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Unit10You’re supposed to shake hands.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have leaded to the topic (2 point)
Para_____: I have written the three Chinese customs (9points)
Para.____:I have showed my feelings (2 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time Unit10
You’re supposed to shake hands.
Writing Name
Analyze the topic
Writing Topic
假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To:LiHua@
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going recently I’m excited to tell you that I am leaving for China on an exchange program next week. But I know little about China. Could you please tell me something about Chinese customs and what I am supposed to do or not
Look forward to your reply.See you soon!
Mile
写作要求：
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
3.不少于100词。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details
Reader：
II. What Chinese customs and sentences structure can we write in the e-mail
Chinese customs Sentences structure
III. Make an outline
Structure：
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IV. Finish the first draft
Dear Mike,
V. Finish the second draft
Dear Mike,(共11张PPT)
writing
Unit 10
You’re supposed to shake hands.
Writing Topic
To:LiHua@
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going recently I’m excited to tell you that I am leaving for China on an exchange program next week. But I know little about China. Could you please tell me something about Chinese customs and what I am supposed to do or not
Look forward to your reply.See you soon!
All the best!
Mike
Pre-writing:Activity 1
假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：
1.短文不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2.书写规范，100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pre-writing:Activity 2
Analyze the writing topic
Person
The second person
Tense
The simple present/future tense
Text
An e-mail
Reader
Mike
What customs can we write in the e-mail
Details
1.Tell Mike some Chinese customs and what he is supposed to do or not 2.100 words
Pre-writing:Activity 3
greeting manners
table manners
guest etiquette
Others
Chinese customs
What customs can we write in the e-mail
1.ask the elder to start eating first
2.hold the chopstics with one hand and the bowl with another
3.not stick ...into.../ not point at other with.../not hit the bowl with your .../not play with.../not talk when eating
...
1.shake hands/bow/say “Ni Hao”
1.bring some gifts
2.take off shoes and change slippers at the entrance
3.not sit on the bed /touch the things without permission
4.say “goodbye”and “thanks” when leaving
...
Pre-writing:Activity 3
greeting manners
table manners
guest etiquette
Others
Chinese customs
What sentnces stucture can we use in the e-mail
It’s polite/impolite/rude to ...
You’re supposed/not supposed to ...
You should/You shouldn’t ...
You’re expected to ...
...
Pre-writing:Activity 4
Beginning
favorite movie/reasons/contents/feelings
Body
Ending
Structure
引出话题
具体介绍中国习俗
表达感受
Everything goes well with me.You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me tell...
When you meet people for the first time,you...
When you are at table...
If you visit others’ home,
All in all, when in Rome, do as the Romans do. Have a good trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon.
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While-Writing
a clear structure:beginning,body,ending.
correct content: (greeting manners;table manners,guest etiquette
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some conjunction words and transitional sentences
some good sentences
no spelling mistakes
a clear and tidy hand writing
no wrong sentences
enough words
Structure
and
content
Grammar and language
Post-writing:Activity 1
Post-writing:Activity 1
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing:Activity 2
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing:Activity 3
Dear Mike,
Everything goes well with me.You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me tell you some Chinese customs.
To start with,when you meet people for the first time,you are not supposed to kiss and you are expected to shake hands or say “Ni Hao” with smile.
Besides,when you are at table , it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. You should let them start first. When you are eating with chopsticks, it is impolite to point at other people with your chopsticks. It is also impolite to stick your chopsticks into the bowl of rice and play with them.
At last,If you visit others’ home, you are supposed to bring some small gifts. And it is impolite to touch the things without permission. You are expected to say “goodbye”and “thanks” when leaving.
All in all, when in Rome, do as the Romans do. Have a good trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon.
Li Hua
