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山东省烟台市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业水平考试英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her. It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel. She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave. “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small. It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day when her father went for his camera because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony.
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed. “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera(状从省略) that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her(定从). It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments(目的状语) with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel(介词短语做时间状语). She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes(独立主格), Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave(adj做主语补语). “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital(adj修饰不定代词放其后), could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say(动作串), “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small(adj做后置定语). It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this(非谓语动词做原因状语), Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day(倒装) when her father went for his camera(定从) because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony(定从).
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
1. 按高考英语读后续写要求，对该文章进行分类
分类 类型分析
类型 情感类（家庭责任与亲情）
续写思路构思 本篇文章续写重点在于情感的逐步解开和父女关系的修复。续写中要注重情感的转折和人物心理的变化，展示Jade逐渐面对责任、勇敢认错的过程，以及父亲的理解和宽容。
布局与框架提炼 续写的结构可以分为两个部分：第一部分是Jade鼓起勇气与父亲对话；第二部分是父亲的宽容和温情展示。
实施 首先描述Jade内心的挣扎，接着让她鼓起勇气去和父亲谈论失误，再展示父亲的宽容。
承接原文的事项 1. 保持Jade对父亲的愧疚感； 2. 继续强调相机的情感价值； 3. 注意过渡情感变化，从悔恼到坦诚；
整体注意事项 1. 语言要简洁且富有感情； 2. 保持人物心理状态的一致性； 3. 通过动作和心理描写体现情感的变化。
巧妙设计续写内容 在续写中要通过Jade的内心独白、父亲的反应来推动情感的发展，并用对话推动故事的走向。
2. 故事山模式分析
阶段 内容分析 原文反应句
开端 Jade不小心摔坏了父亲最爱的相机。 "Unbelievable," Jade screamed while examining her camera.
上升 Jade不敢面对父亲，决定将相机放回父亲的抽屉里，避免父亲发现。 "Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer."
高潮 Jade担心父亲会责怪她。 "Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again."
下降 Jade准备坦诚告诉父亲，但仍感到内心矛盾。 "Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer."
结局 父亲发现相机故障后，母亲安慰他，Jade开始下定决心要面对问题。 "Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one."
3. 续写时可以与原文衔接的内容分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 Jade为家庭成员感到愧疚，父亲则沉浸在对相机的珍视中。 "It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family."
情感层次 Jade的内心充满自责，而父亲则无法理解相机的损坏。 "What’s wrong with my camera "
关键情节点 Jade决定面对自己的错误并主动与父亲交流。 "Jade gathered up her courage."
语言特色 使用简单却富有感情的对话，展现父女之间的情感冲突与和解。 "Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one."
心理描写 Jade的心理由自责到勇敢告知真相，再到获得父亲的理解。 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings..."
动作描写 Jade的内心活动通过她的动作传达，如放回相机、收拾东西等。 "She held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel."
环境描写 描述环境通过影响人物情感变化，如海滩、家庭场景的描述。 "She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments..."
隐含主题 面对错误的责任，勇敢承担并获得亲人的宽容。 "It’s beyond repair."
4. 续写所需的动作、心理、环境描写推荐英文例句
场景 动作描写 心理描写 环境描写
紧张时刻 Jade nervously paced around the room. Jade felt her heart racing with guilt. The room was dimly lit, casting long shadows across the floor.
安慰对话 Father gently put a hand on Jade’s shoulder. Jade tried to calm herself, taking deep breaths. The soft glow of the kitchen light filled the space with warmth.
反思时刻 Jade stared at the broken camera for a long time. She felt a lump rise in her throat as memories of her father’s love for the camera flooded her mind. The quiet hum of the air conditioner filled the silence between them.
解开心结 Jade slowly walked up to her father with the camera in her hand. Jade’s chest tightened with fear as she prepared to confess. The sunlight streamed through the window, illuminating their faces.
5. 文章中的语法现象分析
语法现象 例句 搭配/近义词
时态 "Jade gathered up her courage." Simple past tense showing a completed action.
情态动词 "Maybe it’s too old to work." "Could" for possibility, "Should" for advice.
条件句 "If you want to fix it, you need to try harder." "If" clauses to show cause and effect.
感叹句 "Unbelievable!" "How incredible!"
6. 高考核心词汇分析
单词 词性 词义 近义词 联想词 例句
resigned 形容词 顺从的，听天由命的 patient, tolerant acceptance, forbearance Jade gave her a resigned look when she realized the camera was broken.
treasure 名词 宝藏，珍品 gem, valuable item precious, keepsake The camera was a treasure that Jade’s father cherished for years.
guilt 名词 内疚，愧疚 remorse, shame blame, regret Jade’s guilt made it hard for her to face her father.
comfort 动词 安慰，抚慰 console, soothe reassurance, solace Her mother comforted her, telling her everything would be okay.
treasure 动词 珍爱，珍藏 value, cherish protect, hold dear Jade's father treasured the camera for its memories.
Possible Answers
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had been avoiding the truth for days, but now it was time to come clean. With a deep breath(介词短语做状语), she walked to the living room where her father was sitting(定从), staring at the broken camera(非谓语动词做伴随动作). "Dad," she began, her voice shaking slightly(独立主格), "I need to tell you something about the camera." Her father looked up at her, a mixture of confusion and concern on his face(名词短语做补语). Jade’s heart raced, but she forced herself to continue. "I accidentally dropped it in the water during the barbecue, and I couldn’t fix it." She braced herself for his anger, but to her surprise, her father’s expression softened. He reached out and placed a hand on her shoulder. "Thank you for telling me," he said, his voice calm(独立主格).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Her father had left a note: “For capturing all our moments, just like the old camera.” Jade’s eyes filled with tears as she realized(状从) that her father wasn’t angry at her(宾从). He understood that accidents happened, and he was willing to move on. As she picked up the phone(状从), her father entered the room and smiled. "I know you’ll make up for it by capturing even more memories with this one." Jade felt a weight lift off her shoulders(补语), knowing her mistake had been forgiven(宾从) and that her father trusted her once more(宾从 that不可省).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. Her hands trembled as she reached for the camera(状从), the truth bubbling inside her(独立主格). She knew she couldn’t avoid it forever(宾从). "Dad," she said, her voice barely above a whisper(独立主格), "I’m really sorry, but I ruined your camera." Her father looked at her, a trace of confusion in his eyes. Jade’s throat tightened as she continued(状从), "I took it to the beach and accidentally dropped it in the water. I tried to fix it, but it’s beyond repair(原文衔接)." Silence filled the room, and for a moment, Jade feared her father would be furious(宾从). But to her relief, he simply sighed and gave her a gentle smile. "I guess these things happen(宾从)," he said softly. "Thank you for telling me."
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. A note accompanied it: “For the moments that matter, no matter what.” Jade picked up the phone, feeling(非谓语动词做伴随动作) a wave of gratitude wash over her(宾从). Her father’s forgiveness meant more to her than any camera could(比较状从). She knew she had made a mistake(宾从), but his willingness to move forward was a lesson in itself. As she glanced at the phone, her father appeared in the doorway. "Let’s start capturing some new memories together," he said, a twinkle in his eye(独立主格). Jade smiled, feeling a renewed sense of connection with her family(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had been holding on to the guilt for days, but now it was time to face it. "Dad," she began, "there’s something I need to tell you(定从) about the camera." Her father looked up from his chair, his expression filled with curiosity(独立主格). Jade hesitated for a moment before continuing, "I’m really sorry, but I accidentally dropped it in the water. I didn’t mean to ruin it, but it’s broken now." Her father’s face showed no anger, only a quiet sadness. "I know how much that camera meant to you(宾从)," Jade added, her voice full of regret(宾从). To her surprise, her father smiled faintly and said, "It’s okay, Jade. Accidents happen."
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Attached to it was a simple note: "For new memories." Jade felt a sense of relief wash over her(宾从). She had been afraid of her father’s anger, but his understanding had put her at ease. As she held the phone in her hands(状从), she realized that the camera was a symbol of her family’s cherished memories, but it was the people in her life that truly mattered(定从). Her father came into the room and smiled. "Let’s create new moments together," he said warmly. Jade nodded, knowing that forgiveness had allowed them to move forward(宾从).
语法加分点分析
虚拟语气（Subjunctive Mood）
搭配：I wish, If only, It's time
同义替换：I hope, I regret
例句：
If only I had been more careful, the camera wouldn’t have been ruined.
I wish I could have prevented this from happening.
倒装句（Inversion）
搭配：Never before, Not only... but also
同义替换：Rarely, Seldom
例句：
Never before had Jade felt so guilty about an accident.
Not only did her father forgive her, but he also showed her compassion.
情态动词（Modal Verbs）
搭配：could have, might have, must have
同义替换：should have, would have
例句：
Jade could have been more careful with the camera.
Her father must have understood it was an accident.
情绪与动作描写亮点词汇
情绪描写：
Tears of sadness (悲伤的眼泪), relief (宽慰), guilt (内疚)
升级替换：
Sadness → grief → sorrow
Relief → comfort → ease
动作描写：
Gathered her courage (鼓起勇气), placed a hand on her shoulder (搭上肩膀), picked up the phone (拿起手机)
升级替换：
Gathered her courage → summoned her bravery → mustered her resolve
Pick up → take → grasp
语料积累与升级替换选项
短语升级：
To face the truth → confront the reality → come to terms with
Move forward → progress → advance
常见词汇替换：
Forgiveness → absolution → pardon
Accident → mishap → incident
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt: "Her voice quivered with guilt."
Surprise: "To Jade's surprise, he smiled."
Disappointment: "She could already imagine his disappointment."
动作描写亮点词汇：
Gathered up her courage: "She took a deep breath, steeling herself for the difficult conversation."
Steeling herself: "Every step felt like a mountain."
Placed: "She slowly walked to her father's study and placed the broken camera on his desk."
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt: "Her voice barely above a whisper."
Relief: "I wasn’t upset with you, Jade."
Regret: "I’m so sorry."
动作描写亮点词汇：
Walked slowly: "She walked slowly towards her father."
Paused: "She paused at the door."
Took a deep breath: "Jade took a deep breath."
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt: "The weight of her actions was overwhelming."
Relief: "I’m not mad."
Regret: "I ruined your camera."
动作描写亮点词汇：
Hesitated: "Jade hesitated, then placed the camera in front of him."
Looked at her: "He reached out and patted her hand."
高中语法加分点分析
语法点 例句 搭配/近义词替换
虚拟语气 "I knew something was wrong with it." "I had a feeling something was wrong."
过去完成时 "I had dropped your camera into the ocean." "I had ruined your camera."
定语从句 "The camera, which was a gift from my mother, had been ruined." "The camera, a present from my mother, was destroyed."
情态动词 "I knew I shouldn’t have taken the camera." "I realized I should not have taken the camera."
非谓语动词 "Not wanting to disappoint her father, Jade confessed her mistake." "Afraid of disappointing her father, Jade admitted her mistake."
升级替换词汇、短语和语料
短语 替换选项 例句
Gathered up her courage Steeled herself, Mustered her courage "She steeled herself for the difficult conversation."
Ruined Destroyed, Damaged, Wrecked "I damaged your camera, Dad."
Regret Remorse, Guilt, Repentance "I feel deep remorse for my actions."
Comforted Reassured, Soothed, Consolled "Her father reassured her that everything would be fine."
Sighed deeply Exhaled heavily, Let out a long breath "He exhaled heavily, showing his relief."
高考核心词汇分析
单词 词性 词义 近义词 联想词 例句
Courage 名词 勇气 Bravery, Valor Fearlessness, Boldness Jade gathered up her courage before confessing to her father.
Regret 名词 遗憾，后悔 Remorse, Sorrow Guilt, Repentance Jade regretted taking her father's camera without permission.
Ruined 动词 破坏，毁坏 Destroyed, Damaged Wrecked, Spoiled She ruined the camera by dropping it in the water.
Comfort 动词 安慰，抚慰 Soothe, Reassure Console, Calm Her mother comforted her when she confessed her mistake.
Guilt 名词 内疚，愧疚 Remorse, Shame Blame, Regret Jade felt guilty for ruining her father’s camera.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her. It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel. She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave. “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small. It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day when her father went for his camera because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony.
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed. “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera(状从省略) that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her(定从). It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments(目的状语) with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel(介词短语做时间状语). She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes(独立主格), Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave(adj做主语补语). “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital(adj修饰不定代词放其后), could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say(动作串), “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small(adj做后置定语). It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this(非谓语动词做原因状语), Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day(倒装) when her father went for his camera(定从) because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony(定从).
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
1. 按高考英语读后续写要求，对该文章进行分类
分类 类型分析
类型 情感类（家庭责任与亲情）
续写思路构思 本篇文章续写重点在于情感的逐步解开和父女关系的修复。续写中要注重情感的转折和人物心理的变化，展示Jade逐渐面对责任、勇敢认错的过程，以及父亲的理解和宽容。
布局与框架提炼 续写的结构可以分为两个部分：第一部分是Jade鼓起勇气与父亲对话；第二部分是父亲的宽容和温情展示。
实施 首先描述Jade内心的挣扎，接着让她鼓起勇气去和父亲谈论失误，再展示父亲的宽容。
承接原文的事项 1. 保持Jade对父亲的愧疚感； 2. 继续强调相机的情感价值； 3. 注意过渡情感变化，从悔恼到坦诚；
整体注意事项 1. 语言要简洁且富有感情； 2. 保持人物心理状态的一致性； 3. 通过动作和心理描写体现情感的变化。
巧妙设计续写内容 在续写中要通过Jade的内心独白、父亲的反应来推动情感的发展，并用对话推动故事的走向。
2. 故事山模式分析
阶段 内容分析 原文反应句
开端 Jade不小心摔坏了父亲最爱的相机。 "Unbelievable," Jade screamed while examining her camera.
上升 Jade不敢面对父亲，决定将相机放回父亲的抽屉里，避免父亲发现。 "Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer."
高潮 Jade担心父亲会责怪她。 "Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again."
下降 Jade准备坦诚告诉父亲，但仍感到内心矛盾。 "Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer."
结局 父亲发现相机故障后，母亲安慰他，Jade开始下定决心要面对问题。 "Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one."
3. 续写时可以与原文衔接的内容分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 Jade为家庭成员感到愧疚，父亲则沉浸在对相机的珍视中。 "It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family."
情感层次 Jade的内心充满自责，而父亲则无法理解相机的损坏。 "What’s wrong with my camera "
关键情节点 Jade决定面对自己的错误并主动与父亲交流。 "Jade gathered up her courage."
语言特色 使用简单却富有感情的对话，展现父女之间的情感冲突与和解。 "Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one."
心理描写 Jade的心理由自责到勇敢告知真相，再到获得父亲的理解。 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings..."
动作描写 Jade的内心活动通过她的动作传达，如放回相机、收拾东西等。 "She held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel."
环境描写 描述环境通过影响人物情感变化，如海滩、家庭场景的描述。 "She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments..."
隐含主题 面对错误的责任，勇敢承担并获得亲人的宽容。 "It’s beyond repair."
4. 续写所需的动作、心理、环境描写推荐英文例句
场景 动作描写 心理描写 环境描写
紧张时刻 Jade nervously paced around the room. Jade felt her heart racing with guilt. The room was dimly lit, casting long shadows across the floor.
安慰对话 Father gently put a hand on Jade’s shoulder. Jade tried to calm herself, taking deep breaths. The soft glow of the kitchen light filled the space with warmth.
反思时刻 Jade stared at the broken camera for a long time. She felt a lump rise in her throat as memories of her father’s love for the camera flooded her mind. The quiet hum of the air conditioner filled the silence between them.
解开心结 Jade slowly walked up to her father with the camera in her hand. Jade’s chest tightened with fear as she prepared to confess. The sunlight streamed through the window, illuminating their faces.
5. 文章中的语法现象分析
语法现象 例句 搭配/近义词
时态 "Jade gathered up her courage." Simple past tense showing a completed action.
情态动词 "Maybe it’s too old to work." "Could" for possibility, "Should" for advice.
条件句 "If you want to fix it, you need to try harder." "If" clauses to show cause and effect.
感叹句 "Unbelievable!" "How incredible!"
6. 高考核心词汇分析
单词 词性 词义 近义词 联想词 例句
resigned 形容词 顺从的，听天由命的 patient, tolerant acceptance, forbearance Jade gave her a resigned look when she realized the camera was broken.
treasure 名词 宝藏，珍品 gem, valuable item precious, keepsake The camera was a treasure that Jade’s father cherished for years.
guilt 名词 内疚，愧疚 remorse, shame blame, regret Jade’s guilt made it hard for her to face her father.
comfort 动词 安慰，抚慰 console, soothe reassurance, solace Her mother comforted her, telling her everything would be okay.
treasure 动词 珍爱，珍藏 value, cherish protect, hold dear Jade's father treasured the camera for its memories.
Possible Answers
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had been avoiding the truth for days, but now it was time to come clean. With a deep breath(介词短语做状语), she walked to the living room where her father was sitting(定从), staring at the broken camera(非谓语动词做伴随动作). "Dad," she began, her voice shaking slightly(独立主格), "I need to tell you something about the camera." Her father looked up at her, a mixture of confusion and concern on his face(名词短语做补语). Jade’s heart raced, but she forced herself to continue. "I accidentally dropped it in the water during the barbecue, and I couldn’t fix it." She braced herself for his anger, but to her surprise, her father’s expression softened. He reached out and placed a hand on her shoulder. "Thank you for telling me," he said, his voice calm(独立主格).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Her father had left a note: “For capturing all our moments, just like the old camera.” Jade’s eyes filled with tears as she realized(状从) that her father wasn’t angry at her(宾从). He understood that accidents happened, and he was willing to move on. As she picked up the phone(状从), her father entered the room and smiled. "I know you’ll make up for it by capturing even more memories with this one." Jade felt a weight lift off her shoulders(补语), knowing her mistake had been forgiven(宾从) and that her father trusted her once more(宾从 that不可省).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. Her hands trembled as she reached for the camera(状从), the truth bubbling inside her(独立主格). She knew she couldn’t avoid it forever(宾从). "Dad," she said, her voice barely above a whisper(独立主格), "I’m really sorry, but I ruined your camera." Her father looked at her, a trace of confusion in his eyes. Jade’s throat tightened as she continued(状从), "I took it to the beach and accidentally dropped it in the water. I tried to fix it, but it’s beyond repair(原文衔接)." Silence filled the room, and for a moment, Jade feared her father would be furious(宾从). But to her relief, he simply sighed and gave her a gentle smile. "I guess these things happen(宾从)," he said softly. "Thank you for telling me."
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. A note accompanied it: “For the moments that matter, no matter what.” Jade picked up the phone, feeling(非谓语动词做伴随动作) a wave of gratitude wash over her(宾从). Her father’s forgiveness meant more to her than any camera could(比较状从). She knew she had made a mistake(宾从), but his willingness to move forward was a lesson in itself. As she glanced at the phone, her father appeared in the doorway. "Let’s start capturing some new memories together," he said, a twinkle in his eye(独立主格). Jade smiled, feeling a renewed sense of connection with her family(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had been holding on to the guilt for days, but now it was time to face it. "Dad," she began, "there’s something I need to tell you(定从) about the camera." Her father looked up from his chair, his expression filled with curiosity(独立主格). Jade hesitated for a moment before continuing, "I’m really sorry, but I accidentally dropped it in the water. I didn’t mean to ruin it, but it’s broken now." Her father’s face showed no anger, only a quiet sadness. "I know how much that camera meant to you(宾从)," Jade added, her voice full of regret(宾从). To her surprise, her father smiled faintly and said, "It’s okay, Jade. Accidents happen."
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Attached to it was a simple note: "For new memories." Jade felt a sense of relief wash over her(宾从). She had been afraid of her father’s anger, but his understanding had put her at ease. As she held the phone in her hands(状从), she realized that the camera was a symbol of her family’s cherished memories, but it was the people in her life that truly mattered(定从). Her father came into the room and smiled. "Let’s create new moments together," he said warmly. Jade nodded, knowing that forgiveness had allowed them to move forward(宾从).
语法加分点分析
虚拟语气（Subjunctive Mood）
搭配：I wish, If only, It's time
同义替换：I hope, I regret
例句：
If only I had been more careful, the camera wouldn’t have been ruined.
I wish I could have prevented this from happening.
倒装句（Inversion）
搭配：Never before, Not only... but also
同义替换：Rarely, Seldom
例句：
Never before had Jade felt so guilty about an accident.
Not only did her father forgive her, but he also showed her compassion.
情态动词（Modal Verbs）
搭配：could have, might have, must have
同义替换：should have, would have
例句：
Jade could have been more careful with the camera.
Her father must have understood it was an accident.
情绪与动作描写亮点词汇
情绪描写：
Tears of sadness (悲伤的眼泪), relief (宽慰), guilt (内疚)
升级替换：
Sadness → grief → sorrow
Relief → comfort → ease
动作描写：
Gathered her courage (鼓起勇气), placed a hand on her shoulder (搭上肩膀), picked up the phone (拿起手机)
升级替换：
Gathered her courage → summoned her bravery → mustered her resolve
Pick up → take → grasp
语料积累与升级替换选项
短语升级：
To face the truth → confront the reality → come to terms with
Move forward → progress → advance
常见词汇替换：
Forgiveness → absolution → pardon
Accident → mishap → incident
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt: "Her voice quivered with guilt."
Surprise: "To Jade's surprise, he smiled."
Disappointment: "She could already imagine his disappointment."
动作描写亮点词汇：
Gathered up her courage: "She took a deep breath, steeling herself for the difficult conversation."
Steeling herself: "Every step felt like a mountain."
Placed: "She slowly walked to her father's study and placed the broken camera on his desk."
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt: "Her voice barely above a whisper."
Relief: "I wasn’t upset with you, Jade."
Regret: "I’m so sorry."
动作描写亮点词汇：
Walked slowly: "She walked slowly towards her father."
Paused: "She paused at the door."
Took a deep breath: "Jade took a deep breath."
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt: "The weight of her actions was overwhelming."
Relief: "I’m not mad."
Regret: "I ruined your camera."
动作描写亮点词汇：
Hesitated: "Jade hesitated, then placed the camera in front of him."
Looked at her: "He reached out and patted her hand."
高中语法加分点分析
语法点 例句 搭配/近义词替换
虚拟语气 "I knew something was wrong with it." "I had a feeling something was wrong."
过去完成时 "I had dropped your camera into the ocean." "I had ruined your camera."
定语从句 "The camera, which was a gift from my mother, had been ruined." "The camera, a present from my mother, was destroyed."
情态动词 "I knew I shouldn’t have taken the camera." "I realized I should not have taken the camera."
非谓语动词 "Not wanting to disappoint her father, Jade confessed her mistake." "Afraid of disappointing her father, Jade admitted her mistake."
升级替换词汇、短语和语料
短语 替换选项 例句
Gathered up her courage Steeled herself, Mustered her courage "She steeled herself for the difficult conversation."
Ruined Destroyed, Damaged, Wrecked "I damaged your camera, Dad."
Regret Remorse, Guilt, Repentance "I feel deep remorse for my actions."
Comforted Reassured, Soothed, Consolled "Her father reassured her that everything would be fine."
Sighed deeply Exhaled heavily, Let out a long breath "He exhaled heavily, showing his relief."
高考核心词汇分析
单词 词性 词义 近义词 联想词 例句
Courage 名词 勇气 Bravery, Valor Fearlessness, Boldness Jade gathered up her courage before confessing to her father.
Regret 名词 遗憾，后悔 Remorse, Sorrow Guilt, Repentance Jade regretted taking her father's camera without permission.
Ruined 动词 破坏，毁坏 Destroyed, Damaged Wrecked, Spoiled She ruined the camera by dropping it in the water.
Comfort 动词 安慰，抚慰 Soothe, Reassure Console, Calm Her mother comforted her when she confessed her mistake.
Guilt 名词 内疚，愧疚 Remorse, Shame Blame, Regret Jade felt guilty for ruining her father’s camera.
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