A mother's day surprise 读后续写导学案（含答案）-2025届高三英语复习
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Continuation Writing 读后续写
A Mother’s Day Surprise
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.
Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared.
Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
续写第一步：Read for the theme and five elements （主题和6要素）
Theme
When
Where
Who
What
Why
How
续写第二步：Read for the plot and the emotion（情节和情感）
续写第三步：Character Analyst (人物性格分析)
Mom____________________________________________________
Thomas__________________________________________________
Maggie__________________________________________________
续写第四步：研究所给句子，推测新信息，合理提出续写情节推断续写框架。
TIP 1: 两段首句定一框 研究所给的开头句子，一般续写第一段的开头承上启下，具体写什么大多由第二段的开头决定
Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared.
Questions 1:
2:
3:
...
TIP2：两框两首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Questions 1:
2:
3:
TIP3：提出问题链，借用回答构成情节
TIP4：寻找原文的续写点
TIP5：巧用动作为主线，借助心理描写，让续写内容生动形象化
细节积累：
1) 她的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
A bright smile crossed her face
2) 因为高兴双眼闪闪发亮。
Her eyes twinkled sparkled with pleasure.
3)看到早餐盘她眼睛都惊讶得睁大了。
Her eyes widened with surprise at the sight of the breakfast tray.
4）她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头， 泪流满面地微笑着。
She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
5）一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两个孩子。
A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two kids gently.
续写第五步：大胆下手写吧
Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared.
Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
续写第六步：优化细节，提升语言的丰富度
（一）续写第一段（侧重描写动作和人物做早餐的场景）
1. 他把这锅粥放在文火上，让杰夫看着煮15分钟。
______________________________________________________
(双连动词)
He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat,
____________________________________________________________
(非谓语动词作状语)
2. 看到他们失望的表情， 他建议他们把厨房打扫干净，而他帮助他们给妈妈做早餐。
He ______________________, and advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for mother.
______________________________, he advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother.
3. 很快厨房里弥漫着一股香味。
In a flash, ___________________________________________________.
4. 双胞胎准备浩早餐托盘，加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片，走出厨房。
The twins prepared the breakfast tray, __________
___________________, and stepped out of the kitchen.
5. 很快，一个精心设计的法式吐司和一碗粥就做好了。
（二）续写第二段：
6. 当他们的母亲看到眼前的美味的早餐，她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。
When their mother saw the delicious breakfast in front of her ,_______________________________________(无灵主语)
7. 她惊喜极了，于是兴奋地摇醒正在假装睡觉的父亲。
____________________________________that she excitedly shook father, who was pretending to be asleep.(so ...that ....结构)
满分结尾句
1. 詹娜与父亲目光相遇，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。
Jenna caught her father’s eyes and ____________________
续写最后一步：整理写作，认真誊写（书写至关重要！！！）
2021年惠州三模读后续写
Thomas watched the irrigation canal (灌溉渠) for a sign of water. It looked as dry as he felt inside. Thomas’s thoughts were interrupted as his younger sister, Maggie, came skipping across the field.
“What are you giving Mama for her birthday ” she asked.
Thomas felt his stomach turn. He had forgotten that Mama’s birthday, the first since they left their hometown, was tomorrow. “It’s a surprise, Maggie,” he answered. It was the truth. Even he would be surprised.
Thomas would wish to be back in the mountains of their hometown. Surely Mama would want the same.
At least it rained there. Each time it did, Mama, Thomas, and Maggie would sit on the front porch and watch for a rainbow. Then each of them picked out a favorite color in the rainbow. Mama always gave the same answer. “Turquoise (蓝绿色，绿松石),” she would finally say with a dreamy smile, pointing at the sky. “Squeezed in tight, between the blue and green. Close your eyes and you can see it. If you could touch it, it would feel cool, like a breeze blowing across the stream.”
Thomas was discouraged. The sun would be setting soon, and he still had nothing to give his mother. What he saw around were rocks and sand. He picked up a large, flat rock, scooped up the dirt and watched it fall to the ground. Suddenly, something caught his eye. A speck of color peeked through the dirt.
“Hey, what’s this ” he asked.
“Let’s find out,” Maggie yelled. Thomas and Maggie dug with their fingers and uncovered a small, round stone. In the center, there was a tiny hole.
“That’s just a turquoise bead (珠子),” Thomas exclaimed. “My friend Jack’s sister has a jar full of them.”
“Let’s see if there are more,” Maggie got excited.
注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
“I have an idea, Thomas said cheerfully.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table.
续写第一步：Read for the theme and five elements （主题和6要素）
Theme：________________
Who: _________________
What:_________________
When:_________________
Where:________________
Why:__________________
How：________________
续写第二步：Read for the plot and the emotion（情节和情感）
续写第三步：Character Analyst (人物性格分析)
Mom____________________________________________________
Thomas__________________________________________________
Maggie__________________________________________________
续写第四步：研究所给句子，推测新信息，合理提出续写情节推断续写框架。
TIP 1: 两段首句定一框 研究所给的开头句子，一般续写第一段的开头承上启下，具体写什么大多由第二段的开头决定
TIP2：提出问题链，回答构成情节
TIP3：两框两首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
TIP4：巧用动作为主线，借助心理描写，让续写内容生动形象化
大胆写吧
Para. 1:
“I have an idea,” Thomas said cheerfully.
Para. 2:
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table
续写第五步：优化细节 借鉴课本和名著仿写
第一段：
Our evidence suggests that they did wear clothes made from animal skins.We continue discovering tools that were sharpeners for other tool. It seems that they used the sharpened stone tools to cut up animals and remove their skin. Then smaller scrapers were probably used to remove the fat and meat from the skin. After that they would rub an ample amount of salt onto skin to make it soft. Finally, they would cut it and sew the pieces together. Quite a difficult and messy task. ( An excerpt from B8U5 “A Visit to the Zhoukoudian Caves)
仿写：
Suddenly she discovered, in a black satin box, a superb diamond necklace, and her heart throbbed with an immoderate desire. Her hands trembled as she took it. She fastened it round her throat, outside her high-necked waist, and was lost in ecstasy （狂喜，陶醉）at her reflection in the mirror.
…She threw her arms round her friend's neck, kissed her passionately, then fled with her treasure.（An excerpt from Maupassant’s“The Necklace”）
仿写第二段
续写最后一步：整理写作，认真誊写（Handwriting really counts!）
参考答案
A Mother’s Day Surprise
微技能参考答案：
He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, and asked Jeff to watch out for going for fifteen minutes.
Asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes.
Saw their disappointed face
Seeing their disappointed face
In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
Added a beautiful card they had made.
A spark of surprise flashed across her face.
Soon, a well-designed French toast and a bowl of porridge were ready.
An inviting smell of breakfast filled the air
An inviting smell of breakfast filling the air
The surprise was so sweet
So sweet was the surprise that she excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to be asleep.
He faked astonishment when he saw the breakfast.
They winked at each other secretly
With moved tears rolling down her cheeks
下水作文：（一）
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Realizing what they were preparing for, she was greatly surprised. So immediately he offered to get involved in the kid’s job. He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for 15 minutes. And then, he told Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, a sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was s success in the end.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, she heard “Happy Mother’s Day” from her kids with lovely breakfast before her. Behind the children was standing their father. To shed light on the surprise, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what had happened, she gazed at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks and hugged them tightly .
下水作文：（二）
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their crestfallen faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents’ bedroom.
The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling ‘Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy!’ Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked at each other secretly.
2021年惠州三模读后续写
参考范文1：
“I have an idea,” Thomas said cheerfully. “We can make a necklace for Mom.” In a second, the proposal found acceptance from Maggie. They continued the discovery by using sharpened stone to dug deeper for more beads. Then all the turquoise beads were selected. After that they rub those beads with a handkerchief to remove the dirt. Finally, they went back home to get colorful threads through the holes, which was quite a difficult and messy task! Tired as they were，they failed to sleep at the thought of Mom‘s response when receiving the gift.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table. When spreading breakfast, Mom suddenly noticed the package with a note: To Dear Mom. She unwrapped it and discovered a superb turquoise necklace with rainbow-colored threads. Her heart throbbed with an unexpected affection. Her hands trembled as she took it. “Happy Birthday, Mom” Maggie jumped over with her brother behind. They fastened it round her high-necked waist. Mom put her arms around the two children, closed her eyes, and felt the breeze blowing across the stream.
参考范文2：
“I have an idea,” Thomas said excitedly. They kept digging and found more beads. A while later, Thomas counted twenty-three beads. He put them in his shirt, holding up the front so he wouldn’t drop them. Then he carried them to the river, and Maggie helped him wash each one. Carefully, they dried and polished them with a handkerchief. “Mama will have a birthday present after all!” Thomas exclaimed. He seemed to see a necklace sparkling around his Mama’s neck and his Mama stroked it fondly.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table. “What’s this ” Mama was curious. As she unwrapped the small package, she gasped. “What a beautiful necklace!” she cried, pulling Thomas and Maggie close. “I can almost feel a cool breeze blowing across the stream.” Mama closed her eyes and smiled. “It smells like rain and I can see that turquoise in the most beautiful rainbow. Thank you, my dearest children.” Thomas felt good inside. Mama had her favourite turquoise!（Thomas felt good inside, as if a temporary moment back in the mountains of their hometown.）
评分原则：评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
（2）内容的丰富性（和对所标出关键词语的应用情况）；
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（4）上下文的连贯性。
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly "Grandpa, we are back! "
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly, "I can! " Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. ’They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up. This made them worried. "We’d think out a way to cheer him up. "Jack said. "Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird." Berlin suggested. "But he hates birds being caged!" Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. "Why not make a cane（拐杖）out of a young tree! "注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1: Berlin thought it was a good idea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2: Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane!
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond.He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, “You brothers are really great creators!” Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn't contain himself and went to the forest step by step. Watching the trees and grass around, he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest.
A Mother’s Day Surprise
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.
Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared.
Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
续写第一步：Read for the theme and five elements （主题和6要素）
Theme
When
Where
Who
What
Why
How
续写第二步：Read for the plot and the emotion（情节和情感）
续写第三步：Character Analyst (人物性格分析)
Mom____________________________________________________
Thomas__________________________________________________
Maggie__________________________________________________
续写第四步：研究所给句子，推测新信息，合理提出续写情节推断续写框架。
TIP 1: 两段首句定一框 研究所给的开头句子，一般续写第一段的开头承上启下，具体写什么大多由第二段的开头决定
Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared.
Questions 1:
2:
3:
...
TIP2：两框两首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Questions 1:
2:
3:
TIP3：提出问题链，借用回答构成情节
TIP4：寻找原文的续写点
TIP5：巧用动作为主线，借助心理描写，让续写内容生动形象化
细节积累：
1) 她的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
A bright smile crossed her face
2) 因为高兴双眼闪闪发亮。
Her eyes twinkled sparkled with pleasure.
3)看到早餐盘她眼睛都惊讶得睁大了。
Her eyes widened with surprise at the sight of the breakfast tray.
4）她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头， 泪流满面地微笑着。
She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
5）一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两个孩子。
A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two kids gently.
续写第五步：大胆下手写吧
Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared.
Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
续写第六步：优化细节，提升语言的丰富度
（一）续写第一段（侧重描写动作和人物做早餐的场景）
1. 他把这锅粥放在文火上，让杰夫看着煮15分钟。
______________________________________________________
(双连动词)
He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat,
____________________________________________________________
(非谓语动词作状语)
2. 看到他们失望的表情， 他建议他们把厨房打扫干净，而他帮助他们给妈妈做早餐。
He ______________________, and advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for mother.
______________________________, he advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother.
3. 很快厨房里弥漫着一股香味。
In a flash, ___________________________________________________.
4. 双胞胎准备浩早餐托盘，加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片，走出厨房。
The twins prepared the breakfast tray, __________
___________________, and stepped out of the kitchen.
5. 很快，一个精心设计的法式吐司和一碗粥就做好了。
（二）续写第二段：
6. 当他们的母亲看到眼前的美味的早餐，她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。
When their mother saw the delicious breakfast in front of her ,_______________________________________(无灵主语)
7. 她惊喜极了，于是兴奋地摇醒正在假装睡觉的父亲。
____________________________________that she excitedly shook father, who was pretending to be asleep.(so ...that ....结构)
满分结尾句
1. 詹娜与父亲目光相遇，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。
Jenna caught her father’s eyes and ____________________
续写最后一步：整理写作，认真誊写（书写至关重要！！！）
2021年惠州三模读后续写
Thomas watched the irrigation canal (灌溉渠) for a sign of water. It looked as dry as he felt inside. Thomas’s thoughts were interrupted as his younger sister, Maggie, came skipping across the field.
“What are you giving Mama for her birthday ” she asked.
Thomas felt his stomach turn. He had forgotten that Mama’s birthday, the first since they left their hometown, was tomorrow. “It’s a surprise, Maggie,” he answered. It was the truth. Even he would be surprised.
Thomas would wish to be back in the mountains of their hometown. Surely Mama would want the same.
At least it rained there. Each time it did, Mama, Thomas, and Maggie would sit on the front porch and watch for a rainbow. Then each of them picked out a favorite color in the rainbow. Mama always gave the same answer. “Turquoise (蓝绿色，绿松石),” she would finally say with a dreamy smile, pointing at the sky. “Squeezed in tight, between the blue and green. Close your eyes and you can see it. If you could touch it, it would feel cool, like a breeze blowing across the stream.”
Thomas was discouraged. The sun would be setting soon, and he still had nothing to give his mother. What he saw around were rocks and sand. He picked up a large, flat rock, scooped up the dirt and watched it fall to the ground. Suddenly, something caught his eye. A speck of color peeked through the dirt.
“Hey, what’s this ” he asked.
“Let’s find out,” Maggie yelled. Thomas and Maggie dug with their fingers and uncovered a small, round stone. In the center, there was a tiny hole.
“That’s just a turquoise bead (珠子),” Thomas exclaimed. “My friend Jack’s sister has a jar full of them.”
“Let’s see if there are more,” Maggie got excited.
注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
“I have an idea, Thomas said cheerfully.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table.
续写第一步：Read for the theme and five elements （主题和6要素）
Theme：________________
Who: _________________
What:_________________
When:_________________
Where:________________
Why:__________________
How：________________
续写第二步：Read for the plot and the emotion（情节和情感）
续写第三步：Character Analyst (人物性格分析)
Mom____________________________________________________
Thomas__________________________________________________
Maggie__________________________________________________
续写第四步：研究所给句子，推测新信息，合理提出续写情节推断续写框架。
TIP 1: 两段首句定一框 研究所给的开头句子，一般续写第一段的开头承上启下，具体写什么大多由第二段的开头决定
TIP2：提出问题链，回答构成情节
TIP3：两框两首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
TIP4：巧用动作为主线，借助心理描写，让续写内容生动形象化
大胆写吧
Para. 1:
“I have an idea,” Thomas said cheerfully.
Para. 2:
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table
续写第五步：优化细节 借鉴课本和名著仿写
第一段：
Our evidence suggests that they did wear clothes made from animal skins.We continue discovering tools that were sharpeners for other tool. It seems that they used the sharpened stone tools to cut up animals and remove their skin. Then smaller scrapers were probably used to remove the fat and meat from the skin. After that they would rub an ample amount of salt onto skin to make it soft. Finally, they would cut it and sew the pieces together. Quite a difficult and messy task. ( An excerpt from B8U5 “A Visit to the Zhoukoudian Caves)
仿写：
Suddenly she discovered, in a black satin box, a superb diamond necklace, and her heart throbbed with an immoderate desire. Her hands trembled as she took it. She fastened it round her throat, outside her high-necked waist, and was lost in ecstasy （狂喜，陶醉）at her reflection in the mirror.
…She threw her arms round her friend's neck, kissed her passionately, then fled with her treasure.（An excerpt from Maupassant’s“The Necklace”）
仿写第二段
续写最后一步：整理写作，认真誊写（Handwriting really counts!）
参考答案
A Mother’s Day Surprise
微技能参考答案：
He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, and asked Jeff to watch out for going for fifteen minutes.
Asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes.
Saw their disappointed face
Seeing their disappointed face
In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
Added a beautiful card they had made.
A spark of surprise flashed across her face.
Soon, a well-designed French toast and a bowl of porridge were ready.
An inviting smell of breakfast filled the air
An inviting smell of breakfast filling the air
The surprise was so sweet
So sweet was the surprise that she excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to be asleep.
He faked astonishment when he saw the breakfast.
They winked at each other secretly
With moved tears rolling down her cheeks
下水作文：（一）
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Realizing what they were preparing for, she was greatly surprised. So immediately he offered to get involved in the kid’s job. He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for 15 minutes. And then, he told Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, a sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was s success in the end.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, she heard “Happy Mother’s Day” from her kids with lovely breakfast before her. Behind the children was standing their father. To shed light on the surprise, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what had happened, she gazed at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks and hugged them tightly .
下水作文：（二）
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their crestfallen faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents’ bedroom.
The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling ‘Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy!’ Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked at each other secretly.
2021年惠州三模读后续写
参考范文1：
“I have an idea,” Thomas said cheerfully. “We can make a necklace for Mom.” In a second, the proposal found acceptance from Maggie. They continued the discovery by using sharpened stone to dug deeper for more beads. Then all the turquoise beads were selected. After that they rub those beads with a handkerchief to remove the dirt. Finally, they went back home to get colorful threads through the holes, which was quite a difficult and messy task! Tired as they were，they failed to sleep at the thought of Mom‘s response when receiving the gift.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table. When spreading breakfast, Mom suddenly noticed the package with a note: To Dear Mom. She unwrapped it and discovered a superb turquoise necklace with rainbow-colored threads. Her heart throbbed with an unexpected affection. Her hands trembled as she took it. “Happy Birthday, Mom” Maggie jumped over with her brother behind. They fastened it round her high-necked waist. Mom put her arms around the two children, closed her eyes, and felt the breeze blowing across the stream.
参考范文2：
“I have an idea,” Thomas said excitedly. They kept digging and found more beads. A while later, Thomas counted twenty-three beads. He put them in his shirt, holding up the front so he wouldn’t drop them. Then he carried them to the river, and Maggie helped him wash each one. Carefully, they dried and polished them with a handkerchief. “Mama will have a birthday present after all!” Thomas exclaimed. He seemed to see a necklace sparkling around his Mama’s neck and his Mama stroked it fondly.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table. “What’s this ” Mama was curious. As she unwrapped the small package, she gasped. “What a beautiful necklace!” she cried, pulling Thomas and Maggie close. “I can almost feel a cool breeze blowing across the stream.” Mama closed her eyes and smiled. “It smells like rain and I can see that turquoise in the most beautiful rainbow. Thank you, my dearest children.” Thomas felt good inside. Mama had her favourite turquoise!（Thomas felt good inside, as if a temporary moment back in the mountains of their hometown.）
评分原则：评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
（2）内容的丰富性（和对所标出关键词语的应用情况）；
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（4）上下文的连贯性。
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly "Grandpa, we are back! "
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly, "I can! " Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. ’They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up. This made them worried. "We’d think out a way to cheer him up. "Jack said. "Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird." Berlin suggested. "But he hates birds being caged!" Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. "Why not make a cane（拐杖）out of a young tree! "注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1: Berlin thought it was a good idea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2: Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane!
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond.He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, “You brothers are really great creators!” Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn't contain himself and went to the forest step by step. Watching the trees and grass around, he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest.