读后续写--志愿之行：点亮异国友人的缴费之路 讲义-湖南省百师联盟2024-2025学年高一上学期期末检测英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I woke up early in the morning and couldn’t wait to head for the hospital, hoping to serve people in need with a big smile. At around 7: 30 am, all the volunteers gathered as planned. I was overwhelmed with excitement as I entered the hospital. We were warmly greeted by the hospital staff. Then volunteers were arranged different tasks — cleaning rooms, guiding patients to their destinations, helping old people fill in forms and so on. Because I was good at operating computers, I was sent to be in charge of the self-service payment machines, which are designed for people to buy medicine and instantly pay their hospital bills.
Volunteering from 7:30 am until 8:30 am in the hospital made me very happy. Everyone I offered help to thanked me over and over again. However, most of the people in the hospital had worried faces, and I seldom spotted a smile. It was a little disappointing, but I tried to understand. They might have been tired out taking care of patients. While it may be hard to predict (预测) what kinds of patients you’ll be working with, it’s best to approach these situations with an open mind. I continued to concentrate on my assigned task, helping plenty of people — especially the older ones who couldn’t use advanced technology.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly. I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look.
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That moment really touched my heart.
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文章大意
清晨，“我” 满怀期待前往医院做志愿者。7 点半，志愿者们集合后被分配不同任务，“我” 因擅长操作电脑，负责自助缴费机的引导工作。从 7 点半到 8 点半，“我” 帮助了许多人，尤其是老人，但发现医院里人们大多愁容满面。就在这时，“我” 注意到一位满脸困惑站在机器旁的外国人。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 早起去医院做志愿者，到达后被分配负责自助缴费机相关工作，奠定故事背景。
发展：“我” 在工作中帮助了很多人，收获了感谢，但看到医院里人们普遍愁眉不展，内心有些失落。
高潮：续写部分遇到外国友人，将围绕如何帮助他解决问题展开，这是故事的关键转折点。
结局：通过帮助外国友人，“我” 有了新的感悟，完成故事收尾，升华志愿服务的意义。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：“我” 擅长操作电脑从而负责自助缴费机工作。回应：在帮助外国友人时，“我” 能熟练运用电脑知识，一步步耐心指导他完成缴费操作。
伏笔：医院里人们大多面带愁容。回应：外国友人可能也因医院的氛围以及缴费问题而显得焦虑，“我” 的帮助不仅解决了他的实际问题，还给他带来了一丝温暖，或许能改变他的心情。
伏笔：“我” 一直努力积极地做志愿服务。回应：面对外国友人的困惑，“我” 毫不犹豫地上前主动提供帮助，展现出志愿者的热情。
伏笔：“我” 理解人们愁容满面的原因。回应：在与外国友人交流中，“我” 会更加耐心和包容，站在他的角度思考问题，尽力让他感到安心。
伏笔：“我” 在志愿服务中帮助了很多老人。回应：这体现了 “我” 乐于助人的品质，在帮助外国友人时，这种品质会继续发挥作用，“我” 会用同样的耐心和细心对待他。
续写要点
第一段：描述 “我” 如何帮助外国友人。主动上前用英语询问他的情况，了解到他因语言不通不知道如何操作缴费机。“我” 一步一步耐心地向他解释操作步骤，从选择科室、输入就诊号到确认缴费金额等，期间可能还会遇到一些小问题，如系统卡顿等，但 “我” 都积极解决。
第二段：讲述帮助外国友人后的感受。外国友人顺利完成缴费后，对 “我” 表达了诚挚的感谢，他的笑容和感激之情深深触动了 “我”。“我” 意识到志愿服务的意义不仅在于解决实际问题，更在于传递温暖和快乐，给他人带来积极的影响。
情感线
起初，“我” 作为志愿者满怀兴奋和热情投入工作，在看到人们愁容满面时有些失落，但仍保持积极。遇到外国友人时，“我” 因能发挥作用而充满干劲，帮助他成功缴费后，“我” 收获了满满的感动和成就感，对志愿服务的意义有了更深刻的理解，内心充满温暖和自豪。
故事线
“我” 早起前往医院做志愿者。
在医院被分配负责自助缴费机引导工作。
帮助了许多人，注意到医院里人们的愁容。
发现外国友人站在缴费机旁一脸困惑。
上前帮助外国友人完成缴费操作。
外国友人表示感谢，“我” 深受触动，对志愿服务有了新感悟。
主旨升华句（英文）
“This volunteer experience in the hospital has taught me that a simple act of kindness can bring a ray of sunshine to those in the midst of difficulties.” 这次在医院的志愿经历教会我，一个简单的善举能给身处困境的人带来一缕阳光。
“Volunteering is not just about giving help; it's about connecting hearts and spreading love in every interaction.” 志愿服务不仅仅是给予帮助，更是在每一次互动中连接心灵、传递爱。
“In the hospital, I realized that even in the most challenging circumstances, a smile and a helping hand can make a world of difference.” 在医院里，我意识到即使在最具挑战的环境中，一个微笑和一次援手也能带来天壤之别。
“Through this encounter with the foreigner, I learned that the language of kindness is universal and can break down any barrier.” 通过与这位外国友人的相遇，我明白了善良的语言是通用的，能打破任何障碍。
“This volunteer work in the hospital has become a precious lesson, reminding me of the power of compassion and the beauty of making a positive impact on others' lives.” 这次在医院的志愿工作成为了宝贵的一课，提醒我同情的力量以及对他人生活产生积极影响的美好。
写作示范
Suddenly. I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. Without hesitation, I walked up to him and greeted him in English. “Hello! Can I help you ” I asked. He looked relieved and said he was trying to pay for his medicine but had no idea how to operate the machine. I patiently explained each step, from selecting the department to entering the registration number. Sometimes, the machine froze, but I remained calm and found a solution.
That moment really touched my heart. After successfully paying, he turned to me with a big smile and said, “Thank you so much! You've been a great help.” His gratitude made me feel a deep sense of fulfillment. I realized that volunteering is not just about doing tasks; it's about bringing warmth and hope to others. It's a small act that can make a big difference in someone's day.
Suddenly. I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. I quickly approached him and said, “Hi, I'm here to help.” He told me that he was struggling because of the language barrier. I guided him through the process, showing him how to check the bill details and make the payment. We encountered some issues, like incorrect input, but we managed to solve them together.
That moment really touched my heart. When everything was done, he thanked me sincerely, his eyes filled with gratitude. His appreciation made me understand that every act of kindness, no matter how small, can have a profound impact. It made me more determined to continue volunteering and spread love wherever I can.
参考答案
Suddenly,I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. I approached him with a smile, asking if he needed any assistance. He looked relieved and explained that he was trying to pay for his wife’s medication but couldn’t understand the instructions on the screen. I guided him through each step, translating the Chinese into English and ensuring he understood how to complete the transaction. With his thumb up, he expressed his thanks to me, and for the first time that day, I saw a genuine smile on someone’s face in the hospital.
That moment really touched my heart. It made me realize that even small acts of kindness can make a significant difference in someone’s day. As the day progressed, I continued to assist more people, each interaction adding a bit more warmth to the clinical environment. By the end of my shift, I felt a profound sense of satisfaction. Volunteering at Yeda Hospital not only enriched my high school life but also taught me valuable lessons about compassion and the impact of simple gestures. I knew that these experiences would stay with me as I prepared for university and beyond, shaping me into a more understanding and caring individual.
I woke up early in the morning and couldn’t wait to head for the hospital, hoping to serve people in need with a big smile. At around 7: 30 am, all the volunteers gathered as planned. I was overwhelmed with excitement as I entered the hospital. We were warmly greeted by the hospital staff. Then volunteers were arranged different tasks — cleaning rooms, guiding patients to their destinations, helping old people fill in forms and so on. Because I was good at operating computers, I was sent to be in charge of the self-service payment machines, which are designed for people to buy medicine and instantly pay their hospital bills.
Volunteering from 7:30 am until 8:30 am in the hospital made me very happy. Everyone I offered help to thanked me over and over again. However, most of the people in the hospital had worried faces, and I seldom spotted a smile. It was a little disappointing, but I tried to understand. They might have been tired out taking care of patients. While it may be hard to predict (预测) what kinds of patients you’ll be working with, it’s best to approach these situations with an open mind. I continued to concentrate on my assigned task, helping plenty of people — especially the older ones who couldn’t use advanced technology.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly. I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That moment really touched my heart.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
清晨，“我” 满怀期待前往医院做志愿者。7 点半，志愿者们集合后被分配不同任务，“我” 因擅长操作电脑，负责自助缴费机的引导工作。从 7 点半到 8 点半，“我” 帮助了许多人，尤其是老人，但发现医院里人们大多愁容满面。就在这时，“我” 注意到一位满脸困惑站在机器旁的外国人。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 早起去医院做志愿者，到达后被分配负责自助缴费机相关工作，奠定故事背景。
发展：“我” 在工作中帮助了很多人，收获了感谢，但看到医院里人们普遍愁眉不展，内心有些失落。
高潮：续写部分遇到外国友人，将围绕如何帮助他解决问题展开，这是故事的关键转折点。
结局：通过帮助外国友人，“我” 有了新的感悟，完成故事收尾，升华志愿服务的意义。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：“我” 擅长操作电脑从而负责自助缴费机工作。回应：在帮助外国友人时，“我” 能熟练运用电脑知识，一步步耐心指导他完成缴费操作。
伏笔：医院里人们大多面带愁容。回应：外国友人可能也因医院的氛围以及缴费问题而显得焦虑，“我” 的帮助不仅解决了他的实际问题，还给他带来了一丝温暖，或许能改变他的心情。
伏笔：“我” 一直努力积极地做志愿服务。回应：面对外国友人的困惑，“我” 毫不犹豫地上前主动提供帮助，展现出志愿者的热情。
伏笔：“我” 理解人们愁容满面的原因。回应：在与外国友人交流中，“我” 会更加耐心和包容，站在他的角度思考问题，尽力让他感到安心。
伏笔：“我” 在志愿服务中帮助了很多老人。回应：这体现了 “我” 乐于助人的品质，在帮助外国友人时，这种品质会继续发挥作用，“我” 会用同样的耐心和细心对待他。
续写要点
第一段：描述 “我” 如何帮助外国友人。主动上前用英语询问他的情况，了解到他因语言不通不知道如何操作缴费机。“我” 一步一步耐心地向他解释操作步骤，从选择科室、输入就诊号到确认缴费金额等，期间可能还会遇到一些小问题，如系统卡顿等，但 “我” 都积极解决。
第二段：讲述帮助外国友人后的感受。外国友人顺利完成缴费后，对 “我” 表达了诚挚的感谢，他的笑容和感激之情深深触动了 “我”。“我” 意识到志愿服务的意义不仅在于解决实际问题，更在于传递温暖和快乐，给他人带来积极的影响。
情感线
起初，“我” 作为志愿者满怀兴奋和热情投入工作，在看到人们愁容满面时有些失落，但仍保持积极。遇到外国友人时，“我” 因能发挥作用而充满干劲，帮助他成功缴费后，“我” 收获了满满的感动和成就感，对志愿服务的意义有了更深刻的理解，内心充满温暖和自豪。
故事线
“我” 早起前往医院做志愿者。
在医院被分配负责自助缴费机引导工作。
帮助了许多人，注意到医院里人们的愁容。
发现外国友人站在缴费机旁一脸困惑。
上前帮助外国友人完成缴费操作。
外国友人表示感谢，“我” 深受触动，对志愿服务有了新感悟。
主旨升华句（英文）
“This volunteer experience in the hospital has taught me that a simple act of kindness can bring a ray of sunshine to those in the midst of difficulties.” 这次在医院的志愿经历教会我，一个简单的善举能给身处困境的人带来一缕阳光。
“Volunteering is not just about giving help; it's about connecting hearts and spreading love in every interaction.” 志愿服务不仅仅是给予帮助，更是在每一次互动中连接心灵、传递爱。
“In the hospital, I realized that even in the most challenging circumstances, a smile and a helping hand can make a world of difference.” 在医院里，我意识到即使在最具挑战的环境中，一个微笑和一次援手也能带来天壤之别。
“Through this encounter with the foreigner, I learned that the language of kindness is universal and can break down any barrier.” 通过与这位外国友人的相遇，我明白了善良的语言是通用的，能打破任何障碍。
“This volunteer work in the hospital has become a precious lesson, reminding me of the power of compassion and the beauty of making a positive impact on others' lives.” 这次在医院的志愿工作成为了宝贵的一课，提醒我同情的力量以及对他人生活产生积极影响的美好。
写作示范
Suddenly. I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. Without hesitation, I walked up to him and greeted him in English. “Hello! Can I help you ” I asked. He looked relieved and said he was trying to pay for his medicine but had no idea how to operate the machine. I patiently explained each step, from selecting the department to entering the registration number. Sometimes, the machine froze, but I remained calm and found a solution.
That moment really touched my heart. After successfully paying, he turned to me with a big smile and said, “Thank you so much! You've been a great help.” His gratitude made me feel a deep sense of fulfillment. I realized that volunteering is not just about doing tasks; it's about bringing warmth and hope to others. It's a small act that can make a big difference in someone's day.
Suddenly. I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. I quickly approached him and said, “Hi, I'm here to help.” He told me that he was struggling because of the language barrier. I guided him through the process, showing him how to check the bill details and make the payment. We encountered some issues, like incorrect input, but we managed to solve them together.
That moment really touched my heart. When everything was done, he thanked me sincerely, his eyes filled with gratitude. His appreciation made me understand that every act of kindness, no matter how small, can have a profound impact. It made me more determined to continue volunteering and spread love wherever I can.
参考答案
Suddenly,I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. I approached him with a smile, asking if he needed any assistance. He looked relieved and explained that he was trying to pay for his wife’s medication but couldn’t understand the instructions on the screen. I guided him through each step, translating the Chinese into English and ensuring he understood how to complete the transaction. With his thumb up, he expressed his thanks to me, and for the first time that day, I saw a genuine smile on someone’s face in the hospital.
That moment really touched my heart. It made me realize that even small acts of kindness can make a significant difference in someone’s day. As the day progressed, I continued to assist more people, each interaction adding a bit more warmth to the clinical environment. By the end of my shift, I felt a profound sense of satisfaction. Volunteering at Yeda Hospital not only enriched my high school life but also taught me valuable lessons about compassion and the impact of simple gestures. I knew that these experiences would stay with me as I prepared for university and beyond, shaping me into a more understanding and caring individual.
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