2025届安徽省淮北市和淮南市高三上学期第一次质量检测英语试题读后续写--萨布丽娜的毕业典礼 讲义

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When Sabrina heard her dad Pete Parker, a coal miner, parking his van (货车) in the garage, she kept switching channels on the TV, hoping he wouldn’t ask her about her upcoming graduation that was scheduled in two days. She feared her dad would ruin her graduation for looking “dirty” and smelling of coal and sweat.
“Hey, sweetheart! Look what I got for you, ” Pete said as he entered, sounding happy. Then he left two packages on the table.
Sabrina was surprised and quickly unwrapped one box and found a beautiful dress inside She loved it very much. Then she opened the other box and saw a new suit in it.
“Thanks for the dress, dad. But for whom is this suit ”
“It’s for me, honey! I have to look amazing. . . it’s your graduation, after all! ”
Sabrina bit her lips in frustration and said, “Dad, I don’t want you to come. All my friends and their parents will be attending. I don’t want them to laugh at me after seeing you, alright ”
Sabrina’s words hit Pete like a bag of bricks. He was so hurt because he was looking forward to attending the event. However, he knew Sabrina was too young to understand his love for her. “She’s still a little girl! ” he comforted his broken heart and decided to still go to the graduation party with a surprise.
On the day of the graduation, Pete arrived and sat in the seating area for the parents. When his daughter’s name was announced, Pete ran up to the front with his phone and started filming as Sabrina received her diploma. Sabrina looked so pretty, and Pete was so proud she was graduating.
Suddenly, Sabrina heard the host say, “Mr. Parker, can we please have you on stage. ” Sabrina was confused and didn’t understand what was going on as she saw Pete walking over to the platform.
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Pete stepped onto the stage.
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Tears streamed down Sabrina’s cheeks.
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一、文章大意
萨布丽娜的父亲皮特是煤矿工人，毕业典礼前夕，父亲满心欢喜带回给她的漂亮裙子和自己准备穿的新西装，期待参加女儿毕业典礼，萨布丽娜却因担心父亲 “又脏又臭” 遭同学嘲笑而拒绝他出席。毕业典礼当日，父亲还是来了，还上台给女儿拍视频，当主持人邀请父亲上台时，萨布丽娜满心疑惑，故事在此处转折，引出后续情节。
二、故事山分析
伏笔一：开篇描述萨布丽娜频繁换台躲避父亲询问毕业典礼之事，暗示她内心纠结，为后面拒绝父亲铺垫，回应：后续她看到父亲上台后的震惊与反思，与之前逃避形成对比。
伏笔二：父亲带回漂亮裙子和新西装，体现他对参加毕业典礼的重视，回应：即便被拒仍坚持出席并准备惊喜，突出父爱的深沉。
伏笔三：萨布丽娜直白表达不想父亲参加，怕被同学嘲笑，反映她的虚荣，回应：父亲上台后的举动让她认识错误，内心愧疚，实现人物成长。
伏笔四：父亲虽被女儿言语伤害，仍自我安慰决定带惊喜前往，预示后续有反转情节，回应：台上举动震撼众人，成为改变女儿想法的关键。
伏笔五：父亲在台下开心拍视频，展现他对女儿的骄傲，铺垫他上台后的情感爆发，回应：上台发言倾诉爱意，让全场动容，升华父女情。
三、续写要点
第一段：皮特走上台，接过主持人话筒，先是深情凝视女儿，眼中满是温柔与自豪，随后对着话筒说道，他知道女儿可能嫌弃他的工作，但他每天辛苦劳作都是为了给她更好生活，这份爱从未变过，今天他要为女儿送上特别礼物 —— 一张存有多年积蓄的银行卡，希望助力她追逐梦想。
第二段：泪水从萨布丽娜脸颊滑落，她满心懊悔，冲上台紧紧抱住父亲，在父亲耳边哽咽着道歉，台下同学和家长被这一幕打动，纷纷鼓掌。萨布丽娜此刻深知，父亲的爱无比珍贵，外表与职业都无法衡量，她发誓以后定以父亲为荣，珍惜这份亲情。
四、情感线
起初萨布丽娜对父亲是嫌弃、抵触，害怕父亲出席毕业典礼让自己丢脸；父亲则是满怀期待、慈爱，被拒后虽伤心仍执着。上台后，父亲深情表白，传递无私父爱，萨布丽娜从震惊转为懊悔、感动，情感在冲突与和解中升华，围绕父女亲情展开。
五、故事线
萨布丽娜因父亲职业，抵触其参加毕业典礼。
父亲精心准备，带回礼服，期待出席。
萨布丽娜拒绝父亲，伤其心。
毕业典礼父亲到场，暗中拍视频。
主持人邀父亲上台，引发悬念。
父亲上台表露心声，萨布丽娜悔悟。
六、主旨升华句
True love doesn't care about appearances. It's the selfless dedication that shines through in every act.（真爱不在乎外表，是每一个行动中闪耀的无私奉献。）
A father's love is like a lighthouse, always guiding and supporting, even when unappreciated.（父亲的爱就像灯塔，即使不被感激，也总是指引和支持着。）
We often overlook the ones closest to us, but it's their unconditional love that truly matters in the end.（我们常常忽视身边最亲近的人，但最终真正重要的是他们无条件的爱。）
In the pursuit of acceptance from others, we should never forget the love that holds us up from within.（在追求他人认可的过程中，我们永远不应忘记支撑我们内心的爱。）
Sometimes, a moment of truth on a stage can mend a broken relationship and make us see the value of love we once took for granted.（有时候，舞台上的一个真情时刻可以修复破裂的关系，让我们看到曾经被视为理所当然的爱的价值。）
七、写作示范
第一篇
续写第一段：Pete stepped onto the stage. He took the microphone from the host, his hands trembling slightly. Looking straight into Sabrina's eyes, he said, "Sweetheart, I know you might be embarrassed by my job. But every day I go down into that mine, I'm thinking of you. I'm working hard to give you a good life." Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small envelope. "Inside here is a bank card with all my savings over the years. I want you to use it to chase your dreams, no matter what they are." The audience was silent, captivated by Pete's words.
续写第二段：Tears streamed down Sabrina's cheeks. She felt a crushing sense of guilt as she realized how wrong she had been. Without hesitation, she rushed onto the stage and flung her arms around her father. "Dad, I'm so sorry," she sobbed into his ear. The crowd erupted into thunderous applause, touched by the father-daughter reunion. From that moment on, Sabrina knew that her father's love was more precious than anything. She vowed to always cherish him and never let superficial things come between them again.
第二篇
续写第一段：Pete stepped onto the stage. With a warm smile on his face, he faced the audience. "Everyone, I'm Sabrina's dad. I know my girl was worried about me embarrassing her today. But I just want her to know that my love for her has nothing to do with how I look or what I do." He paused and took a deep breath. "I've been saving up for a long time, and today, I want to give her this." He then revealed a beautifully wrapped box. Opening it, he showed a delicate necklace with a heart-shaped pendant. "This is a symbol of my love that will always be with her, through thick and thin."
续写第二段：Tears streamed down Sabrina's cheeks. She was overwhelmed with shame and remorse. How could she have been so blind She quickly made her way to the stage and hugged her father tightly. "Dad, I was so stupid. I should have known better." Her voice choked with sobs. The parents and students in the audience wiped away their own tears as they watched the pair reconcile. Sabrina made a silent promise to herself that she would always be proud of her father and hold his love dear to her heart.
【答案】范文
Para. 1: Pete stepped onto the stage. The audience fell silent, curious about the unexpected turn. With a warm smile, he began to speak, “Ladies and gentlemen, today is a special day for my little princess, Sabrina. I know she’s been embarrassed by my appearance and job, but I want her to know that I’m proud of her and of what I do. I love you, Sabrina, and I’m here to celebrate your achievements.” As he finished, he played the video of Sabrina receiving her diploma on the big screen, and the crowd erupted in applause.
Para. 2: Tears streamed down Sabrina’s cheeks. She realized how selfish and shallow she had been, not understanding the sacrifices he had made for her. As Pete walked back to his seat, Sabrina rushed to him, embracing him tightly. “I’m sorry, Dad. I didn’t mean it. I’m so proud of you and everything you do,” she whispered. Pete hugged her back, tears in his own eyes, knowing that his love had finally reached her heart.