(共18张PPT)
申请信
指
导
应用文写作
A letter of application
recruit
v.招募
Job advertisement
How to write a letter to apply for a position
Mission: Help Lihua to write an application letter.
Step 1:Learn the layout 了解应聘信的格式
Dear Sir or Madam,
Having seen you advertisement in the newspaper, I am writing to apply for a position as a waiter.
I am a 20-year-old student and would be able to work during June and July. I do not have any experience but I enjoy working with people and am interested in a career in the catering industry when I leave university.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post(s) available. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
James Brown
greetings
structure
signature
Beginning: Say which job you're interested in 看到工作感兴趣
Body: Introduce yourself
介绍自己夸夸夸
Ending: Show thanks and exptectation
期盼回复感谢你
education/
personality
experience
ability
…
List some words or phrases that may occur in the writing.
step 2:words, words, words,
1. 申请人 __________
2. 申请,请求 v._____ _____
3. 广告 __________
4. 作为... 职位 ______ ____
5. 回复(介词短语) ____ ______ ____
6. 招募职工______ ____
applicant
apply for
advertisement
position as
in response to
employ/recruit
List some words or phrases that may occur in the writing.
step 2:words, words, words,
7. be fluent in+语言 ________
8. have a good command________
9. 外向的性格 ______ ______
10.组织能力________ ____
11. 提供帮助 _____ ______
12. 与...相处融洽____ ____ ____ ____
13. 有经验的adj.________
受到良好教育的adj.________
...流利
擅长
outgoing personality
organisational ability
offer help
get along well with
experienced
well-educated
List some words or phrases that may occur in the writing.
step 2:words, words, words,
14. volunteer to help others ____________
15. 达到你的预期 ____ ___ ___your expectation
16. 不胜感激 ______ ______
17. 考虑 _____... ______ ______
18. 给我更多信息 ____ ____ ____ ____
19. post available____________
20. 收到_____ ____
义务帮助他人
live up to
be grateful
take into consideration
send me more information
空缺职位
hear from
step 3:sentences
②
Task1 : 连词成句
我写信是来回复贵公司招聘一个服务生的广告。
————————————————————————————————
as a waiter
in response to
your advertisement
I am writing
for a postion
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a position as a waiter.
I am writing
in response to
your advertisement
for a postion
as a waiter
step 3:sentences
Task 2 : 用所给提示完成句子。
1)我认为我很有资格, 有如下的原因。(be well qualified)
___________________________________ for the following reasons.
2)首先我是一个性格外向的人,
First of all, I am a outgoing person . (用with句式升级)
→First of all, I am a person ______________________,
3) 这使我能和别人相处融洽。 (用which引导定语从句)
______________________________________________
I think I am well qulified
with outgoing personality
which makes me get along well with others.
step 3:sentences
4)作为一个受到良好教育的毕业生, 我英语流利并且擅长沟通。
(be fluent in +语言;have a good command of)
As a well-educated graduate,____________________________________
__________________________________________________________
5)我经常在社区(community)义务帮助别人。
__________________________________________________________
6)我相信所有我获得的经验使我受益良多。(benefit me a lot)
__________________________________________________________
I am fluent in English
and have a good command of communication skills.
I often volunteer to help others in the communities.
I believe all the experience I gained benefits me a lot.
step 3:sentences
Task 3 : 用with的复合结构仿写
With all difficulties settled, her life was getting better.
因为解决了所有问题,她的生活变得好起来。
7)因为我的学业已经完成,我很自信我能够达到你的预期。___________________________, I feel fairly confident that______________________________________________
With my study finished
I am able to live up to your expectation.
step 3:sentences
Task 4 : 中英互译
8)I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post(s) available. (口述)
__________________________________________________________________
9)如果你能考虑我的申请,我会不胜感激。(take ... into consideration)
__________________________________________________________________
10) I am looking forward to hearing from you. (口述)
_________________________________________________________________
如果您能给我提供更多有关(该)空缺职位的信息,我将不胜感激。
I would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration.
我期望收到你的回信。
连词积累:
First of all...Second... Last but not least...
What's more...
In addition...
Appart from(除了) ...
step 4:paragraph
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a position as a waiter. I think I am well qulified for the following reasons.
First of all, I am a person with outgoing personality, which makes me get along well with others. Apart from this, as a well-educated graduate, I am fluent in English and have a good command of communication skills. What's more, I often volunteer to help others in the communities, I believe all the experience I gained benefits me a lot.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post(s) available. I look forward to hearing from you.
把所有的句子连起来,加上连词。
基本上就是一片完整的申请信啦!
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely,
James Brown
Say which job you're interested in
Show thanks and exptectation
education/personality
experience
ability
formal
正式
…
写作步骤回顾
native
地道
背诵模板句,尤其是开头和结尾
学好语法,多用从句,多做句式升级。
你校英语外籍教师Boris和Chris暑假期间准备在本地开一家西餐小店,要找若干名大学生为打工人员。
假定你叫李华,愿意应聘。请写封电子邮件,介绍自己,并说明应聘理由。
Temporary job Wanted
6 college students
Do service work and act as translators
Healthy and helpful
Small wages
Contact: bjpub@bc.com
Homework
实战演练
other sentences for reference
开头:
①I’d like to apply for the job I saw advertised in / I’ve just seen in / I’ve just heard from…
②Learning from...that you are looking for..., I should like to apply for the post.
中间:
①I always lent a helping hand to others,that's the reason why I am so popular.
②I have a good command of ..., which make me be able to ...
③Byoffering my service, I will be able to improve my organisational ability...
结尾:
①Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.
②I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.
谢谢观赏