山东省潍坊市2024~2025学年高三上学期期末监测英语试题读后续写--圣诞创意美食+讲义

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It was the third week of December, but 1 couldn't even consider Christmas, because this year I didn't know how to celebrate it. A month ago, our doctor informed that my two-year-old son suffered from celiac disease (麸质过敏症). Any exposure to flour, milk, soy, or corn (even a single bite) would cause the little boy to be in a miserable situation for the next week.
Having a child of food sensitivities, I felt awkward buying stuffs not causing allergic (过敏的) reactions for the Christmas cookies. But it wasn't the lack of cookies, parties or stuffing themselves that bothered me- -it was the lack of tradition, which, as a child, I looked forward to. What could 1 give to my children What was Christmas going to look like for our family
I bought lots of stuffs including almond milk (牛奶替代品), allergic-free chocolate chips, potatoes and so on. By the time I got back to my car after shopping, it had started snowing. First heavy snow of the season. These magical holiday bits and pieces felt like they would just float by us this year, maybe forever. I cried my way home.
My three and-a-half-year old daughter was shouting when I walked in the door. “Mama, look at the snow. It's snowing outside and everywhere!” Her excitement spilled over until we had her and her brother dressed warmly and ready to play in snow on the ground. My husband took them out while I made dinner.
Watching them playing with rosy cheeks and runny noses through the kitchen window, I suddenly remembered my creative mum who had recently made mashed (捣碎的) potatoes with almond milk, and I remembered they tasted normal.
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第一段：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me.
第二段：My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ”
一、文章大意
文章讲述了作者因两岁儿子患有麸质过敏症，在圣诞节来临之际，为如何庆祝而发愁。传统的圣诞美食因食材过敏无法制作，这让作者深感缺乏节日传统的困扰。购物回家后，看到下雪孩子们兴奋玩耍，作者受母亲用杏仁奶做土豆泥的启发，决定利用购买的无过敏食材创造新的圣诞传统。她在厨房制作了用杏仁奶和无过敏巧克力豆的土豆泥饼干。丈夫对作者制作的无过敏热巧克力感到惊喜，一家人围坐享受美食，充满欢乐，作者也体会到了不同以往却充满爱的圣诞节。
二、故事山分析
开端：儿子被诊断出麸质过敏症，作者不知如何庆祝圣诞节，因为传统圣诞美食无法制作，内心充满困扰与失落。
发展：作者购买无过敏食材，回家途中下雪，看到孩子们兴奋玩耍，回忆起母亲用杏仁奶做土豆泥的事。
高潮：作者受到启发，在厨房制作无过敏的土豆泥饼干和热巧克力。
结局：丈夫和孩子们对美食感到惊喜，一家人围坐享受，作者感受到充满爱与创意的圣诞节，收获喜悦和满足。
三、伏笔以及在续写中的回应
“A month ago, our doctor informed that my two - year - old son suffered from celiac disease.” 伏笔：儿子的过敏症为后续无法制作传统圣诞美食以及寻找新方式做铺垫。回应：在续写中作者利用无过敏食材制作美食，解决了儿子饮食过敏的问题。
“I bought lots of stuffs including almond milk, allergic - free chocolate chips, potatoes and so on.” 伏笔：购买的食材暗示了作者之后会用这些食材创造新的圣诞美食。回应：作者用杏仁奶制作土豆泥饼干，用无过敏巧克力豆增添风味。
“My three - and - a - half - year - old daughter was shouting when I walked in the door. ‘Mama, look at the snow. It's snowing outside and everywhere!’” 伏笔：孩子对雪的兴奋营造出欢乐氛围，为作者转变心情做铺垫。回应：作者在这种欢乐氛围的感染下，受到启发创造新的圣诞传统，让家庭充满欢乐。
“My husband took them out while I made dinner.” 伏笔：为作者在厨房独自思考和创作新美食提供时间和空间。回应：作者在厨房成功制作出无过敏的饼干和热巧克力。
“I suddenly remembered my creative mum who had recently made mashed potatoes with almond milk, and I remembered they tasted normal.” 伏笔：母亲的创意做法为作者提供灵感。回应：作者受此启发，制作出以杏仁奶为原料的土豆泥饼干。
四、续写要点（两段）
第一段要点：
详细描述作者制作土豆泥饼干的过程，如食材的准备、搅拌的动作、烤制的时间和温度等。
强调作者在制作过程中的心情变化，从最初的迷茫到逐渐充满希望和期待。
通过对厨房环境的描写，如热气腾腾的烤箱、飘散的香气等，营造温馨的氛围。
第二段要点：
描写家人品尝饼干和热巧克力时的反应，如孩子们的欢呼、丈夫的夸赞等。
讲述一家人围坐在一起聊天的内容，增进家庭情感的交流。
表达作者对这个特殊圣诞节的感悟，以及新传统对家庭的意义。
五、情感线
故事伊始，作者因儿子的过敏症，对圣诞节的庆祝充满焦虑与无奈，觉得传统节日氛围将不复存在。随着下雪孩子们的兴奋，作者心情有所转变。受母亲做法启发，在厨房创作新美食时，作者逐渐燃起希望，期待能为家人带来特别的圣诞节。当丈夫和孩子们对美食表现出惊喜和喜爱，一家人围坐享受时，作者的情感达到高潮，充满喜悦、满足与对家庭的热爱，深刻体会到爱能战胜困难，创造新的美好回忆。
六、故事线
儿子确诊过敏症，家庭面临圣诞节庆祝难题。
作者购买无过敏食材，心情低落。
下雪，孩子们兴奋玩耍，作者受启发。
作者在厨房制作无过敏的土豆泥饼干和热巧克力。
丈夫和孩子们对美食感到惊喜。
一家人围坐享受美食，度过特别的圣诞节。
七、主旨升华句
In the face of difficulties, love and creativity can always light up our lives and create beautiful memories.（面对困难，爱与创造力总能照亮我们的生活，创造美好的回忆。）
This Christmas, though different from the past, taught us that the true meaning of the festival lies in the love and togetherness we share.（这个圣诞节，虽然与以往不同，但教会我们节日的真正意义在于我们所共享的爱与团聚。）
Challenges may change our plans, but they can never dampen the spirit of love and the pursuit of happiness within a family.（挑战可能会改变我们的计划，但它们永远无法削弱家庭中爱的精神和对幸福的追求。）
Through this unique Christmas experience, we realized that with a little innovation and a lot of love, we can overcome any obstacle and create new traditions that bind us closer.（通过这次独特的圣诞经历，我们意识到，只要有一点创新和大量的爱，我们就能克服任何障碍，创造新的传统，让我们更加紧密相连。）
This special Christmas proved that love is the most precious ingredient, capable of turning challenges into opportunities for creating unforgettable moments.（这个特别的圣诞节证明，爱是最珍贵的元素，能够将挑战转化为创造难忘时刻的机会。）
八、两篇写作示范
示范一
第一段：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I rolled up my sleeves and got down to work. First, I mashed the potatoes thoroughly, adding the almond milk slowly, making sure the mixture was smooth. Then, I carefully folded in the allergic - free chocolate chips, their rich color standing out against the creamy potato. As I shaped the dough into small cookies, I couldn't help but feel a sense of anticipation. I placed them on a baking sheet and into the preheated oven. The minutes seemed to drag as I waited for the cookies to bake, but the sweet smell that wafted out soon made my heart soar.
第二段：My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he asked, his eyes wide with surprise and delight. I nodded with a big smile, pouring everyone a cup of warm, allergy - friendly hot chocolate. My daughter took a sip and exclaimed, “Mama, it's so yummy!” My son, with a cookie in his hand, grinned from ear to ear. We sat around the table, sharing stories and laughter. In that moment, I realized that this Christmas, though different, was filled with more love than ever before. It was a celebration of family, resilience, and the power of creating new traditions.
示范二
第一段：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I quickly gathered the ingredients on the counter. The potatoes were peeled and boiled until tender, then mashed into a fluffy consistency. I added the almond milk, a touch of vanilla, and a pinch of salt, stirring until it became a smooth paste. Next came the allergic - free chocolate chips, which I gently mixed in. The dough was then shaped into small, round cookies. As I placed them in the oven, I watched through the glass door, imagining the joy on my children's faces when they tasted these special treats. The warm glow of the oven seemed to symbolize the hope and love that filled our home.
第二段：My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he asked, his eyes wide with surprise and delight. I nodded and handed him a cup. He took a sip and said, “This is incredible, honey.” My children eagerly reached for their cups and cookies. We sat by the fireplace, the crackling fire adding to the cozy atmosphere. Looking around at my family, I felt a deep sense of gratitude. This Christmas, we had not only overcome a challenge but also created a new and precious memory that would stay with us forever. It was a reminder that love and family are the true essence of the holiday season.
One possible version:
And that’s when a sudden inspiration came to me. Why not try to make the same for my family Perhaps I could also make some hot chocolate using alternatives not causing allergic reactions for them to drink. Actions speak louder than words! Firstly I made the mashed potatoes with almond milk as my beloved mum did. Perfect! Then I poured almond milk in a pan and slowly melted chocolate chips into it. The result was better than expected: They dissolved like butter. “Ha!” I yelled. My first victory. Wild with joy, I raised my chocolate spoon and cried out, “Hot chocolate! Who wants hot chocolate ”
My husband was amased at it, “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” Yes, dear. It's safe." He laughed and started pouring while I began pulling off coats and hats for children. My husband enjoyed every mouthful of the hot chocolate and gave me the thumbs up. That's when I realized my daughter and son were running merrily in the dining room, stopping to take a bite of what I had cooked. My husband and our little children were drinking hot chocolate together in a toast to the first heavy snow and the approaching Christmas. There it was. I had thought it was completely impossible, but here, I was witnessing our first holiday tradition, everyone participating in his or her own way. And it was beautiful.