读后续写--感恩有你,出租车的暖心故事 讲义-2025届江西省红色十校高三上学期第一次联考(一模)英语试题

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名称 读后续写--感恩有你,出租车的暖心故事 讲义-2025届江西省红色十校高三上学期第一次联考(一模)英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a summer morning, Kate found herself hurrying to catch a flight from London to Paris for an important business meeting. However, unexpected traffic delayed her arrival at the airport, leaving her with only minutes to spare before boarding.
Anxious to catch her flight, Kate approached the first taxi in line. “Heathrow Airport, Terminal 5, please,” she claimed as she jumped into the back seat. The driver, a middle-aged man named Tom, nodded and pulled away. As they sped through the streets, Kate couldn’t shake off her nerves. “Are we going to make it in time ” she asked anxiously. Tom took a quick look at her through the rearview mirror (后视镜) with a smile. “Don’t worry, Ma’am. I know a shortcut that should get us there just in time,” he replied calmly. However, Kate couldn’t help but feel a knot of worry tighten in her stomach. She had to catch this flight. The success of the entire project depended on her presence at the meeting.
Arriving at the airport, Tom drove skillfully and stopped right in front of the departure gate for Terminal 5. “Here we are,” he announced with pride. In relief but in a rush, Kate took out her wallet and paid the fare. But then she had some difficulty unfastening the seat-belt. It was stuck. Panic began to rise within Kate. She couldn’t afford to waste an extra minute. She pressed the button and dragged the belt again and again, but it didn’t work. Just as Kate was about to lose her temper, the taxi driver Tom realized what was happening. He quickly got off the car and helped Kate unfasten the belt. “I’m so sorry,” Tom apologized. Kate got off the taxi and hurriedly ran towards the terminal.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
“Ma’am, your wallet!” Tom was shouting loudly.
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When returning to London, Kate went to Tom’s taxi company.
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文章大意
夏日清晨,凯特因重要商务会议从伦敦赶往巴黎搭乘航班,却遭遇交通拥堵。她乘坐汤姆驾驶的出租车,在汤姆抄近路的努力下及时抵达机场。然而,下车时凯特的安全带卡住,汤姆帮忙解开。匆忙间,凯特遗忘了钱包。
故事山分析
开端:凯特因交通延误,着急赶飞机而乘坐汤姆的出租车。
发展:汤姆抄近路及时将凯特送到机场,但凯特下车时被卡住的安全带耽误时间。
高潮:汤姆呼喊凯特遗忘钱包,以及凯特回到伦敦后去出租车公司的情节,将是故事冲突和情感升华的关键。
结局:展现凯特与汤姆之间的互动结果,传递积极的情感和价值观。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔:“The success of the entire project depended on her presence at the meeting.” 强调会议对凯特的重要性。
回应:在续写中可体现凯特因及时赶上会议,项目取得成功,她更加感激汤姆的帮助,从而促使她回到伦敦后去找汤姆。
伏笔:“Tom took a quick look at her through the rearview mirror (后视镜) with a smile. ‘Don’t worry, Ma’am. I know a shortcut that should get us there just in time,’ he replied calmly.” 体现汤姆的热心和自信。
回应:后续突出汤姆拾金不昧,呼喊凯特归还钱包,进一步印证他的优秀品质,也让凯特对他的感激加深。
伏笔:“Just as Kate was about to lose her temper, the taxi driver Tom realized what was happening. He quickly got off the car and helped Kate unfasten the belt.” 表现汤姆的及时相助。
回应:与后续他归还钱包的行为相呼应,共同塑造他善良、乐于助人的形象。
伏笔:“In relief but in a rush, Kate took out her wallet and paid the fare.” 说明凯特匆忙的状态,为遗忘钱包埋下伏笔。
回应:引出汤姆呼喊凯特归还钱包的情节,推动故事发展。
伏笔:“Kate got off the taxi and hurriedly ran towards the terminal.” 突出凯特着急赶飞机的状态。
回应:因为着急,她才会遗忘钱包,且为她后续对汤姆的感激之情做铺垫。
续写要点
第一段:“Ma’am, your wallet!” Tom was shouting loudly.
描述凯特听到呼喊后的反应,她可能先是一愣,然后焦急地转身。因时间紧迫,她可能一边跑向汤姆一边呼喊让他帮忙保管。拿到钱包后,她再次向汤姆道谢,然后飞奔去登机,在这过程中内心对汤姆充满感激。
第二段:When returning to London, Kate went to Tom’s taxi company.
到达出租车公司后,凯特向工作人员讲述汤姆的善举,表达自己对汤姆的高度赞扬。可以描述工作人员联系汤姆时,汤姆到来后的场景。凯特可能送上感谢信或小礼物,汤姆则谦逊回应,两人相谈甚欢,最后升华到陌生人之间的善意传递。
情感线
从凯特一开始的焦虑、紧张,到在汤姆帮助下及时赶到机场的如释重负,再到遗忘钱包时的焦急,拿到钱包后的感激,最后回到伦敦对汤姆表达感谢时的真诚,情感层层递进,突出陌生人之间善意带来的温暖。
故事线
凯特因交通延误着急赶飞机,乘坐汤姆的出租车。
汤姆抄近路及时将凯特送到机场,但凯特下车时安全带卡住,汤姆帮忙解开。
凯特匆忙中遗忘钱包,汤姆呼喊归还。
凯特拿到钱包后奔赴登机,顺利赶上会议,项目成功。
凯特回到伦敦前往汤姆的出租车公司。
凯特向汤姆表达感谢,两人友好交流,传递善意。
主旨升华句
A simple act of kindness, like Tom's help and honesty, can brighten someone's day and restore faith in humanity.
In the hustle and bustle of life, the kindness of strangers can serve as a guiding light, reminding us of the goodness that exists in the world.
Tom's selfless deeds not only helped Kate in her time of need but also set an example of how a small act can have a profound impact.
The encounter between Kate and Tom demonstrates that kindness is contagious, and one good turn deserves another.
Through their brief interaction, we see that even in a world filled with chaos, the kindness of individuals can create a ripple effect of warmth and trust.
写作示范
示范一
“Ma’am, your wallet!” Tom was shouting loudly. Kate, who was already a few steps away, froze in her tracks. Her heart skipped a beat as she realized the gravity of her situation. Turning around, she saw Tom waving her wallet in the air. With the clock ticking, she sprinted back towards him, gasping, “Thank you so much! Please keep it safe for me.” Tom handed it over, saying, “Hurry, you don't want to miss your flight.” Kate grabbed the wallet, thanked him again, and then dashed towards the terminal, her heart filled with gratitude for this kind - hearted driver.
When returning to London, Kate went to Tom’s taxi company. She told the receptionist about Tom's exceptional service and his honesty. The receptionist was impressed and called Tom to the office. When Tom arrived, Kate stepped forward with a big smile. “I can't thank you enough. Because of you, I made it to my meeting on time and the project was a huge success. This is a small token of my appreciation.” She handed him a thank - you card and a gift. Tom, blushing, replied, “It was just my job.” But Kate knew it was much more than that. Their encounter was a beautiful reminder of the kindness that binds people together.
示范二
“Ma’am, your wallet!” Tom was shouting loudly. Kate was startled. She looked back and saw her wallet in Tom's hand. Panic gave way to relief as she rushed back to him. “I'm so careless. I don't know what I would have done without you,” she said breathlessly. Tom smiled and said, “No problem. Now, go catch your flight.” Kate nodded, and with one last grateful look, she rushed into the terminal, praying she wasn't too late.
When returning to London, Kate went to Tom’s taxi company. She wanted to express her gratitude properly. As she waited in the lobby, Tom came out. His eyes widened in surprise. “Ma’am, it's you! How was your trip ” Kate beamed, “It was great, all thanks to you. I brought you something.” She presented him with a box of chocolates. “This is just a small way to say thank you for your help and honesty. You really went above and beyond.” Tom was touched. “I'm glad I could help.” Their conversation was a testament to the power of kindness between strangers, showing that a simple act can create a lasting connection.
【答案】One possible version:
“Ma’am, your wallet!” Tom was shouting loudly. Kate froze, realizing she had left her wallet on the seat. She turned around and saw Tom running up to her, holding her wallet out to her. Kate was in such a hurry that she grabbed her wallet without saying “Thank you” to Tom. She rushed towards the terminal, leaving Tom standing still there. With Tom’s help, Kate managed to board her flight just in time. Only then did Kate feel an urge to thank Tom.
When returning to London, Kate went to Tom’s taxi company. She was grateful for his help in getting her to the airport in time. And more importantly, Tom gave back her wallet. In it there was her passport, identity card and some cash, without which she could not have got on board, not to mention participating in the conference in Paris. Fortunately, Tom was at work when Kate arrived at the taxi company. To express her appreciation, Kate left a box of chocolates and a thank-you note for Tom, which read, “Your kindness makes the world a better place. Thank you.”
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