Unit 4 Natural Disasters读后续写作业设计（含答案） 2024-2025学年高中英语人教版必修第一册
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人教版必修1B Unit 4 读后续写作业设计
I. 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
场景/环境描写 For several days, the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell. There were deep cracks that appeared in the walls. Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat, and dogs refused to go inside buildings. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. Bright lights were seen in the sky outside the city and loud noises were heard. A huge crack, eight kilometres long and 30 metres wide, cut across houses, roads, and waterways. In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city’s people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earth ruins. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 2 2. Page 50 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 50 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 50 Para 1 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 6. Page 50 Para 2 Line 4 7. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 8. Page 50 Para 3 Line 1 9. Page 50 Para 5 Line 2
心理描写 But the city’s one million people were asleep as ususl that night. People were in shock. People began to wonder how long the disaster would last. But hope was not lost. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 7 2. Page 50 Para 3 Line 7 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 9 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1
修辞手法 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!(夸张) 2.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.(暗喻) 3.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.（明喻） 4.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.(拟人) 5.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back up on its feet.(拟人) 1. Page 50 Para 2 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 2 Line 5 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 5 Line 1
动作描写 Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out those who were trapped and to bury the dead. More than 10,000 doctors and nurses came to provide medical care. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were helped. Water and food were brought into the city by train, truck, and plane. 1. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 4 Line 2 3. Page 50 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 4 5. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5
II. 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 浏览报纸，我被照片震惊：在亚洲，飓风摧毁了一座城镇。(be shocked by)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 而且，欧洲东部的大雨引发了滑坡，欧洲南部的酷热造成了 森林大火。 (has caused)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 心情沉重地走出车站，我突然感受到清风拂面。(with a heavy heart)
___________________________________________________________________________________________4. 2015年4月25日尼泊尔发生8.1级地震，是历史上最糟糕的地震之一。(magnitude, hit)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 一听到消息，中国迅速开展组织紧急救助。(emergency aid)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
6. 1881年，台风袭击了越南城市海防，这场风暴造成了30万人死亡。(strike, Haiphong, cost the lives of)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
7. 1972年2月3日，一场罕见的暴风雪袭击伊朗，造成一周极度低温。(cause a week of )
___________________________________________________________________________________________8. 这场暴风雪带来积雪深达7.9米，造成约4,000人丧生。（result in the deaths of ）
___________________________________________________________________________________________
III. 美文体验馆
“Dad,” whispered Tariq, “Are you awake ” Dad opened his eyes. “What’s the matter, son ” Tariq couldn’t sleep and he felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. All day long he felt like something was about to happen. Dad whispered back to his son: “You could be right. Go back to bed, good boy.”
Tariq shook his head. “I’m going downstairs where it’s cooler. Why don’t you come with me ” dad refused, saying that he would stay there. Tariq went down the landing. He and his father were alone in the house. His mother and sister had gone to visit relatives. He went into the kitchen and lay on the floor. He felt cooler and fell asleep at last.
Suddenly he awoke with a shock. In the distance he could hear a roar, like thunder. It seemed to be coming closer and closer. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected. But this was no ordinary storm. Within seconds the whole house began to shake. The vase fell off the shelves with a crash. Tariq could feel the floor moving beneath him. What on earth was happening He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. It didn’t work. He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. Next moment a pile of bricks came down around him. A terrible choking smell filled the air.
At last the dust cleared. Tariq was amazed to find that he was still alive. The framework of the doorway must have saved him. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ”
No answer.
注意:
续写词数应为 150 左右;
请按如下格式作答。
But he heard a sniffed dog (搜救犬) barking. ______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”. ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与自然
文章出处 Teen’s Space英语街：英语读后续写1（原创试题06）
词数 正文英文词数271，续写第一段首句7个单词，续写第二段首句9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para3)
Climax (Para.4-5)
Resolution (续写第一段) But he heard a sniffer dog barking.
Ending (续写第二段) “Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 Tariq Dad
1. He couldn’t sleep and felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. 2. He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. He reached the back door... 3. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ” Dad refused, saying that he would stay upstairs. No answer.
场景
语言风格
伏笔/照应 Maybe there’s a storm coming .All day long he felt like something was about to happen.
【素材积累】
Para. 1
1. whisper v.低语；耳语
whisper to sb.
Para. 2
1. shake one’s head 摇头
2. go downstairs 下楼
3. Tariq went down the landing. (平台)
4. go to visit relatives 走亲戚
5. fall asleep 熟睡
Para. 3
awake with a shock 惊醒
roar 咆哮
The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.(must have done情态动词的完成式表示对过去发生的事情的肯定推测，表示：“一定怎么了”；just as引导方式状语从句，表示“正如”)
fall off 落下来
He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. (句式：完全倒装)
A terrible smell filled the air. (无灵主语)
Para. 4
be amazed to find that...
The framework of the doorway must have saved him.
call out 大声叫喊
IV 技能锻造营
Apostrophe (顿呼), 即：发出呼语。
定义一：指在演说、抒情文章中或诗歌中突然用第二人称对不在场的人或对拟人的事物发出呼语的一种修辞方式。
定义二：对一个人（通常是不在场的人）或一个人格化的物发出的称呼，通常借助感叹词“哦，啊”等表现，属于独立成分。
例如：
“Ugh, Weibo, why won’t you load my messages ” “啊，微博，你为什么不加载我的消息？”
“Hold on, my son’s driving me crazy---Robert, come back here, stop running with a knife.”
(与人通话中) 别挂线，我的儿子让我抓狂---罗伯特，快给我过来，不要拿着刀到处跑。”
答案解析
I. 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
场景/环境描写 For several days, the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell. There were deep cracks that appeared in the walls. Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat, and dogs refused to go inside buildings. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. Bright lights were seen in the sky outside the city and loud noises were heard. A huge crack, eight kilometres long and 30 metres wide, cut across houses, roads, and waterways. In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city’s people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earth ruins. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 2 2. Page 50 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 50 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 50 Para 1 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 6. Page 50 Para 2 Line 4 7. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 8. Page 50 Para 3 Line 1 9. Page 50 Para 5 Line 2
心理描写 But the city’s one million people were asleep as ususl that night. People were in shock. People began to wonder how long the disaster would last. But hope was not lost. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 7 2. Page 50 Para 3 Line 7 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 9 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1
修辞手法 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!(夸张) 2.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.(暗喻) 3.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.（明喻） 4.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.(拟人) 5.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back up on its feet.(拟人) 1. Page 50 Para 2 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 2 Line 5 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 5 Line 1
动作描写 Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out those who were trapped and to bury the dead. More than 10,000 doctors and nurses came to provide medical care. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were helped. Water and food were brought into the city by train, truck, and plane. 1. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 4 Line 2 3. Page 50 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 4 5. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5
II. 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 浏览报纸，我被照片震惊：在亚洲，飓风摧毁了一座城镇。(be shocked by)
Looking through my newspaper, I’m shocked by photos showing that a hurricane in Asia has destroyed a town.
2. 而且，欧洲东部的大雨引发了滑坡，欧洲南部的酷热造成了 森林大火。 (has caused)
What’s more, heavy rain in Eastern Europe has caused landslides, and the heat across Southern Europe has caused forest fires.
3. 心情沉重地走出车站，我突然感受到清风拂面。(with a heavy heart)
Stepping out of the station with a heavy heart, I suddenly feel a fresh wind on my face.
4. 2015年4月25日尼泊尔发生8.1级地震，是历史上最糟糕的地震之一。(magnitude, hit)
The 8.1-magnitude earthquake that hit Nepal on 25 April 2015, was one of the worst earthquakes in history.
5. 一听到消息，中国迅速开展组织紧急救助。(emergency aid)
On hearing the news, China was quick to start organizing emergency aid.
6. 1881年，台风袭击了越南城市海防，这场风暴造成了30万人死亡。(strike, Haiphong, cost the lives of)
In 1881, a typhoon struck the small Vietnamese city of Haiphong, costing the lives of up to 300,000 citizens.
7. 1972年2月3日，一场罕见的暴风雪袭击伊朗，造成一周极度低温。(cause a week of )
On Feb.3, 1972, a rare blizzard hit Iran, causing a week of extremely low temperatures.
8. 这场暴风雪带来积雪深达7.9米，造成约4,000人丧生。（result in the deaths of ）
The snow storm brought as much as 7.9 metres of snow, resulting in the deaths of about 4,000 people.
III. 美文体验馆
“Dad,” whispered Tariq, “Are you awake ” Dad opened his eyes. “What’s the matter, son ” Tariq couldn’t sleep and he felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. All day long he felt like something was about to happen. Dad whispered back to his son: “You could be right. Go back to bed, good boy.”
Tariq shook his head. “I’m going downstairs where it’s cooler. Why don’t you come with me ” dad refused, saying that he would stay there. Tariq went down the landing. He and his father were alone in the house. His mother and sister had gone to visit relatives. He went into the kitchen and lay on the floor. He felt cooler and fell asleep at last.
Suddenly he awoke with a shock. In the distance he could hear a roar, like thunder. It seemed to be coming closer and closer. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected. But this was no ordinary storm. Within seconds the whole house began to shake. The vase fell off the shelves with a crash. Tariq could feel the floor moving beneath him. What on earth was happening He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. It didn’t work. He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. Next moment a pile of bricks came down around him. A terrible choking smell filled the air.
At last the dust cleared. Tariq was amazed to find that he was still alive. The framework of the doorway must have saved him. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ”
No answer.
注意:
续写词数应为 150 左右;
请按如下格式作答。
But he heard a sniffed dog (搜救犬) barking. ______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”. ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与自然
文章出处 Teen’s Space英语街：英语读后续写1（原创试题06）
词数 正文英文词数271，续写第一段首句7个单词，续写第二段首句9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2) One night, Tariq, together with Dad indoors, felt hot and realised something strange might happen.
Build-up (Para3) A terrible storm came and Tariq reacted, but he was trapped.
Climax (Para.4-5) Trapped, Tariq kept alive, but he couldn’t contact Dad.
Resolution (续写第一段) But he heard a sniffer dog barking.
Ending (续写第二段) “Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”
Why 故事主题 自然灾害 (面对突如其来的地震，自救和被搜救)
How 写作手法 第三人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 Tariq Dad
1. He couldn’t sleep and felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. 2. He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. He reached the back door... 3. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ” Tariq超前意识到有暴风雨的发生。 Tariq反应快，机智。 Tariq强烈的责任感，危机尚未解除，放心不下父亲的安危。 Dad refused, saying that he would stay upstairs. No answer. Dad没有听从Tariq的建议，没有察觉到异常。 面对Tariq的呼叫，没能回应，生死未卜
场景 晚上，家中，遭遇地震
语言风格 平实质朴
伏笔/照应 Maybe there’s a storm coming .All day long he felt like something was about to happen. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.
【素材积累】
Para. 1
1. whisper v.低语；耳语
whisper to sb.
Para. 2
1. shake one’s head 摇头
2. go downstairs 下楼
3. Tariq went down the landing. (平台)
4. go to visit relatives 走亲戚
5. fall asleep 熟睡
Para. 3
awake with a shock 惊醒
roar 咆哮
The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.(must have done情态动词的完成式表示对过去发生的事情的肯定推测，表示：“一定怎么了”；just as引导方式状语从句，表示“正如”)
fall off 落下来
He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. (句式：完全倒装)
A terrible smell filled the air. (无灵主语)
Para. 4
be amazed to find that...
The framework of the doorway must have saved him.
call out 大声叫喊
【参考范文】
续写思路：
Para. 1：本文讲述了Tariq和父亲在闷热的夜晚睡觉的时候，遭遇了地震，被搜救犬营救的故事。续文第一段提示语告知“他听到了搜救犬的叫声”，此段可写他被搜救犬营救的过程。
Para. 2：根据续文第二段提示语可知， 作者的父亲还没有被找到，那么第二段就可写搜救父亲的过程和父子团聚的场景。
But he heard a sniffer dog barking. He struggled to know what was going on outside, but he couldn’t move. Maybe someone was approaching here. “Are they my family Or my relatives ” without any more thought, Tariq determined to call for help. “Help! Help! I’m here! Help!” Then came a burst of footsteps and noise, nearer and nearer. The dog barked more fiercely, and somebody called out: “Here! Someone is alive!” Later, someone began to dig the ruins, which buried Tariq entirely. Gradually, a large thread of torch light came to Tariq’s eyes/
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ” Nobody replied. “Where did your dad stay when the earthquake came ” One man asked Tariq. Tariq tried to point to the right spot where his dad was sleeping. And immediately the dog was ordered to search for anyone alive. A few minutes later, surprising shouts passed along, “Dad is here! Here!” “Hold on! Don’t fall asleep!” They cried. When his dad was carried to him, Tariq could hardly recognize him, for his dad was covered with mud all over the body. But Tariq ran to hug his dad firmly for a long time.
IV 技能锻造营
Apostrophe (顿呼), 即：发出呼语。
定义一：指在演说、抒情文章中或诗歌中突然用第二人称对不在场的人或对拟人的事物发出呼语的一种修辞方式。
定义二：对一个人（通常是不在场的人）或一个人格化的物发出的称呼，通常借助感叹词“哦，啊”等表现，属于独立成分。
例如：
“Ugh, Weibo, why won’t you load my messages ” “啊，微博，你为什么不加载我的消息？”
“Hold on, my son’s driving me crazy---Robert, come back here, stop running with a knife.”
(与人通话中) 别挂线，我的儿子让我抓狂---罗伯特，快给我过来，不要拿着刀到处跑。”
I. 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
场景/环境描写 For several days, the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell. There were deep cracks that appeared in the walls. Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat, and dogs refused to go inside buildings. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. Bright lights were seen in the sky outside the city and loud noises were heard. A huge crack, eight kilometres long and 30 metres wide, cut across houses, roads, and waterways. In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city’s people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earth ruins. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 2 2. Page 50 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 50 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 50 Para 1 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 6. Page 50 Para 2 Line 4 7. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 8. Page 50 Para 3 Line 1 9. Page 50 Para 5 Line 2
心理描写 But the city’s one million people were asleep as ususl that night. People were in shock. People began to wonder how long the disaster would last. But hope was not lost. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 7 2. Page 50 Para 3 Line 7 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 9 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1
修辞手法 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!(夸张) 2.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.(暗喻) 3.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.（明喻） 4.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.(拟人) 5.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back up on its feet.(拟人) 1. Page 50 Para 2 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 2 Line 5 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 5 Line 1
动作描写 Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out those who were trapped and to bury the dead. More than 10,000 doctors and nurses came to provide medical care. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were helped. Water and food were brought into the city by train, truck, and plane. 1. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 4 Line 2 3. Page 50 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 4 5. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5
II. 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 浏览报纸，我被照片震惊：在亚洲，飓风摧毁了一座城镇。(be shocked by)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 而且，欧洲东部的大雨引发了滑坡，欧洲南部的酷热造成了 森林大火。 (has caused)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 心情沉重地走出车站，我突然感受到清风拂面。(with a heavy heart)
___________________________________________________________________________________________4. 2015年4月25日尼泊尔发生8.1级地震，是历史上最糟糕的地震之一。(magnitude, hit)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 一听到消息，中国迅速开展组织紧急救助。(emergency aid)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
6. 1881年，台风袭击了越南城市海防，这场风暴造成了30万人死亡。(strike, Haiphong, cost the lives of)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
7. 1972年2月3日，一场罕见的暴风雪袭击伊朗，造成一周极度低温。(cause a week of )
___________________________________________________________________________________________8. 这场暴风雪带来积雪深达7.9米，造成约4,000人丧生。（result in the deaths of ）
___________________________________________________________________________________________
III. 美文体验馆
“Dad,” whispered Tariq, “Are you awake ” Dad opened his eyes. “What’s the matter, son ” Tariq couldn’t sleep and he felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. All day long he felt like something was about to happen. Dad whispered back to his son: “You could be right. Go back to bed, good boy.”
Tariq shook his head. “I’m going downstairs where it’s cooler. Why don’t you come with me ” dad refused, saying that he would stay there. Tariq went down the landing. He and his father were alone in the house. His mother and sister had gone to visit relatives. He went into the kitchen and lay on the floor. He felt cooler and fell asleep at last.
Suddenly he awoke with a shock. In the distance he could hear a roar, like thunder. It seemed to be coming closer and closer. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected. But this was no ordinary storm. Within seconds the whole house began to shake. The vase fell off the shelves with a crash. Tariq could feel the floor moving beneath him. What on earth was happening He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. It didn’t work. He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. Next moment a pile of bricks came down around him. A terrible choking smell filled the air.
At last the dust cleared. Tariq was amazed to find that he was still alive. The framework of the doorway must have saved him. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ”
No answer.
注意:
续写词数应为 150 左右;
请按如下格式作答。
But he heard a sniffed dog (搜救犬) barking. ______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”. ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与自然
文章出处 Teen’s Space英语街：英语读后续写1（原创试题06）
词数 正文英文词数271，续写第一段首句7个单词，续写第二段首句9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para3)
Climax (Para.4-5)
Resolution (续写第一段) But he heard a sniffer dog barking.
Ending (续写第二段) “Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 Tariq Dad
1. He couldn’t sleep and felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. 2. He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. He reached the back door... 3. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ” Dad refused, saying that he would stay upstairs. No answer.
场景
语言风格
伏笔/照应 Maybe there’s a storm coming .All day long he felt like something was about to happen.
【素材积累】
Para. 1
1. whisper v.低语；耳语
whisper to sb.
Para. 2
1. shake one’s head 摇头
2. go downstairs 下楼
3. Tariq went down the landing. (平台)
4. go to visit relatives 走亲戚
5. fall asleep 熟睡
Para. 3
awake with a shock 惊醒
roar 咆哮
The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.(must have done情态动词的完成式表示对过去发生的事情的肯定推测，表示：“一定怎么了”；just as引导方式状语从句，表示“正如”)
fall off 落下来
He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. (句式：完全倒装)
A terrible smell filled the air. (无灵主语)
Para. 4
be amazed to find that...
The framework of the doorway must have saved him.
call out 大声叫喊
IV 技能锻造营
Apostrophe (顿呼), 即：发出呼语。
定义一：指在演说、抒情文章中或诗歌中突然用第二人称对不在场的人或对拟人的事物发出呼语的一种修辞方式。
定义二：对一个人（通常是不在场的人）或一个人格化的物发出的称呼，通常借助感叹词“哦，啊”等表现，属于独立成分。
例如：
“Ugh, Weibo, why won’t you load my messages ” “啊，微博，你为什么不加载我的消息？”
“Hold on, my son’s driving me crazy---Robert, come back here, stop running with a knife.”
(与人通话中) 别挂线，我的儿子让我抓狂---罗伯特，快给我过来，不要拿着刀到处跑。”
答案解析
I. 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
场景/环境描写 For several days, the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell. There were deep cracks that appeared in the walls. Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat, and dogs refused to go inside buildings. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. Bright lights were seen in the sky outside the city and loud noises were heard. A huge crack, eight kilometres long and 30 metres wide, cut across houses, roads, and waterways. In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city’s people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earth ruins. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 2 2. Page 50 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 50 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 50 Para 1 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 6. Page 50 Para 2 Line 4 7. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 8. Page 50 Para 3 Line 1 9. Page 50 Para 5 Line 2
心理描写 But the city’s one million people were asleep as ususl that night. People were in shock. People began to wonder how long the disaster would last. But hope was not lost. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 7 2. Page 50 Para 3 Line 7 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 9 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1
修辞手法 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!(夸张) 2.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.(暗喻) 3.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.（明喻） 4.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.(拟人) 5.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back up on its feet.(拟人) 1. Page 50 Para 2 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 2 Line 5 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 5 Line 1
动作描写 Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out those who were trapped and to bury the dead. More than 10,000 doctors and nurses came to provide medical care. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were helped. Water and food were brought into the city by train, truck, and plane. 1. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 4 Line 2 3. Page 50 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 4 5. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5
II. 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 浏览报纸，我被照片震惊：在亚洲，飓风摧毁了一座城镇。(be shocked by)
Looking through my newspaper, I’m shocked by photos showing that a hurricane in Asia has destroyed a town.
2. 而且，欧洲东部的大雨引发了滑坡，欧洲南部的酷热造成了 森林大火。 (has caused)
What’s more, heavy rain in Eastern Europe has caused landslides, and the heat across Southern Europe has caused forest fires.
3. 心情沉重地走出车站，我突然感受到清风拂面。(with a heavy heart)
Stepping out of the station with a heavy heart, I suddenly feel a fresh wind on my face.
4. 2015年4月25日尼泊尔发生8.1级地震，是历史上最糟糕的地震之一。(magnitude, hit)
The 8.1-magnitude earthquake that hit Nepal on 25 April 2015, was one of the worst earthquakes in history.
5. 一听到消息，中国迅速开展组织紧急救助。(emergency aid)
On hearing the news, China was quick to start organizing emergency aid.
6. 1881年，台风袭击了越南城市海防，这场风暴造成了30万人死亡。(strike, Haiphong, cost the lives of)
In 1881, a typhoon struck the small Vietnamese city of Haiphong, costing the lives of up to 300,000 citizens.
7. 1972年2月3日，一场罕见的暴风雪袭击伊朗，造成一周极度低温。(cause a week of )
On Feb.3, 1972, a rare blizzard hit Iran, causing a week of extremely low temperatures.
8. 这场暴风雪带来积雪深达7.9米，造成约4,000人丧生。（result in the deaths of ）
The snow storm brought as much as 7.9 metres of snow, resulting in the deaths of about 4,000 people.
III. 美文体验馆
“Dad,” whispered Tariq, “Are you awake ” Dad opened his eyes. “What’s the matter, son ” Tariq couldn’t sleep and he felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. All day long he felt like something was about to happen. Dad whispered back to his son: “You could be right. Go back to bed, good boy.”
Tariq shook his head. “I’m going downstairs where it’s cooler. Why don’t you come with me ” dad refused, saying that he would stay there. Tariq went down the landing. He and his father were alone in the house. His mother and sister had gone to visit relatives. He went into the kitchen and lay on the floor. He felt cooler and fell asleep at last.
Suddenly he awoke with a shock. In the distance he could hear a roar, like thunder. It seemed to be coming closer and closer. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected. But this was no ordinary storm. Within seconds the whole house began to shake. The vase fell off the shelves with a crash. Tariq could feel the floor moving beneath him. What on earth was happening He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. It didn’t work. He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. Next moment a pile of bricks came down around him. A terrible choking smell filled the air.
At last the dust cleared. Tariq was amazed to find that he was still alive. The framework of the doorway must have saved him. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ”
No answer.
注意:
续写词数应为 150 左右;
请按如下格式作答。
But he heard a sniffed dog (搜救犬) barking. ______________________________________________________
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“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”. ________________________________________________
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主题语境 人与自然
文章出处 Teen’s Space英语街：英语读后续写1（原创试题06）
词数 正文英文词数271，续写第一段首句7个单词，续写第二段首句9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2) One night, Tariq, together with Dad indoors, felt hot and realised something strange might happen.
Build-up (Para3) A terrible storm came and Tariq reacted, but he was trapped.
Climax (Para.4-5) Trapped, Tariq kept alive, but he couldn’t contact Dad.
Resolution (续写第一段) But he heard a sniffer dog barking.
Ending (续写第二段) “Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”
Why 故事主题 自然灾害 (面对突如其来的地震，自救和被搜救)
How 写作手法 第三人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 Tariq Dad
1. He couldn’t sleep and felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. 2. He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. He reached the back door... 3. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ” Tariq超前意识到有暴风雨的发生。 Tariq反应快，机智。 Tariq强烈的责任感，危机尚未解除，放心不下父亲的安危。 Dad refused, saying that he would stay upstairs. No answer. Dad没有听从Tariq的建议，没有察觉到异常。 面对Tariq的呼叫，没能回应，生死未卜
场景 晚上，家中，遭遇地震
语言风格 平实质朴
伏笔/照应 Maybe there’s a storm coming .All day long he felt like something was about to happen. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.
【素材积累】
Para. 1
1. whisper v.低语；耳语
whisper to sb.
Para. 2
1. shake one’s head 摇头
2. go downstairs 下楼
3. Tariq went down the landing. (平台)
4. go to visit relatives 走亲戚
5. fall asleep 熟睡
Para. 3
awake with a shock 惊醒
roar 咆哮
The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.(must have done情态动词的完成式表示对过去发生的事情的肯定推测，表示：“一定怎么了”；just as引导方式状语从句，表示“正如”)
fall off 落下来
He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. (句式：完全倒装)
A terrible smell filled the air. (无灵主语)
Para. 4
be amazed to find that...
The framework of the doorway must have saved him.
call out 大声叫喊
【参考范文】
续写思路：
Para. 1：本文讲述了Tariq和父亲在闷热的夜晚睡觉的时候，遭遇了地震，被搜救犬营救的故事。续文第一段提示语告知“他听到了搜救犬的叫声”，此段可写他被搜救犬营救的过程。
Para. 2：根据续文第二段提示语可知， 作者的父亲还没有被找到，那么第二段就可写搜救父亲的过程和父子团聚的场景。
But he heard a sniffer dog barking. He struggled to know what was going on outside, but he couldn’t move. Maybe someone was approaching here. “Are they my family Or my relatives ” without any more thought, Tariq determined to call for help. “Help! Help! I’m here! Help!” Then came a burst of footsteps and noise, nearer and nearer. The dog barked more fiercely, and somebody called out: “Here! Someone is alive!” Later, someone began to dig the ruins, which buried Tariq entirely. Gradually, a large thread of torch light came to Tariq’s eyes/
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ” Nobody replied. “Where did your dad stay when the earthquake came ” One man asked Tariq. Tariq tried to point to the right spot where his dad was sleeping. And immediately the dog was ordered to search for anyone alive. A few minutes later, surprising shouts passed along, “Dad is here! Here!” “Hold on! Don’t fall asleep!” They cried. When his dad was carried to him, Tariq could hardly recognize him, for his dad was covered with mud all over the body. But Tariq ran to hug his dad firmly for a long time.
IV 技能锻造营
Apostrophe (顿呼), 即：发出呼语。
定义一：指在演说、抒情文章中或诗歌中突然用第二人称对不在场的人或对拟人的事物发出呼语的一种修辞方式。
定义二：对一个人（通常是不在场的人）或一个人格化的物发出的称呼，通常借助感叹词“哦，啊”等表现，属于独立成分。
例如：
“Ugh, Weibo, why won’t you load my messages ” “啊，微博，你为什么不加载我的消息？”
“Hold on, my son’s driving me crazy---Robert, come back here, stop running with a knife.”
(与人通话中) 别挂线，我的儿子让我抓狂---罗伯特，快给我过来，不要拿着刀到处跑。”