读后续写：二十英里外的足球之约 讲义-山西省太原市2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
记叙文——人与社会——以足球会友（B2U3）
I spent my childhood in a small town. At that time I was crazy about football as much as all the other boys. I spent every spare moment kicking a ball around.
Our town's football team wasn't anything special. We lacked proper training facilities, and no one really knew who we were. But none of that mattered to me. My teammates and I were determined. Every day after school, we gathered to practice, driven by the dream of one day competing in a major tournament(联赛). But so far, we hadn't even played a single match against another team.
One day, after practice, I was walking home when something unusual caught my eye. Something red was swinging on the branches of an old maple tree. Curious, I walked closer and saw it was a bright red balloon.
The balloon still had a long string attached, and at the end of the string, there was a plastic bag. To my surprise, the bag wasn't empty. Inside, I found a small piece of paper folded neatly into a square. I unfolded it and discovered a letter. It read:
Dear Friend,
If you have found this letter, it means my balloon finally popped. I used the balloon to see how far my letter would travel. I launched it from Orange County on May 1. I'm a super football lover. If you would like to be my pen-pal, please write back to me. Enclosed is my address.
Sincerely,
Joe
I couldn't believe it. Orange County was about twenty miles away, so the balloon had traveled quite a distance. More excitingly, Joe loved football as well!
注意：
(1)续写词数应为120个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried home to write back to Joe. _______________________________________________
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. ______________________________
文章大意 “我”童年在小镇生活，热爱足球，所在球队虽条件简陋，但怀揣参加大赛的梦想坚持训练。一天训练后，“我”在路边枫树上发现一个气球，气球上系着装有信的塑料袋，写信人乔来自二十英里外的橘郡，也是足球爱好者，希望与捡到信的人成为笔友。这一发现让“我”惊喜不已，因为找到了志同道合的朋友。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 在小镇热爱足球，球队条件差但坚持训练，渴望参赛。
发展：“我” 发现气球中的信，得知乔是远方热爱足球的人，两人开始通信。
高潮：乔所在球队与 “我” 所在球队约定比赛，比赛当天紧张又期待。
结局：两队比赛，赛出风采，通过足球增进了彼此的友谊，实现以球会友。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：“I spent every spare moment kicking a ball around.” 表明 “我” 对足球的热爱程度。
回应：续写中，“我” 与乔因足球结缘，“我” 也积极为与乔所在球队的比赛做准备，这份热爱贯穿始终。
伏笔：“Our town's football team wasn't anything special. We lacked proper training facilities” 体现球队条件差。
回应：尽管条件差，但 “我” 和队友并未放弃，在与乔所在球队比赛时，依然全力以赴，展现出克服困难的决心。
伏笔：“My teammates and I were determined. Every day after school, we gathered to practice” 说明 “我” 和队友的坚持。
回应：为了与乔所在球队的比赛，大家更加努力训练，延续了这份坚持。
伏笔：“More excitingly, Joe loved football as well!” 突出两人共同的兴趣。
回应：这成为两人通信和后续约定比赛的基础，在比赛中更是增进了彼此的友谊。
伏笔：“I used the balloon to see how far my letter would travel. I launched it from Orange County on May 1.” 说明乔通过气球传递信件的行为。
回应：这一独特的方式开启了两人的联系，在后续的交流中，乔和 “我” 都对这次奇妙的相遇倍感珍惜。
续写要点
第一段续写：我急忙回到家就给乔写信。——本段续写的关键在于1.表达对于陌生且有相同爱好的“笔友”的激动心情；2.彼此交换信息并提出约球的想法（对接二段）——参考词汇有：crazy about football；teammates；dream of one day；play a single game；match；Joe
第二段续写：两支球队相见之日终于来了。——本段续写的关键在于体现真正的比赛精神——友谊第一——参考词汇有：red balloon；teammate；Joe
情感线
发现信件时，“我” 感到惊喜与兴奋，因为找到了有共同爱好的朋友。在通信过程中，友谊逐渐加深，对彼此的期待也越来越高。得知要比赛时，兴奋中夹杂着紧张，期待在赛场上展现实力。比赛结束后，无论胜负，都因这场以球会友的经历感到满足，友谊得到进一步升华，从最初的笔友情谊发展为志同道合的球友之情。
故事线
“我” 在小镇热爱足球，球队条件差但坚持训练。
“我” 发现气球中的信，结识乔，两人开始通信。
随着交流加深，乔和 “我” 约定让各自球队进行比赛。
“我” 和队友为比赛努力训练，积极准备。
比赛当天，双方球队全力以赴，赛出风采。
比赛结束，两队通过足球增进了友谊，实现以球会友。
主旨升华句
Football is not just a sport; it's a bridge that connects hearts and builds lasting friendships across distances.
Through the shared passion for football, we can break down barriers and form bonds that transcend geographical boundaries.
The beauty of football lies not only in the goals scored but also in the friendships forged on the field.
In the world of football, a simple balloon - borne letter can spark a journey of friendship and mutual understanding.
Our love for football unites us, turning strangers into allies and creating memories that will last a lifetime.
写作示范
示范一
I hurried home to write back to Joe. With excitement coursing through my veins, I poured my heart onto the paper. I told him all about our small - town football team, how we trained with enthusiasm despite the lack of proper facilities, and our burning desire to play in big tournaments. I also expressed my eagerness to share more football stories with him. Days later, I received his reply, and our correspondence became a regular thing. As time passed, we decided to arrange a friendly match between our two teams.
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. The field was filled with an electric atmosphere. Both teams were fired up. We ran, passed, and shot with all our might. The game was intense, with neither side willing to yield. Despite our limited skills compared to theirs, we didn't back down. After the match, regardless of the result, we all gathered, sharing laughter and stories. Our love for football had brought us together, and a beautiful friendship was blossoming.
示范二
I hurried home to write back to Joe. I described in detail our daily training sessions, the challenges we faced, and the funny moments during practice. I couldn't wait to send it, imagining his reaction. When his reply came, we started chatting about our football idols and favorite plays. Eventually, we planned a match.
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. The stands were filled with cheering spectators. Our team took to the field with determination. Joe's team was strong, but we held our own. The players on both sides displayed amazing teamwork. Every pass, every tackle was filled with passion. At the end of the game, we shook hands, congratulating each other. Through this match, our friendship grew deeper, and we knew that football had given us something truly special.
参考答案
I hurried home to write back to Joe. In the letter, I found it hard to control my exciting feeling, for the reason that I couldn’t believe about twenty miles away from us, there did exist a boy, like me and my teammates, crazy about football. I also told Joe about our situation, especially our dream of one day playing a single game. So I suggested a match to Joe. And excitingly, I received another letter very soon, telling me “no problem.”（4句）
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. At first, my teammates, including me, had butterflies in our stomachs. But the moment we both sides stepped on the field/pitch, it was only excitement to perform our skills and cooperation that really mattered, with nervousness disappearing immediately. After 90-minute fierce competition, we drew with Joe’s team. We didn’t care about the result, but were indulged in this unbelievable experience, because no one but Joe and me knew that all owed to the red balloon.（4句）
锦言妙语积累：
1.it形式宾语：found it hard to control my exciting feeling
2.it与强调句：it was only excitement to perform our skills and cooperation that really mattered
3.谓语的强调：there did exist
4.同位语从句：for the reason that
5.非谓语做定语：I received another letter very soon, telling me “no problem.”；excitement to perform our skills and cooperation
6.紧张：had butterflies in our stomachs
7.沉浸于：were indulged in