课件36张PPT。Unit2 Healthy eatingBasic WritingRound1(第一轮)竞赛规则
全班分四组:奔奔队,跑跑队,家家队,族族队
选择明星队长,并完成队长布置任务,即可获得相应分数,分数高的将在本轮获胜。
注意:组内每人限答一题!Competition!Competition!Choose your captain! 选队长吧!1. 健康(1分)
n. _________
adj. _________ healthhealthy2.再好不过了。(2分)
_________________________________________ Nothing could be better.3. 我不会允许你再次迟到却逃脱惩罚。(3分)
(can/could/will not have sb doing, get away with) _________________________________________
_________________________________________
I won’t have you getting away with getting late again.1. 平衡膳食(1分)
________________________balanced diet2. 强项和缺点(2分)
________________________3. He did not look forward to being in debt.
His restaurant was no longer popular.
(合成一句话,tips:because引导原因状语从句) (3分) __________________________________________________________________________________He did not look forward to being in debt because his restaurant was no longer popular.strengths and weaknesses1. 减肥(1分)
_______________________2. 劳(study)逸(exercise)结合(2分)
_________________________lose weightcombine study with exercise3. 我们很有必要学会应对压力。 (3分)
(It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.)
_______________________________________
________________It’s necessary/essential for us to learn how to deal with stress. 1. 应当,应该(1分)
________________2. 权衡利弊(2分)
__________________________________________ought tobalance the advantages against the disadvantages3. 这部电影那么有趣,我们大多数人都已看过两遍。(3分)
(so…that …)
_________________________________________________The film is so interesting that most of us have seen it twice.An article consists of many _______, and a sentence is made of ______.各位童鞋,你们词汇量有多少啊?句式灵活度呢?Running Lansentenceswords 1.短文改错 10分
2.书面表达 25分 高考写作:Round2(第二轮)竞赛规则
本轮有三道问答题,抢答开始命令下发后,最先
举手的小组获得回答机会,回答完整正确获得相应
分数。
Competition!Task 1回忆基础写作的评分标准,针对哪三方面?
(说出一点得1分,共3分)
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
correctness completeness coherence
正确性 完整性 连贯性Task 2如何做到句式灵活,可以用什么结构或句式?(说一点得1分)
1. 并列句
2. 复合句 (定语从句,
状语从句,名词 性从句等)
3. 非谓语动词
4. 强调句型
5. with复合结构等
其他句型及结构
Tips:趋利避害简单句基本句型
主语+系动词+表语(SVP)
主语+动词(SV)
主语+动词+宾语(SVO)
主语+动词+间接宾语+直接宾语(SVOO)
主语+动词+宾语+宾语补足语(SVOC)Task 3回忆基础写作的写作步骤主要包括哪六步?
(说出一点得1分,共6分)
1.【审题】
2.【整合信息】
3.【确定短语句型】
4.【连词成句】
5.【连句成篇】
6.【检查修改】
最近你们班进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。请根据下表内容介绍这次讨论的情况。【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部内容。一、审题
文体:议论文
人称:
时态:
第一或第三人称一般过去时和一般现在时二、整合信息(5句话)【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部内容。信息整合后为:
(1)上周五下午,我们全班同学在教室里进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。
(2)健康是由于有强壮的身体,也就是说,多运动。
(3)关注健康饮食。
(4)保持心理上的健康,身心健康才是真正的健康;
(5)有积极乐观的态度,学会应对压力和适时进行自我放松。三、确定短语have a discussion about…that is to saypay attention tomentally and physically healthydeal with stressrelax oneselfattitude(towards)due to四连词成句1. 上周五下午,我们全班同学在教室里进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。___________afternoon, our class _________________health in the classroom.had a discussion about Last Friday 2.健康是由于有强壮的身体,也就是说,多运动。Health is ________ strong body, ____________, much exercise.due tothat is to say3.关注健康饮食。
(It’s suggested that…)We should _____________ having a healthy diet.谁关注?缺主语It’s suggested that _______________________________________.pay attention to we should pay attention to having a healthy diet4.保持心理上的健康(也是很重要的),身心健康才是真正的健康 。___________________is also very important, ________being healthy in mind and body is true health.多少句话?关系?Being mentally healthybecause5.(我们要)有积极乐观的态度,知道如何学会应对压力和进行自我放松。
(It’s adj. for us to do)We must have_______________, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.It’s ___________to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.a positive attitudeessential for us
Last Friday afternoon, our class had a discussion about health in the classroom.
Health is due to strong body, that is to say, much exercise.
It’s suggested that we should pay attention to having a healthy diet.
Being mentally healthy is also very important, because being healthy in mind and body is true health.
It’s essential for us to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.
Is it a good paragraph?Task 4请问如何使文章具有连贯性?(1分)
恰当使用连接词A、表并列:
B、表转折:
C、表原因:
D、表结果:
E、表列举等:如何使文章连贯and, also, besides=in addition(而且)=
What’s more, or(或者/否则)...but, however, yet…because, because of, due to…so, therefore, as a result…such as, for example, like…
Last Friday afternoon, our class had a discussion about health in the classroom.
health is due to strong body, that is to say, much exercise.
1.________, it’s suggested that we should pay attention to having a healthy diet. 2.______________, being mentally healthy is also very important, because being healthy in mind and body is true health. 3.__________, it’s essential for us to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.
如何使文章连贯?According to some students,BesidesWhat’s moreTherefore五、连句成篇
四人一组,完成写作任务,每人扮演重要角色如下:Role 1:Leader(领导者,分配任务)
Role 2: Grammarian(语法大师,检查句法)
Role 3: Coherence Master(流畅大师,连句成篇)
Role 4: Presenter(展示者将展示作品)
用时:10分钟
Tips:分工每人至少写一句
你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访:[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性和连贯性。Last Thursday, I had an interview with Miss Liu, a PE teacher in our school, concerning the health issues of middle school students. According to Miss Liu, more and more students are getting overweight in recent years and there is also a decline in their physical strength. She also pointed out that the stress from study make them have less sport time. She suggested that teachers should assign a proper amount of homework and at the same time, school should improve their sports facilities. She particularly reminded us that it is important to keep a balance between study and exercise. Sample:在…方面逐渐衰弱(或败落)
?人口减少decline in populationSummary1. 注意体裁,_________和__________。
2. 避免逐词翻译,要用较好的__________________提升写作水平。
3. 句与句间添加___________使文章更加连贯。时态人称词语和句式连词Homework写一篇短文:
学考评价阶段检测卷(二)
书面表达P52
周三早读前收齐下期见!He had plenty of money and he spent it freely.
他有很多的钱。他花钱很随意。This is the school in which I once studied.
这是我曾经读过书的学校。Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant feeling very frustrated.
王鹏坐在他那空荡荡的餐馆里,感到十分沮丧。It is the English teacher that/who we like best.
英语老师是我们最喜欢的老师。Her father went out with his cap on.
她父亲戴着帽子出去了。