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Born in a remote village, Li was blessed with a warm and happy childhood despite poverty. Unfortunately, his father passed away when Li was 14, which left the burden of supporting the family all on the shoulders of the emaciated mother. Although haunted by the loss of her husband, his mother never showed her vulnerability in front of Li. Instead, she was more devoted to Li than ever before.
Ultimately, Li came of age. He thought it was time to shift the heavy burden from his mother to himself. Actually, a plan arose in his mind---he wanted to be a delivery driver. But Li knew verywell that his family couldn't afford a truck, so he had to bury his dream deep inside. But his mother sensed that.Therefore, his mother secretly made a big decision!
On Li’s 20th birthday, his mother gave him a gift he had always been longing for---a pickup truck. It was truly a surprise to Li! Eyes glued to the very truck, tears swirling in his eyes, he could imagine the scene that his mother raised money everywhere to get him the gift! Unable to utter a word, Li just hugged his mother tight for quite a while.
With the help of this pickup truck, Li's career took off. His diligence, capability and sincerity contributed to the promotion of his family's living conditions. Li settled in the city for the convenience of his work. Besides, Li no longer had to drive the pickup truck, as he managed to buy a luxury car. But Li knew how much the pickup meant to him, so he kept it in his garage and took care of it gingerly. Soon after, Li intended to take his elderly mother to the city, but his mother declined, stating that she preferred to stay in their hometown, where she had been accustomed to the living environment. Therefore, Li had to give up the idea. Despite his tight schedule, he stuck to regularly visiting his mother.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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One day, he learned from TV that a flood was striking his hometown.
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Li hurried to the garage and was about to rush his luxury car when he glimpsed his old pickup truck.
文章大意:出生于偏远乡村的 Li,童年温暖快乐,14 岁时父亲离世,母亲扛起家庭重担。成年后的 Li 想当送货司机却因买不起卡车搁置梦想,母亲在他 20 岁生日时送了一辆皮卡,助他事业起步。后来 Li 在城市定居,买了豪车,仍珍视皮卡,想接母亲来城市遭拒后常回乡探望。有一天,Li 得知家乡遭遇洪水,心急如焚准备回乡救援。
伏笔及续写回应:
伏笔:Li 家贫,买不起卡车。回应:母亲送皮卡,为 Li 事业起步奠基,洪水时他想起皮卡可靠,选择开皮卡回乡。
伏笔:母亲独自扛下丧夫之痛,很坚强。回应:面对洪水,Li 相信母亲能坚持等他救援。
伏笔:Li 深知皮卡对自己意义重大,精心保管。回应:危急时刻,优先想到皮卡,凸显其在心中特殊地位。
伏笔:母亲习惯家乡生活,不愿去城市。回应:洪水发生,母亲留守家乡陷入危险,推动 Li 回乡救援情节。
伏笔:Li 虽忙仍定期回乡看母亲。回应:得知洪水,极度担忧,立刻行动,体现深厚母子情。
续写要点:
情感线:开篇是 Li 得知家乡洪水的极度焦急,对母亲安危的深切担忧;途中回忆过往,皮卡承载的母爱与成长记忆让他坚定;到家后找到母亲的欣慰与劫后余生之感。
故事线:Li 看到家乡受灾新闻后,匆忙准备物资,放弃豪车选皮卡出发,一路上克服困难,最终抵达家乡在洪水中搜寻母亲,成功救援。
主旨升华句:
In the face of disaster, the love between family members becomes the strongest shield.(在灾难面前,家人之间的爱成为最坚固的盾牌。)
The bond of family is unbreakable, even when tested by the cruelest of nature.(亲情纽带坚不可摧,即使遭受最残酷的自然考验。)
A mother's love is like a lighthouse, always guiding her child home, especially in the darkest hours.(母爱如灯塔,尤其在最黑暗时刻,总能指引孩子回家。)
True wealth lies not in material possessions, but in the love and memories we share with our loved ones.(真正的财富不在于物质财富,而在于与所爱之人分享的爱与回忆。)
When hardships come, it is the power of family love that gives us the courage to move forward.(当困难来临,是亲情的力量给予我们前行的勇气。)
写作示范一:
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One day, he learned from TV that a flood was striking his hometown. His heart pounded violently in his chest, and his hands trembled as he dialed his mother's number again and again, only to be greeted by the cold, lifeless tone of disconnection. Fear gripped him tightly, but memories of his mother's unwavering strength in the face of past hardships flooded his mind. He quickly shoved supplies into bags and rushed to the garage.
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Li hurried to the garage and was about to rush his luxury car when he glimpsed his old pickup truck. Instantly, a wave of warmth and determination washed over him. That truck was more than just a vehicle; it was a testament to his mother's love and his journey from rags to relative riches. He hopped in, and as the engine rumbled, he prayed silently for his mother's safety. The journey was treacherous, with roads half-submerged, but the pickup plowed through. Finally, arriving at his childhood home, he saw his mother waiting on the roof, and tears of relief streamed down his face.
写作示范二:
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One day, he learned from TV that a flood was striking his hometown. A sense of dread engulfed him completely. Images of his frail mother being swept away by the raging waters haunted him. He dashed around, gathering anything that could be of use. His mind was a chaotic mess, yet one thing was clear – he had to reach his mother as soon as possible.
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Li hurried to the garage and was about to rush his luxury car when he glimpsed his old pickup truck. It seemed to call out to him, a reminder of all the sacrifices his mother had made. Without hesitation, he turned towards it. As he drove through the pouring rain, memories of their tough days and happy times flashed by. When he arrived, the sight of his mother waving from a window filled him with indescribable joy. He realized that no matter how far he had come, his roots and his mother were always his anchors.
参考答案
One day, he learned from TV that a flood was striking his hometown. How terrible the scene was! Panic-stricken, Li's heart raced. He crazily tried to contact his mother repeatedly, but the line was dead. As the frightening scenes appeared on the TV, he imagined the worst, fear and anxiety filling his heart. Without hesitation, he decided to rush back to his hometown.
Li hurried to the garage and was about to rush his luxury car when he glimpsed his old pickup truck. Memories of his mother's sacrifices and the truck's significance flooded his mind. "This old friend will never let me down," he thought. He jumped into the pickup and sped off. When he reached the village, he found his mother safe. Overwhelmed with relief, he hugged her tightly. "Thank goodness you're okay, Mom," he said. After he settled down his mother, he immediately joined in the work to save villagers.