集福“第四关”：写作福
Day 17
1．在成都数字学校“名师导学·在线答疑”初三英语课堂上，Meimei学习到了“3×(me+ing)”介绍节日的英语小技巧，请结合图表内容，帮助Meimei在学校英语课堂上进行分享。
“3×(me+ing)” Name Dragon Head-raising Day
Time (lunar month 农历)
Theme Thank the dragon for the harvest (收获)
doing
eating
feeling 1. ...；2. ...
注意：1．行文需包含所有要点；2．注意使用宾语从句；3．字数：80词左右。
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2．科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如电脑、汽车、手机、电子书、机器人、因特网等等。请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。
要求：
1. 词数110左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等！相关信息。
Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是李华，你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上，你的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”获得一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题，根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的新发明。
外观 看起来和普通书包一样，有一个屏幕
材料 布，塑料
优点 查单词，与父母联系，讲笑话让人开心……
缺点 太重
历时 2个月
评价 ……
提示词: look like, screen, cloth（布）, plastic（塑料）, look up, connect with, be made of
要求:
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 不能出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数: 不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
Day 18
4．假如你是李华，你校下个月将举办一场以“The Most Powerful Invention in Our Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你选一项发明，简单介绍它的发明家和发明时间，详细介绍它给我们生活带来的变化，并谈谈你的看法和感受，请用英语写一篇参赛稿。
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Invention Mobile phone WWW (Internet) Alipay …
Inventor Martin Cooper Tim Berners-Lee Mayun …
Time 1973 1989 2004 …
要求!
1. 必须包含全部要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone! It gives me great pleasure to stand here to introduce one of the most powerful inventions in our life. ____________________________________________________
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Thank you for your listening!
5．发明改变世界。请你根据表格，以“A useful invention”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、发明者及手机的用途，并就作为青少年，你们应该如何合理地使用手机，使它真正成为最有用的发明之一谈谈自己的看法。
Invention Mobile Phone
Inventor American, Martin Cooper
Time 1973
Uses（用途） 1. 与他人交流更方便 2. 代替相机拍照 3上网（surf the Internet）
Your opinions A．青少年应该被允许使用手机 B．青少年应该不被允许使用手机（选择观点A或B，并给出至少两点理由）
要求：短文须包含以上内容，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯，词数80～100。
A useful invention
The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions.
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6．本周五，学校机器人社团将参加成都国际学校联盟机器人展示赛，假如你是学校机器人社社长王冠章，将主持本场比赛。请阅读这次比赛的策划方案，并用英语写一段主持人开场白。
要求：
1. 内容应包含图片相关信息，可适当发挥；
2. 适当使用定语从句；
3. 110词左右。
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Day 19
7．手机无疑是20世纪最伟大的发明之一，请你根据以下表格中的内容，写一篇关于手机的英文短文（不少于80词）。
Smartphone
who Martin Cooper
when 1973
good parts 1. 交流变得方便简单； 2. 上网，拍照，打游戏……
bad parts 1. 引起近视 2. 学习成绩下降
how to use it wisely 写出你的两到三条意见
提示词：short-sighted 近视的 surf the internet 上网
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8．假如你是李华，你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上，你的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”获一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题，根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的新发明。
外观 看起来和普通书包一样，有一个显示屏
材料 布 (cloth)，塑料 (plastic)
优点 查单词，与父母联系，讲笑话哄主人开心……
缺点 重量大……
历时 2个月
评价 ……
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．手机正改变着人们的联系、娱乐和出行等方式。你知道手机的起源和发展吗？请根据下面表格的提示信息，结合手机的发展情况、外形、用途等方面，谈谈它的变化与发展。
要求：
1. 80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
第一部手机由美国人 Martin Cooper 发明于 1973 年。
外形特点；以前的手机屏幕较小并且多为黑白屏幕；现在的手机屏幕多为彩色，并且屏幕越来越大，有的还拥有全屏（full screens）等。
功能用途：以前一般用于打电话和发短信（text messages）等；现在手机拥有各种软件（apps），被应用于生活的各个方面，如：听音乐、支付、购票、上网等。
Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in people’s daily life.
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参考答案
1．例文
Dragon Head-raising Day is one of the traditional festivals in China. It falls on the second day of the second lunar month. It’s a time to thank the dragon for the harvest.
On this day, many people go to get a haircut, hoping for good luck in the new year. People also eat Longxu Noodles and Spring Pancakes, which are symbols of welcoming spring and looking forward to a good harvest.
I think it reflects the ancient Chinese people’s longing for a better life. Besides, it makes me feel the charm of traditional culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。介绍节日的名称、时间、主题等基本信息，引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述。介绍庆祝这个节日时会做的事、会吃的食物等。
第三步，书写结语。谈谈你对这个节日的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①it’s a time to do sth.是做某事的时候
②get a haircut理发
③a symbol of ……的象征
④longing渴望
[高分句型]
①People also eat Longxu Noodles and Spring Pancakes, which are symbols of welcoming spring and looking forward to a good harvest. (which引导定语从句)
②I think it reflects the ancient Chinese people’s longing for a better life. (省略that的宾语从句)
2．例文
Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the smartphone has the greatest impact on me.
It’s like a magic wand that changes how I communicate, learn, and entertain myself. With a smartphone, I can chat with friends, no matter where they are, through social media or messaging apps. It also allows me to access a wealth of information and knowledge at my fingertips, which is helpful for my studies. Moreover, it’s a portal to the world of entertainment, with games, music, and videos that I can enjoy anytime, anywhere.
The smartphone has truly become an extension of myself, making my life more convenient, connected, and colorful. It’s not just a device; it’s a companion that enriches my everyday experiences.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇话题作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据题干，选一项发明，谈谈其对自己的影响。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，点明手机对自己影响最大；
第二步，介绍手机是如何影响自己的生活的；
第三步，写出总结，表明手机对自己的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①has the greatest impact on 对……有最大的影响
②chat with friends和朋友聊天
③allows me to允许我做……
④a wealth of很多的
⑤Moreover另外
[高分句型]
①It’s like a magic wand that changes how I communicate, learn, and entertain myself. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
②It also allows me to access a wealth of information and knowledge at my fingertips, which is incredibly helpful for my studies. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is my smart schoolbag. It looks like an ordinary schoolbag, but it has a special screen. It is made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet.
There are many advantages of my smart schoolbag. It can help me look up new words easily. I can also use it to communicate with my parents. Sometimes, it can tell jokes to make me happy. However, it is a little heavy.
I spent two months inventing it. I believe it will be better in the future.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“表格”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，智能书包的外观、材料、优点、缺点、评价等。
第三步，书写结语，相信智能书包未来会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①look up new words查新单词
②spent two months inventing it花了两个月时间发明它
[高分句型]
It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. （非限制性定语从句）
4．例文
Hello, everyone! It gives me great pleasure to stand here to introduce one of the most powerful inventions in our life. That is the World Wide Web (WWW) invented by Tim Berners-Lee in 1989.
This invention has changed the way we access and share information. Before the WWW, information was scattered and hard to find. However, with the development of the web, information has become organized and accessible to everyone with a click of a button. The WWW has transformed education, allowing students to learn from the best resources worldwide. It has also changed business, enabling companies to reach global markets. Socially, it has connected people across the world, fostering understanding and collaboration.
In my opinion, the WWW is not just an invention. It’s a platform that empowers individuals and drives progress. It has made our world smaller and more interconnected, and for that, we are truly grateful.
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”,介绍发明对现在的影响时用“现在完成时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，点明自己认为的最强大的发明，介绍发明家和发明时间；
第二步，介绍此项发明给我们的教育、商业等带来的变化；
第三步，介绍自己对这项发明的看法，承接结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①share information分享信息
②with the development of随着……的发展
③allowing students to允许学生做……
④In my opinion在我看来
⑤made our world smaller让我们的世界更小
[高分句型]
①That is the World Wide Web (WWW) invented by Tim Berners-Lee in 1989. (过去分词作后置定语)
②It’s a platform that empowers individuals and drives progress. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
5．例文：
A useful invention
The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by an American called Martin Cooper in 1973.
I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives. First, it’s more convenient to communicate with others by using the mobile phones. Second, people are used to taking photos with mobile phones instead of cameras. And we can even go shopping, listen to music and watch movies on the phone. Third, we can easily learn something useful by surfing online. In this way, it helps us study.
In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to use mobile phones, but not on weekdays. And it’s necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍手机发明时间及发明者。
第二步，介绍手机的用途。
第三步，谈论青少年如何合理地利用手机。
[亮点词汇]
①be invented by sb.由某人发明
②communicate with sb.与某人交流
③be used to doing sth.习惯做某事
[高分句型]
①I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives.（宾语从句）
②And it’s necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents.（It的固定句型）
6．例文:
Good morning, everyone! Welcome to the robot show. I’m glad to be here to introduce the competition to you.
Three students will take part in the competition. The three students will show their robots one by one and at the end of the competition. You will play a role in choosing the best one. The winner will get the biggest prize—a Huawei mobile phone. Sun Lei’s home robot can help with housework like cleaning up the house, washing clothes and posting letters. The robot of the second student, Simon Reed, can help humans do some dangerous jobs. The third student is Li Qiang. He has brought a robot that knows different countries’ customs and can work as a tour guide to introduce some places of interest.
Boys and girls, are you ready Let’s welcome the first player!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎大家来到机器人展示赛；
第二步，介绍比赛规则、冠军奖品以及三个参赛同学的机器人；
第三步，最后问大家是否准备好了吗，一起欢迎第一位选手。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② play a role in 起……作用
③ help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
He has brought a robot that knows different countries’ customs and can work as a tour guide to introduce some places of interest.（定语从句）
7．例文
The mobile phone is undoubtedly one of the greatest inventions of the 20th century. Martin Cooper invented the first mobile phone in 1973. On the one hand, the smartphone has many good parts. It makes communication easier and more convenient. We can surf the internet, take photos, and play games on it. On the other hand, it also has some bad parts. It can lead to short-sightedness and a decline in academic performance. Here are some suggestions on how to use it wisely. First, limit the time spent on the phone. Second, use it for learning and not just for entertainment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、阐述手机无疑是20世纪最伟大的发明之一，以及手机的发明者及发明时间；
第二步、介绍手机的好处与坏处；
第三步、给出明智使用手机的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand…on the other hand一方面……另一方面
②surf the internet上网
③take photos拍照
④lead to导致
⑤a decline in下降
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions on how to use it wisely.(倒装句)
8．例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you.
It is my smart schoolbag. It looks like an ordinary schoolbag, but it has a special screen. It is made of cloth and plastic.
There are many advantages of my smart schoolbag. It can help me look up new words easily. I can also use it to communicate with my parents. Sometimes, it can tell jokes to make me happy. However, it is a little heavy.
I spent two months inventing it. I believe it will be better in the future.
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’m excited to show you my smart schoolbag.
My bag looks like a normal one but has a special screen. It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. The screen helps me talk to my parents and find new words easily. There’s also a “joke” button that makes me laugh when I’m feeling down. My schoolbag is a bit heavy, but it’s good for carrying some books. I worked hard for two months to make this bag, and I think it’s really cool.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，智能书包的外观、材料、优点、缺点、评价等。
第三步，书写结语，相信智能书包未来会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①look up new words查新单词
②spent two months inventing it花了两个月时间发明它
[高分句型]
It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. （非限制性定语从句）
9．例文：
Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in people’s daily life. Do you know the origin and development of mobile phones
The first mobile phone was invented by American Martin Cooper in 1973. Previously, mobile phone screens were smaller and mostly black and white. Nowadays, most mobile phone screens are in color and are getting bigger and bigger. Some also have full screen.
People used to use it frequently to make phone calls and send text messages. But now there are various software on mobile phones. They are used in various aspects of life, such as listening to music, paying bills, buying tickets, surfing the Internet and so on.
In short, mobile phones have made our lives increasingly convenient.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时及一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏表格中所给信息，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，用提问的方式引出“手机的发展”这一话题；
第二步，具体介绍手机的历史和几个方面的变化；
第三步，书写结语，总结手机的便利性。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②make phone calls打电话
③In short总之
[高分句型]
① The first mobile phone was invented by American Martin Cooper in 1973.（被动语态）
② Nowadays, most mobile phone screens are in color and are getting bigger and bigger.（比较级+比较级）
