we saw many animals. We participated in many activities, such as riding horses, milking cows, picking strawberries and so on. All of these activities made us feel extremely excited. We also took many photos to record this unforgettable day.
What a fun farm! We had a pleasant day there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出上个星期学校组织去了农场；
第二步，具体阐述在农场参加的活动；
第三步，书写结语表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①organize sb to do sth组织某人做某事
②participate in参加
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①When we arrived at the farm, we saw many animals. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②What a fun farm! (what引导的感叹句)集福“第四关”：写作福
Day 17
（一）假如你是李华，新年到了，你打算写封信给你的好朋友 Lily，告诉她你最近的学习、生活状况以及你对未来的打算，请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文，要点如下：
1. 谢谢 Lily 的帮助，你的英语进步很大，并且以前害羞的你现在变得自信和乐于助人了；
2. 你加入了志愿者环境保护协会，也参加了很多活动，你希望你能号召更多的人去保护环境，关爱我们的地球；
3. 新年快到了，你的新年愿望是培养一门新的兴趣爱好——足球，并希望成为学校足球队的一员；
4. 询问 Lily的新年愿望是什么；
5. 可适当自由发挥一至两点。
注意：
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：90 词左右；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Environmental Protection Association 环境保护协会 call on v. 号召 confident adj. 自信的
Dear Lily,
Long time no see! I’m writing to tell you something about my recent life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
（二）假如你是李华，你准备和你父母本周日去附近的村庄游玩。请你根据以下提示，给你的同学卢红发一封电子邮件，邀请她一同前往。
提示：
1. 骑自行车前往，8公里需40分钟；
2. 上午：采摘水果、蔬菜，做饭；
下午：观摩村民制茶。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lu Hong,
How are you
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Please reply before this Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
Day 18
（三）假如你是Jane，给你的朋友Sarah写信介绍你在新学校的生活。写作要点如下：
项目 内容
个性特征 更外向；最受欢迎的学生之一；并表达你对交朋友这件事的观点。
周末活动 打篮球，一周至少两次；去图书馆看书，主要的原因之一是有很多好书。
文娱爱好 无法忍受肥皂剧；喜欢京剧，因为它比肥皂剧更有意义，计划每周看一次。
最大梦想 上周参加歌唱比赛获得一等奖，想成为一名音乐老师。
要求：
1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。
3. 词数100词左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Sarah,
I miss you very much. I have been studying in this new school for one year. Let me tell you something about my life.
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How about your life I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Jane
（四）未来的生活总是让人充满遐想。成都市广播电视台(CDRTV)现面向全市学生征文，畅谈20年后的自己，请你根据下图的提示，以“My life in 20 years”为题，写一篇80词以上的文章。
注意:
1. 短文应包括图片的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2. 文章结构完整、语句通顺、语言丰富,合理使用连接词;
3. 不能出现真实人名校名。
My life in 20 years
In 20 years,_______________________________________________________________
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Day 19
（五）假如你是王欣，新的一年快到了，你及你家人的新年计划是什么呢？请你根据下表提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你们的新年计划，然后在英语课上跟大家分享。
父亲 多做运动，保持健康
母亲 学唱歌，丰富生活
王欣 努力学习，提高成绩
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。
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（六）上周末，学校组织去了一趟农场。请据此写一则日记。80词左右，可适当发挥。
天气 晴
地点 去了农场
交通方式 坐公交
活动 看了许多动物，骑了马，挤了奶，摘了草莓，拍了照……
感受 很好玩
写作要求：
1. 80词左右，开头日期已给出，不算作总词数；
2. 包含所给内容，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、班级和校名；
4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，注意大小写字母和标点。
June 9th
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