读后续写--休格洛夫山的生死救援：少年雪夜迷途与希望曙光 讲义-山东省临沂2024-2025学年高三上学期1月月考英语试题

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On Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up.
It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off(拐出) the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. What’ s worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute.
Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls’ survival show Man VS. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to find ways to stay alive. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use.
He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren’t as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed out. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.
When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water from a nearby stream so that he wouldn’t dehydrate (脱水). Then he returned to his cave and slept.
Para1. When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.
Para2. The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.
文章大意：周日，青少年尼古拉斯和父亲在缅因州的休格洛夫山滑雪。他们度过了愉快的一天，打算最后滑一次就开车回马萨诸塞州。父子俩在山顶分开选择不同滑道下山，之后父亲在停车场久等尼古拉斯未归。原来，尼古拉斯下山时遭遇暴风雪，迷路且孤身一人，身处陌生之地，没有食物、水和手机等物资。他想起电视节目中贝尔·格里尔斯的生存技巧，于是停止乱走，用滑雪板搭建雪洞，收集树枝保暖，吃雪、喝溪水补充水分，在雪洞度过了饥寒交迫的夜晚。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应：
伏笔：父子俩在山顶分开选择不同滑道下山。回应：这一情节为尼古拉斯迷路后与父亲失联埋下伏笔，在续写中导致父亲发现尼古拉斯未归后意识到情况不对，从而引发救援行动。
伏笔：尼古拉斯遭遇暴风雪，迷路且孤身一人，没有食物、水和手机等物资。回应：此困境为后续尼古拉斯的生存挑战以及救援难度增加做铺垫。在续写中，这些物资的缺乏使他在等待救援时更加艰难，同时也促使救援人员在寻找他时需要考虑其可能因物资匮乏面临的生命危险。
伏笔：尼古拉斯想起贝尔 格里尔斯的生存技巧，并运用这些技巧搭建雪洞、保暖、补充水分。回应：表明他具备一定的生存能力，在续写中，他的这些行动不仅帮助他在恶劣环境中撑过一晚，也让他在听到雪摩托声音时，有足够体力和精力做出反应，配合救援。
伏笔：父亲在停车场等尼古拉斯，尼古拉斯却未出现。回应：直接引发父亲的担忧，在续写中促使父亲迅速向滑雪场管理处求助，推动救援情节的发展。
伏笔：故事发生在山区，有滑雪道、山谷等复杂地形。回应：在续写中，复杂的地形增加了救援的难度，无论是救援人员寻找尼古拉斯，还是尼古拉斯听到雪摩托声音判断方向，都受到地形的影响。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：主要描写父亲发现尼古拉斯失踪后的行动。他向滑雪场管理处报告情况后，管理处迅速组织救援行动，包括召集救援人员、调配救援设备等。可以描述父亲焦急的心情，如在原地踱步、不断张望、向过往人员询问等，以及他对儿子深深的担忧。同时，可提及救援人员在恶劣天气和复杂地形下展开搜索的艰难。
第二段：重点刻画尼古拉斯听到雪摩托声音后的反应。他先是兴奋和激动，意识到可能是救援人员来了，然后想尽办法引起救援人员的注意，比如大声呼喊、挥舞树枝等。当救援人员找到他时，描述他如释重负的心情，以及与父亲重逢后的感人场景。还可简单提及后续尼古拉斯的身体状况和恢复情况。
情感线：
父亲从等待时的平静，到发现儿子未归时的焦急，再到组织救援过程中的担忧与煎熬，最后与儿子重逢时的喜悦与欣慰。
尼古拉斯从迷路时的惊慌，到运用生存技巧时的冷静，在等待救援过程中的忐忑，听到雪摩托声音时的兴奋，被救时的如释重负以及与父亲重逢的激动。
故事线：
父子滑雪后分开，尼古拉斯遭遇暴风雪迷路。
父亲发现尼古拉斯失踪后，引发滑雪场管理处的救援行动。
尼古拉斯在困境中运用生存技巧等待救援。
尼古拉斯听到雪摩托声音，成功被救援，与父亲团聚。
主旨升华句：
In the face of adversity, the knowledge we've acquired can be the key to survival.（在逆境面前，我们所学的知识可能是生存的关键。）
The bond between father and son is unbreakable, and it gives them the strength to overcome even the most difficult situations.（父子之间的纽带坚不可摧，它赋予他们战胜最艰难困境的力量。）
This experience shows that hope and perseverance can lead us out of the darkest times.（这段经历表明，希望和坚持能引领我们走出最黑暗的时刻。）
When nature tests us, the unity of the community, like the ski resort's rescue team, can make all the difference.（当大自然考验我们时，像滑雪场救援团队这样的社区团结力量能带来截然不同的结果。）
The story of Nicholas reminds us that courage and resourcefulness are essential in the fight for survival.（尼古拉斯的故事提醒我们，勇气和足智多谋在求生斗争中至关重要。）
两篇写作示范
写作示范一
第一段
When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. Panic - stricken, he sprinted back to the ski resort's main office. His hands trembled as he reported Nicholas's disappearance. The resort staff sprang into action immediately. They assembled a team of experienced rescuers, equipped with snowmobiles, thermal imaging cameras, and emergency supplies. The father, his heart pounding, joined the search. The snow was still falling heavily, and the howling wind made visibility almost zero. Every moment seemed like an eternity as they combed through the snow - covered slopes, calling out Nicholas's name.
第二段
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. His heart leaped with joy. He knew this could be his ticket to safety. He scrambled out of his snow cave, ignoring the cold biting his skin. He grabbed a long branch and started waving it vigorously, shouting at the top of his lungs, "Help! I'm here!" The sound of the snowmobile grew louder. Finally, the rescuers spotted him. His father rushed towards him, tears streaming down his face. Nicholas, weak but relieved, fell into his father's embrace. After a thorough medical check - up, Nicholas was found to be okay, just a bit dehydrated and exhausted. This experience taught him the importance of being prepared and the power of hope.
写作示范二
第一段
When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. His face turned pale, and he rushed around the parking lot, asking everyone if they had seen his son. Realizing that time was of the essence, he ran to the ski resort's management. The manager quickly organized a rescue mission. Helicopters were dispatched to scan the mountain from above, while teams of rescuers on snowmobiles fanned out across the slopes. The father, filled with guilt for letting his son out of his sight, joined one of the snowmobile teams. The blizzard made the search arduous, but they pressed on, determined not to give up until Nicholas was found.
第二段
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. At first, he thought he was hallucinating. But as the sound grew closer, he knew it was real. With all his remaining strength, he crawled out of his snow cave. He used his ski poles to make a large "X" in the snow, hoping to catch the rescuers' attention. The snowmobile came into view, and the driver spotted Nicholas. His father was on the back, and when he saw his son, he jumped off and ran towards him. They hugged tightly, both overcome with emotion. Nicholas was taken to the hospital for treatment. After a few days of rest, he fully recovered, and this incident became a story of survival and the power of family love.
参考答案
When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather conditions were poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. They knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in good condition. Then, he was carried back to the ski resort to be reunited with his family, feeling really happy.