(共168张PPT)
第4讲 分门别类讲练 提升写作技能
第一组 告知信、建议信和邀请信
一、告知信
告知信通常分为两类,一种是告知某人某事即将发生,另一种是回复某人关于某事的询问。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(开篇问候,表明目的)
1.How are you doing I am writing to share with you some details/tell you some relevant information.
你最近好吗 我写信想和你分享一些细节/告诉你一些相关信息。
2.Here is a piece of exciting news!/I have good news to tell you!
这儿有一条振奋人心的消息!/我有个好消息要告诉你!
3.Learning that you are enthusiastic about...,I’m writing to tell you that...
得知你对……很感兴趣,我写信是想告诉你……。
4.I’m very glad/delighted/more than pleased to receive your email/letter,in which you expressed great interest in...I’m quite/perfectly willing to share with you some information about it.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件/信,在电子邮件/信中你表示对……很感兴趣。我很乐意和你分享一些有关它的信息。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(告知内容)
1.Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows.
一些关于……的细节如下。
2.This match will take place between...and...,so we’d better...
这场比赛将在……和……之间进行,所以我们最好……。
3.A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in the lecture hall, including...,which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.
报告厅内将举办多种多样包括……在内的有意义的活动,这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
4.The course is arranged to start from...which will last one month with one lecture each day from...to...
课程安排从……开始,为期一个月,每天从……到……都有一节课。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(结尾点题,表示期待)
1.Hope you won’t miss...
希望你不要错过……。
2....was so wonderful that I’m looking forward to the next time.
……非常精彩,我期待着下一次。
3.Your timely reply will be highly appreciated.
如能及时回复,我将不胜感激。
二、建议信
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(表明写信目的)
1.I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in doing...at the moment.Here are some tips for you.
得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感遗憾。这些是给你的建议。
2.You have asked me for my advice regarding/with regard to...and I think the following tips can help you.
你向我征求关于……的建议,我认为以下建议可能会帮到你。
3.I’m delighted to learn that you’re particularly keen on...Here are some practical advice to help you...
我很高兴了解到你特别喜欢……,这里有些实用的建议来帮助你……。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(提出建议)
1.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that...For one thing...For another...What’s more,...
说到这种情况,我想建议……。一方面……另一方面……此外,……。
2.In my opinion/From my point of view,doing sth is a perfect approach to achieving...Additionally,it’s strongly advisable that...Last but not least,it would also be a wise choice if you could...
在我看来,做……是一个实现……的完美方式。此外,我强烈建议……。最后但同样重要的是,如果你能……这也是一个明智的选择。
3.Only in this way can you.../You may/might as well do...
只有这样你才能……/你不妨做……。
4.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
我认为如果你能……会更有益。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(望采纳建议,表达祝愿或期待)
1.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions helpful/useful/practical./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望你会认为这些建议有帮助/有用/可行。/我希望我的建议将对你有益。
2.Personally,it would be beneficial if you stick to...
我认为,如果你坚持……的话会有益处的。
3.I will be happy if you can take my advice/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会很开心。
三、邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(开篇表意)
1.I’m very pleased/more than delighted to invite you to join in...to be held from...to...in...
我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……(时间)在……(地点)举行的……(活动)。
2.I am sincerely inviting you to participate in...on behalf of...
我代表……真挚地邀请您参加……。
3.It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to participate in/attend...
能邀请您参加……是我莫大的荣幸。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(活动安排)
1.Here are arrangements for this activity./The following are arrangements for this activity./Arrangements for this activity are as follows.
活动安排如下。
2.To begin with,we will...Besides,there will be varieties of activities such as...,which will...
首先,我们将……。此外,将会有很多活动,例如……,这将……
3.This will be followed by...At around ten,we will hold a small party,at which...
随后会有……。十点左右我们会举行一个小型聚会,聚会上……。
4.The activity is scheduled to last approximately...from...to...
活动预计持续约……从……到……(时间)。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(望应邀,盼回复)
1.Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to...
请写信告诉我你是否能来……好吗
2.An early/favorable/timely reply will be highly appreciated.
我会非常感激你的早日/肯定/及时答复。
3.If you are interested,please let me know and I’ll send you more relevant/detailed information.
如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我将给你发送更多的相关/细节信息。
4.Hopefully,you will accept our invitation.My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
希望你能接受我们的邀请。如果你能来,我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
5.We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
如果你能在你方便时尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
6.I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation/join us and I have the confidence that...
我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们,我有信心……。
[典题印证](2024浙江十校联考) 主题
假如你是某英文网站负责人李华,你们网站近期将举办以海洋保护为主题
的海报设计大赛,在华交换生Freddie对此很感兴趣并写信咨询比赛的相关信息,请你给他回信,内容包括:
关注收信内容,注意回复信的交际性
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[文思梳理]
第一段:表明写信的目的[回复关于海报设计大赛的相关咨询]
第二段:设计大赛的相关情况介绍[①大赛目的 ②参赛作品要求:内容、形式等细节方面的具体要求 ③参赛方式及提交作品时间]
第三段:表达期待
[满分范文]
Dear Freddie,
Extremely① delighted to know that you intend to participate in the poster design contest with the theme of ②ocean protection,I’m writing to inform you of some detailed information.【说明写信目的】
In a bid to③ arouse the awareness of ④ marine conservation,our English website organizes this contest,[1]where all the students are welcome to submit their entries⑤.Originality⑥,by all means⑦in the first requirement.Plus,the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-stimulating⑧ clearly [2]illustrating⑨ the significance of the ocean and the urgency to protect it. Moreover,a power slogan is also preferred,[3]which will make your work more persuasive⑩ and impressive.【参赛作品的具体需求】If you are interested,submit your entry before November 10th to our office 【参赛方式和作品提交时间】
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①非常 ②以……为主题 ③为了 ④提高……的意识
⑤提交参赛作品 ⑥独创性 ⑦当然 ⑧发人深省的 ⑨阐明
⑩有说服力的
高级句式:[1]定语从句 [2]现在分词短语作状语 [3]定语从句
课堂应用
1.建议信
(2024北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友 Jim 准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.建议投稿内容;
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of ① the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.Here are a few suggestions for your article.[说明写信目的]
To begin with,talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements,[1]which are the highlights ② in the past few decades.Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss [2]because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.In addition,you can also mention China’s role in helping solve global issues such as the global warming,offer a more comprehensive view.[提出建议,说明理由]
Looking forward to reading your article![期盼回复]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①在……之际
②最好(最精彩的)部分
高级句式:[1]定语从句
[2]原因状语从句
2.邀请信
(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Caroline,
How’s it going I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview [1] held by “Talk and Talk”,[2]which is an English programme in our school broadcast station.[写信目的]
As you know,our programme starts at 10 am and ends at 11 am every Tuesday.Besides,the topic is about how to improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.[3]It is certain that all students will benefit much from① your speech.[邀请原因及内容]
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account②. Looking forward to your early reply.[期待回复]
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①受益于
②把……考虑在内
高级句式:[1]过去分词短语作后置定语
[2]非限制性定语从句
[3]it作形式主语,that从句为真正的主语。
第二组 申请信、求助信和咨询信
一、申请信
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(提出申请)
1.I’m writing to apply for your recently advertised position of...
我写信是想申请贵公司最近刊登的……职位。
2.Having learnt from the newspaper that you are in need of...I’m writing to express my interest in it.
从报纸上得知你们需要……,我写信是想表达我对此非常感兴趣。
3.Perfectly fit/suitable/qualified for...,I’m writing in reply to your notice for...
完全符合……我写信回复你……的启事。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(阐述优势)
1.总述:I am competent to meet the requirements you’ve listed.
我有能力满足你列出的要求。
2.资格:①I am confident that I’m suitable for.../qualified to do.../equal to doing...
我确信我适合……/有资格做……/能胜任做……
②I once worked as...,which makes me experienced in...
我曾经做过……,这使我在……方面有经验。
3.性格:①Meanwhile,it is my independence that makes it easy for me to adapt to a new environment.
同时,正是我的独立使我很容易适应新环境。
②For my being outgoing and enthusiastic,it’s relatively easy to get along with me.
由于我外向热情,和我相处相对容易。
4.交流:①As a graduate majoring in English,I have no difficulty in communicating with others in English.
作为英语专业的毕业生,我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
②To be honest,I have a gift for communicating with others.
说实话,我有与别人沟通的天赋。
5.经验:Furthermore,I have participated in community activities for years on end,which makes me cope with various emergencies promptly and efficiently/more qualified for the position.
此外,我已经连续多年参加社区活动,这使我能够迅速有效地应对各种紧急情况/更加胜任这个职位。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(表达感谢、期望或决心)
1.Should you favor me with the position,I am convinced that I would live up to your expectations.
如果你选择我任职,我坚信我一定不会辜负你的期望。
2.I would appreciate it if I’m offered the chance.I will spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果你能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。我将会不遗余力提供我的最佳服务。
二、求助信
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此语气要委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。文章应用一般现在时,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(说明目的)
1.I’m writing to ask you for some help/to do me a favor/to give me a hand.
我写信是想向你求助。
2.I am writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on...
我写信是希望你能给我一些关于……的建议。
3.I’m sorry to bother you,but I meet with some difficulties with...I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
很抱歉打扰你,但是我在……方面遇到一些困难,我别无选择,只能向你求助。
4.Would you please give me a hand with the following problems
你能帮我解决下列问题吗
5.I wonder if you could take the trouble to help me with...
我想知道你是否能不嫌麻烦帮我……
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(描述问题)
1.I’ve finished...but I still feel it far from satisfactory,which bothers/troubles/upsets me a lot.
我已经完成了……,但我仍然觉得它远不能令人满意,这让我很苦恼。
2.I find it challenging to...I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limit vocabulary.
我发现……很有挑战性。另外,因为我的词汇量有限,所以我很难准确表达我的想法。
3.I often feel left out in this school,but I don’t know how it has come about.
在这所学校我经常感觉受冷落,却不知道这是怎么回事。
4.Some problems trouble me a lot.First,...What’s worse...What bothers me most is...
有些问题让我很烦恼。首先,……。更糟糕的是……。最让我烦恼的是……。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(表达期望)
1.Faced with/Facing so many difficulties,I am anxious/eager to get your timely help.
面对如此多的难题,我非常希望得到你的及时帮助。
2.I will be very grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand./I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful/practical suggestions.
如果你能抽出时间帮助我,我将很感激。/如果你能给我提供一些有用的/实用的建议,我不胜感激。
3.Thanks for considering my request.Your early reply is well appreciated./Thanks for your attention.
多谢考虑我的请求。十分感谢您的早日答复。/感谢您的关注。
三、咨询信
咨询信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(自我介绍并表明写作目的)
1.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on/regarding/concerning...
我写信是看您能否给我提供关于……的信息。
2.I’m Li Hua,a student planning to.../interested in...I’m writing to inquire/ask for some information/details about...
我是李华,一个计划……/对……感兴趣的学生。我写信是为了咨询一些关于……的信息/细节。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(说明咨询事由)
1.First,I wonder if...Another point I am not certain about is...
首先,我想知道是否……。我不确定的另外一点是……
2.To begin with/To start with/In the first place,I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants.
首先,如果您能告诉我对申请人的要求,我会很感激。
3.Since it is the first time for most of us to...,we’d like to know the details about...Besides,is it possible for you to... /Additionally,I would appreciate it if...
由于这是我们大多数人第一次……,我们想知道关于……的细节。另外,你有可能……吗 /另外,如果……,我将不胜感激。
4.I’d be grateful if you could let me know whether there are any special requirements for...
如果您能告诉我对……是否有特殊要求,我将不胜感激。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(表感谢,盼回复)
1.Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention/early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢你的善意,我将非常感激你对这封信的及时关注/早日回复。
2.May I have your reply by...,if possible
如果可能的话,我能在……之前收到您的答复吗
[典题印证] 事件
假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。
做什么
请写一封信申请当志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势及能做的事情; 主体段:详细描述,注意条理性
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[文思梳理]
第一段:表明写信目的[申请当志愿者]
第二段:阐述个人优势[①对中国画的了解②性格优势③语言优势④可拓展志愿服务经验丰富……]
第三段:表达感谢,期待回复[感谢考虑申请,期待早日回复]
[满分范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
No sooner had I caught sight of① the advertisement you posted on the Internet than I wanted to apply to be a volunteer.【表明写信目的】Here is my brief self-introduction.
In the first place②,I’m a Chinese student studying in London this summer vacation.[1]Having lived in China for more than 18 years,I have a good knowledge of③ Chinese paintings.Furthermore,being outgoing and talkative,I hold the firm belief [2]that④ I have the ability to introduce the exhibitions to the visitors.In addition⑤,I could speak Chinese as well as English fluently,[3]which will contribute to⑥ my voluntary work.Last but not least⑦,it’s my relevant experience as a volunteer that enables me to cope with ⑧various emergencies.【阐述个人优势】
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration⑨. Looking forward to your early reply.【表达感谢和期望】
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:
①看到 ②首先 ③十分了解 ④坚信 ⑤另外
⑥促进 ⑦最后但同样重要的是 ⑧处理 ⑨考虑
高级句式:[1]现在分词的完成式短语作状语
[2]同位语从句
[3]非限制性定语从句
课堂应用
1.求助信
(2024福建厦门模拟)
假定你是李华,当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Smith写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.说明写信原因;
2.描述遇到的具体问题,至少两个;
3.表达感谢或期待。
注意:
1.词数80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Li Hua.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Li Hua.I’m writing to ask you for help,[1]for I’m having trouble in① learning English now.[写信目的:呈现问题]
At present,I am faced with ② two main problems.First of all,I [2]find it quite hard to remember words and put them into use.In addition,I feel [3]so nervous in front of my classmates that I can’t say a word in English. Therefore,I hope you can offer me some advice on how to remember the words and how to overcome my fear of speaking English.[陈述困难]
I believe that I can improve my English with your help.I would appreciate it if you could help me.Looking forward to your reply.[表达期望]
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①在……有困难
②面临
高级句式:[1] for连接并列句,表示原因
[2]find it+adj.+to do
[3]结果状语从句
2.咨询信
(2021全国甲卷改编)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数80词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Chris,
Word came[1]that our school is going to hold a class meeting [2]whose topic is related to① traditional Chinese customs.[3]Because this activity will be presented on the English website,I sincerely want you to offer me some advice. [写信目的]
As far as we know②,there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries.In order to get more clicks,you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer.What’s more,if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements,what should I do [4]Knowing you are interested in China,I [5]do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.[征求建议]
If possible,you can reply to me as soon as possible③.I will take your advice into consideration④.I really appreciate your help.[表示感谢]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①与……有关
②据我们所知
③尽早回复我
④把……考虑在内
高级句式:[1]同位语从句
[2]whose引导定语从句
[3]原因状语从句
[4]现在分词短语作状语
[5]do表强调
第三组 道歉信、推荐信和感谢信
一、道歉信
道歉信是陈述自己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意,或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(开篇表示歉意)
1.I’m honored to be invited to your celebration party.However,much to my regret,I have to decline your invitation.Here I express/convey/extend my sincere apologies for my absence.
我很荣幸被邀请参加你们的庆祝聚会。然而,令我非常遗憾的是,我不得不拒绝你的邀请。在此我对我的缺席表示诚挚的歉意。
2.I’m writing to make an apology to you for.../express my deep regret and sincerely expect your forgiveness.
因……我写信向你道歉/表达我深深的歉意并真诚期待你的原谅。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(说明具体原因)
1.I can’t make it for the reason that I am occupied in...
我不能赴约是因为我忙于……。
2.The reason why I failed to...was that...
我未能……的原因是……。
3.The...you lent me is really impressive/lovable.Unfortunately,yesterday when I came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.
你借给我的……真的非常讨人喜欢。不幸的是,昨天当我到屋里时,却到处找不到它。
提出补救措施:
1.You know I have no intention to break our appointment,so shall we make it next Sunday if you’re available
您知道我并非有意爽约,所以如果你有空的话,我们下周日再约如何
2.Considering that you need someone to act as...,I strongly recommend my friend Li Ming.He has been...since he was a child and has a good knowledge of...
考虑到你需要某人来担当……,我强烈推荐我的朋友李明,他从孩提时起就一直……并且他精通……。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(再次抱歉并祝福)
1.Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
再次为我缺席给您带来的任何不便表示歉意,并向你致以最美好的祝愿。
2.I’m in the sincere hope that you can think in my situation and accept my apology.
我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。
二、推荐信
推荐信是向别人介绍人、事物或地方的信件。介绍时,语气要肯定,并对所推荐或介绍的人、事物或地方给予正面评价。写作时一般用第二人称或第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(指明推荐/宣传的对象)
1.Knowing that you are interested in/crazy about/an enthusiast of...,I’m writing to recommend...to you.
知道你对……感兴趣/痴迷于……/是……爱好者,我写信是想向你推荐……。
2.I’m very pleased to learn that you are going to...I’m writing to offer my recommendation.
得知你将……我很高兴。我写信是为了提供建议。
3.With reference to your demands,I shall recommend...to you.
关于你的要求,我将向你推荐……。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(简述推荐理由)
1.The reasons why I recommend...to you are as follows.First of all,...Besides,
...Last but not least,...
我向你推荐……的原因如下。首先,……另外,……最后但同样重要的是……。
2.There are several reasons why I think...is a good choice.Firstly,he possesses a/an...attitude.Additionally,he is equipped with extraordinary ability to...Plus,relevant experience of...makes him...
我认为……是个不错的选择有几个原因。首先,他具有……的态度。另外,他……能力超强。而且,他有……的相关经验,这使他能够……。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(表达期望与祝愿)
1.I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial.Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
我真希望我的建议对你有所帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
2.Hope my recommendation will be of help.Wish you a good time/journey.
希望我的推荐有用。祝你过得/旅途愉快。
3.Whenever you need help,please don’t hesitate to let me know.
无论你何时需要帮助,请尽管告诉我。
4.I’m confident/convinced that it will meet your requirements.
我确信它能满足你的要求。
三、感谢信
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(表达感谢之情并说明原因)
1.With the deepest gratitude,I’m writing to you to express my sincere thanks for your timely assistance and support when I was traveling in...
我怀着最深的感激给您写信,真诚感谢您在我……旅行时对我的及时帮助和支持。
2.Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to...
非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(具体描述对方对自己的帮助)
1.There’s no denying that it is difficult for me to...without your help.
不可否认,对我来说,没有你的帮助,……是非常困难的。
2.Thanks for your generous/selfless help,without which I wouldn’t have made such unbelievable progress and ranked first in the recent English speaking contest.
感谢您慷慨/无私的帮助,没有您的帮助,我不会取得如此惊人的进步,并在最近的英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。
3.During my travel in...,you showed me around...and I had a great time there. Thanks for your considerate and enthusiastic treatment.
在我去……旅行的时候,你带我参观了……,我在那里玩得很开心。谢谢你周到、热情的招待。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(再次致谢)
1.My gratitude is beyond description/words.
感激之情,无以言表。
2.It is very kind of you to do this for me,and I appreciate it more than I can say.
你为我做这件事真是太好了,我无法用言语来表达我的感激。
[典题印证] 写信缘由
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和留学生好友Jim 原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
注意:1.词数 80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
[文思梳理]
第一段:致歉并表示无法赴约;
第二段:说明原因、提出补救建议[①详述不能赴约的原因②另约时间,可拓展缘由]
第三段:再次致歉并希望得到回复[①衷心希望好友理解自己的处境并接受补救措施②期待对方的回复]
[满分范文]
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology for my not being able to hang out with you①this weekend as scheduled②.【表示歉意】
[1]As you know,I hold the position of chairman for the Chinese Martial Arts Club.Recently we have been rehearsing for the coming school cultural festival.The club has just decided to have a rehearsal③ this weekend,[2]for which I’m afraid I have no alternative but to ④break our appointment.【说明原因】I deeply regret any inconvenience caused.I’m wondering if we can make it next Sunday.By then,everything will have settled down,and we can have a great time together without any distraction.If that suits you,please let me know.【提出补救建议】
Sorry again and [3]it’s my sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept the alternative time.Looking forward to your reply.【再次致歉并期待回复】
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①与你一起闲逛
②按照计划
③进行排练
④除了……别无选择
高级句式:[1]定语从句
[2]“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句
[3]it’s+n.+that...,it为形式主语,that从句作真正的主语
课堂应用
1.推荐信
(2021上海卷改编)
你的外国朋友Bill想学中文,有两种课程可以选择:一个是听说,另一个是读写。请你比较两个课程,推荐一个并写出推荐的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Bill,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Bill,
It’s so great to learn from your last letter that you want to learn Chinese. Don’t worry about which course to choose,listening and speaking or reading and writing.I am glad to give you a hand.[写信目的]
From my perspective①,I’d like to recommend listening and speaking course.For one thing②,[1]only by listening and speaking can you keep practicing Chinese and only by putting what you have learnt into use can you master it as quickly as possible.For another③,high listening and speaking ability will be of great help④ for you to adapt yourself in class [2]so that you can understand the teachers’ words and instructions.[推荐理由]
I am confident that you will surely benefit a lot from my advice.Wish you success.[表达愿望]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①从我的角度来看
②一则
③再则
④有很大的帮助
高级句式:[1]“only+介词短语”引起的倒装句
[2]so that引导目的状语从句
2.感谢信
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期,你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的在线讲座(A Lecture on Continuation Writing)。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2.说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Steve,
I would like to convey ① in this letter my heartfelt gratitude ② to you for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing.I’ve really learnt a lot. [1]Without your help,I couldn’t overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.[写信目的:表达感谢]
However,I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.For example,I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages,and I also feel it hard to continue [2] when confronted with③ new words.What can I do Would you please give me some advice I would be really grateful if you could help me out.[介绍困惑,期盼得到帮助]
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.Your earliest reply would be appreciated.[再次表达感谢]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①表达
②衷心感激
③面临
高级句式:[1]含蓄虚拟条件句
[2]省略句
第四组 演讲/发言稿、征文投稿和宣传稿
一、演讲/发言稿
演讲稿的语言通常要有吸引力,还要明确演讲的对象。演讲稿一般也是议论文,在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(引出主题)
1.Good morning,everyone!I’m Li Hua.I’m honored to have the opportunity to make a speech on...
大家上午好!我是李华。很荣幸有机会做有关……的演讲。
2.It’s my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about...
我很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下……。
3.I’m very glad and feel it my honor to run for/be a candidate for...
我很高兴也是我的荣幸能参加……的竞选/成为……的候选人。
4.I really appreciate your making time in your tight schedule to attend the meeting.We are here to talk about...
我非常感谢你们在百忙之中抽出时间来参加会议。我们在这儿要谈论……。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(陈述内容)
1.Many people believe/hold the view/think that...
许多人认为……。
2.What I want to stress is that...For one thing,...For another,...Besides,...In a word...
我想强调的是……。一方面,……。另一方面,……。此外,……。总之,……。
3.The first thing we can do is...As we all know,...What we can do next is...For example,...What’s more,...
我们能做的第一件事是……。众所周知,……我们下一步能做的是……。例如,……而且,……。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(提出希望并表示感谢或进行总结)
1.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个机会与你们讲话。
2.I’d like to wish...a success and I hope...can perform at your best!
我祝愿……获得成功,并且希望……能表现出自己最好的状态!
3.I sincerely hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you.Thanks for your listening/attention!
我真诚地希望以上所说的对你有帮助。感谢您的倾听/关注!
二、征文投稿
征文投稿类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,说明文和记叙文居多。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(总体阐述)
Beijing successfully held the 2022 Winter Olympics,which is bound to strengthen the east and west culture bridge again.
北京成功举办了2022年冬奥会,这肯定会进一步巩固东西方文化的桥梁。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(具体论述)
1.The dreamlike colors,the eye-catching high-tech and the warm atmosphere demonstrated in the National Stadium thrilled my heart,which is something I will never forget.
国家体育馆梦幻般的色彩、抢眼的高科技和温暖的氛围让我心醉神迷,这是我永远不会忘记的。
2.In the last decade,China has made great achievements in space programs.
在过去的十年里,中国在太空项目上取得了巨大的成就。
3.In my spare time,I often read the newspaper which covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.
在业余时间,我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事,还报道时事的报纸。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(结论与体会)
1.I believe,with innovative ideas and perseverance,we human beings will be able to fly further and further not only from the Earth to the Moon,but to the Mars and beyond.(2022福建四地市第一次检测)
我相信,只要有创新的思想和坚持不懈的精神,我们人类一定能够飞得越来越远,不仅能从地球飞到月球,还能飞到火星甚至更远的地方。
2.In conclusion,to realize a dream is not that easy,so we must study hard to fulfill our dreams.
总之,实现梦想不是那么容易的,所以我们必须努力学习来实现我们的梦想。
三、宣传稿
宣传稿是为了某一特定需要,通过一定形式向公众传递信息的手段,可以分为活动类宣传稿、表彰类宣传稿等。具体写作结构为:
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(点明宣传主题)
1.As is seen from the picture,a student is overloaded with piles of homework and endless after-school training,making him breathless.Thus, double reduction should be carried out immediately.(2024湖南长沙雅礼中学高三模拟)
从图中可以看出,一个学生被成堆的作业和无尽的课后训练累得喘不过气来。 因此,应该立即实施“双减”政策。
2.To enrich students’ school life and build up our body,a sports festival themed on “Sports and Health” will be held in our school stadium next weekend.
为了丰富学生的校园生活,强身健体,下周末我们将在学校体育馆举办一个以“运动与健康”为主题的体育节。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(宣传的主要信息及特点)
1.Additionally,it has developed into a kind of art form,which is appreciated by those art-lovers abroad as well as at home.
此外,它已经发展成为一种艺术形式,受到国内外艺术爱好者的喜爱。
2.Based on such a meaningful theme,the festival will consist of various activities,ranging from group competitions such as the tug-of-war to the solo ones like a half-marathon race.
基于这样一个有意义的主题,从拔河等团体比赛到半程马拉松等个人比赛,节日将会有多种多样的活动。
3.Additionally,a lecture about how to do daily exercise properly will be given by health professionals.
此外,还会有健康专家讲授如何正确地进行日常锻炼。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(强调独特之处)
1.I hold the belief that this activity will inspire/encourage more people to use “public chopsticks”.(2024广东汕头4月模拟)
我相信这项活动将激励/鼓励更多的人使用“公筷”。
2.For the sake of our health and safety,I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks” when we dine together with others.So let’s start taking action right away!(2024广东汕头4月模拟)
为了我们的健康和安全,我认为与他人一起用餐时使用“公筷”是好的,也是必要的。 所以让我们马上开始行动吧!
3.Only when joint efforts are made can double reduction come into effect.(2024湖南长沙雅礼中学高三模拟)
只有共同努力,才能实现“双减”。
[典题印证]
(2024全国甲卷改编) 注意图片信息
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 体裁
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class.Today we’ll look at some developments in transport in China.
[满分范文]
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class.Today we’ll look at some developments in transport in China.From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport,Chinese transport has an enormous① development.Today I’d like to focus on some major developments,[1]which include shared bicycles,high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.【介绍主题】
First of all,shared bicycles have brought great convenience to our short-distance travel,[2]making it more flexible② and environmentally friendly. Besides,with its amazing speed and high efficiency③,the high-speed train has shortened the distance between cities and regions,promoting economic development.Currently,advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives, helping reduce air pollution.【介绍中国交通的发展】
In conclusion④,the development of transport in China is astonishing.It has not only improved our living standards but also enhanced⑤ China’s international status and influence.Therefore,we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation.【概括总结和个人感想】
Thank you for your listening!
靓词标注:①巨大的 ②灵活的 ③效率 ④总之 ⑤增强;提高;改善
高级句式:[1]which引导的非限制性定语从句
[2]现在分词短语作状语
课堂应用
1.征文投稿
(2024浙江1月卷)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1.介绍这项运动;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
参考范文
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
Are you tired of ① being chained to your desk all day long Do you feel weary ② during the daytime but find yourself wide awake at night If so③,Tai Chi may be the perfect solution for you.[推荐一项运动]
Tai Chi,[1]a time-honored Chinese martial art,has become increasingly popular among people of all ages and fitness levels.It is characterized by graceful,flowing movements and deep breathing techniques.Moreover,Tai Chi has been shown to provide numerous ④ health benefits,including better sleep, stress relief,and increased energy levels.[介绍推荐理由]
So what are you waiting for Stand up and give it a shot⑤![鼓励尝试]
靓词标注:①厌烦
②疲劳的
③如果这样的话
④众多的,许多的
⑤尝试一下
高级句式:[1]同位语
2.宣传稿
(2024山东日照二模)
假定你是李华,你校将举行校园厨艺展示活动,请你在校英文网站上写一篇文章进行介绍与宣传,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动内容;
3.号召参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Campus Cooking Show
参考范文
Campus Cooking Show
In order to enrich school life ① and showcase students’ cooking skills,our school will hold a campus cooking show,[1]which is scheduled at 9 am next Saturday in the dining hall.[时间、地点]
First of all,the cooking show is open to all students [2]who are interested in cooking and willing to challenge themselves in the kitchen.What’s more,[3]with all food materials fully prepared,[4]it is highly recommended that you should cook their favourite cuisine in person ② to experience the joy of cooking.Finally,we also invite you to share this event with friends and family through social media to witness your growth③.[5]Not only does it promote your practical skills,but it also releases the pressure from heavy schoolwork ④.[活动内容]
[6]Never will you miss such a golden chance to showcase your cooking talent.Your positive involvement will be appreciated.See you there![号召参加]
靓词标注:①丰富学校生活
②亲自
③见证你的成长
④减轻繁重学业压力
高级句式:[1]非限制性定语从句
[2]who引导定语从句
[3] with的复合结构
[4]it is +过去分词+that...
[5]not only引起的倒装句
[6]never引起的倒装句
第五组 活动报道、倡议书和通知
一、活动报道
活动报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,所以首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者,然后叙述活动的过程,最后对活动进行评价。报道的应用较为广泛,实用性强。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性,语言要准确、 简练。写作结构如下:
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(简要概括事件)
1.To help...build...,the Students’ Union of our school organized a volunteer activity last week.
为了帮助……建设……,我们学校的学生会上周组织了一次志愿者活动。
2.In order to provide the students with a colorful school life,our school held...last week.
为了给学生们提供丰富多彩的学校生活,我们学校上周举办了……。
3.In an attempt to mourn sb/mark sth,our school held an activity on...,which received great attention.
为了悼念某人/纪念某事,我们学校在……(时间)举行了一次活动,受到了极大的关注。
4.Recently the issue/problem of...has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.
近来,……的问题成为焦点/引起公众注意。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(事件过程)
1.At the beginning,a lecture related to...was arranged,after which our school teachers showed us how to...
开始时,我们安排了一场关于……的讲座,之后我们学校的老师向我们展示了如何……。
2.It was a nice day.At 8:00 am,we gathered at...and set out for...in high spirits.
天气很好。早上8点,我们在……集合,兴高采烈地动身去……。
3.At the beginning of the activity,a short film was shown,helping us students know...
活动开始时,放映了一部短片,帮助我们学生了解……。
4.The opening ceremony started at 9:00 am,and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...
开幕式上午9点开始,校长发表了关于……的演讲。
5.The activity was so fascinating that more than 500 students signed up for it.
活动如此具有吸引力以至于有 500 多名学生报名参加。
6.All the volunteers were divided into several groups and then they went to the nearby communities where they helped the residents (do)...
所有志愿者被分成几个小组,然后他们去附近的社区,在那里帮助居民(做)……。
7.About 2 hours later,we all reached...Bathed in sunshine,we cheered with joy.
大约两小时后,我们都到了……。沐浴在阳光下,我们高兴地欢呼起来。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(对事件的评价和感受)
1.Through the activity,not only did we master some basic and practical skills,but also our awareness of safety was raised.
通过这次活动,我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能,我们的安全意识也增强了。
2.There is no denying that the activity benefits us a lot.It not only provides us with a chance to...but allows us to...as well.
不可否认,这次活动使我们受益匪浅。它不仅给我们提供了……的机会,而且也让我们可以……。
3.The activity was thought highly of.Not only can...be passed down continuously,but also more importance was attached to...
此次活动受到高度评价。不仅……可以一直流传下去,而且……受到了更多的重视。
二、倡议书
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(说明倡议的原因)
1.With the approaching of...,I’d like to call on everyone to...
随着……临近,我想号召大家……。
2.It goes without saying that...is of great benefit to...However,in my opinion, the present situation is...
不用说,……对……有很大好处。然而,在我看来,目前的情况是……。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(陈述倡议内容或实施方案)
1.With the aim of...,we are supposed to carry out a series of measures.For one thing,...For another,...
为了……,我们应该采取一系列措施。一方面,……。另一方面,……。
2.I think it necessary to lay stress on.../we should follow the advice below.First of all/To begin with,...Besides,...What’s more,...
我认为有必要强调的是……/我们应该遵循以下建议。首先,……。其次,……。更重要的是,……。
3.Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse.
在事态恶化之前,应该采取有效措施。
4.Only if we take effective measures to deal with this problem now can we...
只有我们现在采取有效措施来解决这个问题,我们才能……。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(呼吁/号召行动)
1.Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.
让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
2.All in all,it is high time that we devoted ourselves to...
总之,是时候我们致力于……。
三、通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(介绍缘由)
1.In celebration of...a meeting/party is to be held at...(time)on... (date)in/at...(place).
为了庆祝……,在……(时间、地点)将举行一次会议/聚会。
2.In order to enrich our after-school life,we are going to hold...
为了丰富我们的课余生活,我们将举办……
3.With the intention of fostering/cultivating/promoting/raising people’s awareness of.../interest in...,a campaign called/named/entitled...is scheduled to be held on...(time),at/in...(place).
为了培养/提高人们……的意识/对……的兴趣,一个名为……的活动计划于……(时间)在……(地方)举办。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(具体事项)
1.时间、地点:
①As scheduled,it is supposed to be launched at 2:30 this Wednesday afternoon in the school lecture hall.
按计划,它将在本周三下午2:30在学校讲堂举行。
②The meeting will be held in the library/stadium/auditorium at...(time).
会议将于……(时间)在图书馆/体育场/礼堂举行。
③The...will begin at...(time)/on...(date),lasting 3 hours/15 days.
……将于……(时间)/……(日期)开始,持续3小时/15天。
2.参加人员:
①Students from...are expected to take part.
来自……的学生预计会参加。
②Those who have interest in...are welcome to participate.
欢迎对……感兴趣的人参加。
3.活动安排:
①During...,a variety of activities will be presented,ranging from...to....I bet there is bound to be one that can appeal to/strike you.
在……期间,多种活动将会呈现,包括……与……,我相信一定会有一个能够吸引你。
②By then,there will be many activities you are sure to be interested in, including...
到那时,会有很多你一定会感兴趣的活动,包括……。
4.准备工作:
①Come here on time and bring a pen and a notebook with you.
请准时到这儿,并随身携带笔和本子。
②Additionally,it is recommended that you should prepare...
另外,建议你准备……。
③All the participants are required/expected to carry...in view of...
考虑到……,所有的参与者需要/应该携带……。
5.特殊要求:
①No asking for leave without special reasons.
没有特殊原因不准请假。
②Please be there on time and don’t be late.
请按时到达,不要迟到。
③Those who want to involve themselves in the activity please sign up at...before October 10th.
想参加该活动的人请于10月10日前到……报名。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(表示欢迎或期待)
1.Your participation/contribution will surely/certainly make much difference/make the event a huge success.
你的参与/贡献一定会有很大的影响/使这次活动取得巨大成功。
2.We are expecting your attendance/participation.
我们期待您的出席/参与。
3.Your presence will be requested.
敬请出席。
[典题印证](2024苏南名校调研)
假定你是某国际高中的学生会主席李华。为了配合学校的历史遗址保护
主题 单位
宣传活动,请你代表学生会,围绕“保护历史遗址”这个主题,为学校的英语论坛写一封倡议书。 体裁
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
[满分范文]
Dear fellow students,
Can you imagine a world without the Great Wall of China or the Pyramids of Egypt Destroying any heritage site will erase valuable parts of our world’s history.【引入主题】
Destruction of historical sites has immeasurable consequences①,[1] robbing us of the chance to② grasp our ancestors’ lifestyles,skills,and values. These sites are historical witnesses and damaging them will erase a vital part of our heritage.【破坏遗址的后果】As students,we can regularly participate in local heritage site cleaning programs.Furthermore,we can launch campaigns③,set up websites,and give out leaflets to raise people’s awareness of the preservation of heritage sites.Last but not least,we can increase the publicity of this issue through social media.【学生可做的贡献】
Let’s stop hesitating and start acting now.We can and will make a difference.【再次发出倡议】
Students’ Union
靓词标注:①无法估量的后果
②剥夺我们……的机会
③发起活动
高级句式:[1]现在分词短语作结果状语
课堂应用
1.活动报道
(2023浙江1月卷)
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
参考范文
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend,the Students’ Union of our school [1]organized an activity “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.[时间、地点、组织单位、活动名称]
We gathered in the playground at 8:00.At first,an introductory speech was delivered to advocate① for a life closer to nature.Then,[1]divided into groups, we tried to identify② different plants on campus,[2]appreciating their breathtaking beauty.The activity concluded with a call for the protection of plants.[活动过程]
The activity made a strong impression on③ us and aroused the enthusiasm of ④us students for various plants.All of us left with a sense of achievement and pride.[收获感想]
靓词标注:①拥护,提倡
②认出,识别
③给某人留下深刻印象
④激发……的热情
高级句式:[1] 过去分词短语作状语
[2] 现在分词短语作状语
2.通知
(2024山东烟台二模)
假定你是某国际学校文艺部部长李华,学校决定在校园文化节上举办 “学生唐装秀” 活动,现征召模特。请你写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.对模特的要求。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Models Wanted
Literature & Art Department
参考范文
Models Wanted
[1]Aimed to promote traditional Chinese culture and add charm to the upcoming school culture festival,a special and refreshing activity,Student Tang Costume Show,is to be included!Now we’re recruiting ① models for this event.[活动目的]
The requirements for models are as follows②.First,a good figure and confident stage presence are essential③.Second,participants must have a genuine love for the Tang costume,[2] only in which case can its true charm be displayed well.Plus,being punctual for our scheduled rehearsals is also a must. [对模特的要求]
[3]If interested,please contact the Literature & Art Department and submit your application and profile by May 16.Looking forward to everyone’s active involvement.[报名须知的信息,号召参与]
Literature & Art Department
靓词标注:①招聘,招募 ②如下 ③必不可少的,非常重要的
高级句式:[1]过去分词短语作状语 [2] 倒装句 [3] 省略句
第六组 人物介绍、图表作文和说理议论文
一、人物介绍
人物介绍属于记叙文的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料。首先写人物简介,对人物的外貌、性格、工作性质等基本信息进行描述;然后再写此人受人尊敬的原因,可以举实例,切忌大而空;最后再总结。要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(点明要介绍的人物)
1.There are many famous athletes in China,among whom I like Yao Ming best.
中国有很多有名的运动员,其中我最喜欢姚明。
2.The person I respect/love/admire most is my father.
我最尊敬/最爱/最钦佩的人是我的父亲。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(人物特点、生平和功绩)
1.He does well in physics,and once won first prize in a physics competition for middle school students.
他物理好,曾经获得过中学生物理竞赛一等奖。
2.He has had a strong passion for swimming since he took it up at the age of five.
自从5岁开始学游泳,他就对游泳有着强烈的热爱。
3.He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to the country.
他致力于科研工作,为国家做出了巨大贡献。
4.Considered to be one of the greatest writers in the world,he was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature.
他被认为是世界上最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。
5.Every time I am faced with difficulties,she/he will come to my assistance.
每次我遇到困难,她/他都会来帮助我。
6.He is not only friendly and helpful,but also very inspiring.
他不仅为人友善,乐于助人,而且十分励志。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(对人物的评价和感受)
1.He made such great contributions to the development of science and technology that we should learn from him.
他为科学技术的发展做出了如此巨大的贡献,我们应该向他学习。
2.He is a role model.Thanks to him,I determined to take up a job in the field of maths.
他是一位楷模。多亏了他,我才决定从事数学领域的工作。
3.It seems that he never feels tired of doing whatever he can to help others, which may be what makes him so popular among all of us.
他力所能及地帮助他人,似乎从不感到厌倦,这或许是使他在我们所有人之中如此受欢迎的原因。
二、图表作文
图表作文通常用图片、表格的形式反映出某一问题、现象或观点,该类作文要求考生首先对图表进行简单表述,然后进行点题并加以论证说明。
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(引入话题)
1.As is apparently shown in the chart above,different people hold different opinions about the change.
上图明显显示出,不同的人对该变化持有不同的看法。
2.As is vividly described in the cartoon above,a young man,who is obvious a senior high student,is going away on a trip.
正如上面的漫画生动地描述的那样,一个显然是高中生的年轻人正在外出旅行。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(介绍图表所表述的问题)
1.80% of the people surveyed express the satisfaction with the medical insurance and public transportation,while only 40% of them are satisfied with the prices.
80%的受访者表示对医疗保险和公共交通满意,而对价格满意的只有40%。
2.It can be seen from the table that 70% of them oppose the view.
正如表格所示,70%的人反对这一观点。
3.There is an increase of about 12 percent,compared with the last year.
与去年相比较,大约增加了12%。
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(表达个人观点)
1.I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy,because if it is too easy,teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies,and if it is too difficult,we will lose heart.
我希望它既不太难也不太容易,因为如果它太容易,老师就不会知道我们实际的学习情况,如果它太难,我们就会失去信心。
2.In my opinion/As far as I am concerned,we should understand success in a reasonable way.
在我看来/就我而言,我们应该以合理的方式理解成功。
三、说理议论文
说理议论文有很多种,高中最常考的是社会现象类的议论文,就某一话题或热点问题阐述自己的观点和看法。在写作过程中,态度要鲜明,不能模棱两可。写作结构如下:
[常用表达]
(一)引人注目的开头句(简要描述)
1.Nowadays,there is widespread concern about the issue that...
如今,……这个问题被广泛关注。
2.Recently,the phenomenon that...is becoming increasingly serious.
最近,……现象变得越来越严重。
(二)丰富精彩的篇中句(陈述自己的看法)
1.With the development of science and technology,there is an increasing need for people to know how to...
随着科技的发展,人们越来越需要知道如何……
2.From my point of view/In my view/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned...
我认为……
(三)恰到好处的结尾句(总结)
1.It is time that we did something to put this problem under control.
该是我们做些事情来控制这个问题的时候了。
2.To deal with the problem,there are several things that we must bear in mind.
为了处理这个问题,我们必须记住几件事。
3.We should take a series of effective measures to deal with the problem.
我们应该采取一系列有效措施来处理这个问题。
[典题印证](2023全国甲卷改编)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
主题
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
The Historical Figure in China
[文思梳理]
本题要求用英文讲述中国历史人物故事,属于人物介绍,为半开放式的短文投稿。
写作时需要注意:第三人称与第一人称交替使用;一般现在时与一般过去时穿插使用。写作时可以分为三部分:引出话题(历史人物是谁、生活的时期、身份等);介绍人物事迹(最为突出的事迹、重大的社会影响);意义或启示(产生的影响或带给自己的启示)。
[满分范文]
The Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures [1]that are widely acknowledged①, Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion.Here are the reasons.[引出话题]
[2]Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated [3]because he made great contributions to ② society.He spared no effort③ to carry out a series of reforms④ to make his country prosperous.Besides,he proposed the establishment of a national school system,[4]which had a far-reaching influence on ⑤ the Chinese educational system.[介绍人物事迹]
[5]What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life:“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land,the last to enjoy universal happiness.” Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.[启示]
靓词标注:①被广泛认可 ②对……做出巨大贡献 ③不遗余力 ④实施一系列改革 ⑤对……有深远影响
高级句式:[1]that引导定语从句
[2]过去分词短语作状语
[3]原因状语从句
[4] which引导非限制性定语从句
[5]what引导主语从句
课堂应用
1.图表作文
(2022全国乙卷改编)
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
参考范文
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays,with the growing popularity of① smartphones and computers, an increasing number of② students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.[学习活动状况描述]
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students [1]who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.However,those [2]choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for③ 18% and 12%.[简单评论]
As far as I’m concerned④,it is a disturbing trend.For students,[3]what benefits most to their study is reading English books.Because of their lack of self-discipline,they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline,and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.[建议]
靓词标注:①随着……的普及
②越来越多的
③占(多大比例)
④就我而言
高级句式:[1]who引导定语从句
[2]现在分词短语作定语
[3]what引导主语从句
2.说理议论文
近几年,由于短视频平台的兴起,短视频越来越受欢迎,可是短视频的弊端也逐渐显现,请给某英语报写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.短视频越来越受欢迎;
2.说明短视频受欢迎的原因及弊端;
3.你的看法。
注意:词数80左右。
参考范文
In recent years,[1]it has been noticed that the number of people watching short videos is significantly increasing①.[短视频越来越受欢迎]
The main reason behind the popularity of short videos is [2]that people don’t have enough time to watch long ones [3]because they’re so busy with② their work and studies.Besides,short videos contain information [4]which is easy to understand.However,the accuracy③ of the information can’t be guaranteed and if people are absorbed in thousands of short videos they will waste much time.[说明短视频受欢迎的原因及弊端]
From my point of view④,watching short videos can be efficient but we should set a time limit.Moreover,we must be cautious about⑤ the content due to its occasional inaccuracy.[个人看法]
靓词标注:①显著增加 ②忙于 ③准确(性) ④依我看 ⑤对……谨慎
高级句式:[1]it+be+过去分词+that...
[2]that引导表语从句
[3]原因状语从句
[4] which引导定语从句