读后续写--从纠结到释然：车库捐赠背后的成长 讲义-2024-2025学年山西省太原市高二上学期期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
记叙文——人与自我（成长与决定X2U1）
“Our garage is a disaster!” Mom declared. "We need to bag up everything we're not using. If it's in good condition, we can donate it to people who can really use it." As usual, our family would donate stuff to our community center every year.
“This year, you're old enough to decide for yourselves now! You two can have the whole afternoon to go through what's here," said Mom. "Please donate only the things that kids in our community really use or truly need. Happy sorting!"
But happy was not the word I'd choose to describe our sorting. After Mom left, we both just stood there, staring at the boxes of old stuff for a long time.
Then my eyes fixed on a set of colorful Lego blocks. "No way. I don't want to say goodbye to my blocks! Why don't we give away your skipping rope ” Tex yelled loudly.
I shook my head firmly.
And that's how it went for the next hour. Each decision felt so complicated that it was much easier to put nearly everything back to its position.
“Look!” Tex pointed. “A cool old toy car with only one wheel. Hard to fix. It's the best choice for us to donate the broken ones like this.”
How clever he was! After all, neither of us was willing to part with our beloved possessions forever. We'd rather have them lie abandoned or unnoticed in our garage. We took immediate action and put all the broken toys, and board games with missing pieces in the donation pile. Now, sorting stuff out in this way did make us much happier. At this moment, Mom came back to see how it was going.
注意：
(1)词数应为120个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. _______
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. _________________________________
文章大意 妈妈宣布整理车库，将不用但状况良好的物品捐给社区有需要的人，让“我”和Tex自行决定。整理过程中，两人都不舍心爱之物，耗时许久仍难抉择。最后，他们想出把损坏物品放入捐赠堆的办法。此时，妈妈回来查看整理情况。
故事山分析
开端：妈妈提出整理车库并捐赠物品的要求，“我” 和 Tex 开始整理。
发展：整理过程中，两人对各自心爱之物难以割舍，整理进展缓慢。
高潮：妈妈发现捐赠堆里都是无用物品，对两人提出质疑，促使他们重新思考。
结局：两人认识到错误，挑选出合适物品进行捐赠，收获给予的快乐。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：“This year, you're old enough to decide for yourselves now!” 表明孩子有自主思考和决定的能力。
回应：续写中，孩子在妈妈的引导下，自主决定捐赠合适物品，体现成长。
伏笔：“Each decision felt so complicated that it was much easier to put nearly everything back to its position.” 说明孩子对物品的留恋与整理的困难。
回应：与续写中孩子果断挑选物品形成对比，突出思想转变。
伏笔：“We'd rather have them lie abandoned or unnoticed in our garage.” 体现孩子对心爱物品的不舍。
回应：续写中，孩子克服不舍，将物品捐赠，实现自我突破。
伏笔：“Please donate only the things that kids in our community really use or truly need.” 为妈妈对捐赠物品的要求埋下伏笔。
回应：续写中，妈妈以此为依据，批评孩子捐赠无用物品的行为。
伏笔：“Happy sorting!” 与实际整理过程中孩子的不开心形成反差。
回应：续写中，孩子最终理解捐赠意义，体会到给予的快乐，实现 “开心” 的转变。
续写要点
第一段续写：妈妈拉长脸说：“你们为什么在捐赠箱中放入很多没用的物品”——本段续写的关键在于通过妈妈的引导让两个孩子明白分享才是真正的快乐，同时考虑到二段的首句为Mom was right，又为本段的结尾提供了一次很有深度的设计机会。——参考词汇有：mom；Tex；in good condition；stuff
第二段续写：妈妈是对的，并且我把我最爱的跳绳放入了捐赠堆中。——本段续写的关键在于我和Tex在妈妈的正确引导下不但把我们最喜欢的玩具捐出来，而且还明白了助人为乐的真谛。——参考词汇有：Tex；colorful Lego blacks；bag up；staring at boxes；kids in our community
情感线
起初，孩子对心爱物品充满留恋，整理时纠结不舍，不想捐赠。妈妈质疑后，孩子开始反思，认识到错误。最后，孩子克服情感障碍，完成捐赠，收获给予带来的快乐与满足，实现从自私到无私的情感转变。
故事线
妈妈要求整理车库并捐赠物品。
“我” 和 Tex 面对心爱物品难以抉择，整理进展缓慢。
两人决定将损坏物品放入捐赠堆。
妈妈回来查看，对捐赠物品提出质疑。
孩子反思后，挑选合适物品进行捐赠。
孩子看到受捐孩子的喜悦，收获给予的快乐。
主旨升华句
Giving is not just about parting with possessions; it's about sharing love and bringing joy to others.
True happiness lies not in hoarding, but in the act of selfless giving.
Through the process of donation, we learn the value of empathy and the power of helping those in need.
By letting go of our attachments, we open the door to a greater sense of fulfillment and connection with others.
Donating is not only a way to declutter our space, but also a chance to enrich the lives of others and our own souls.
写作示范
示范一
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. “Kids in our community need things that can actually bring them joy and help them. Broken toys won't do that. Think about how excited you'd be if you received something you could really use.” Her words hit home, and I felt a pang of guilt. I realized we had been so focused on keeping our own things that we ignored the purpose of donation.
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. Tex, after a moment of hesitation, added his Lego blocks. We then went through the boxes again, carefully choosing books, games, and toys that were in good condition. When we dropped off the donations at the community center and saw the bright smiles on the kids' faces, we knew we had made the right choice. It was a valuable lesson in the joy of giving.
示范二
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. She picked up the broken toy car and said, “This won't help anyone. The point of donating is to make a positive impact on others' lives. We should give things that can bring hope and happiness.” Her serious tone made us realize our mistake. We had been thinking only of ourselves.
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. Tex followed suit, putting his cherished comic books. We spent the next hour sorting through the items, selecting those that were still in good condition. As we handed over the donations, we felt a sense of pride and fulfillment. We learned that giving is not a loss, but a gain, as it fills our hearts with warmth and happiness.
参考答案
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. Hearing these words, Tex and I didn’t know how to respond, lowering our heads and trying to avoid direct visual contact with her. After a few seconds of silence, Mom got close to us and made us exchange the situation, then asking us “If the donated stuff sent to you was not in good condition, how would you feel ” At that moment, we both nodded.（3句65）
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. Seeing my action, Tex also put his colorful Lego blacks into the pile. Then we continued searching and bagging up things we didn’t need anymore. Shortly afterwards, staring at several boxes full of our past good memories, I could picture how much pleasure they would bring to the kids in our community. From then on, I changed from a selfish teenager to a responsible citizen. （4句65）