课件26张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ)第三篇 话题写作妙解话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事初中英文写作教学应本着循序渐进的教学原则，从“词、句、篇”三方面入手，使学生逐步熟悉并掌握词汇搭配规则、句子结构状态和语法运用要求，以提高其遣词造句的能力。话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事 1．积累词汇，打好“词”的基础
“词”是说话、写作的基本材料，丰富的词汇是写好作文的前提。
(1)活记单词，巩固词汇。新单词内涵识记，要在语境(一定或特定的句子里)中进行，单词内容包括该词的拼写、汉语意思、不同词性、常用意义、用法以及与该词相关的同义词、近义词、反义词，实现词汇最大限度的复现。同时要学生坚持即时记忆，滚雪球式听写。即循环记忆，巩固词汇，以达到熟练掌握的境界。 (2)创意造句，学会运用。要求学生“用今天所学单词”造句。一句话中可用一个，也可用多个新词。字数不限，只要用完“今天”所学单词即可。这样有助于培养学生关于创造性学习的兴趣。同时，教师须把生动、活泼、有趣的句子在班上进行展示。一方面，利用这种方法能够强化学生生词记忆，另一方面，能够刺激更多的学生发挥创意、写出更多有趣的句子。话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事 2．多措并举，加强“句”的训练
“句”是表达一个完整思想的基本单位。
(1)单词扩句。在单元单词教学中，应让学生用指定的3个单词造句。分两步走：
①句子主干练习。
②主干加修饰语练习。脚步走稳后，再学习用副词去修饰整个句子或谓语动词。话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事 (2)句子接龙。句子接龙有助于学生集中注意力，在顺利接龙后体验成功的乐趣。例如，练习there be句型时，学生依次往上接一个单词：There is a chair in the classroom. There is a chair and a desk in the classroom. 为了充分调动所有学生的积极性，要请掌握程度稍差的学生先说，这种活动便于激发不同层次学生的兴趣。话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事 (3)翻译句子。汉语和英语表达在词句上的不同语序、不同词性、不同用法往往让学生望而生畏；学生对汉语的思维定式，在许多方面都烙上了汉语的痕迹。如果套用，必定会导致“chinglish”。因此，通过英汉互译比较两种语言结构是提高学生英语表达能力的有效方法。话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事3．表达情感，提高“篇”章能力
“篇”是训练的最终目的，是对词汇、语法、表达内容、文章体裁和组织能力的综合考核。
(1)串词成篇。在生词表中随机选择几个单词作为关键词刻意串词成句。凭借对文章的熟练程度，让学生复述部分课文内容，或发挥想象，编写一个新故事。
话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事(2)连句成段。让学生通过使用过渡性的词或短语，把各个独立的句子有机连成小段。如and, but, so, then, at first, second, because, it seems that等。连句成段后，学生独立将短文写下来。经过过渡性词或词语衔接训练，学生的英语思维能力就会有所提高，为英语写作打下较好的基础。
话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事 话题写作(一) 人物故事人物故事类书面表达一般针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友来设题，要求考生对人物进行描写。主要涉及描写人物的简历、变化以及自己对此人物的看法等。此类试题通常以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。话题点睛话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事1．My friend Jenny comes from New York.
2．She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.
3．He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble.
4．She gets on well with friends.
5．He's very outgoing and brave.
6．In her spare time, she loves listening to music.常用表达话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空限填一词
1．She is ________ (严格的) with me in my study and helps me with my homework.
2．When I failed an exam, he encouraged me to be ________ (自信) and keep trying.
3．Li Lei often helps others, so he is very ________ (受欢迎的) in our school.
4．She is an ________ (外向的) girl and she is friendly to others.
5．My brother is old enough to look after ________ (自己)．基础写作strict confident popular outgoing 话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事himself Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．他每天早上骑自行车上学，并且准时到校。
He goes to school ____________ every morning and gets to school ____________．
2．桑迪做完作业后喜欢弹钢琴来自我放松一下。
Sandy likes to ____________ to relax herself after doing homework.
3．她是如此容易相处以至于我们都把她看作朋友。
She is so easy to ________________ that we all regard her ________________．by bike on time play the piano get along/on with 话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事as our friend 4．她总是在课堂上认真听讲做笔记。
She always ____________ the teachers carefully and take notes ____________．
5．丹尼尔上学期参加了写作竞赛并且获得了一等奖。
Daniel joined in the writing competition and ________________ last term.listens to in class won first prize 话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。
注意：1.词数：80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。典型例题话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事 My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He __________________________________________
【思路点拨】
1．找出关键点：外貌、爱好、性格特征；
2．列出提纲。从以上三个方面简单列出提纲；
3．明确时态：主要使用一般现在时；
4．确定人称：第三人称； 话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事5．重点词汇及句型。
(1)round, dislike, personalities, helpful, creative, generous, a pair of, share with, get along with, help sb (to) do, be willing to do, want to do
(2)由连词and和but引导的并列句话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事【写作模板】话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事【佳作欣赏】
My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. He is good at playing computer games, but he dislikes sports. He has many good personalities. He is helpful. He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the old cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is also creative. For example, he creates a TV programme. He is generous to his friends. He likes to share his things with them. So I want to be a person like Daniel and get along well with everyone.话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事【名师点评】
1．使用的高级词汇：dislike, personalities, creative, create, generous等。
2．运用了丰富的短语描述人物的外貌与性格特征。如a pair of, be kind to, be willing to 等。
3．举例说明，使文章生动：For example, he creates…。话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事亲爱的同学们，你们即将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多好朋友，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你的好朋友Li Lei。
要点：
1．他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；
2．他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；
3．我准备送他一个……以表达感谢；
4．我对他的祝福和希望。实战演练话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事注意：
1．词数80～100；开头已写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend—Li Lei.
话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend—Li Lei.
He is a 15-year-old student, who is outgoing. He is always willing to help others. He has lots of interests such as swimming, reading and drawing. He is good at all the subjects and he often helps me with my lessons so that I can keep up with my classmates.
We are going to leave school. I'll send him a pen to thank him for helping me so much. I hope that he will live a happy life in the future. And we can keep in touch with each other. 话题写作(一)┃ 人物故事课件17张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(十) 观点态度话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度态度观点篇属于议论文范畴，通常是给出热点且有争议性的话题，让学生阐述自己的观点。如：对学生上网、学生参加课外娱乐活动、学生吸烟、课程设置、课堂活动方式等话题发表观点。
写作此类文章时应注意：1.要把别人的观点写全；2.要根据事实阐述自己的观点；3.恰当使用一些表达观点的句式：I think/I believe/I hope…； On one hand…， on the other hand…； Firstly…， Secondly…； In my opinion…话题点睛话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度1．I think going online is good for me.
2．They say they'll volunteer in the hospital.
3．I hope what I said will be valuable to you.
4．In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful.
5．Some people think going abroad is very good.
6．The more chances we have, the more progress we'll make.常用表达Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空限填一词
1．I think shopping online has many ___________ (优点)．
2．Thanks to the Internet, it's ________ (容易的) for us to find information.
3．Smoking is bad for our health. Teenagers mustn't ________ (吸烟) at school.
4．Students shouldn't spend too much time ________ (玩) computer games or chatting online.
5．Some people think chatting online with strangers is a ________ (浪费) of time and it may bring them danger.基础写作advantages easy smoke 话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度playing waste Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．我很少在网上购物，因为我认为这不够安全。
I seldom buy things online because I ______________ it's
______________．
2．依我的观点，做适量的作业有必要并且有帮助。
In my opinion, it's ______________________ to do some suitable homework.
3．有些人认为，学生不应该在学校用手机。
Some people think students shouldn't ________________ at school.safe enough don't think use mobile phones 话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度necessary and helpful 4．我认为考试是有用的，但是太多的考试是有害的。
I think examinations ____________， but too many examinations ____________．
5．丰富多彩的课外活动对学生的身心有好处。
Colourful after-school activities ________________ students' body and mind.are harmful are useful 话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度are good for 许多孩子都热衷于上网，但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文，描述上网的优点和缺点，谈谈自己的看法以及自己上网会怎么做。典型例题 话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度 注意：
1．词数：80左右。
2．参考词汇：disadvantage n. 缺点 cheat v. 欺骗 go online上网
Today many students are interested in going online. But it has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度【思路点拨】
1．谋篇布局：通过对表格的分析可知文章可以分两部分来写作。一部分写上网的优点和缺点，另一部分写自己的看法和做法；
2．时态：一般现在时；
3．人称：第一人称(表达自己的观点)；
4．重点词汇和句型。
(1)advantage, disadvantage, information, cheat, play games, be good for, go online, plan to do
(2)when引导的时间状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，(that)引导的宾语从句(I think going online…)话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度【写作模板】话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度【佳作欣赏】
Today many students are interested in going online. But it has both advantages and disadvantages. As for the advantages, it can help you get a lot of information quickly. It is also a learning tool and can help you make friends. However, playing games and chatting online can waste lots of time and money, so it isn't good for our study. You may be cheated when you go online.
I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour every day. If you make a plan, you can find it very useful.话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度【名师点评】
1．结合要点，具体说明了网络的优点和缺点。
2．提出自己的观点时，用“I think…”过渡，过渡自然，行文流畅。
3．when/if引导的从句以及含情态动词的被动句(You may be cheated when…)的使用更是让文章增色不少。话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度 上星期，学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论。以下是你班同学家长的观点：多数家长认为作业多有好处，而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利。请你根据下面表格中的提示，用英语简要介绍并表明你自己的观点。实战演练话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语句通顺。
2．80词左右。 话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度 Last week our class had a parents' meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful. They thought by doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had learned. It would also help to develop the students' minds and stop them playing computer games.话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless. Because doing much homework took a lot of time and then students could not have a good rest. What's more, they could not do the things they liked.
In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful.话题写作(十)┃ 观点态度课件15张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(二) 学习提高话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高学习的话题包括课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提高等。
学习的话题可能涉及的要点：
1．学校课程的设置，课内小组合作学习与自主学习情况。
2．如何帮助学生解决学习问题，对学生学习态度、学习方法以及学习成果的正确评价。
3．加强课外阅读与学习，开拓视野，提升自我。话题点睛话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高1．I learn English by working with a group.
2．The teacher spoke so quickly that I did not understand her most of the time.
3．Why not listen and read after the tape?
4．What about listening to tapes?
5．It really improves my speaking skills.
6．We can learn more about the world by reading.常用表达Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空限填一词
1．Reading should be a lifelong________ (习惯) for everyone.
2．We try to find out the ways of ________ (解决) problems through our knowledge.
3．You can ________ (猜测) a word's meaning by reading the sentences before and after it.
4．Why not ________ (读) some English magazines?
5．Students should be the ________ (主人) of study.基础写作owners habit solving guess read 话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．我认为考试前你最好浏览笔记本。
I think you'd better ____________ the notebook before exams.
2．课后，我们可以读我们喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查找有用的信息。
____________， we can read the books we like, _____________
or surf the Internet for useful information.
3．学好英语对我们来说是必要的。
It is necessary for us to ________________．
4．学习英语的最好方法是运用它。
________________ to learn English is to use it.
5．我们也可以通过学习一些英文歌曲或观看英文电影来提高英语水平。
We can also ________________ by learning some English songs or ________________________________________．The best way look through After class go to the library learn English well 话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高improve our English watching/seeing English movies/films 2015·六盘水阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。阅读的好处很多，但是，目前许多中学生都不重视阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇80～100词的英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
典型例题 话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高内容要点：话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are some reasons. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
1．要点：主要从不重视阅读的原因、阅读的好处及对阅读的建议三个方面进行分析并提出建议；
2．时态：一般现在时；话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高3．重点词汇及句型。
(1)a few/several, reason, too much, open up, think, knowledge, colourful, habit
(2)be busy doing sth, sb spends… doing/on sth, It takes sb some time to do sth; should/be supposed to do sth, make sb/sth＋adj., make sb do sth, so that ＋目的状语从句，It's ＋adj.＋to do sth话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高【写作模板】话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高【佳作欣赏】
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
Some students think they have too much homework and they are busy doing it every day. Others don't have a habit of reading. And they often spend their spare time in watching TV or surfing the Internet.
However, reading has many advantages. By reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Also reading can make our life more colourful.
Here is my advice. First, teachers are supposed to give less homework to us so that we can have more time to read. Second, it's a good idea to start a reading club, because we can learn from each other.话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高【名师点评】
1．文章条理清晰，并恰当使用了关联词及过渡语：however, besides, first, second, Here is my advice。
2．使用的高级词汇：at present, spare, however, besides, colorful。
3．文中巧妙地运用了(that)引导的宾语从句，and连接的并列句，so that引导的目的状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句。话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的回忆。请你以“What should we do in English class？”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。
提示：1.Listen to the teacher.
2．Take part in activities.
3．Be confident in ourselves.
要求：1.须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2．词数：60—80词。
参考词汇：take notes, work in groups with…， not be afraid of…实战演练话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高参考词汇：take notes, work in groups with…， not be afraid of…
What should we do in English class?
In English class, we should ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Try to answer questions in English.
We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having discussions and playing games. We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other.
It's very important to be confident. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, we can make much progress.话题写作(二)┃ 学习提高课件15张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(三) 健康生活话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活健康生活包括两个话题：体育锻炼和合理膳食。
体育锻炼涉及的要点：开展体育锻炼的方式；多进行体育活动，强身健体；养成正确的用眼习惯，预防近视等。
健康饮食涉及的要点：介绍健康饮食和健康生活的具体做法及其好处。话题点睛话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活1．Many young people like eating junk food very much.
2．Here is some advice on how to keep healthy.
3．We must have healthy food rather than junk food.
4．Though junk food is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food. 常用表达5．To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food.
6．It's a good idea to have more healthy food like fruit and vegetables.
7．It's healthy for the mind and the body.
8．Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空限填一词
1．He usually has some milk and ________ (面包) for breakfast.
2．He ________ (重) only 70 kilos now after taking a balanced diet.
3．It's not a good habit to eat sweet ________ (零食)．
4．It's bad for your health to go to school without
______________ (吃) breakfast.
5．We ________ (应该) keep away from junk food.基础写作bread weighs 话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活snacks eating/having should Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．多吃水果对我们的健康有益。
It is good for our health _____________________________.
2．学生应该每天花至少一个小时进行体育锻炼。
Students should spend ____________ an hour _________________ every day.
3．平衡饮食能使你保持健康。
Eating a balanced diet can make you ________________．
4．有许多种我们可以做的运动，例如跑步、游泳和球类运动。
There are _____________________ we can do, such as running, swimming and ____________．
5．为了有好的视力，我们应该每天做眼保健操。
In order to have ____________， we should ________________ every day.to eat more fruit at least taking exercise keep/stay healthy 话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活many kinds of sports ball games good eyesight do eye exercises 近来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：1.列举中小学生面临的健康问题。
2．谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
注意：词数：60－80词。典型例题 话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活【思路点拨】
1．谋篇布局：根据试题的内容要点提示可以将文章分为两部分，一部分写“中小学生面临的健康问题”，另一部分写自己对“怎样才能保持健康”的一些看法；
2．时态：一般现在时；
3．人称：第三人称(列举健康问题)；第一人称(表达自己的观点);
4．重点词汇及句型。
(1)junk food, eyesight, computer games, suggestions/advice, be good for, stay away from
(2)because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活【写作模板】话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活【佳作欣赏】
Many students like eating junk food very much. They have poor eyesight because they don't have the right way to read. And they often play computer games for several hours.
Here are some suggestions on how to keep healthy in our life. We must have healthy food, rather than junk food. Reading in a right way is good for our eyesight. We should stay away from computer games. If we can do these things, I think we will keep fit.话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活【名师点评】
1．文章条理清晰，先提出问题，然后提出解决问题的建议。
2．恰当使用情态动词must, should和can。
3．句式多样化，运用了because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，here引导的倒装句，以及“疑问词＋不定式”结构作宾语等。话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活实战演练健康生活关系到青少年的成长。最近，你们班就KFC(肯德基)食品的优缺点进行了讨论。请你根据下表提示简要描述同学们的看法，并发表自己的观点。话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活要求：
1．可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息；
2．词数：80—100(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Recently, our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC. Here are the results of it.
On the one hand, KFC has its advantages. It's delicious and eating in KFC is a kind of fashion. It's also a good way to experience Western food.话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvan-tages. Most food in KFC is junk food, which is bad for our health. Besides, the food may not be safe because it's not fresh. What's more, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.
Though KFC is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food which is more delicious. To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. It's a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and fruit, just as the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”话题写作(三)┃ 健康生活课件16张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(四) 计划愿望话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望此话题包括假期计划、活动计划、人生目标等。
可能涉及的要点：
1．读书、旅游、度假、走亲访友、休息娱乐等活动的安排。
2．课外活动、学校郊游、校庆、运动会等活动的时间、地点、人物及活动内容与形式。
3．职业规划以及实现人生目标的具体措施等。话题点睛话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望1．I'll invite all of my good friends to my birthday party.
2．I'm going to have a good rest and relax myself.
3．I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful holiday.
4．If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing to visit the Great Wall. 常用表达5．We are going to meet at the school gate at 7：00 on Sunday morning.
6．My dream is to be a doctor.
7．I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
8．Our school sports meeting will last three days from Thursday to Saturday.话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空不止一词
1．Hold on to your dreams and you can achieve them __________________ (有一天)．
2．Our school __________________ (运动会) will last for three days from Monday to Wednesday.
3．Maybe after I leave school, I'll think about becoming a teacher ________________________ (而不是) a doctor.
4．I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn________________ (尽可能多)．
5．We are going to meet ________________ (在学校大门口) at 8：00 on Sunday morning.基础写作at the school gate one day/some day sports meeting instead of/rather than as much as possible 话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．我长大了想当一名社会工作者。
I want to be a social worker ____________________．
2．每个人都有理想，我的理想是当一名医生。
Everyone has his dream. My dream is __________________．
3．我将为了实现自己的理想而努力学习。
I will _______________ to make my dream ____________．
4．我们计划今天下午去湖边钓鱼。
We plan to ____________ by the lake this afternoon.
5．我相信我们将会在公园玩得很开心。
I'm sure we will ________________________________ ________________ in the park.go fishing when I grow up to be/become a doctor work/study hard come true 话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望 have a lot of fun/have a good time/
enjoy ourselves 典型例题 紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望注意：
1．词数：80—100；
2．表中内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：knowledge知识，social activities社会活动话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望 【思路点拨】
1．分析题干：由试题的要求可得知对暑假计划的描写要点：休息、学习、活动以及自己的适当发挥部分；
2．时态：一般将来时；
3．人称：第一人称；
4．重点词汇及句型。
(1)relax, interesting, knowledge, society, meaningful, chat with, take part in
(2)be going to do, not only…but also…， help sb.(to)do, would like to do, be sure (that)…话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望【写作模板】话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望【佳作欣赏】
The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing to visit the Great Wall. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望【名师点评】
1．用一般将来时的不同句式表示将来：
(1)The summer holiday is coming.(现在进行时表将来)
(2)I'm going to have…(be going to do表将来)
(3)I will read more…(will do表将来)
2．文章多处使用了经典句型：not only…but also, would like to do, be sure (that)…。
3．结尾处简明扼要，提出了自己的愿望，并深信将度过一个有趣且有意义的暑假。话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据提示内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。
内容要点：
1．下周日早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回；
2．坐公交车前往寸金公园 (Cunjin Park)；
3．唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；
4．带齐食物、饮料等；
5．注意安全和防火。实战演练话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望要求：
1．包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2．不要逐词翻译，词数80左右。(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。)
参考词汇：at the school gate (在学校门口)；
activity(活动); keep away from fire (远离火)话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望 Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Park next Sunday. ____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are going to meet at the school gate at 8：00 a．m. on Sunday morning. And we will be back at 2：00 p．m. We plan to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have many activities there, such as singing, dancing, having a picnic and taking photos with our teachers. I'm sure we will have a lot of fun. I will ask my classmates to take plenty of food and drinks. We should pay attention to the safety. And we must keep away from fire all the time.话题写作(四)┃ 计划愿望课件18张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作 (五) 快乐成长话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长成长的话题包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。
成长话题的作文可能涉及的要点：
1．成长过程中，家长、老师、朋友对你的关怀与帮助，以及你的感恩与感悟。
2．成长过程中遇到的烦恼与困惑。如学习紧张、考试压力、处理同学关系、代沟等。
3．提出解决问题的方法与建议。例如，培养自信，树立远大目标，多与家长、老师沟通，向身边的朋友倾诉等。话题点睛话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长1．We all want to grow happily and healthily.
2．You'd better eat more fruits and vegetables instead of too much meat.
3．Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence.
4．It's difficult for us to get on well with our parents.
5．I'm not allowed to play computer games.
6．With your help, I've made great progress in English.常用表达Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空不止一词
1．It is important for us to __________________ (和……交流) each other and share our happiness and sadness.
2．I ____________ (感到孤独) when I am alone at home.
3．We are happy that we can take part in all kinds of __________________ (课外活动)．
4．The loud noise from the square makes it hard for me to ____________ (入睡)．
5．When you are ____________ (处于困境), you should ask your parents, teachers or friends for help.基础写作in troublecommunicate with feel lonely after-school activities fall asleep 话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．我最大的问题是没有很多时间用于我的爱好。
My ________________ is that I don't have much time ________________.
2．作为中学生，我们应该学会如何与他人相处融洽。
As middle school students, we should learn how to ____________________________．
3．每个人都有自己的做事方式，所以我们应该彼此理解。
Everyone has his own way ________________， so we should ____________________．for my hobbies get on/along well with others biggest problem 话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长to do things understand each other4．太多的家庭作业使学生对学习失去兴趣，这也对他们的健康有害。
Too much homework makes students ________________ study. It's also ______________________．
5．当我取得进步时，我的父母亲总是很开心并且鼓励我做得更好。
When I ____________， my parents are always happy and ________________________．bad for their health lose interest in encourage me to do better 话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长make progress 对学生综合素质评价的方式多种多样，同伴互评是其中较为有效的方式之一。某班一个小组正在进行阶段性同伴互评活动，如果你是该组组长，请结合本组讨论情况，为本组某位同学写一份激励性评价报告，内容须包含以下要点：
◆the skill/the advantage/the personal quality the student has
◆one thing the student did
◆some advice for the student
要求：80词左右。典型例题 话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长【思路点拨】
1．要点：本文的主题是为同学写一份“激励性评价报告”。文章有三个要点：
(1)同学的情况；
(2)同学所做的一件事情；
(3)给同学的建议。
2．时态：一般现在时；
3．人称：第三人称；话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长4．重点词汇及句型。
(1)get along well, be talented in, warm-hearted, a large amount of, call on, give away, organize
(2)who引导的定语从句，so that引导的结果状语从句，when引导的时间状语从句话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长【写作模板】话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长【佳作欣赏】
Han Mei is an easy-going girl who gets along well with everyone. She is also talented in performing. What's the most important, she is warm-hearted.
Once she knew a girl in her neighborhood who had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She called on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money. When the girl and her parents got the money they were really moved.
Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades. 话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长【名师点评】
1．文章开头点题，结尾引出个人观点。
2．文中使用的高级词汇：be talented in, warm-hearted, a large amount of, organize, give away。
3．文中巧妙地运用了定语从句，结果状语从句和时间状语从句。话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长 在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事人……最近你市正举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生英语征文活动，Spud Webb深深地影响着你，请根据表格中的内容要点完成征文。实战演练话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长要求：
1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右；
4．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长 The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He is small, but he is very smart. He has many different interests. He is fond of music. He loves sports very much. He loves playing basketball. He is a member of the school basketball team. He wants to join the NBA in the future. So he practises hard every day to make his dream come true. Finally, he joins the NBA, and becomes a player of the NBA.
话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长 Why Spud Webb is successful? Because he is hard-working. He always practises hard, and he tries his best to play it well. At the same time, his parents support him.
Spud Webb is special to me because we’re like friends. He always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us. He works hard at his lessons, so he does well in all the subjects. He is modest and ready to help others. With his help, I have made much progress and caught up with my classmates. I have decided to learn from him from now on.
I think everyone who knows him admires Spud Webb.话题写作 (五)┃ 快乐成长课件15张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作 (六) 假日旅行话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行该主题命题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游景点、旅游线路以及写游览日记等。此类试题主要利用要点提示的方式来考查。话题点睛话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行1．It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel.
2．I think the best place to visit is the Great Wall.
3．We can play games or have a picnic there.
4．When we arrived there, we began to climb the hill at once.常用表达5．I am going to travel to London with my parents after the final exam.
6．We'll be away for about seven days.
7．What a pleasant trip it was!
8．It will take you about two and a half hours to get there.话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空限填一词
1．Last weekend, we took a school trip to the science ________ (博物馆)．
2．When we ________________ (到达) there, we started to climb the hill at once.
3．We'd better take some warm ________ (衣服) with us.
4．________ (春天) is the best time to visit the city.
5．All the pleasure of the trip will be kept in my ________
(记忆)．基础写作memory museum arrived/got/reached clothes Spring 话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．在北京有许多名胜值得参观。
Many places of interest ________________ in Beijing.
2．在旅行期间，我们能够遇到来自不同地方的人并且和他们交朋友。
We can meet people from different places and ___________________________ during the trip.
3．这座南方小镇因茶叶而著名。
The southern town _____________________ tea.
4．旅行后，我们很累但是很开心。
We were _____________________ after the trip.
5．我认为这次旅行是最愉快的经历。
I think this journey is _______________________________．are worth visiting make friends with them is famous/known for 话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行tired but very happy the happiest/most pleasant experience 旅游可以让人身心放松，增长见识……初中毕业在即，很多同学想利用暑假去旅游。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文，通过你校英语论坛，向大家推荐一个好去处，并给出旅行建议。
内容提示：
1．Where is the best place to go?
2．What is the place special for?
3．What should you pay attention to?典例精析 话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行要求：
1．中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It's a good idea to go travelling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行【思路点拨】
1．主旨：旅游的益处；
2．要点：(1)可以去的最好的地方；(2)这个地方的特殊之处；(3)旅游的注意事项；
3．时态：一般现在时；
4．人称：第一人称；
5．重点词汇及句型。
(1)during, vacation, visit, ancient, including, wonderful, be famous for, pay attention to, a lot of
(2)It's＋adj.＋to do sth, had better(not)do sth, if引导的条件状语从句。话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行【写作模板】话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行【佳作欣赏】
It's a good idea to go travelling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum. As we all know, the Palace Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City, is wonderful and famous for its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers. If we want to visit the Palace Museum, we should pay attention to our safety. We had better go with our friends or our family. 话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行【名师点评】
1．文章句子结构具有层次性。既有常用的it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语(It's a good idea to go…)，不定式作后置定语(…the best place to visit…)等， 也运用了具有一定难度的句型：As we all know…， If we want…， We had better do…等。
2．结合要点，描述其特殊的地方(We can see a lot of ancient buildings, including…)话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行假如你叫李华，是某中学初三年级学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。
1．考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；
2．计划在英格兰停留十天；
3．向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；
4．请他就去英格兰哪些地方旅行给出建议。
注意：
1．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．80词左右。实战演练话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行Dear Ben，
How is everything? _______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly，
Li Hua I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We'll stay there for about ten days. But I don't know much about it. I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.话题写作 (六)┃ 假日旅行课件13张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(七) 情感表达话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达情感类书面表达要求考生结合自己的经历或者感受进行写作。常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。此类试题通常利用汉语引出话题来进行考查。话题点睛话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达1．There may be something unpleasant in our life.
2．I regret talking back, not listening to Mum.
3．Why don't you forget about it so that you can be friends again?
4．Why not talk about these feelings with your family?
5．When I feel sad, the best way to relax myself is to exercise.
6．I like helping others because it makes me very happy.常用表达Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空不止一词
1．There's a lot of happiness in life if we face it ____________ (带着微笑)．
2．I love my mother and I'm sure she is _________________ (最好的妈妈) in the world.
3．I _________________ (感到很紧张) when I first made a speech in public.
4．I thank him for ____________ (教我) how to be an honest man.
5．If we all give our love, the world will become ____________
(更美好)．基础写作more beautiful with a smile the best mother felt very nervous teaching me 话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．谢谢你深深的爱，谢谢你为我所做的一切。
Thank you for your ____________. Thank you for all that you____________ for me.
2．我宁愿在家里看电视也不愿到外面踢足球。
I ___________ watch TV at home ________ play soccer outside.
3．我们应该尊敬老师，因为他们教给我们许多知识并且在各方面帮助我们。
We should _______________________ because they teach us _______________________ and help us in all ways.
4．我很幸运有一个像你这样的好朋友。
It's lucky for me to _____________________________________.
5．我希望你将有一个美好的未来。
I hope you will ___________________________．respect our teachers deep love have done would rather than 话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达lots of/a lot of knowledgehave a good friend like you have a nice/bright/good future微笑是一种态度。请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，为你校《英语园地》写一篇稿件。
要点：1.学会对自己微笑；
2．学会对他人微笑；
3．微笑是一种语言。
注意：1.紧扣主题，表述全面、准确、流畅；
2．词数：80－100；
参考词汇：态度attitude, 自信心confidence典型例题 话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达【思路点拨】
1．主题：微笑；
2．要点：(1) 学会对自己微笑；(2) 学会对他人微笑；(3) 微笑是一种语言；(4)微笑的意义或效果；
3．时态：一般现在时；
4．人称：第一人称(学会对自己微笑和个人观点)；第二人称(举例说明)；
5．重点词汇和句型。
(1)face, unpleasant, confidence, beat, feelings, enemy, benefit, therefore, bring back, learn to do, help sb (to) do, get close to。
(2)there be句型，and连接的并列句，(that)引导的宾语从句(I believe…)。话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达【写作模板】话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达【佳作欣赏】
Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life. We should face everything with smile.
In our life, there may be something unpleasant. Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence and beat the unhappy feelings. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is ourselves. Most important of all, smiling benefits our health.
We should also learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to other people. Therefore, smile is the most widely understood language.
Let's learn to smile. I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier.话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达【名师点评】
1．文章以要点提示为主线，发挥恰到好处，句型简洁明了，行文流畅自然，真情流露，是一篇极佳的美文。
2．文章开头点题，结尾处引出个人观点，与开头呼应。
3．文中使用的高级词汇：attitude, unpleasant, confidence, benefit, therefore等。话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。
提示：1.感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学……
2．感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面……
3．对他们的美好祝福。
要求：1.内容要包括所给提示；
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。实战演练话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达 In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do a lot of things for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are so hard-working. When I have problems with my study, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely. I will remember the days we play and study together.
Thank you, my parents, my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are in good health and have a better future.话题写作(七)┃ 情感表达课件15张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(八) 环境保护话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护 与环保相关的书面表达通常是先列举环境中出现的某一现象，要求考生先就该现象进行描述，然后提出建议，最后阐述自己的观点。主要涉及低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等。此类试题通常以要点提示的方式来考查。话题点睛话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护1．It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
2．The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.
3．We're trying to save the earth.
4．Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke.
5．To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.
6．Remember to throw rubbish in the bin and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.常用表达Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空不止一词
1．We'd better not ____________ (摘花) or step on the grass.
2．It's important and necessary to help
________________________ (保护环境)．
3．____________ (例如), we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about.
4．In order to make more excellent environment, we can ______________________________ (种植更多的花草树木)．
5．We shouldn't break traffic rules or speak loudly ____________ (在公共场合)．基础写作in public pick flowers protect the environment For example plant more flowers and trees话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．多走路少开车有助于使我们的城市更干净。
More walking and ____________ helps to make our city ________．
2．总之一句话，如果每个人都尽了最大的努力，环境会变得越来越好。
____________， if everyone tries his best, the envir-onment will become________________．
3．减少空气污染是每个人的职责。
It's everyone's duty to _____________________．reduce air pollution less driving cleaner In a word better and better话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护4．为了产生更少的污染，我们最好步行上学并且购物时不用塑料袋。
We ______________ to school and not use plastic bags when shopping to produce ____________．
5．政府应当采取措施阻止人们将垃圾扔进河里。
The government should take action to prevent people from ____________________________ rivers.had better walk less pollution 话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护throwing rubbish/litter into 节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳生活”的中学生，假设你是他，请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。典型例题 话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护要点：
1．每天步行上学；
2．离开教室时，关灯、关电扇、关电视等；
3．不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；
4．不使用塑料袋；
5．充分使用纸张。
参考词汇：on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bags 话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护【思路点拨】
1．明确主旨：节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起；
2．写作要点：见提示点1—5；
3．时态：一般现在时；
4．人称：第一人称；
5．重点词汇和句型。
(1)fans, tap, reuse, plastic, necessary, environment, on foot, turn off, remember to do, make full use of
(2)when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句和so连接的原因状语从句(I think saving paper is necessary, so I often…)，It's ＋adj.＋to do sth话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护【写作模板】话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护【佳作欣赏】
My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper.
It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment. 话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护【名师点评】
1．频度副词 (always, often, never)的使用让表达更加充分。
2．结合要点，适当发挥，举例说明，使文章内容更加充实。
3．文章有多处恰当地使用了when引导的时间状语从句，还有原因状语从句和宾语从句，从句的使用提升了文章的层次。话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活。而我们的工作、生活、生产又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment？”为题写一篇短文。
提示： 存在问题：1.水污染和大气污染越来越严重；
2．森林被破坏和砍伐；
3．白色垃圾随处可见。
要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少写出3—4个方面。
词数：80词左右。实战演练话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护 How to protect our environment?
The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We nearly have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, it's time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Don't use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. I hope our world will be more and more beautiful.话题写作(八)┃ 环境保护课件16张PPT。英语新课标
（YLNJ) 话题写作(九) 安全问题话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题 安全问题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等。此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。话题点睛话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题1．Don't run in the hallways.
2．If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that we can keep ourselves safe.
3．Safety is the most important thing in our life.
4．We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home.
5．You mustn't walk across the street until the traffic lights turn red.
6．It's dangerous to play on the road.常用表达Ⅰ.根据句意及所给中文提示写出句中所缺单词，每空不止一词
1．We must obey ____________ (交通规则) and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red.
2．When we walk ____________ (过马路), we should walk on the zebra.
3．____________ (作为青少年), we should keep safety in mind.
4．We should ____________ (小心) when we make friends, especially on the Internet.
5．If we are in danger, we must ____________ (报警) for help in time.基础写作call the police traffic rules across the road As teenagers be careful 话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成句子
1．我们必须记住独自一人在河里游泳是危险的。
We must remember it's dangerous ________________ in the river.
2．严禁酒后驾车。
People shouldn't be allowed to ________________．
3．我们越小心，事故就会越少。
The ____________ we are, the _______________ there will be.
4．不要轻易相信陌生人或网上信息。
________________ a stranger or online information easily.
5．我认为安全第一。
I think ________ must come ________．fewer accidents to swim alone drive after drinking more careful 话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题Don't believe in safety first 为了增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。典型例题 话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题注意：
1．内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： be careful, on line, danger, call…for, go bad
How to keep safe?
As teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题【思路点拨】
1．明确主题：本文根据图示内容就“如何保持安全”这一话题进行阐述；
2．写作要点：(1) 慎重交友；(2)遇险报警；(3) 安全饮食；(4)自己的观点；
3．时态：一般现在时；
4．人称：第一人称；
5．重点词汇和句型。
(1)safety, dangerous/in danger, especially, healthily, do harm to, in short
(2)when/if/so that/that引导的从句，动名词作主语，It's＋adj.＋to do sth话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题【写作模板】话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题【佳作欣赏】
How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it is dangerous to swim alone in the river.
In short, safety must come first!话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题【名师点评】
1．first, second, last, but not least等词语的运用让文章布局合理，结构清晰。
2．复合句让文章的语言优美、流畅。例如，when引导的时间状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，so that 引导的目的状语从句， that引导的定语从句(Eating food that goes bad will do…)。
3．最后用in short进行简明扼要的总结。话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题近来，全国正在进行平安校园建设，作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更加注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Daming，担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。
内容提示：
1．不带管制刀具到学校；
2．不私自下河洗澡；
3．不打架；
4．上学、放学的途中应该注意安全；
5．遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。
……实战演练话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题参考词汇：restricted knives or things(管制刀具)；have a bath(洗澡)；fight(打架)；emergency(紧急情况)；pay attention to the traffic(注意交通安全)。
写作要求：
1．用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。
2．可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题Dear students，
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
Yours，
Daming We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds alone without our parents' permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.话题写作(九)┃ 安全问题
