专题09 书面表达12篇（真题+模拟）-2025年江苏省中考英语满分冲刺训练（含答案+解析）

2025 年 江 苏 省 中 考 英 语 满 分 冲 刺 训 练
专题09 书面表达12篇
1．（2024·扬州） 端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解，激发爱国主义情怀，某英语报"Culture"专栏正面向中学生举行以"Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism"为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：(1) What is Duanwu Festival (importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism (1. …；2. …)
参考词汇：patriotism n.爱国主义； patriotic adj.爱国的； poet n.诗人；
all ethnic groups 全民族； the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
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2．（2024·常州） 假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。
Dear Li Ping, These days I'm going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don't like sports at all. I think it's meaningless. What do you think of it Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter. ……
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Yours,
Li Ping
3．（2024·苏州） 你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie's Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。
选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括：1. 你对这句话的理解；2. 结合实际生活举例说明；3. 你得到的启发。
选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括：1. 你对这句话的理解；2. 结合实际生活举例说明；3. 你得到的启发。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；3. 照抄阅读语篇不得分；4. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title:
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched.
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4．（2024·无锡） 传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展"中华文化周"活动，今年的主题是"交朋友，传文化"。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。
注意事项：1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
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Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
5．（2024·宿迁） 唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为"做更好的自己"的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以"To be a better self"为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
To be a better self
懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区……
亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物……
爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣……
注意事项：
1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点；
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about "To be a better self".
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That's all. Thanks for your listening!
6．（2024·盐城模拟） 书面表达
成长路上，你曾经遇到过很多人，如一位师长，一个朋友；你也曾经历过许多事，如一次比赛，一项活动等，这些人，这些事或多或少都会对你产生影响，让你健康成长。
请以 " ▲ help/ helps me grow up" 为题写一篇英文短文
根据你的自己亲身经历，谈谈：
1. Which people/ thing touched you
2. How did you feel and what did you gain
3. …
要求:
1.词数 100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
3.文章必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
▲ help/ helps me grow up
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we've gong through on our study or daily life, may help us grow up.
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7．（2024·无锡模拟）时光荏苒，转眼又是毕业季了，在这即将结束的三年学习生涯中，尤其是同学们之间珍贵的友谊。学校将举行"晓园杯"征文大赛，题目是"My friendship"。请描述你获得一段友谊的经过以及友谊对你产生的影响。
注意事项：
（1）要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数100个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名等；
（4）短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
My friendship
Friendship is one of the most valuable things in the world.Friends can help you when you get into trouble.Friends always cheer you up when you feel sad.
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8．（2023·南通） 热心公益，积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动，用英语写一篇关于今年者假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚"做什么、为何做、怎样做"。
注意：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇：responsibility n. 责任；义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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9．（2024·新北模拟）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，劳动建设美丽校园，劳动营造和谐家庭，劳动创建文明社区。
作为一名中学生，要积极参加劳动实践。你校英语报发起了"Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life"主题征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你在不同的场合可以做哪些劳动，在劳动中你收获了什么，并发起倡议，呼吁更多的青少年热爱劳动，热爱生活。
要点如下：1. What kind of labor can you do at school, at home or in the community
2. What can you learn from labor
3. What advice will you give to the teenagers
注意：1.词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love.
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10．（2024·泰州模拟） 一部电影是由多组镜头组成的，而我的初中生活就像一部有声有色、多姿多彩的电影，每组镜头都值得我们去回味。红色曾给予你奋斗的力量……；绿色是你环保的回馈……；橙色代表着你成功时的喜悦……；黄色是你睿智的嘉奖……。请在红、橙、黄、绿、蓝这几种颜色中选择1~2种描写你多彩初中的生活，并且畅想你的未来！
注意： 1. 仔细读题，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 图中提示部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数 100 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。
My colourful life
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11．（2024·连云港） 假如你是李华, 你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物, 他来信询问制作过程, 请你给他回信, 内容包括: （1）你送的礼物是什么; （2）你送此礼物的原因; （3）制作的方法或过程。
注意： （1）词数90左右, 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数; （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2024·盐城） 学以致用，知行合一。你是如何将所学知识应用到生活中解决实际问题的？学校英语社团正在组织题为"Learning for practice"的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。
注意事项：（1）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；（2）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；（3）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Learning for practice
It's important for us teenagers to put what we've learnt into practice in daily life
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答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People's dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan.
As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country.
这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给内容写一篇以"Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism"为题的英语短文投稿。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍端午节；第二步，介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神；第三步，说明如何实践爱国。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如fall on落到某个时间或日期上。is closely related to息息相关；strive for奋发图强，be good for对……有好处等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.（whici引导的定语从句）；As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.（省略that的宾语从句）。
2．Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic.
When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day.
My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.
Give yourself a chance to try running, I'm sure you'll love it.
Yours,
Li Ping
这是一篇应用文写作。时态是一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己对李萍认为早上跑步半小时的观点；然后介绍自己跑步的经历；最后介绍自己跑步的建议。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be glad to do；used to do；enjoy doing sth.；be good for；not only...but also；keep...+形容词；make...+形容词；start doing sth.；start to do；help sb. do sth.；set goals；listen to music；think about；while doing sth.；a chance to do；be sure+句子等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：比较级I'm glad to receive your letter. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic.But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. running every morning helped me focus better during the day.；宾语从句I understand how you feel.；动名词做主语Running is very good for health.running every morning helped me focus better during the day.；状语从句When I started running, I found it difficult at first.；定语从句Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.；祈使句Give yourself a chance to try running,I'm sure you'll love it.等。连词but、not only...but also、when、moreever、while、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
3．略
这是命题作文，以Sometimes people surprise us为题，做小说读书分享，介绍有时人们会让我们感到惊讶的理解，时态为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时"；以第一人称为主。写作步骤：第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。
要求本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，你对这句话的理解，建议使用thanks to多亏；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事； in my opinion在我看来等短语，高分句型：The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）。
本文是材料作文；以Trouble is a friend为题，在英语读书俱乐部和大家分享感受。文章时态要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。可以使用first，second 进行列举，使文章显得更加条理。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕"麻烦是朋友"展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，先描述流感病毒的症状，然后给出应对措施，最后阐述预防方法。各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 建议使用The meaning of等短语，和高分句型： That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句）。
4．Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I'm writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they'll try to return to their home. On the New Year's Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。通过分析材料内容可知，本文主要包括以下四个方面内容：传统节日的时间、活动、庆祝方式以及意义等。本文主要使用第一人称单数和第三人称复数，时态以一般现在时为主。要求合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯
本文内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 one of the most important traditional festivals 最重要的传统节日之一， put up 张贴， set off 燃放，等等，及句型结构，如No matter how faraway people are, they'll try to return to their home.（no matter引导让步状语从句）， like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. （because引导原因状语从句）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
5．To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about "To be a better self". Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇题为 "做更好的自己" 的演讲稿参与学校的演讲比赛。写作背景：李华的学校正在开展主题为"做更好的自己"的演讲比赛。内容包括：1. 介绍演讲主题："做更好的自己"；2. 从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做；3. 表示感谢。注意：1. 时态为一般现在时；2. 注意不要遗漏写作要点，可适当拓展，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范得体，逻辑正确，层次分明；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为90个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：1. 高分句子：Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person. （运用了动名词短语做主语）；If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）； We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants.（运用了动词不定式做目的状语）； I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及and连接的并列句）。2. 亮点词汇： in need of help 需要帮助；get close to 亲近；keep a good mood 保持好心情； live a healthy life 过健康的生活； from now on 从现在开始。
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这是一篇叙事性作文。 本文要求以"____ help/ helps me grow up"为题（题目中的空白需要考生自行填充），旨在通过描述个人成长过程中的一次经历或一个人物，来展现其对自己成长的影响。这类作文通常要求考生结合个人经历，运用生动的语言描绘人物或事件，并表达出自己的感受、收获和成长。主要采用一般过去时描述过去的事件或经历，辅以现在时表达当前的感受和影响。
知识点：需运用丰富的形容词和副词来描绘场景和表达情感；使用复合句和并列句增强语言的表现力；注意段落之间的过渡和衔接，使文章连贯流畅。注意事项：确保内容真实可信，避免使用虚构的姓名、校名和地名。注意细节描写，使文章生动具体。表达个人感受时，要真诚且富有深度。结尾部分要有所升华，体现成长的主题。
考查叙事性作文，写此类作文，需注意：结构清晰：开篇引入，正文具体描述，结尾总结升华，形成完整的叙事结构。
内容真实且富有感染力：选取自己亲身经历的事件或人物，通过细节描写展现其独特性和影响力，让读者能够感同身受。情感真挚：在描述过程中融入个人情感，表达出自己的真实感受，使文章更具感染力。语言生动：运用丰富的词汇和句式，使文章语言生动活泼，增强可读性。中心思想明确：始终围绕"成长"这一主题展开叙述，确保文章中心思想突出。较好的句子或短语示例："The encounter with her was like a gentle breeze, blowing away the fog in my heart and illuminating my path to maturity."；"I realized that every challenge, no matter how daunting, is a stepping stone to personal growth."；"Her unwavering support and encouragement were like a beacon in the stormy sea of adolescence, guiding me towards the shore of adulthood."；"Through this experience, I gained not only knowledge but also resilience and the courage to face future challenges head-on."
7．My friendship
Friendship is one of the most valuable things in the world.Friends can help you when you get into trouble.Friends always cheer you up when you feel sad.
My dearest friend，and I first met during our freshman year in high school.We bonded over our shared love for music and soon became inseparable.Through the years，always supporting each other.Once，Lily stayed up late helping me review. Her kindness and dedication deeply moved me.（描述友谊的经过）
This friendship has taught me the importance of trust，and loyalty.Lily has shown me that true friends are those who stand by you through thick and thin. Our friendship has enriched my life immeasurably，I cherish our time together and look forward to our future adventures.
这是一篇以"My friendship"为题的征文作文。文章主要要求描述作者获得一段友谊的经过以及这段友谊对作者产生的影响。首先，我们需要明确写作的重点是友谊的获得过程以及它带来的正面影响。我们可以按照以下步骤进行写作：1.引入友谊的获得：可以简要描述一下在什么情况下，你与某位同学或朋友相遇，并开始了你们的友谊。例如，可能是因为一次课堂讨论、一个共同的兴趣爱好，或者是一次意外的帮助等。2.详细描述友谊的经过：在这一部分，我们需要详细讲述你们之间友谊的发展过程。比如，你们是如何一起度过学习中的困难，如何在生活中互相帮助，又是如何一起分享快乐和悲伤的。这部分需要具体的事例来支撑，让读者能够感受到你们之间深厚的友谊。3.阐述友谊的影响：在描述了友谊的经过之后，我们需要阐述这段友谊对你产生的影响。这可能包括在学业上的帮助、生活中的支持，以及对你性格、人生观等方面的影响。这部分需要真实、具体，让读者能够感受到友谊的力量。在写作过程中，我们需要注意以下几点：1.时态：整篇文章主要使用过去时和现在时，描述过去发生的事情以及现在的影响。2.知识点：需要运用适当的连词和过渡词，使文章更加连贯；同时，要注意使用形容词和副词来增强描述的效果。
这篇作文《My friendship》是一篇优秀的征文作品，它清晰地描绘了作者与好友之间友谊的建立、发展和影响。开头：作者以友谊的重要性为引，提出了友谊的价值和作用，为后文的叙述做了铺垫。 中间：详细描述了作者与好友Lily的相遇、相识和相知的过程，用具体的事例（Lily帮助作者复习）来展现友谊的深厚。 结尾：总结了友谊对作者的影响，强调了友谊的重要性，并表达了对未来友谊的期待。"Once，Lily stayed up late helping me review. Her kindness and dedication deeply moved me." 这一句用具体的事例生动地描绘了Lily对友谊的付出，使文章更加有说服力。"This friendship has taught me the importance of trust，and loyalty. ... I cherish our time together and look forward to our future adventures." 结尾部分总结了友谊对作者的影响，并表达了对未来友谊的期待，使文章情感更加饱满。
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这是一篇材料作文，要求用英语写一篇关于今年者假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。写作内容包括做什么、为何做、怎样做。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般将来时时，人称为第三人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文可对做什么、为何做、怎样做进行详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。可使用It is+形容词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和I think+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用take part in参加，learn to do sth.学习做某事等增加文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
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这是一篇命题作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍劳动教育是什么；然后介绍从劳动教育中可以学到什么；最后介绍给青少年的建议。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be known that；take part in；different kinds of；help do sth.；do housework；such as；sweep the floor；do the dishes；in one's spare time；volunteer to do；let's do sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：定语从句It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love.；现在完成时As a student, I have always taken part in different kinds of labor.；介绍各种劳动At school, I take an active part in cleaning our classrooms and the playground. At home, I help do housework, such as sweeping the floor and doing the dishes. In my spare time, I volunteer to help the old clean their rooms in the community.；介绍劳动的好处Through labor, I have learned that it is important to be independent and responsible. It also helps me to develop practical skills.；比较级I hope more teenagers can take part in labor.；祈使句Let's take action together to respect labor and value our lives!等。连词such as、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
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这是一篇以"My colourful life"为题的记叙文作文。本文要求学生通过比喻的方式，将初中生活比作一部由多种颜色构成的电影，每种颜色代表初中生活中不同的经历与感受。写作步骤：开头引入：简要说明初中生活如一部多彩电影，引出所选颜色及其代表的意义。具体描述：详细叙述一两个与所选颜色紧密相关的事件或感受，展现初中生活的某个方面。情感升华：结合事件，表达这些经历对自己成长的影响和启示。未来展望：基于所选颜色的寓意，展望个人未来的发展方向或愿景。结尾总结：总结全文，强调初中生活的多彩与对未来的美好憧憬。主要采用一般过去时描述初中生活，辅以一般现在时表达当前感受，以及一般将来时展望未来。
考查"多彩生活"主题作文，写此类作文，需注意在撰写关于多彩初中生活的作文时，关键在于通过生动的细节和具体的场景来展现不同颜色所代表的情感与经历。文章应结构清晰，每段围绕一个或两个颜色展开，通过具体事例来阐述这些颜色如何映射出初中生活的不同方面。中心思想应明确，即初中生活是多姿多彩、充满意义的。开篇引入："My junior high school life was a vibrant tapestry woven with hues of red, orange, yellow, green, and blue, each strand a testament to the richness and diversity of my adolescent journey."
11．One possible version:
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck.
To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string.
Next time you come to China, I' Il show you how to make it. （90 words）
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二:
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
It' s an unusual picture of us. I hope it can remind you of the happy time we were together.
Here is how to make it. First, choose a picture you like. It should be large and clear. Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and draw along the lines. Then stick colorful beans and rice on the paper according to the drawing. Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.
Hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to your work. （90 words）
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给材料给Kevin写一封回信。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么；第二步，介绍自己为什么送这件礼物，阐明原因；第三步，着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如decide to do sth.决定做某事；remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事；so that以便；look forward to期待等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：We believe it can bring us good luck.（省略that的宾语从句）；Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.（so that引导的目的状语从句）。
12．Learning for practice
It's important for us teenagers to put what we've learnt into practice in daily life. In our daily life, our parents prepare everything for us. Sometimes we don't know how to look after ourselves or solve problems around us. I'm facing the same problem.
This term, we have a new subject—Labor course. I learn how to grow vegetables and do some chores through this course. On my mother's birthday, I cooked a bowl of noodles for my mother to show my love. Though it tasted bad, my mother felt very happy. Now, I can help my parents do some housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor.
I am happy that I can put what I've learnt into practice in daily life.
本题是一篇材料作文写作，要求考生写一篇题为"Learning for practice"的英语短文参加学校英语社团组织的征文比赛。写作背景：考生的学校英语社团正在组织题为"Learning for practice"的征文比赛 。内容包括：1. 介绍自己所遇到的问题；2. 阐述将所学的知识用到实际生活中的具体细节。注意：1. 时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；2. 注意不要遗漏写作要点，可适当拓展，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范得体，逻辑正确，层次分明；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为100个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：1. 高分句子： On my mother's birthday, I cooked a bowl of noodles for my mother to show my love.（运用了动词不定式做目的状语）；Though it tasted bad, my mother felt very happy.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句）； I am happy that I can put what I've learnt into practice in daily life.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句）。2. 亮点词汇： prepare...for 为......准备......； look after 照顾； such as 例如。