Unit 1 What's the matter？ 单元话题书面表达（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（人教版）.docx

Unit 1 What's the matter？
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 假如你们学校要举行以"优秀不是一种行为，而是一个习惯"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇演讲稿，与同学们分享你的好习惯。
提示：
①Do you get up and go to bed early
②Do you often play sports
③Do you often read
④Do you eat fruit and vegetables
要求：70 词左右，可适当发挥；开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I do believe that excellence is not a behavior but a habit. Now let me tell you about my good habits.
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That's all. Thank you!
2．上周的体育课上，李明打篮球时严重摔伤了腿，引发了学校对“体育课安全”的关注。学校要求体育委员在班会上讲一讲这个问题。请你以“How to keep safe in P. E. class ”为题，在班会课上作主题发言。
要求：语句连贯，词数90左右。
How to keep safe in P. E. class
Good afternoon, everyone!
Do you know that we'll be in danger in P. E. class if
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That's all. Thank you.
3．近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效地自我保护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举行以 "How to Keep Safe" 为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛。
How to Keep Safe
Traffic traffic lights, electric bikes (电动车)…
Swimming rivers, swimming pool…
Internet ID number, code (密码), unhealthy websites…
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要求:⑴短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；
⑵语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
⑶文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
⑷词数: 80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
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After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
4．春季是人们容易得病的季节，为了让同学们保持健康，班主任让你在班级宣传栏中用英文给同学们提出一些建议，如锻炼、早睡、多喝水、吃阳性食品、多吃水果、蔬菜等，并祝愿同学们有一个健康的生活方式。根据以上提示用英文写一篇短文。词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
Spring is coming. It's easy for us to have illness during the time.
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5．保持健康是我们学习和生活的需要和保障，作为一名中学生，你认为我们应该如何保持健康？请写一篇60词左右的短文给同学们提一些建议。短文开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
How to keep healthy
As a middle school student, I think it is really important to keep healthy.
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6．在中国学习的英国交换生吉尔(Jill)近期总是头痛，她到医院诊治多次，但效果不佳。她听说中医保健治疗效果不错，就登录了中国某健康网留言咨询中医孟大夫。假如你是孟大夫，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，回复吉尔。
提示：1）描述吉尔的病情；
2）分析原因；
3）给出建议：保证足够的睡眠并多做运动；多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉……(至少补充1条)
要求：90词左右，可适当发挥。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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7．请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于70词的短文，文章内容要包含以下所有提示信息。
要求：语言流畅,书写规范,可适当发挥。
提示：1）.Dennis今天得了重感冒；
2）.医生建议他在家休息,多喝水，好好休息,一天吃三次药；
3）.你准备放学后去看他,帮他补习功课。
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8．书面表达
David是一个14岁的男孩，但他的体重已经达到85公斤。因为他喜欢吃肉，又不喜欢运动。David经常感冒，他很烦恼。假如你是他的朋友李明，请给他写一封70词左右的信，提出你的建议。
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答案解析部分
1．Hello, everyone!
I do believe that excellence is not a behavior but a habit. Now let me tell you about my good habits. I get up at 6:30 from Monday to Sunday. And I always go to bed before 9:30. I like playing sports. It's good for health. I often play soccer with my classmates after school. I like to read books. I go to the library every Saturday morning. And I read before I go to bed. As for food, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day.
That's all. Thank you!
这是一篇演讲稿。要求学生根据四个问题，介绍自己日常生活中的一些好习惯：作息的习惯；运动的习惯；阅读的习惯以及饮食的习惯。写作时，应使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述，要注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，如状语在句中的位置，句型的表达需要等。在句子之间还一个使用一些适当的连词，使整篇短文语意连贯，表达流畅。
写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如：from Monday to Sunday；like playing sports；be good for health；go to the library等，高分句型（一） I often play soccer with my classmates after school. 描述日常活动的句型。高分句型（二）As for food, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day.描述日常饮食的句型。注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一般现在时，以及一些衔接词,如and, but ,before,as for等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
2．How to keep safe in P. E. class
Good afternoon, everyone!
Do you know that we'll be in danger in P. E. class if we are not careful enough For example, LiMing fell down and hurt his leg badly when playing basketball in P. E. class last week.
How to help students stay away from danger in P. E. class First, we should warm up before doing sports. Second, we must wear sports clothes in P. E. class. Third, we must know some safe behaviors, for example, drinking some water after P. E. class. In a word, safety is the most important thing. All of us should pay attention to it.
That's all. Thank you.
这是一篇命题作文，时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍体育课安全事故；然后介绍体育课上怎样远离危险；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be in danger；for example；fall down；when+动词ing；how to do；help sb. do sth.；stay away from；warm up；in a word；pay attention to等。最高级和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Do you know that we'll be in danger in P. E. class if we are not careful enough In a word, safety is the most important thing.等。连词and、if、first、second、third的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
3． Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should follow the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID numbers or codes when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers even the police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍怎样保持健康。时态是一般现在时，首先介绍总结保持健康的重要性；然后具体介绍怎样保持健康；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：how to do；go+动词ing；surf the Internet；what's more；go out；without one's permission；be in danger；ask for help；afterall；so thatwant to do。状语从句When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous.Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID numbers or codes when we are surfing the Internet.If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers even the police. We should learn something about self protection so that we can protect ourselves well.；宾语从句Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough 的运用为文章增色不少。连词if、first、when、second、because、third、what's more、so that、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．Dear classmates,
Spring is coming. It's easy for us to have
illness during the time. Here is some advice for you to keep healthy. You
should do some exercise in the morning and go to bed early in the evening. You'd
better drink more water every day. When you are tired, you should eat hot yang
foods, like beef. Also you should eat more fruit and vegetables every day. I
hope you all have a healthy lifestyle and stay healthy.
本文是一篇提纲性文章，写作时首先提及现在很容易生病，然后给出几点如何保持健康的建议，最后给出自己的祝福。写作时文章以第二人称为主，注意用一般现在时态，注意连词的使用，注意句子前后逻辑的联系。
本文用了较好的短语和句子，如it is easy for sb to do sth， Here is some advice for you to keep healthy ，do some exercise，go to bed，had better do sth，have a healthy lifestyle等，平时多积累较好的短语和句子，会给文章增加很多亮点。
5．How to keep healthy
As a middle school student,I think it is really important to keep healthy. With a healthy body, we have more time to study and can learn better. To keep healthy,I think we should do the following things. First, we should often exercise. Exercise gives us a strong body. Second, we should eat more vegetables and fruits and drink milk. They are important and necessary for our body. Eat Less meat. Don't eat too much junk food. Third, we should learn to relax. Being stressed too much can make us ill. Good feeling can help to keep healthy. What's your idea Can you tell us
这是一个命题作文。在写作时内容要符合文章的题目。这篇作文的题目如何保持身体健康，可知在文章中我们应该就如何保持身体健康提出一些建议。在书写时要条理分明，语句通顺。在文中我们可用简单的句子表示我们想要表达的观点，不要出现语法错误。
这是一篇命题作文。文章就健康问题提出了记得建议。文章语句简单，条理分明，是一篇很好的文章。只是字数有点多，可把一些联系不上特紧密的内容去掉。例如With a healthy body, we have more time to study and can learn better. What's your idea Can you tell us
6．Dear Jill，
I'm sorry to hear that you are getting headache these days. You said you went to see the doctor，but you didn't feel better. According to what you told me，I think the reason that you are headache is that you're too tired. Here is my advice. First，you should get enough sleep every day，at least 8 hours at night. And you should do more sports. Second，you should eat more fruit and vegetables. Try to eat less meat. Third，try putting your feet in hot water for an hour before going to bed.
Hope you will be better soon.
Dr. Meng
这是一篇英语书信。在写作时要注意英语的书信格式。文章的内容要符合作文题目要求。短文要包含提纲出现的所有信息。文章要给出治疗吉尔疾病的建议。文章的书写要有逻辑性，不要出现语法错误。
这是一篇很好的英语书信。文章运用了一些固定短语和简单的结构，使得短文读起来很流畅。文章很具逻辑性，语句简单，容易理解。很好的表达了作者的观点。
7．My friend Dennis didn't come to school today. He went to hospital because he had a bad cold. The doctor looked him over and said it was nothing serious, but he had to stay at home for two days. He should drink more water and had a good rest. The doctor asked him to take the medicine three times a day. After school. I 'm going to visit him and help him with his lessons. I hope he will be fine very soon.
这是一篇提纲性作文，本文要求按照所给的题目结合提纲所给的信息，完成Dennis看病的信息，并帮他补习功课。写作中要包含看病常用的固定短语和句式结构，表达作者的观点。注意句子时态用一般过去时，注意连词的使用使得文章上下文联系更加合理。
这篇短文详细的描述了Dennis看病，医生给他的建议。在写作中运用了固定短语look over, have to, stay at home, have a good rest, take the medicine three times a day,help sb. wth sth.等。文章中运用了看病时医生常用的句子。在学习中我们要牢记一些常用的短语和句式结构，在写作时可适当的运用，使得文章的表达更具逻辑性，更富有条理。
8．Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a cold. I have some advice for you. First, you should see a doctor. Then you should do exercise every morning. How about swimming once a week I can go with you. And I think you're a little fat. You shouldn't eat too much meat. That's bad for your health. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Doing enough exercise and eating healthy food are very important. In fact, It's easy to have a healthy body.
Yours,
Li Ming
这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍给David的一些建议。时态是一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。首先介绍对David经常感冒的看法；然后介绍建议；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be sorry to do；have a cold；see a doctor；do exercise；how about doing sth.；a little；too much；be bad for等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：宾语从句I'm sorry to hear that you often have a cold. And I think you're a little fat.；比较级You should eat more vegetables and fruit.；动名词做主语Doing enough exercise and eating healthy food are very important.等。连词first、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。