当柔弱女子遇见tough机车党 From Fear to Respect 2025年1月八省续写 讲义-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

当柔弱女子遇见tough机车党 From Fear to Respect 2025年1月八省续写
题目如下：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers – very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men – all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club – standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
Para.2 When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
文章分析（人物和事件）：
人物：关注主人公的成长和愿望的满足
主人公：从一开始想去看纪录片，能看出她富有爱心，热爱动物。尽管害怕独自外出，但还是勇敢地前往剧院，体现出她的勇敢和对热爱之事的执着。在看到 bikers 时的紧张害怕，以及后续发现真相后的转变，又展现出她作为普通人正常的心理反应和能够反思、接纳的开放心态，实现个人成长。
bikers：作为主人公的观察对象出现。从外表看，他们高大强壮，穿着带有俱乐部徽章的服装，给人一种不好接近的感觉。但实际上，他们是富有爱心、善良且慷慨的人。这引发了作者的反思 。
事件：抓住主要冲突，确定价值观的导向
冲突与悬念设置：故事开篇，作者被关于动物救助的纪录片吸引，却因同事不愿同行且担心夜间独自外出安全而犹豫。当她抵达剧院，看到一群看似不好惹的 bikers 时，紧张感瞬间拉满，这一情节制造了强烈的冲突与悬念，读者不禁为作者的安全担忧。
情节反转：作者硬着头皮进入剧院后，发现里面还有更多 bikers，内心极度不安。但随着电影开始，情节发生反转，原来这些 bikers 是动物救援组织成员，完全颠覆了作者之前的刻板印象。
可以利用的重要线索：
1. 文章第一段“A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event.”这句话告诉了我们很重要的两个线索，“several local animal shelters”&“ this fundraising event”，我们可以推断这个电影院的活动是当地举办的，用来为保护动物而募集资金的，后面续写可以出现资金募集活动，这些bikers都是local animal shelters活动的支持者。
2. 文章第四段“all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club”，我们可以让“insignia”在后文再次出现，用于揭示身份的铺垫工作。
3. 续写第二段段首句中“When the film began, I realized that...”可以看出我是在电影开始后才意识到他们的身份，所以电影的内容必定与他们的身份有关。
续写部分分析：
Para.1 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
本段描绘主人公进入电影院后的所见、所闻和所感。可以
①描绘bikers聚在一起兴致勃勃地聊动物救助，主人公不经意间听到后就不太害怕了，并开始好奇这群大汉到底是来电影院干什么的；
②也可以描写某位大汉面带微笑和主人公打招呼，化解我的不安；
③也可以描述我从大汉身边经过时看到他们的徽章是可爱的小狗，让我心生好奇，不再害怕。
这里需要注意的是，续写文章中有大量语言描述主人公的情绪，所以本着续写与原文的协同性原则，本段在描述情绪上一定要花费点心思。老师要提醒学生们情绪过度的自然性与合理性，从害怕转为不太害怕+好奇（太害怕是不会有好奇情绪的）才能顺利过度到下一段得知真相后的惊讶、后悔、钦佩。
Para.2 When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
这部分部分需要展开写电影的内容，在观影过程中我观察bikers的反应，以及电影放映之后积极为动物救助站捐款的行为，还可以设计一个给“我”送徽章的情节。收尾时除了点出不要以貌取人，还可以写这群善良的bikers送我回旅馆，呼应文章的开头我独自一人出门感到害怕的情节。
范文：
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My unease grew as I squeezed past their leather jackets and frightening tattoos(纹身). With shaky hands, I purchased my ticket and found a seat near the back, longing to remain unnoticed. However, my nervousness began to waver(摆动;踌躇) as I overheard(无意中听到) words like “rescue” and “adoption” in their conversations. Confused, I glanced at their jackets again and noticed paw prints and words like “Rescue”. My previous fear slowly faded and gave way to curiosity. Though still nervous, I tried to calm my nerves as the theatre lights dimmed(变暗).
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. Revealing before my eyes were scene after scene where these tough-looking bikers navigated(横渡；穿过) dangerous areas to save missing animals, bringing them to shelters, and even nursed them back to health in their own homes. Gone was my initial fear, replaced by overwhelming admiration and shame. When the lights came back on, I finally got a clear look at the insignia on their jackets—a simple paw print with the words “Ride for Rescue” boldly (显眼地) displayed underneath. Walking out of the theater, I felt a kind of awe mingled with guilt. I not only witnessed the beauty of compassion(同情怜悯) but also learned to see beyond stereotypes（刻板印象）.