Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations Reading for Writing
Write about your festival experience
My amazing Naadam experience
Learning objectives:
By the end of the class, you will be able to:
1. figure out the structure and language features by reading the passage;
2. write a festival experience by using the useful writing techniques that will be learned;
3. assess others’ draft and reflect on the advice to be provided by others;
4. appreciate the beauty of festivals and boost the cultural confidence
The Key points and difficult points:
Mastered the writing norms of Diary and the relevant knowledge of festival expression
Teaching procedures:
Leading-in: Talk about some information about Inner Mongolia and show a short video about Naadam to arouse students’ interest.
Step1: Pre-reading
Appreciate the title and the picture to guess the main idea of the passage:
The text is mainly about the writer’s _________ of taking part in ___________in Mongolia and the writer feels _______at it.
设计意图:《课标》要求学生具备“听、说、读、写、看”的技能。此题旨在引导学生从题目和插图预测文本主要内容。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:激活已知,提升兴趣。
Step2: While-reading
Activity one: read for organization
设计意图:此部分旨在引导学生整体把握语篇建构
核心素养提升点:学习能力:获取概括信息。
思维品质:通过阅读文本形成自己的判断。
1.The passage is a(n) ___________.
A. Narration(记叙文)B. Argumentation(议论文)C. Exposition (说明文)
设计意图:此题旨在引导学生把握体裁
核心素养提升点:学习能力:获取概括信息。
思维品质:通过阅读文本形成自己的判断。
2. In what order does the author write the diary
设计意图:此题旨在引导学生把握写作的行文顺序。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:获取特定关键信息。
思维品质:通过阅读文本形成自己的判断。
3.How many parts can the passage be divided into What are they
设计意图:此题旨在引导学生把握日记的篇章结构。
核心素养提升点:学习能力———利用课本右侧注释信息分析概括并整合信息。
思维品质:通过阅读文本及课本右侧注释信息形成自己的判断。
Activity two: read for language features:
(part 1) 1. How does the writer introduce the topic
设计意图:此题旨在引导学生注意“节日经历” 类文章的开篇写作手法。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:语言知识的自主学习。
思维品质:梳理概括信息建构成自己的对节日的描写。
2. Rewrite the opening sentence using the given sentence patterns:
Different ways to write the opening sentences:
1. Read the sentence patterns below and use them to rewrite the opening sentence of the article.
①This was my first time spending … and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
②I’ll never forget … because …
③I’ll always remember… because …
①This was my first time spending my holiday in China's Inner Mogolia Autonomous Region to celebrate the Naadam Festival, and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
②I’ll never forget the Naadam Festival in China's Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was an exciting and enjoyable experience for me.
③I’ll always remember the Naadam Festival in China's Inner Mogolia Autonomous Region because it was an exciting and enjoyable experience for me.
3. When does the Naadam festival fall on
仿写:春节在每年的农历初一,通常持续 15 天,是中国的传统节日。
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设计意图:此题暗合学习活动的关联性原则,旨在引导学生注意“节日”发生日
期的典型表达法,为学以致用地描述其它节日打基础。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:语言知识的自主学习。
思维品质:梳理概括信息建构成自己的对“节日”发生日期的典型表达。
(Body part-Para2)
1. What do people do to prepare for the festival (or What did the author see when arriving
欣赏:
People do different activities to celebrate the Spring Festival. Some paste couplets, some perform dragon dance and lion dance, and others set off fireworks.
设计意图:此题旨在引导学生注意“节日”类文章的“场合”的精美表达。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:语言知识的自主学习。
(Body part: -Para3,4)
1. What events are described And how are the events described
2. How is the scene of the competitors getting onto the green field described
以上二题设计意图:旨在引导学生注意“节日”类文章多种语法、句法的精美表达。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:语言知识的自主学习。
(Part3: -Para.5) : appreciate the ending
仿写:我们最终完成了大扫除,真的感到又累又宽慰。
设计意图:旨在引导学生注意“节日”类文章多种语法、句法的精美表达。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:语言知识的自主学习。
(whole passage):How to express the feelings and emotions
仿写:我被精彩的演出深深地感动了。
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设计意图:旨在引导学生注意“节日”类日记达到“令人信服”效果的手段--- 贯
穿全文的情感表达
核心素养提升点:学习能力:语言知识的自主学习。
Underline the sentences that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
Step3: Post-reading
Activity one: Review the structure
设计意图:旨在引导学生回顾文本结构,为写作打基础。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:文本结构的及时巩固。
Activity two: Summary the writing tips
设计意图:旨在引导学生回顾“日记”的写作技巧,为写作打基础。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:回扣文本,形成整体认知。
Step4: Writing
设计意图:结合学生日常生活经验,引导学生完成本堂课“写作输出”部分,落
实“学以致用” 原则。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:内化本堂课所学,学以致用。
思维品质—创新思维。
文化意识—联系生活,坚定文化自信。
请用英语写一篇日记,介绍你经历的最难忘、最有意义的春节。
内容包括:
1. 节日概况;
2. 庆祝活动;
3. 你的感受。 词汇:春晚 Spring festival Gala
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 审题立意:
体裁 ________ 要点_______________________ 时态 ______ 人称___________
Step 2: 谋篇布局:
Para 1_______ para2 ________ para3 ________
Step 3: 遣词造句:
Step 4: 连词成句 连句成篇
Step5: Assignment
1. Required assignment :
Polish your writing until it is clear in structure, detailed in content, and
attractive in language.
设计意图:旨在引导学生自我反思并改进自己的作文,内化本堂课所学。
学习能力:提炼精进和反思所学,学以致用。
2. Optional assignment :
Discuss in groups and design a new practical writing themed on festivals.
(设计意图:旨在引导学生利用现代多媒体技术等调研,以进行有效地迁移
运用,激发学生创造性意识,发展创造性思维并深化对单元主题意义的理解,增
强对祖国丰富多元传统文化的了解。
核心素养提升点:思维品质—创新思维。
文化意识—传播传统节日,坚定文化自信。
Step6: Self-evaluation
设计意图:据“教、学、评”一体化原则,当堂反思学习成果。
核心素养提升点:学习能力:评价和反思自己的课堂所学
思维品质—批判性思维。