读后续写 母亲为了实现孩子有车梦 把所存积蓄全情投入 讲义 河南天一大联考2024-2025学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题

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天一大联考2024-2025学年(上)高一年级期末考试
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After six months of searching, I hadn’t found a car for my sixteen-year-old son Marcus, who just wanted a black car. Everything I’d seen required repairs, was a different color, or went above our $7,000 budget.
My drive to work was almost an hour each day and I often stayed late. Marcus’s dad, Robert, suffered from a serious illness and hardly drove. Marcus needed to attend daily football practice, weekly team meetings and dinners, as well as other after-school activities, forcing him to take rides with friends.
One evening, Marcus arrived home in a teammate’s new black car. When the teammate DaVaris rolled down the window to say hello, that new-car smell got into the air. I bent inside to look at the brown, soft leather seats.
“Very nice,” I said.
His face brightened with pride. “Thanks. Marcus said you were looking for a car.”
“ I’m sure we’ll find something soon,” I spoke with confidence I didn’t feel. It wouldn’t be a new car, for sure. I turned to Marcus. An eager look crossed his face as Davaris waved and backed out of the driveway. That look hurt my heart.
The next day, I ran into the mother of one of Marcus’s classmates- a doctor. The family had also been trying to find a car for their son. “ One of my patients wants to sell his car, but my son doesn’t like it,” She told me. I asked what type of car, and it turned out to be at the top of my wish list. “ Can you arrange for me to see it ”
The next day, Robert and I went to the home of the elderly man who was selling the car. It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch. It only covered 12,000 miles although it was six years old! Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it. But the engine made a normal sound and the speeding was smooth. This car had been well maintained(保养). There remained one question, a big one- the price.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed our of the car.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount(金额) we’d saved!
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After six months of searching, I hadn’t found a car for my sixteen-year-old son Marcus, who just wanted a black car(定从). Everything I’d seen(定从) required repairs(非谓语动词做后置定语), was a different color, or went above our $7,000 budget.
My drive to work was almost an hour each day and I often stayed late. Marcus’s dad, Robert, suffered from a serious illness and hardly drove. Marcus needed to attend daily football practice, weekly team meetings and dinners, as well as other after-school activities, forcing him to take rides with friends(非谓语动词做结果状语).
One evening, Marcus arrived home in a teammate’s new black car. When the teammate DaVaris rolled down the window to say hello, that new-car smell got into the air. I bent inside to look at the brown, soft leather seats.
“Very nice,” I said.
His face brightened with pride. “Thanks. Marcus said you were looking for a car(宾从).”
“ I’m sure we’ll find something soon(宾从),” I spoke with confidence I didn’t feel(定从). It wouldn’t be a new car, for sure. I turned to Marcus. An eager look crossed his face as Davaris waved and backed out of the driveway(状从). That look hurt my heart.
The next day, I ran into the mother of one of Marcus’s classmates- a doctor. The family had also been trying to find a car for their son. “ One of my patients wants to sell his car, but my son doesn’t like it,” She told me. I asked what type of car(宾从), and it turned out to be at the top of my wish list. “ Can you arrange for me to see it ”
The next day, Robert and I went to the home of the elderly man who was selling the car(定从). It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch. It only covered 12,000 miles although it was six years old(状从)! Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it. But the engine made a normal sound and the speeding was smooth. This car had been well maintained(保养). There remained one question, a big one- the price.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed our of the car.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount(金额) we’d saved!
1. 续写分析(表格)
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
类型 家庭情感类读后续写 “Marcus needed to attend daily football practice...”
思路构思 构思重点为展现母亲对儿子的爱与努力,围绕母亲寻找汽车的过程,着重情感转折点与人物心理活动。布局包括矛盾冲突(预算有限与儿子需求的矛盾)、情感转折(意外获得黑车的机会)、解决冲突(最终买到满意的汽车)。 “Marcus arrived home in a teammate’s new black car. That look hurt my heart.”
框架提炼 - 开头:描述母亲对儿子的担忧和努力;
- 中间:围绕与医生母亲的对话展开情节;
- 结尾:以解决冲突并让儿子感到满足为高潮。 “I’m sure we’ll find something soon,” I spoke with confidence I didn’t feel.
实施 使用“故事山”模式:
- 起点:找车失败,陷入困境;
- 上升:得知有一辆车可买;
- 高潮:见到车后发现完美符合需求;
- 下降:价格谈判;
- 解决:买车成功并满足情感需求。 “Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it.”
承接事项 - 人物心情衔接:母亲的忧虑到满足;
- 语言衔接:保留对Marcus期待的细节描写;
- 情节衔接:黑车线索与预算线索融合。 “An eager look crossed his face as Davaris waved and backed out of the driveway.”
设计内容 巧妙设计车主背景(如老人对汽车的感情),加入更多心理和环境描写,如“握着方向盘时的犹豫”,增强代入感。 “It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch. It only covered 12,000 miles although it was six years old!”
2. Story Mountain 思维导图分析
Story Mountain
起点:家庭经济有限,买车需求迫切。
原文句子:“I hadn’t found a car for my sixteen-year-old son Marcus.”
上升:遇到医生母亲,得知有机会买到车。
原文句子:“One of my patients wants to sell his car.”
高潮:见到黑车,符合所有期待。
原文句子:“It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch.”
下降:价格悬念。
原文句子:“There remained one question, a big one—the price.”
解决:最终价格正好符合预算。
原文句子:“It was the exact amount we’d saved!”
3. 英文例句与高级替换词
情境描写例句
动作描写
She clenched her fists, her heart pounding with anticipation.
He ran his fingers across the shiny black surface of the car.
She hesitated before opening the car door, her fingers trembling slightly.
He nodded eagerly, unable to hide his excitement.
She let out a long sigh, relief washing over her.
He adjusted his posture, sitting straighter with a determined look.
Her eyes darted around the room, searching for a sign of approval.
He pressed his foot on the gas pedal gently, feeling the smooth acceleration.
心理描写
A mixture of doubt and hope swirled in her mind.
He couldn’t shake off the nervous feeling in his chest.
Her mind raced through possibilities, trying to make a decision.
A wave of excitement crashed over him, leaving him breathless.
She battled her inner fears, determined to make the right choice.
His heart sank at the thought of yet another failure.
Relief flooded her as she realized everything had worked out.
The weight of uncertainty lifted, leaving her feeling lighter.
环境描写
The sun glinted off the car’s polished surface, casting long shadows on the driveway.
The faint smell of leather lingered in the air, adding to the luxury of the car’s interior.
A cool breeze rustled the leaves, creating a calm and peaceful atmosphere.
The small, neat garage was filled with the faint scent of motor oil.
The quiet hum of the engine filled the space, a soothing rhythm.
The evening light bathed the driveway in warm hues of orange and pink.
The old man’s house stood in a serene neighborhood, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The faint sound of birds chirping broke the stillness of the moment.
高级替换词
场景 常用单词 高级替换
描述情绪 happy overjoyed, elated
sad heartbroken, despondent
nervous jittery, apprehensive
描述动作 walk stride, saunter
look gaze, glance
环境描述 beautiful picturesque, breathtaking
quiet serene, tranquil
4. 高中语法现象与语料积累
语法现象 例句 分析
过去完成时 “Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it.” 表达动作完成的先后顺序,用于突出母亲之前的挫折经历。
定语从句 “It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch, which made me fall in love with it.” “which” 引导非限制性定语从句,补充说明汽车外观的吸引力。
现在分词作状语 “An eager look crossing his face, Marcus waved at his friend.” 描写Marcus神态与动作,同时表现人物心理。
名词性从句 “What touched me most was Marcus’s eager expression.” “What” 引导主语从句,表达触动母亲的具体情感。
虚拟语气 “If it hadn’t been for the doctor, we wouldn’t have found the car.” 表达假设情况,突出医生母亲的重要作用。
生词短语积累
budget (n.) 预算
Synonyms: allowance, allocation
Antonyms: overspend
Example: She set a strict budget for her son’s car.
scratch (n.) 划痕
Synonyms: mark, blemish
Antonyms: perfection
Example: The car was shiny black, with hardly a scratch.
Possible Answers
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. Having thoroughly inspected the vehicle(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I exchanged a nervous glance with Robert. The elderly man smiled warmly, gesturing us into his living room(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “I’ve kept it well-maintained for years,” he said, a trace of nostalgia in his voice(独立主格). After a brief pause, he named the price: $7,000. My heart skipped a beat—it was exactly our budget. For a moment, disbelief rendered me speechless. Marcus’s longing face flashed in my mind, and I felt a sense of relief wash over me. “We’ll take it,” I said firmly. The elderly man’s eyes lit up as he handed me the keys(状从). Driving home later(非谓语动词短做伴随动作), I imagined Marcus’s reaction. The thought of his joy made every struggle worth it.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount we’d saved(定从)! The next morning, Marcus’s excitement knew no bounds when he saw the shiny black car(状从) parked(非谓语动词做后置定语) in our driveway. His eyes widened, and he looked at me in sheer amazement. “Is this...for me ” he stammered. “Every bit of it(习语),” I replied with a smile. He ran his fingers across the polished surface, his grin growing wider(独立主格). Marcus eagerly climbed inside, adjusting the rearview mirror(非谓语动词短做伴随动作) as if it were his throne(状从). The sunlit morning reflected off the car’s spotless windows(环境描写), symbolizing a fresh start(非谓语动词短做伴随动作). As I watched him drive off to football practice(状从), his enthusiasm was contagious. For the first time in months, I felt a profound sense of fulfillment, knowing that love and persistence had won the day(宾从).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. The old man poured us tea, his voice kind(独立主格) as he shared stories about the car's past(状从). “This car brought me great joy,” he said, his hands trembling slightly(独立主格). When he revealed the price, my breath caught(独立主格)—$7,000, precisely what we had saved(同位从). It felt like fate. Robert, usually reserved(adj做补语), whispered, “We must take it.” Signing the paperwork(非谓语动词短做伴随动作), I felt a wave of gratitude for this unexpected gift. On the drive back, the smooth hum of the engine and the sight of the setting sun painted the perfect scene(环境描写). I couldn’t wait to reveal the surprise to Marcus, imagining his wide smile and disbelief(非谓语动词短做伴随动作) when he finally saw the car of his dreams(状从).
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount we’d saved! I called Marcus to the driveway that evening. He stepped out hesitantly, and when his eyes landed on the black car(状从), they lit up like fireworks. “It’s yours,” I said softly. He froze for a moment, then sprinted toward me, wrapping me in a tight hug(非谓语动词短做伴随动作). “Thank you, Mom!” His voice cracked with emotion. Watching him inspect the interior with awe, I noticed the burden of our past struggles lift. That night, Marcus washed the car under the moonlight, humming happily(非谓语动词短做伴随动作). Though the journey to this moment had been tough(状从), it was worth every sleepless night. The memory of his joy was a reminder of the power of perseverance and love.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. The elderly man, leaning slightly on his cane(非谓语动词短做伴随动作), motioned us to his porch. “This car has been my pride,” he said, his tone tinged with nostalgia(独立主格). “But I’d rather see a young boy enjoy it now.” The price—$7,000—was a miracle. As relief coursed through me(状从), I eagerly handed over the money. “It’ll be in good hands,” I promised. Driving home(非谓语动词短做时间状语), I couldn’t stop smiling. The engine purred like a dream, and every turn of the wheel filled me with anticipation for Marcus’s reaction(细节描写心理环境). This car wasn’t just a gift; it was proof of our hard work, a promise fulfilled.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount we’d saved! The next morning, Marcus stumbled outside, rubbing his sleepy eyes(非谓语动词短做伴随动作). When he saw the black car(状从), he froze, mouth agape(独立主格). “No way...” he whispered, then broke into a run, touching the car(非谓语动词短做伴随动作) as if to confirm it was real(状从+宾从). His joy was contagious, and I laughed as he bounced around like a little kid(人物描写). “It’s perfect, Mom!” he exclaimed, opening the door and sliding into the driver’s seat.(非谓语动词短做伴随动作) He glanced at me through the window, his gratitude unspoken but clear in his expression(独立主格). As he drove off to practice(状从), I stood there, the morning breeze carrying a sense of quiet triumph(状从). This moment would be etched in my heart forever.
亮点语法和词汇分析
高级语法现象
过去完成时:
Example: "Having thoroughly inspected the vehicle, I exchanged a nervous glance with Robert."
Usage: 表示在过去某一动作之前已经完成的动作,提升时间逻辑表达。
Related phrases: "Having experienced," "Having decided."
非限制性定语从句:
Example: "The sunlit morning reflected off the car’s spotless windows, symbolizing a fresh start."
Usage: 补充说明画面细节,增加生动性。
Synonyms: "which indicated," "that revealed."
分词短语作状语:
Example: "Driving home later, I imagined Marcus’s reaction."
Usage: 表示时间、原因或伴随状态,减少句子冗长。
Related phrases: "Smiling softly," "Feeling relieved."
亮点词汇短语
情绪描写
lit up with joy: 表示愉快
heart skipped a beat: 表示紧张或期待
eyes widened in amazement: 表示震惊
felt a wave of gratitude: 表示感激
动作描写
ran his fingers across: 表示动作细节
froze for a moment: 表示震惊
wrapped me in a tight hug: 表示情感流露
bounced around like a little kid: 生动展现动作
升级词汇选项
普通词 高级替换 联想词 例句
happy elated, overjoyed delighted, ecstatic "She was overjoyed at the unexpected gift."
surprised astonished shocked, stunned "He was astonished by the car’s condition."
sad despondent heartbroken, forlorn "She felt despondent after repeated failures."
car vehicle automobile, ride "The vehicle gleamed under the sunlight."
官方:
Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. “ How much are you asking ” I steeled myself for the man’s answer. He studied his car(这个词真好) as if unwilling to part with it(状从压缩). He explained he was already ninety-three and that his family wanted him to quit driving for the sake of safety(宾从). He placed a hand on the car to steady himself. His stare met mine. “This car is worth more than what I’m asking(宾从). But I’ll let you have it for $7,000.”
It was the exact amount we’d saved! A block formed in my throat(情绪描写) as I extended my hand(状从). “Deal.” I went to the bank and withdrew the money to pay him. Robert drove our car home. Less than an hour before Marcus returned home, I hid the car in the garage. When he arrived(状从), I opened the garage door. Sunlight reflected from the black car(环境描写). Just as I brought the camera to my eye(状从), Marcus turned to me with a wide smile and a double thumbs-up. Click! I caught that moment of joy.
Dear Tom,
How have you been lately I’m preparing for an English speech competition with the topic of “Nothing is out of reach for the youth”. It will be held in our school hall next month.
I’ve been working hard on it. I’ve collected a lot of inspiring stories about young people achieving great things. However, I’m facing some difficulties. I have trouble expressing my ideas precisely in English and making my speech vivid and attractive. Also, I get really nervous when thinking about speaking in front of a large audience.
I know you are excellent at public speaking. Could you share some tips on how to improve my language expression and overcome my anxiety I would be extremely grateful for your help.
yours, Lihua.
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