专题咨询信
思路:
第一段:说明写信目的
背景+目的
Knowing that you have the experience of being a volunteer,I'm writing to ask some important tips to prepare for my volunteering life.
第二段:咨询内容
思路:能做/怎么做+不能做 (注意一定要有连接词,否则扣2分)
特殊疑问句:what should I do if I ...../when it come to....., what should I do
一般疑问句:are volunteers allowed to bring a cell phone
陈述句+宾语从句:What's more, I'm anxious to know......, // I wonder if....
主语从句: what I am eager to know is that //
介宾从句:I’m also confused/puzzled about how to get along with other foreign volunteers.
I am concerned about how to have a polite communication with athletes and behave in a proper manner,which makes them feel at home.
形式宾语it: I would appreciate it if you can tell me
无灵主语:Any advice on.... will be highly appreciated.
第三段:期待回复
l appreciate it if you can help me. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest conveni
ence!
I will be grateful if you can reply to me at your earliest convenience. Your help is highly appreciated.
答案范文一
Dear Steve,
I'm excited to share that I'll be volunteering at the 2024 Paris Olympics. To be honest, it is a great opportunity for me. So I am reaching out to gather some information from your past volunteering experiences.
Could you share any preparation tips or essential skills for a volunteer What is more, any advice on effectively communicating with people from diverse backgrounds would be greatly appreciated. I am looking forward to your valuable advice.
Thank you so much!
Yours ,
Li Hua
下水文
长短句结合; 句式多样
Dear Steve,
How is everything going I’m more than thrilled to share with you that I was selected to be a volunteer in the upcoming Paris Olympic Games. Knowing that you have plentiful voluntary experience, I’m writing to ask you some tips with regard to my voluntary service.
First and foremost, what should I do when an athlete gets hurt or injured Moreover, I am concerned about how to have a polite communication with athletes and behave in a proper manner,which makes them feel at home. Last but not least, are we volunteers allowed to take pictures of the athletes and post them online
I will be grateful if you can reply to me at your earliest convenience. Your help is highly appreciated.
Yours ,
Li Hua
文章模版:
Dear Steve,
How is everything going I’m more than thrilled to share with you that..... Knowing that , I’m writing to ask
First and foremost, What should I do when .... What’s more, I am concerned about how..... Last but not least, I’m anxious to know....
I will be grateful if you can reply to me at your earliest convenience. Your help is highly appreciated.
sincerely,
Li Hua
作业:
(2016年11月浙江)假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括:
介绍自己;
告知到达时间;
询问应做何准备。
注意:
词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Lynn,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with your family in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high school.
I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.
I will be grateful if you can reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(2023 学年第一学期浙江省名校协作体高二年级适应性试题)假定你是李华,正在英国某市做交换生,你想到该市的一家图书馆办理一张借书卡(library card)。请给该图书馆的工作人员写一封电子邮件,询问相关信息。
内容包括:
1.可借阅图书范围;2.借阅制度及费用;3.办卡时间及地点。
注意:写作词数应为 80 左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to inquire about borrowing books.
First of all, I'd like to know which books are available for me to check out. And if not, could I read in the library Secondly, I wonder if you could keep me informed of the rules as well as the charge of book rental Also, would you be kind enough to tell me when and where I can apply for a library card
Looking forward to your early reply. (86 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua