浙江2025首考读后续写 Kevin勇寻真相并学会理解与共情的重要性（讲义）-2025届高三英语复习
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2025年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试 英语（浙江2025首考）
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door(定从). His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy(非谓语动词做目的状语). He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things(状从). Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there(主从). Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police(动作串).
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted(宾从) before the police arrived(状从), Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree(非谓语动词做伴随动作), he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy(状从) he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out(动作串). Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing(宾从). “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing(系动词，主动表被动).
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
1. 续写分析与构思框架表
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
类型 叙事类（Narrative Writing）：涉及动作描写、心理冲突、情感转折及解决问题。 Kevin decided to do something.
构思思路 1. 分析事件发展线索，明确冲突与解决方案。
2. 承接原文心理、情节，设计合理过渡。
3. 加强人物情感和动机的描写，让故事更生动。 Kevin wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
框架布局 第一段：Kevin与Green夫妇的对话，核实事件真相，突出情感转折。
第二段：Kevin与Green先生共同处理手表问题，解决事件并升华主题。 Kevin went to talk to them.
原文承接事项 1. 衔接人物逻辑和心理变化，注意与原文的情感基调一致。
2. 事件发展合理连贯，避免硬转折。
3. 语言风格需保持与原文一致，注意词汇和句式衔接。 Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
整体注意事项 1. 注意人物行为动机合理性，避免突兀。
2. 适当加入心理描写，增加情节张力。
3. 突出情感转折与主题升华。 Kevin thought to himself, "What if he has told the truth "
续写设计技巧 1. 巧用细节描写（心理、动作、环境），增强画面感。
2. 利用反问句和感叹句，深化人物情感。
3. 设计意料之外但情理之中的情节，让故事更具吸引力。 “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out.
2. Story Mountain 思维导图分析
起点（Introduction）: Kevin无聊但注意到异常活动。
发展（Rising Action）: Kevin目击可疑男人闯入，并主动报警。
高潮（Climax）: Kevin confronts the man, leading to police involvement.
下降（Falling Action）: Kevin开始怀疑是否误会了男人的动机。
结局（Resolution）: Kevin通过与Green夫妇的对话解开误会，并完成对事件的处理。
3. 续写与原文衔接点分析表
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
情感层次 Kevin从兴奋、紧张到怀疑，情绪层层递进。 Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen.
关键情节点 1. Kevin目击男子闯入。
2. Kevin决定采取行动。
3. Kevin质疑男子动机，最终与Green夫妇核实。 Thinking that the man might get away… Kevin decided to do something.
心理描写 描写Kevin面对危险的勇气、行动后的疑惑，以及最终的释然。 Kevin wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
动作描写 Kevin报警、拿树枝对峙男子、向警察汇报情况等细节动作。 Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window.
环境描写 描写Mrs. Hill的窗外景象，以及Green家屋内细节，烘托紧张气氛。 Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street.
情感转折 1. Kevin对事件的兴奋到紧张。
2. Kevin对事件的判断从自信到怀疑。 Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
隐含主题 勇敢与正义感，以及对事情真相的探索。 “What if he has told the truth ”
伏笔 男子试图撬开地板寻找父亲的手表。 “My father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
冲突点 Kevin与男子的对峙，以及Kevin内心对真相的质疑。 The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief.
解决方案 Kevin与Green夫妇对话核实事件，携手表到警局处理问题。 Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
4. 推荐情景语料
动作描写
He clenched his fists, his knuckles turning white.
She tiptoed across the room, her breath held.
He darted forward, grabbing the object with both hands.
She froze in place, unable to move a muscle.
He turned his head sharply, his eyes scanning the room.
She leaned against the wall, her hands trembling.
He reached out, his fingers brushing against the cold surface.
She stood rooted to the spot, her heart pounding in her chest.
心理描写
A thousand thoughts raced through his mind.
She couldn’t shake off the nagging feeling of unease.
He felt a surge of determination welling up inside him.
Doubts crept into her mind like unwelcome guests.
His heart sank at the thought of what might happen.
She was torn between fear and curiosity.
Relief washed over him like a tidal wave.
A flicker of hope ignited in her chest.
环境描写
The room was dimly lit, with shadows dancing on the walls.
A cold wind whistled through the cracks in the window.
The street outside was eerily silent, except for the rustle of leaves.
The faint smell of dust and old wood filled the air.
The moonlight cast a silver glow over the deserted house.
The distant sound of a train echoed in the night.
Raindrops pattered against the windowpane, creating a soothing rhythm.
The morning sun bathed the room in a warm, golden light.
高级替换词分类
场景 常用词 高级替换词
情感 Happy Elated, Jubilant
Sad Melancholy, Sorrowful
行动 Run Sprint, Dash
Look Glance, Gaze
环境 Dark Gloomy, Dim
5. 语法与搭配分析
单词短语 词意 词性 近义词 反义词 例句
Grab 抓住 动词 Seize, Snatch Release He grabbed the branch tightly as he jumped through the window.
Freeze 僵住 动词 Stop, Halt Move, Continue She froze in fear when she heard the footsteps.
Convincing 令人信服的 形容词 Persuasive, Plausible Unconvincing His explanation sounded convincing, but Kevin still had doubts.
Pursue 追逐 动词 Chase, Follow Abandon, Ignore The police pursued the man until he was caught.
Relief 宽慰 名词 Comfort, Reassurance Anxiety, Distress A sense of relief washed over Kevin when he saw the police arrive.
Possible Versions
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened(定从), from noticing the man breaking into their house to his decision to confront him. Mr. Green listened attentively, his brows furrowing in concern(独立主格). "That’s unusual," he said, "but we haven’t lived here long, so we know little about the previous owner." Mrs. Green chimed in(vi.插嘴，加入谈话), mentioning an old box(非谓语动词做伴随动作) left behind in the attic(非谓语动词做后置定语). Kevin's curiosity piqued(独立主格), together they ventured into the attic to search. Dust filled the air as they carefully opened the box(状从), revealing an old photograph of a family, a few letters(非谓语动词做结果状语), and, astonishingly, a gold watch. Kevin felt a strange mixture of relief and guilt, wondering(非谓语动词做伴随动作) whether he had misunderstood the man’s intentions(宾从).
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The officer on duty(介词短语做后置) confirmed the man’s story, explaining he had lost contact with his parents years ago and had been searching for the watch as a reminder(宾从). Kevin apologized for his earlier actions, and the officer reassured him that calling the police was the right decision(宾从). Mr. Green, moved by the story(非谓语动词做原因状语), decided to return the watch to the man, offering him tea and a chance to share his memories(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The man’s gratitude was evident, and Kevin learned a valuable lesson about empathy and understanding. As they walked home(状从), Kevin felt a sense of pride—despite the misunderstanding, he had acted with courage and responsibility, proving that doing the right thing could lead to meaningful connections(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. With nervous hesitation, he recounted the events of the day, highlighting the man’s strange behavior and his own uncertainty(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Mr. Green exchanged a knowing glance with his wife. “It seems like he might have been telling the truth(宾从),” he said, pulling out a faded deed document(非谓语动词做伴随动作). It turned out the house had once belonged to an older couple(宾从), now deceased(adj做补语). Intrigued(adj做状语), Kevin suggested they check the area(宾从) where the man had tried to lift the floorboard(定从). They carefully removed the board and discovered a small metal box hidden underneath(非谓语动词做后置定语). Inside was a rusted watch along with a note(倒装句) explaining its sentimental value to the previous owners(非谓语动词做后置定语). Kevin’s heart sank, but Mr. Green reassured him that he had acted bravely(宾从).
Paragraph 2:Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The man, who had been released after questioning(定从), was waiting there, hopeful(adj.做状语或补语). When he saw the watch(状从), his eyes filled with tears. “This belonged to my father,” he whispered, clutching it tightly(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Kevin apologized for the misunderstanding, and the man nodded with a faint smile, expressing his gratitude(非谓语动词做伴随动作). On their way home, Mr. Green placed a hand on Kevin’s shoulder, commending his quick thinking and sense of justice(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The experience taught Kevin that courage wasn’t just about taking risks; it was about standing up for what was right(宾从), even when faced with doubt(状从省略). Though the day had been chaotic(状从), it ended on a note of mutual understanding and newfound respect.
亮点语法及分析
1. 定语从句
Kevin explained everything that had happened, from noticing the man breaking into their house to his decision to confront him.
搭配: "Explain everything that…"
近义替换: Describe what had happened.
例句: He shared the details that he had observed during the incident.
2. 状语从句
Kevin felt a wave of mixed emotions—relief that he had uncovered the truth and guilt for doubting the man’s intentions.
搭配: "Relief that…"
近义替换: Satisfaction knowing…
3. 被动语态
The watch they had found was taken to the police station.
搭配: "Was taken to…"
例句: The documents were delivered to the authorities on time.
亮点词汇与短语
情绪描写
Mixed emotions: relief, guilt, anxiety, hope
Heart sank, eyes widened, tears filled his eyes
动作描写
Carefully removed the board
Clutched it tightly
Placed a hand on his shoulder
升级词汇替换表
普通词 升级词 联想词 例句
Think Contemplate Reflect, Consider He contemplated the man’s explanation carefully before deciding.
Say Remark State, Declare “It seems he was telling the truth,” Mr. Green remarked.
Brave Courageous Fearless, Bold Kevin’s courageous actions proved his sense of justice.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door(定从). His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy(非谓语动词做目的状语). He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things(状从). Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there(主从). Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police(动作串).
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted(宾从) before the police arrived(状从), Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree(非谓语动词做伴随动作), he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy(状从) he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out(动作串). Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing(宾从). “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing(系动词，主动表被动).
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
1. 续写分析与构思框架表
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
类型 叙事类（Narrative Writing）：涉及动作描写、心理冲突、情感转折及解决问题。 Kevin decided to do something.
构思思路 1. 分析事件发展线索，明确冲突与解决方案。
2. 承接原文心理、情节，设计合理过渡。
3. 加强人物情感和动机的描写，让故事更生动。 Kevin wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
框架布局 第一段：Kevin与Green夫妇的对话，核实事件真相，突出情感转折。
第二段：Kevin与Green先生共同处理手表问题，解决事件并升华主题。 Kevin went to talk to them.
原文承接事项 1. 衔接人物逻辑和心理变化，注意与原文的情感基调一致。
2. 事件发展合理连贯，避免硬转折。
3. 语言风格需保持与原文一致，注意词汇和句式衔接。 Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
整体注意事项 1. 注意人物行为动机合理性，避免突兀。
2. 适当加入心理描写，增加情节张力。
3. 突出情感转折与主题升华。 Kevin thought to himself, "What if he has told the truth "
续写设计技巧 1. 巧用细节描写（心理、动作、环境），增强画面感。
2. 利用反问句和感叹句，深化人物情感。
3. 设计意料之外但情理之中的情节，让故事更具吸引力。 “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out.
2. Story Mountain 思维导图分析
起点（Introduction）: Kevin无聊但注意到异常活动。
发展（Rising Action）: Kevin目击可疑男人闯入，并主动报警。
高潮（Climax）: Kevin confronts the man, leading to police involvement.
下降（Falling Action）: Kevin开始怀疑是否误会了男人的动机。
结局（Resolution）: Kevin通过与Green夫妇的对话解开误会，并完成对事件的处理。
3. 续写与原文衔接点分析表
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
情感层次 Kevin从兴奋、紧张到怀疑，情绪层层递进。 Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen.
关键情节点 1. Kevin目击男子闯入。
2. Kevin决定采取行动。
3. Kevin质疑男子动机，最终与Green夫妇核实。 Thinking that the man might get away… Kevin decided to do something.
心理描写 描写Kevin面对危险的勇气、行动后的疑惑，以及最终的释然。 Kevin wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
动作描写 Kevin报警、拿树枝对峙男子、向警察汇报情况等细节动作。 Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window.
环境描写 描写Mrs. Hill的窗外景象，以及Green家屋内细节，烘托紧张气氛。 Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street.
情感转折 1. Kevin对事件的兴奋到紧张。
2. Kevin对事件的判断从自信到怀疑。 Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
隐含主题 勇敢与正义感，以及对事情真相的探索。 “What if he has told the truth ”
伏笔 男子试图撬开地板寻找父亲的手表。 “My father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
冲突点 Kevin与男子的对峙，以及Kevin内心对真相的质疑。 The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief.
解决方案 Kevin与Green夫妇对话核实事件，携手表到警局处理问题。 Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
4. 推荐情景语料
动作描写
He clenched his fists, his knuckles turning white.
She tiptoed across the room, her breath held.
He darted forward, grabbing the object with both hands.
She froze in place, unable to move a muscle.
He turned his head sharply, his eyes scanning the room.
She leaned against the wall, her hands trembling.
He reached out, his fingers brushing against the cold surface.
She stood rooted to the spot, her heart pounding in her chest.
心理描写
A thousand thoughts raced through his mind.
She couldn’t shake off the nagging feeling of unease.
He felt a surge of determination welling up inside him.
Doubts crept into her mind like unwelcome guests.
His heart sank at the thought of what might happen.
She was torn between fear and curiosity.
Relief washed over him like a tidal wave.
A flicker of hope ignited in her chest.
环境描写
The room was dimly lit, with shadows dancing on the walls.
A cold wind whistled through the cracks in the window.
The street outside was eerily silent, except for the rustle of leaves.
The faint smell of dust and old wood filled the air.
The moonlight cast a silver glow over the deserted house.
The distant sound of a train echoed in the night.
Raindrops pattered against the windowpane, creating a soothing rhythm.
The morning sun bathed the room in a warm, golden light.
高级替换词分类
场景 常用词 高级替换词
情感 Happy Elated, Jubilant
Sad Melancholy, Sorrowful
行动 Run Sprint, Dash
Look Glance, Gaze
环境 Dark Gloomy, Dim
5. 语法与搭配分析
单词短语 词意 词性 近义词 反义词 例句
Grab 抓住 动词 Seize, Snatch Release He grabbed the branch tightly as he jumped through the window.
Freeze 僵住 动词 Stop, Halt Move, Continue She froze in fear when she heard the footsteps.
Convincing 令人信服的 形容词 Persuasive, Plausible Unconvincing His explanation sounded convincing, but Kevin still had doubts.
Pursue 追逐 动词 Chase, Follow Abandon, Ignore The police pursued the man until he was caught.
Relief 宽慰 名词 Comfort, Reassurance Anxiety, Distress A sense of relief washed over Kevin when he saw the police arrive.
Possible Versions
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened(定从), from noticing the man breaking into their house to his decision to confront him. Mr. Green listened attentively, his brows furrowing in concern(独立主格). "That’s unusual," he said, "but we haven’t lived here long, so we know little about the previous owner." Mrs. Green chimed in(vi.插嘴，加入谈话), mentioning an old box(非谓语动词做伴随动作) left behind in the attic(非谓语动词做后置定语). Kevin's curiosity piqued(独立主格), together they ventured into the attic to search. Dust filled the air as they carefully opened the box(状从), revealing an old photograph of a family, a few letters(非谓语动词做结果状语), and, astonishingly, a gold watch. Kevin felt a strange mixture of relief and guilt, wondering(非谓语动词做伴随动作) whether he had misunderstood the man’s intentions(宾从).
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The officer on duty(介词短语做后置) confirmed the man’s story, explaining he had lost contact with his parents years ago and had been searching for the watch as a reminder(宾从). Kevin apologized for his earlier actions, and the officer reassured him that calling the police was the right decision(宾从). Mr. Green, moved by the story(非谓语动词做原因状语), decided to return the watch to the man, offering him tea and a chance to share his memories(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The man’s gratitude was evident, and Kevin learned a valuable lesson about empathy and understanding. As they walked home(状从), Kevin felt a sense of pride—despite the misunderstanding, he had acted with courage and responsibility, proving that doing the right thing could lead to meaningful connections(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. With nervous hesitation, he recounted the events of the day, highlighting the man’s strange behavior and his own uncertainty(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Mr. Green exchanged a knowing glance with his wife. “It seems like he might have been telling the truth(宾从),” he said, pulling out a faded deed document(非谓语动词做伴随动作). It turned out the house had once belonged to an older couple(宾从), now deceased(adj做补语). Intrigued(adj做状语), Kevin suggested they check the area(宾从) where the man had tried to lift the floorboard(定从). They carefully removed the board and discovered a small metal box hidden underneath(非谓语动词做后置定语). Inside was a rusted watch along with a note(倒装句) explaining its sentimental value to the previous owners(非谓语动词做后置定语). Kevin’s heart sank, but Mr. Green reassured him that he had acted bravely(宾从).
Paragraph 2:Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The man, who had been released after questioning(定从), was waiting there, hopeful(adj.做状语或补语). When he saw the watch(状从), his eyes filled with tears. “This belonged to my father,” he whispered, clutching it tightly(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Kevin apologized for the misunderstanding, and the man nodded with a faint smile, expressing his gratitude(非谓语动词做伴随动作). On their way home, Mr. Green placed a hand on Kevin’s shoulder, commending his quick thinking and sense of justice(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The experience taught Kevin that courage wasn’t just about taking risks; it was about standing up for what was right(宾从), even when faced with doubt(状从省略). Though the day had been chaotic(状从), it ended on a note of mutual understanding and newfound respect.
亮点语法及分析
1. 定语从句
Kevin explained everything that had happened, from noticing the man breaking into their house to his decision to confront him.
搭配: "Explain everything that…"
近义替换: Describe what had happened.
例句: He shared the details that he had observed during the incident.
2. 状语从句
Kevin felt a wave of mixed emotions—relief that he had uncovered the truth and guilt for doubting the man’s intentions.
搭配: "Relief that…"
近义替换: Satisfaction knowing…
3. 被动语态
The watch they had found was taken to the police station.
搭配: "Was taken to…"
例句: The documents were delivered to the authorities on time.
亮点词汇与短语
情绪描写
Mixed emotions: relief, guilt, anxiety, hope
Heart sank, eyes widened, tears filled his eyes
动作描写
Carefully removed the board
Clutched it tightly
Placed a hand on his shoulder
升级词汇替换表
普通词 升级词 联想词 例句
Think Contemplate Reflect, Consider He contemplated the man’s explanation carefully before deciding.
Say Remark State, Declare “It seems he was telling the truth,” Mr. Green remarked.
Brave Courageous Fearless, Bold Kevin’s courageous actions proved his sense of justice.