河北省唐山市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题读后续写烹饪比赛：打开理解母亲的一扇窗讲义
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Today was Meatloaf Monday. Again, like every Monday. My mom knew how to make seven different meals, one for each day of the week. She kept all seven recipes in a pink folder, each one labeled with a day of the week. And that was our meal plan. I stared at the dull mass my mom placed next to my corn. “ I'm not really hungry,” I said, pushing my food back and forth on my plate. “ Me neither ,’"said the twins. My mom sighed, looking disappointed.
“Malia,” she said, “you’re eleven. You should be setting an example for your brother and sister. Now please, just pick up your forks and eat.” Normally, I would have. But today I was feeling mean. “All of it tastes awful,” I said. My mom’s eyes flashed. But her words remained calm. " Malia," she said. “It’s OK if you don't like my cooking, But it’s not OK to be rude.”
The next day I was siting in our school's kitchen classroom, thinking about what had happened the day before when Mr." Bruin, our teacher, interrupted. “I’ve got exciting news,” he said. Exciting news The class looked expectantly at Mr. Bruin. “ To finish off our unit on kitchen skills, we’re having a competition. And the first-place prize is the newest book in the Cave of the Dragons series," said Mr. Bruin, holding up a copy for everyone to see. The class erupted into cheers.
At break times, all anyone could talk about was the upcoming cooking competition." I’m totally going to win!" " My dad's the best cook ever. I've got talent in my genes!
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I thought about my genes , but I still wanted to participate in this competition.
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf
文本分析：
文章大意：妈妈每周按照固定食谱为家人做饭，周一的肉饼让“我”和双胞胎弟妹难以下咽，“我”对妈妈的厨艺出言不逊。第二天，学校烹饪课老师布鲁因先生宣布将举办烹饪比赛，一等奖是《龙穴》系列最新书籍，同学们纷纷表示要参赛。
主要人物：
1. Malia - 故事的叙述者和主人公，一个11岁的孩子，对母亲做的肉饼表示不满，并且在那一天表现得有些不礼貌。
2. 母亲 - 一位精心规划家庭饮食的母亲，她有固定的菜单安排，对孩子的反应感到失望但依然保持冷静和教育意义。
3. 双胞胎兄弟姐妹 - 和Malia一起拒绝吃晚餐的孩子，没有太多个人描述，但他们的存在增加了Malia行为的家庭背景。
4. Mr. Bruin - 学校厨房课的老师，他宣布了一个令人兴奋的消息，即烹饪比赛。
故事情节发展：
故事开始于一个星期一晚上，Malia家遵循着固定的菜谱计划，母亲为家人准备了“Meatloaf Monday”。然而，Malia这一天心情不佳，对于母亲做的食物表现出不耐烦和不满，甚至直言食物难吃。这使得她的母亲感到失望，并提醒Malia要以身作则，同时指出尽管不喜欢食物是正常的，但是无礼是不可接受的。
第二天，在学校的厨房课堂上，当Malia还在思考前一天与母亲之间的冲突时，Mr. Bruin老师宣布了一个即将举行的烹饪比赛，奖品是《Cave of the Dragons》系列的新书，这激发了全班同学的兴趣，所有学生都在谈论即将到来的烹饪比赛。有人自信满满地认为自己会赢，还有人因为父亲是出色的厨师而认为自己有天赋。这个情节转折引入了新的冲突——Malia可能会面临的挑战，以及她如何面对这个机会来改善自己的烹饪技能和态度。
故事到此为止并没有完成，它留下了一个开放式的结尾，暗示接下来的情节可能会围绕着Malia参与比赛的过程展开，以及她在过程中可能经历的成长和改变，特别是关于她如何看待自己与母亲之间的关系和她对家庭烹饪的看法。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应：
伏笔：“我” 对妈妈的厨艺不满，称 “All of it tastes awful”。回应：在续写中，“我” 参加烹饪比赛，因自身厨艺不佳失败，从而体会到妈妈做饭的不易，意识到自己对妈妈的态度恶劣，后悔并向妈妈道歉。
伏笔：老师宣布烹饪比赛，一等奖是《龙穴》系列最新书籍。回应：激发了 “我” 参加比赛的决心，即便没有烹饪天赋的基因，也为了奖品积极准备，推动了故事的发展。
伏笔：同学们在课间讨论比赛，纷纷表示自己能赢，如 “My dad's the best cook ever. I've got talent in my genes!” 回应：与 “我” 没有烹饪天赋形成对比，突出 “我” 参赛的挑战，同时也暗示了 “我” 在比赛中可能面临的困难，在续写中 “我” 因经验不足比赛失败，印证了这一伏笔。
伏笔：妈妈要求 “我” 给弟妹做榜样，“you’re eleven. You should be setting an example for your brother and sister.” 回应：在续写中，“我” 通过参加比赛，意识到自己的错误，向妈妈道歉并学习烹饪，以实际行动给弟妹做出正确对待他人付出的榜样。
伏笔：妈妈面对 “我” 的无礼，虽眼神闪过情绪，但话语保持平静，“But her words remained calm. 'Malia,' she said. 'It’s OK if you don't like my cooking, But it’s not OK to be rude.'” 回应：体现妈妈的包容，在续写中，“我” 向妈妈道歉时，妈妈立刻原谅了 “我”，与前文妈妈的态度相呼应。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：重点描写 “我” 为比赛做准备的过程，如利用课余时间学习烹饪知识、练习烹饪技巧。描述 “我” 在比赛中的表现，由于经验不足，在处理食材、烹饪步骤等方面出现失误，导致比赛失败。可通过细节描写，如手抖、食材处理不当等，展现 “我” 的紧张和不熟练。
第二段：讲述比赛失败后，“我” 在回家路上的心理变化，回忆起妈妈做的肉饼，认识到妈妈每天做饭的辛苦和对家人的爱。到家后，向妈妈真诚道歉，表达对妈妈的理解和感激，并请求妈妈教自己做饭，体现 “我” 的成长。
情感线：
从对妈妈厨艺不满的叛逆，到决定参加比赛的兴奋与期待，比赛失败后的沮丧，再到理解妈妈后的愧疚与感激，最后到想要学习烹饪的积极转变。
妈妈始终对 “我” 包容，从对 “我” 无礼的平静回应，到最后原谅 “我” 并愿意教 “我” 做饭，展现出母爱的深沉。
故事线：
“我” 抱怨妈妈厨艺，学校宣布烹饪比赛。
“我” 为比赛努力准备，却因经验不足失败。
比赛失败后 “我” 理解妈妈，向妈妈道歉并决定学习烹饪。
主旨升华句：
Through this cooking competition, I learned that true appreciation comes from experiencing the difficulties behind a task.（通过这次烹饪比赛，我明白了真正的感激源于体会到一项任务背后的艰辛。）
Our words can hurt, but with self - reflection and apology, we can mend the bonds of love.（我们的言语可能会伤人，但通过自我反思和道歉，我们可以修复爱的纽带。）
The journey of cooking is not just about making food, but also about understanding the love and effort that goes into nourishing a family.（烹饪之旅不仅是关于制作食物，更是关于理解为养育家庭所付出的爱和努力。）
Failure in the competition became a stepping - stone for me to grow, teaching me the value of humility and respect.（比赛中的失败成为我成长的垫脚石，教会我谦逊和尊重的价值。）
In the end, I discovered that the most precious 'prize' was not a book, but the newfound appreciation for my mother's love.（最终，我发现最珍贵的 “奖品” 不是一本书，而是对母亲的爱有了全新的感悟。）
三篇下水文
第一段
I thought about my genes, but I still wanted to participate in this competition. Determined to prove myself, I buried myself in cooking books every evening. I practiced cutting vegetables into perfect shapes, tried different seasonings, and experimented with various cooking methods. When the competition day arrived, I was brimming with nervous energy. However, as soon as I started, things went wrong. My hands trembled while cracking eggs, and I accidentally added too much salt. The final dish looked like a mess, and it was no surprise that I didn't win.
第二段
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf. Suddenly, it dawned on me how much effort she put into making every meal delicious. I remembered her standing in the hot kitchen, sweating while stirring the pot. When I got home, I went straight to the kitchen and hugged her tightly. With tears in my eyes, I said, "Mom, I'm so sorry for being rude. Please teach me how to cook." She smiled warmly, her eyes filled with love, and nodded. From then on, I learned not only cooking skills but also the meaning of love and respect.
第二篇
第一段
I thought about my genes, but I still wanted to participate in this competition. I asked my neighbors for cooking advice, watched countless cooking videos online, and even tried to recreate some of the fancy dishes I saw. At the competition, the pressure got to me. I burned the sauce and overcooked the meat. The judges' disappointed looks told me everything. I left the competition area with my head down, feeling like a complete failure.
第二段
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf. I realized that the simple meals she made were full of love. I ran home, and when I saw my mom, I said, "Mom, I was so wrong. Your cooking is the best because it's made with love." She kissed my forehead and said, "It's okay, dear. Let's cook together." We spent the evening in the kitchen, and I learned the secrets of making her delicious meatloaf. This experience taught me the importance of family and the love that binds us.
第三篇：
I thought about my genes , but I still wanted to participate in this competition. After all, cooking was not just about talent; it was also about passion and practice. Determined to prove myself, after returning home, I spent every spare moment reviewing the accurate measuring, food preparation and cooking skills learnt in class again and again. I even asked Mom for tips, which surprisingly brought us closer. Then came the thrilling moment! I, together with several participants, went to the kitchen with anticipation. However, try as I might, mine could never taste as good. I didn’t end up winning the competition.
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum’s meatloaf. I remembered the look of disappointment on her face when I had rejected it, and my heart sank. Though simple, it was always made with love and care. I had taken her efforts for granted, never realizing the hard work and dedication she put into every meal. Back home, I apologized to Mom for my earlier rudeness and offered to help her prepare dinner. To my surprise, she suggested we try making the meatloaf together. It turned out better than ever, filled with love and newfound respect for each other’s efforts.
参考答案
I thought about my genes, but I still wanted to participate in this competition. Despite not having a family legacy of great cooking, I was determined to prove myself. I spent every spare moment after school pouring over cookbooks, trying out new recipes, and perfecting my techniques. When the day of the competition arrived, I was nervous yet excited. However, my inexperience showed. I fumbled with the ingredients, and my dish ended up looking unappealing and tasting even worse. I didn't even make it to the final round.
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf. Suddenly, it didn't seem so dull anymore. I remembered how much effort she put into cooking for us every day, trying to provide balanced meals. Shame washed over me as I recalled my rudeness. When I got home, I found my mom in the kitchen. With a lump in my throat, I apologized sincerely. She smiled gently, forgiving me instantly. Then, I asked her to teach me how to make meatloaf. From that day on, I truly appreciated my mom's cooking and the love she put into every meal.
Today was Meatloaf Monday. Again, like every Monday. My mom knew how to make seven different meals, one for each day of the week. She kept all seven recipes in a pink folder, each one labeled with a day of the week. And that was our meal plan. I stared at the dull mass my mom placed next to my corn. “ I'm not really hungry,” I said, pushing my food back and forth on my plate. “ Me neither ,’"said the twins. My mom sighed, looking disappointed.
“Malia,” she said, “you’re eleven. You should be setting an example for your brother and sister. Now please, just pick up your forks and eat.” Normally, I would have. But today I was feeling mean. “All of it tastes awful,” I said. My mom’s eyes flashed. But her words remained calm. " Malia," she said. “It’s OK if you don't like my cooking, But it’s not OK to be rude.”
The next day I was siting in our school's kitchen classroom, thinking about what had happened the day before when Mr." Bruin, our teacher, interrupted. “I’ve got exciting news,” he said. Exciting news The class looked expectantly at Mr. Bruin. “ To finish off our unit on kitchen skills, we’re having a competition. And the first-place prize is the newest book in the Cave of the Dragons series," said Mr. Bruin, holding up a copy for everyone to see. The class erupted into cheers.
At break times, all anyone could talk about was the upcoming cooking competition." I’m totally going to win!" " My dad's the best cook ever. I've got talent in my genes!
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I thought about my genes , but I still wanted to participate in this competition.
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf
文本分析：
文章大意：妈妈每周按照固定食谱为家人做饭，周一的肉饼让“我”和双胞胎弟妹难以下咽，“我”对妈妈的厨艺出言不逊。第二天，学校烹饪课老师布鲁因先生宣布将举办烹饪比赛，一等奖是《龙穴》系列最新书籍，同学们纷纷表示要参赛。
主要人物：
1. Malia - 故事的叙述者和主人公，一个11岁的孩子，对母亲做的肉饼表示不满，并且在那一天表现得有些不礼貌。
2. 母亲 - 一位精心规划家庭饮食的母亲，她有固定的菜单安排，对孩子的反应感到失望但依然保持冷静和教育意义。
3. 双胞胎兄弟姐妹 - 和Malia一起拒绝吃晚餐的孩子，没有太多个人描述，但他们的存在增加了Malia行为的家庭背景。
4. Mr. Bruin - 学校厨房课的老师，他宣布了一个令人兴奋的消息，即烹饪比赛。
故事情节发展：
故事开始于一个星期一晚上，Malia家遵循着固定的菜谱计划，母亲为家人准备了“Meatloaf Monday”。然而，Malia这一天心情不佳，对于母亲做的食物表现出不耐烦和不满，甚至直言食物难吃。这使得她的母亲感到失望，并提醒Malia要以身作则，同时指出尽管不喜欢食物是正常的，但是无礼是不可接受的。
第二天，在学校的厨房课堂上，当Malia还在思考前一天与母亲之间的冲突时，Mr. Bruin老师宣布了一个即将举行的烹饪比赛，奖品是《Cave of the Dragons》系列的新书，这激发了全班同学的兴趣，所有学生都在谈论即将到来的烹饪比赛。有人自信满满地认为自己会赢，还有人因为父亲是出色的厨师而认为自己有天赋。这个情节转折引入了新的冲突——Malia可能会面临的挑战，以及她如何面对这个机会来改善自己的烹饪技能和态度。
故事到此为止并没有完成，它留下了一个开放式的结尾，暗示接下来的情节可能会围绕着Malia参与比赛的过程展开，以及她在过程中可能经历的成长和改变，特别是关于她如何看待自己与母亲之间的关系和她对家庭烹饪的看法。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应：
伏笔：“我” 对妈妈的厨艺不满，称 “All of it tastes awful”。回应：在续写中，“我” 参加烹饪比赛，因自身厨艺不佳失败，从而体会到妈妈做饭的不易，意识到自己对妈妈的态度恶劣，后悔并向妈妈道歉。
伏笔：老师宣布烹饪比赛，一等奖是《龙穴》系列最新书籍。回应：激发了 “我” 参加比赛的决心，即便没有烹饪天赋的基因，也为了奖品积极准备，推动了故事的发展。
伏笔：同学们在课间讨论比赛，纷纷表示自己能赢，如 “My dad's the best cook ever. I've got talent in my genes!” 回应：与 “我” 没有烹饪天赋形成对比，突出 “我” 参赛的挑战，同时也暗示了 “我” 在比赛中可能面临的困难，在续写中 “我” 因经验不足比赛失败，印证了这一伏笔。
伏笔：妈妈要求 “我” 给弟妹做榜样，“you’re eleven. You should be setting an example for your brother and sister.” 回应：在续写中，“我” 通过参加比赛，意识到自己的错误，向妈妈道歉并学习烹饪，以实际行动给弟妹做出正确对待他人付出的榜样。
伏笔：妈妈面对 “我” 的无礼，虽眼神闪过情绪，但话语保持平静，“But her words remained calm. 'Malia,' she said. 'It’s OK if you don't like my cooking, But it’s not OK to be rude.'” 回应：体现妈妈的包容，在续写中，“我” 向妈妈道歉时，妈妈立刻原谅了 “我”，与前文妈妈的态度相呼应。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：重点描写 “我” 为比赛做准备的过程，如利用课余时间学习烹饪知识、练习烹饪技巧。描述 “我” 在比赛中的表现，由于经验不足，在处理食材、烹饪步骤等方面出现失误，导致比赛失败。可通过细节描写，如手抖、食材处理不当等，展现 “我” 的紧张和不熟练。
第二段：讲述比赛失败后，“我” 在回家路上的心理变化，回忆起妈妈做的肉饼，认识到妈妈每天做饭的辛苦和对家人的爱。到家后，向妈妈真诚道歉，表达对妈妈的理解和感激，并请求妈妈教自己做饭，体现 “我” 的成长。
情感线：
从对妈妈厨艺不满的叛逆，到决定参加比赛的兴奋与期待，比赛失败后的沮丧，再到理解妈妈后的愧疚与感激，最后到想要学习烹饪的积极转变。
妈妈始终对 “我” 包容，从对 “我” 无礼的平静回应，到最后原谅 “我” 并愿意教 “我” 做饭，展现出母爱的深沉。
故事线：
“我” 抱怨妈妈厨艺，学校宣布烹饪比赛。
“我” 为比赛努力准备，却因经验不足失败。
比赛失败后 “我” 理解妈妈，向妈妈道歉并决定学习烹饪。
主旨升华句：
Through this cooking competition, I learned that true appreciation comes from experiencing the difficulties behind a task.（通过这次烹饪比赛，我明白了真正的感激源于体会到一项任务背后的艰辛。）
Our words can hurt, but with self - reflection and apology, we can mend the bonds of love.（我们的言语可能会伤人，但通过自我反思和道歉，我们可以修复爱的纽带。）
The journey of cooking is not just about making food, but also about understanding the love and effort that goes into nourishing a family.（烹饪之旅不仅是关于制作食物，更是关于理解为养育家庭所付出的爱和努力。）
Failure in the competition became a stepping - stone for me to grow, teaching me the value of humility and respect.（比赛中的失败成为我成长的垫脚石，教会我谦逊和尊重的价值。）
In the end, I discovered that the most precious 'prize' was not a book, but the newfound appreciation for my mother's love.（最终，我发现最珍贵的 “奖品” 不是一本书，而是对母亲的爱有了全新的感悟。）
三篇下水文
第一段
I thought about my genes, but I still wanted to participate in this competition. Determined to prove myself, I buried myself in cooking books every evening. I practiced cutting vegetables into perfect shapes, tried different seasonings, and experimented with various cooking methods. When the competition day arrived, I was brimming with nervous energy. However, as soon as I started, things went wrong. My hands trembled while cracking eggs, and I accidentally added too much salt. The final dish looked like a mess, and it was no surprise that I didn't win.
第二段
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf. Suddenly, it dawned on me how much effort she put into making every meal delicious. I remembered her standing in the hot kitchen, sweating while stirring the pot. When I got home, I went straight to the kitchen and hugged her tightly. With tears in my eyes, I said, "Mom, I'm so sorry for being rude. Please teach me how to cook." She smiled warmly, her eyes filled with love, and nodded. From then on, I learned not only cooking skills but also the meaning of love and respect.
第二篇
第一段
I thought about my genes, but I still wanted to participate in this competition. I asked my neighbors for cooking advice, watched countless cooking videos online, and even tried to recreate some of the fancy dishes I saw. At the competition, the pressure got to me. I burned the sauce and overcooked the meat. The judges' disappointed looks told me everything. I left the competition area with my head down, feeling like a complete failure.
第二段
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf. I realized that the simple meals she made were full of love. I ran home, and when I saw my mom, I said, "Mom, I was so wrong. Your cooking is the best because it's made with love." She kissed my forehead and said, "It's okay, dear. Let's cook together." We spent the evening in the kitchen, and I learned the secrets of making her delicious meatloaf. This experience taught me the importance of family and the love that binds us.
第三篇：
I thought about my genes , but I still wanted to participate in this competition. After all, cooking was not just about talent; it was also about passion and practice. Determined to prove myself, after returning home, I spent every spare moment reviewing the accurate measuring, food preparation and cooking skills learnt in class again and again. I even asked Mom for tips, which surprisingly brought us closer. Then came the thrilling moment! I, together with several participants, went to the kitchen with anticipation. However, try as I might, mine could never taste as good. I didn’t end up winning the competition.
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum’s meatloaf. I remembered the look of disappointment on her face when I had rejected it, and my heart sank. Though simple, it was always made with love and care. I had taken her efforts for granted, never realizing the hard work and dedication she put into every meal. Back home, I apologized to Mom for my earlier rudeness and offered to help her prepare dinner. To my surprise, she suggested we try making the meatloaf together. It turned out better than ever, filled with love and newfound respect for each other’s efforts.
参考答案
I thought about my genes, but I still wanted to participate in this competition. Despite not having a family legacy of great cooking, I was determined to prove myself. I spent every spare moment after school pouring over cookbooks, trying out new recipes, and perfecting my techniques. When the day of the competition arrived, I was nervous yet excited. However, my inexperience showed. I fumbled with the ingredients, and my dish ended up looking unappealing and tasting even worse. I didn't even make it to the final round.
On the way home after failing the competition, I thought of my mum's meatloaf. Suddenly, it didn't seem so dull anymore. I remembered how much effort she put into cooking for us every day, trying to provide balanced meals. Shame washed over me as I recalled my rudeness. When I got home, I found my mom in the kitchen. With a lump in my throat, I apologized sincerely. She smiled gently, forgiving me instantly. Then, I asked her to teach me how to make meatloaf. From that day on, I truly appreciated my mom's cooking and the love she put into every meal.
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