Unit 2 Healthy lifestyle 读后续写作业设计（含答案） 2024-2025学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第三册
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人教版选择性必修3Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle 读后续写作业
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. It took the surgeon three hours to finish my mother’s lung surgery. 2. Before exercising, always do a few warm-ups to begin with. 3. But then I always feel too tired to continue! 4. Don’t keep the phone in the room so you won’t pick it up before bed. 5. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk. Page 17 Exercise 1 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 4 Line 4
心理描写 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Student 2 feels depressed about being a little overweight. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 1. Page 15 Para 5 Line 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 5 Page 20 Text 2 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 3
健康生活方式描写 To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager’s life is essential. Life is composed of many elements,such as family, friends, study, work,entertainment, and so on. If one elements dominates your life and the others are ignored, you will lose balance and not feel good. It is necessary to be in control of what you eat. I really need to decide on a way to exercise more. 1. Page 14 Para 1 Line 5 2. Page 16 Exercise 3 3. Page 16 Exercise 3 4.Page 17 Exercise 3 5.Page 17 Exercise 3
不良生活方式描写 The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed. Student 1 has trouble sleeping because of using the phone before going to sleep. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! Page 15 Para 1 Line 2 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 2 Para 2 Line 3
改变和反思描写 In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. Slowly facilitate changes in your lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. You don’t have to change every thing at once. Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. To change bad habits is never easy. To make choices about myself is within my own power. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. 1. Page 14 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 15 Para 2 Line 1 3. Page 15 Para 3 Line 1 4.Page 16 Exercise 3 5.Page 16 Exercise 3 6.Page 16 Exercise 3 7.Page 17 Exercise 1 8.Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 7 9.Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 1 10.Page 20 Text 2 Para 4 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 接下来的几个月里，充满了物理治疗、预约医生和对母亲的不断照顾。（be filled with）
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2. 我成为了她的主要照顾者，帮助她处理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing 做状语)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
3. 有时候，这让我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必须要坚强地支撑着她。（并列复合句）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
4. 在此期间，我还必须学会如何平衡我的新责任与学业和社交生活。 （特殊疑问词+动词不定时）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
5. 照顾我的母亲成为了我的首要任务。（priority）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
6. 这种增加的沟通和共同决策加深了我们对彼此需求和关切的理解。(deepen)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
7. 看到母亲经历康复的困难使我更加耐心和理解她的挣扎。(v.ing作主语)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
8. 同样，我的母亲欣赏我的努力，并对我的关心和支持表示极大的感激。(Likewise)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
9. 这次经历让我们更加亲密，加强了我们作为家庭成员的联系的重要性。(reinforce)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Physical assistance:
Help your mother with everyday tasks that she may find difficult due to her injuries. This can include preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy.提供身体上的帮助：帮助母亲完成因伤势而困难的日常任务。这可能包括准备饭菜、协助洗澡和穿衣，并帮助进行运动或物理治疗。
Emotional support:
Offer a listening ear and be there to provide emotional comfort during this difficult time. Encourage her to express her feelings and frustrations, and validate her emotions. Remind her that her recovery is a journey and that progress takes time.提供情感支持：倾听她的倾诉，并在这段困难时期提供情感上的安慰。鼓励她表达自己的感受和挫折，并验证她的情绪。提醒她康复是一个过程，需要时间来取得进展。
Attend medical appointments and communicate with healthcare professionals:
Accompany your mother to doctor’s appointments, therapy sessions, or any other medical visits. Take notes during appointments, ask questions, and stay informed about her treatment plan. Be an advocate for her by communicating her needs and concerns to healthcare professionals.陪同就医并与医疗专业人员沟通：陪同母亲去看医生、治疗或其他医疗事务。在就医过程中做笔记、提问，并了解她的治疗计划。通过向医疗专业人员传达她的需求和关切。
Create a safe and comfortable environment:
Make necessary adjustments in your home to ensure it is accessible and safe for your mother’s recovery. This may involve rearranging furniture, installing grab bars or handrails, or removing tripping hazards.创造一个安全舒适的环境：根据需要在家中进行必要的调整，以确保母亲的康复环境无障碍且安全。这可能包括重新布置家具、安装扶手或扶手，或者清除绊倒隐患。
Encourage a healthy lifestyle:
Promote a nutritious diet and encourage your mother to engage in light exercise or physical activities as recommended by her healthcare provider. Help her maintain a balanced routine that includes rest, relaxation, and proper sleep.鼓励健康的生活方式：推广营养均衡的饮食，鼓励母亲按照医疗专业人员的建议进行轻度运动或体育活动。帮助她保持一个平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。
Seek additional support if needed:
Reach out to support groups or counseling services that specialize in helping individuals recover from traumatic experiences or accidents. They can provide valuable guidance and emotional support for both you and your mother.如有需要，寻求额外的支持：寻找专门帮助个人从创伤经历或事故中康复的支持团体或咨询服务。他们可以为您和母亲提供有价值的指导和情感支持。
III 美文体验馆
It was a chilly Friday night, and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重症监护病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother's ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care, my mother's condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but，because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
Paragraph 1: My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship too. ________________________________________
主题语境 人与自我
文章出处 苏州市2024高三上学期英语期初调研考试
词数 正文英文词数 364，续写第一段首句 18 个单词，续写第二段首句 9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para. 1)
Build-up (Para.2-5)
Climax (续写第一段) ...but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
Resolution & Ending (续写第二段) Our relationship changed for the better.
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 “我 ” My doctor
A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face.
The cadaverous condition of my mother’s body shocked me.
My sense of priorities changed sharply.
场景
语言风格 □ 平实质朴 □ 含蓄隽永 □ 幽默风趣
伏笔/照应 Para 1: a sort of hospital suite set up in our family room这里的 hospital suite 说明作者家里的摆设发生了什么变化？
Para 2:续写第二段的首句 changed our relationship说明了作者和母亲的关系会怎么样？
谋篇布局 续写段落 Q1:How did the hospital suite function in my family room Q2: What were my responsibilities How was I accustomed to them
Q3: How do I feel about my mother’s reliance？What kind of change did it bring Q4: What was my reaction and feeling
【素材积累】
Para 1
My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that... （as引导时间状语从句）
return from 从某地返回
Para 2
Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.（v.ing 作状语）
urge v. 催促；竭力主张 n.强烈的欲望；冲动
Para 3
That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. （ when引导表语从句； it 作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
turn away from 被迫离开；停止参与某事
Para 4
From that night on 从那晚开始
Up to that point 到那个时候为止
Para 5
...there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. （whether引导同位语从句）
out of danger 脱离危险
IV 技能锻造营
Metaphor(暗喻）
1. 定义
暗喻（metaphor）：也称隐喻，是依据比喻和被比喻两种不同事物的相似或相关关系而构成的修辞格。无需借助比喻词，直接将甲事物当作乙事物来描写。例如：
★However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete” button that will help you.
然而，能帮助你的“魔力丸”或删除键并不存在。
2. 作用
这里的magic pill和delete button均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改变坏习惯的良策”。此处的暗喻运用巧妙，让“quick and effective way”的直白意义顿时形象生动起来，给文字平添一份感染力。
3. 用法
★Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.
生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会遇到暴风雨天。
★Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳。
★She is going through a roller coaster of emotions.
她正经历着情感的过山车。
★At once, the Eastern and Western Chang’an Roads became roaring oceans.
霎时间，东西长安街成了喧腾的大海。
由以上各例可知，暗喻没有引导词，这是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大区别。换句话说，有为明喻，没有为暗喻。如：He has a heart of stone. He has a heart like stone.很显然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻时，比喻物和被比喻物之间的相似点较为含蓄，猛一看它们毫无关系，实际却有着某种内在联系。
4. 实践
英译汉
(1) a bed of roses
(2) clean hands
(3) curtain-lecture
(4) mushroom fame/ millionaire
(5) He is a regular oyster.
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动 作 描 写 1.It took the surgeon three hours to finish my mother’s lung surgery. 2.Before exercising， always do a few warm-ups to begin with. 3.But then I always feel too tired to continue! 4.Don’t keep the phone in the room so you won’t pick it up before bed. 5. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk. Page 17 Exercise 1 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 4 Line 4
心理 描写 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Student 2 feels depressed about being a little overweight. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 1. Page 15 Para 5 Line 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 5 Page 20 Text 2 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 3
健康生 活方式 描写 To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager’s life is essential. Life is composed of many elements,such as family, friends, study, work,entertainment, and so on. If one elements dominates your life and the others are ignored, you will lose balance and not feel good. It is necessary to be in control of what you eat. I really need to decide on a way to exercise more. 1. Page 14 Para 1 Line 5 2. Page 16 Exercise 3 3. Page 16 Exercise 3 4.Page 17 Exercise 3 5.Page 17 Exercise 3
不良生 活方式 描写 The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed. Student 1 has trouble sleeping because of using the phone before going to sleep. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! Page 15 Para 1 Line 2 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 2 Para 2 Line 3
改变和 反思描 写 In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. Slowly facilitate changes in your lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. You don’t have to change every thing at once. Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. To change bad habits is never easy. To make choices about myself is within my own power. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. 1. Page 14 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 15 Para 2 Line 1 3. Page 15 Para 3 Line 1 4.Page 16 Exercise 3 5.Page 16 Exercise 3 6.Page 16 Exercise 3 7.Page 17 Exercise 1 8.Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 7 9.Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 1 10.Page 20 Text 2 Para 4 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 接下来的几个月里，充满了物理治疗、预约医生和对母亲的不断照顾。（be filled with）
The next few months were filled with physical therapy sessions, doctor appointments, and constant care for my mother.
2. 我成为了她的主要照顾者，帮助她处理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing 做状语)
I took on the role of her primary caregiver, helping her with every aspect of daily life.
3. 有时候，这让我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必须要坚强地支撑着她。（并列复合句）
It was exhausting and overwhelming at times, but I knew that I had to be strong for her.
4. 在此期间，我还必须学会如何平衡我的新责任与学业和社交生活。 （特殊疑问词+动词不定时）
During this time, I also had to learn how to balance my new responsibilities with my schoolwork and social life.
5. 照顾我的母亲成为了我的首要任务。（priority）
Taking care of my mother became my top priority.
6.这种增加的沟通和共同决策加深了我们对彼此需求和关切的理解。(deepen)
This increased communication and shared decision-making deepened our understanding of each other’s needs and concerns.
7.看到母亲经历康复的困难使我更加耐心和理解她的挣扎。(v.ing作主语)
Seeing my mother go through the difficulties of recovery made me more patient and understanding of her struggles.
8.同样，我的母亲欣赏我的努力，并对我的关心和支持表示极大的感激。(Likewise)
Likewise, my mother appreciated my efforts and showed immense gratitude for my care and support.
9.这次经历让我们更加亲密，加强了我们作为家庭成员的联系的重要性。(reinforce)
The experience brought us closer together and reinforced the importance of our bond as family members.
Physical assistance:
Help your mother with everyday tasks that she may find difficult due to her injuries. This can include preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy.提供身体上的帮助：帮助母亲完成因伤势而困难的日常任务。这可能包括准备饭菜、协助洗澡和穿衣，并帮助进行运动或物理治疗。
Emotional support:
Offer a listening ear and be there to provide emotional comfort during this difficult time. Encourage her to express her feelings and frustrations, and validate her emotions. Remind her that her recovery is a journey and that progress takes time.提供情感支持：倾听她的倾诉，并在这段困难时期提供情感上的安慰。鼓励她表达自己的感受和挫折，并验证她的情绪。提醒她康复是一个过程，需要时间来取得进展。
Attend medical appointments and communicate with healthcare professionals:
Accompany your mother to doctor’s appointments, therapy sessions, or any other medical visits. Take notes during appointments, ask questions, and stay informed about her treatment plan. Be an advocate for her by communicating her needs and concerns to healthcare professionals.陪同就医并与医疗专业人员沟通：陪同母亲去看医生、治疗或其他医疗事务。在就医过程中做笔记、提问，并了解她的治疗计划。通过向医疗专业人员传达她的需求和关切。
Create a safe and comfortable environment:
Make necessary adjustments in your home to ensure it is accessible and safe for your mother’s recovery. This may involve rearranging furniture, installing grab bars or handrails, or removing tripping hazards.创造一个安全舒适的环境：根据需要在家中进行必要的调整，以确保母亲的康复环境无障碍且安全。这可能包括重新布置家具、安装扶手或扶手，或者清除绊倒隐患。
Encourage a healthy lifestyle:
Promote a nutritious diet and encourage your mother to engage in light exercise or physical activities as recommended by her healthcare provider. Help her maintain a balanced routine that includes rest, relaxation, and proper sleep.鼓励健康的生活方式：推广营养均衡的饮食，鼓励母亲按照医疗专业人员的建议进行轻度运动或体育活动。帮助她保持一个平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。
Seek additional support if needed:
Reach out to support groups or counseling services that specialize in helping individuals recover from traumatic experiences or accidents. They can provide valuable guidance and emotional support for both you and your mother.如有需要，寻求额外的支持：寻找专门帮助个人从创伤经历或事故中康复的支持团体或咨询服务。他们可以为您和母亲提供有价值的指导和情感支持。
III 美文体验馆
It was a chilly Friday night， and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重症监护病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother's ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care，my mother's condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but，because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
第一段：My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
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第二段：My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship too.
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主题语境 人与自我
文章出处 苏州市2024高三上学期英语期初调研考试
词数 正文英文词数 364，续写第一段首句 18 个单词，续写第二段首句 9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para. 1) My mother had been in the intensive care unit of nearby hospital due to a car crash.
Build-up (Para.2-5) What happened in the hospital
Climax (续写第一段) ...but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
Resolution & Ending (续写第二段) Our relationship changed for the better.
Why 故事主题 After facing death together, I and my mother understand a new meaning of our life.
How 写作手法 第一人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 “我 ” My doctor
A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling My stomach turned... She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
The cadaverous condition of my mother’s body shocked me. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
My sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me.
场景 in the hospital
语言风格 平实质朴
伏笔 Para 1: a sort of hospital suite set up in our family room这里的 hospital suite 说明作者家里的摆设发生了什么变化？ 更适合患者康复治疗，但是会给家人带来不便。
Para 2:续写第二段的首句 changed our relationship说明了作者 和母亲的关系会怎么样？ 和以前相比，家人的关系更亲近。同时，作者对生活和亲情重要性的新认识和理解。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1:How did the hospital suite function in my family room Q2: What were my responsibilities How was I accustomed to them
问题 素材 功能
Q1 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline/patience and repeatedly take many small steps. 心理描写表现作者内 心活动 动词不定式作目的状语
However, I realized that to succeed in adjusting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. 心理描写作者的心理 活动 However 情节发生转 折
Q2 Preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy were the things I thought of doing instead. 具体动作描写推进情 节发展
It is necessary to be in control of what my mother eat. It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: How do I feel about my mother’s reliance？What kind of change did it bring Q4: What was my reaction and feeling
问题 素材 功能
Q3 It was a difficult adjustment, but I knew that my mother needed me more than ever. That experience changed me in ways I could have never imagined. 心理描写作者的心理 活动
You don’t have to change every thing at once.Slowly facilitate changes in my lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. 心理描写作者的心理 活动
Q4 I had learned how to assist he without her having to ask, such as getting dressed, preparing meals, and taking medication. 动作链推动情节发展， 结合表达情绪的形容 词反应人物情感
It taught me the importance of resilience, gratitude, and the power of love and support. 呼应主旨
【素材积累】
Para 1
My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that...
（as引导时间状语从句）
2. return from 从某地返回
Para 2
Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
（v.ing 作状语）
urge v. 催促；竭力主张 n.强烈的欲望；冲动
Para 3
That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. （ when引导表语从句； it 作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
turn away from 被迫离开；停止参与某事
Para 4
1. From that night on 从那晚开始
2. Up to that point 到那个时候为止
Para 5
1....there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. （whether引导同位语从句）
2. out of danger 脱离危险
【参考范文】
My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. I would feed her, bathe her and help her to the bathroom. I struck me that I was pretty much playing the role of mother to my own mother. The difficult part for me was trying to be always upbeat，and to keep my mother's spirits up when she became frustrated with the pain and her inability to do simple things by herself. Looking after my mother wasn't much fun, but it felt good to be there when my mother really needed me.（84 words）
My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship. In the past, we had more than our share of the strains of mother-daughter relationships. The accident threw us into a relationship of interdependence. To get my mother back, I had to help regain her strength and ability to resume an independent life. She had to accept my help as well as the fact that I was no longer a child. Since then，we have become the closest friends，genuinely listening to one another and truly enjoying each other's company.（81 words）
IV 技能锻造营
Metaphor(暗喻）
1. 定义
暗喻（metaphor）：也称隐喻，是依据比喻和被比喻两种不同事物的相似或相关关系而构成的修辞格。无需借助比喻词，直接将甲事物当作乙事物来描写。例如：
★However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete” button that will help you.
然而，能帮助你的“魔力丸”或删除键并不存在。
2. 作用
这里的magic pill和delete button均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改变坏习惯的良策”。此处的暗喻运用巧妙，让“quick and effective way”的直白意义顿时形象生动起来，给文字平添一份感染力。
3. 用法
★Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.
生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会遇到暴风雨天。
★Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳。
★She is going through a roller coaster of emotions.
她正经历着情感的过山车。
★At once, the Eastern and Western Chang’an Roads became roaring oceans.
霎时间，东西长安街成了喧腾的大海。
由以上各例可知，暗喻没有引导词，这是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大区别。换句话说，有为明喻，没有为暗喻。如：He has a heart of stone. He has a heart like stone.很显然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻时，比喻物和被比喻物之间的相似点较为含蓄，猛一看它们毫无关系，实际却有着某种内在联系。
4. 实践 英译汉
(1) a bed of roses
(2) clean hands
(3) curtain-lecture
(4) mushroom fame/ millionaire
(5) He is a regular oyster.
（1）安乐窝
（2）两袖清风
（3）枕头风
（4） 一夜成名/暴发户
（5） 他总是守口如瓶。
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. It took the surgeon three hours to finish my mother’s lung surgery. 2. Before exercising, always do a few warm-ups to begin with. 3. But then I always feel too tired to continue! 4. Don’t keep the phone in the room so you won’t pick it up before bed. 5. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk. Page 17 Exercise 1 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 4 Line 4
心理描写 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Student 2 feels depressed about being a little overweight. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 1. Page 15 Para 5 Line 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 5 Page 20 Text 2 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 3
健康生活方式描写 To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager’s life is essential. Life is composed of many elements,such as family, friends, study, work,entertainment, and so on. If one elements dominates your life and the others are ignored, you will lose balance and not feel good. It is necessary to be in control of what you eat. I really need to decide on a way to exercise more. 1. Page 14 Para 1 Line 5 2. Page 16 Exercise 3 3. Page 16 Exercise 3 4.Page 17 Exercise 3 5.Page 17 Exercise 3
不良生活方式描写 The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed. Student 1 has trouble sleeping because of using the phone before going to sleep. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! Page 15 Para 1 Line 2 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 2 Para 2 Line 3
改变和反思描写 In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. Slowly facilitate changes in your lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. You don’t have to change every thing at once. Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. To change bad habits is never easy. To make choices about myself is within my own power. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. 1. Page 14 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 15 Para 2 Line 1 3. Page 15 Para 3 Line 1 4.Page 16 Exercise 3 5.Page 16 Exercise 3 6.Page 16 Exercise 3 7.Page 17 Exercise 1 8.Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 7 9.Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 1 10.Page 20 Text 2 Para 4 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 接下来的几个月里，充满了物理治疗、预约医生和对母亲的不断照顾。（be filled with）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
2. 我成为了她的主要照顾者，帮助她处理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing 做状语)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
3. 有时候，这让我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必须要坚强地支撑着她。（并列复合句）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
4. 在此期间，我还必须学会如何平衡我的新责任与学业和社交生活。 （特殊疑问词+动词不定时）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
5. 照顾我的母亲成为了我的首要任务。（priority）
_______________________________________________________________________________________
6. 这种增加的沟通和共同决策加深了我们对彼此需求和关切的理解。(deepen)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
7. 看到母亲经历康复的困难使我更加耐心和理解她的挣扎。(v.ing作主语)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
8. 同样，我的母亲欣赏我的努力，并对我的关心和支持表示极大的感激。(Likewise)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
9. 这次经历让我们更加亲密，加强了我们作为家庭成员的联系的重要性。(reinforce)
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Physical assistance:
Help your mother with everyday tasks that she may find difficult due to her injuries. This can include preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy.提供身体上的帮助：帮助母亲完成因伤势而困难的日常任务。这可能包括准备饭菜、协助洗澡和穿衣，并帮助进行运动或物理治疗。
Emotional support:
Offer a listening ear and be there to provide emotional comfort during this difficult time. Encourage her to express her feelings and frustrations, and validate her emotions. Remind her that her recovery is a journey and that progress takes time.提供情感支持：倾听她的倾诉，并在这段困难时期提供情感上的安慰。鼓励她表达自己的感受和挫折，并验证她的情绪。提醒她康复是一个过程，需要时间来取得进展。
Attend medical appointments and communicate with healthcare professionals:
Accompany your mother to doctor’s appointments, therapy sessions, or any other medical visits. Take notes during appointments, ask questions, and stay informed about her treatment plan. Be an advocate for her by communicating her needs and concerns to healthcare professionals.陪同就医并与医疗专业人员沟通：陪同母亲去看医生、治疗或其他医疗事务。在就医过程中做笔记、提问，并了解她的治疗计划。通过向医疗专业人员传达她的需求和关切。
Create a safe and comfortable environment:
Make necessary adjustments in your home to ensure it is accessible and safe for your mother’s recovery. This may involve rearranging furniture, installing grab bars or handrails, or removing tripping hazards.创造一个安全舒适的环境：根据需要在家中进行必要的调整，以确保母亲的康复环境无障碍且安全。这可能包括重新布置家具、安装扶手或扶手，或者清除绊倒隐患。
Encourage a healthy lifestyle:
Promote a nutritious diet and encourage your mother to engage in light exercise or physical activities as recommended by her healthcare provider. Help her maintain a balanced routine that includes rest, relaxation, and proper sleep.鼓励健康的生活方式：推广营养均衡的饮食，鼓励母亲按照医疗专业人员的建议进行轻度运动或体育活动。帮助她保持一个平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。
Seek additional support if needed:
Reach out to support groups or counseling services that specialize in helping individuals recover from traumatic experiences or accidents. They can provide valuable guidance and emotional support for both you and your mother.如有需要，寻求额外的支持：寻找专门帮助个人从创伤经历或事故中康复的支持团体或咨询服务。他们可以为您和母亲提供有价值的指导和情感支持。
III 美文体验馆
It was a chilly Friday night, and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重症监护病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother's ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care, my mother's condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but，because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
Paragraph 1: My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship too. ________________________________________
主题语境 人与自我
文章出处 苏州市2024高三上学期英语期初调研考试
词数 正文英文词数 364，续写第一段首句 18 个单词，续写第二段首句 9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para. 1)
Build-up (Para.2-5)
Climax (续写第一段) ...but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
Resolution & Ending (续写第二段) Our relationship changed for the better.
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 “我 ” My doctor
A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face.
The cadaverous condition of my mother’s body shocked me.
My sense of priorities changed sharply.
场景
语言风格 □ 平实质朴 □ 含蓄隽永 □ 幽默风趣
伏笔/照应 Para 1: a sort of hospital suite set up in our family room这里的 hospital suite 说明作者家里的摆设发生了什么变化？
Para 2:续写第二段的首句 changed our relationship说明了作者和母亲的关系会怎么样？
谋篇布局 续写段落 Q1:How did the hospital suite function in my family room Q2: What were my responsibilities How was I accustomed to them
Q3: How do I feel about my mother’s reliance？What kind of change did it bring Q4: What was my reaction and feeling
【素材积累】
Para 1
My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that... （as引导时间状语从句）
return from 从某地返回
Para 2
Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.（v.ing 作状语）
urge v. 催促；竭力主张 n.强烈的欲望；冲动
Para 3
That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. （ when引导表语从句； it 作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
turn away from 被迫离开；停止参与某事
Para 4
From that night on 从那晚开始
Up to that point 到那个时候为止
Para 5
...there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. （whether引导同位语从句）
out of danger 脱离危险
IV 技能锻造营
Metaphor(暗喻）
1. 定义
暗喻（metaphor）：也称隐喻，是依据比喻和被比喻两种不同事物的相似或相关关系而构成的修辞格。无需借助比喻词，直接将甲事物当作乙事物来描写。例如：
★However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete” button that will help you.
然而，能帮助你的“魔力丸”或删除键并不存在。
2. 作用
这里的magic pill和delete button均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改变坏习惯的良策”。此处的暗喻运用巧妙，让“quick and effective way”的直白意义顿时形象生动起来，给文字平添一份感染力。
3. 用法
★Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.
生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会遇到暴风雨天。
★Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳。
★She is going through a roller coaster of emotions.
她正经历着情感的过山车。
★At once, the Eastern and Western Chang’an Roads became roaring oceans.
霎时间，东西长安街成了喧腾的大海。
由以上各例可知，暗喻没有引导词，这是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大区别。换句话说，有为明喻，没有为暗喻。如：He has a heart of stone. He has a heart like stone.很显然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻时，比喻物和被比喻物之间的相似点较为含蓄，猛一看它们毫无关系，实际却有着某种内在联系。
4. 实践
英译汉
(1) a bed of roses
(2) clean hands
(3) curtain-lecture
(4) mushroom fame/ millionaire
(5) He is a regular oyster.
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动 作 描 写 1.It took the surgeon three hours to finish my mother’s lung surgery. 2.Before exercising， always do a few warm-ups to begin with. 3.But then I always feel too tired to continue! 4.Don’t keep the phone in the room so you won’t pick it up before bed. 5. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk. Page 17 Exercise 1 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 4 Line 4
心理 描写 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Student 2 feels depressed about being a little overweight. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 1. Page 15 Para 5 Line 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 5 Page 20 Text 2 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 3
健康生 活方式 描写 To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager’s life is essential. Life is composed of many elements,such as family, friends, study, work,entertainment, and so on. If one elements dominates your life and the others are ignored, you will lose balance and not feel good. It is necessary to be in control of what you eat. I really need to decide on a way to exercise more. 1. Page 14 Para 1 Line 5 2. Page 16 Exercise 3 3. Page 16 Exercise 3 4.Page 17 Exercise 3 5.Page 17 Exercise 3
不良生 活方式 描写 The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed. Student 1 has trouble sleeping because of using the phone before going to sleep. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! Page 15 Para 1 Line 2 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 2 Para 2 Line 3
改变和 反思描 写 In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. Slowly facilitate changes in your lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. You don’t have to change every thing at once. Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. To change bad habits is never easy. To make choices about myself is within my own power. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. 1. Page 14 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 15 Para 2 Line 1 3. Page 15 Para 3 Line 1 4.Page 16 Exercise 3 5.Page 16 Exercise 3 6.Page 16 Exercise 3 7.Page 17 Exercise 1 8.Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 7 9.Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 1 10.Page 20 Text 2 Para 4 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 接下来的几个月里，充满了物理治疗、预约医生和对母亲的不断照顾。（be filled with）
The next few months were filled with physical therapy sessions, doctor appointments, and constant care for my mother.
2. 我成为了她的主要照顾者，帮助她处理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing 做状语)
I took on the role of her primary caregiver, helping her with every aspect of daily life.
3. 有时候，这让我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必须要坚强地支撑着她。（并列复合句）
It was exhausting and overwhelming at times, but I knew that I had to be strong for her.
4. 在此期间，我还必须学会如何平衡我的新责任与学业和社交生活。 （特殊疑问词+动词不定时）
During this time, I also had to learn how to balance my new responsibilities with my schoolwork and social life.
5. 照顾我的母亲成为了我的首要任务。（priority）
Taking care of my mother became my top priority.
6.这种增加的沟通和共同决策加深了我们对彼此需求和关切的理解。(deepen)
This increased communication and shared decision-making deepened our understanding of each other’s needs and concerns.
7.看到母亲经历康复的困难使我更加耐心和理解她的挣扎。(v.ing作主语)
Seeing my mother go through the difficulties of recovery made me more patient and understanding of her struggles.
8.同样，我的母亲欣赏我的努力，并对我的关心和支持表示极大的感激。(Likewise)
Likewise, my mother appreciated my efforts and showed immense gratitude for my care and support.
9.这次经历让我们更加亲密，加强了我们作为家庭成员的联系的重要性。(reinforce)
The experience brought us closer together and reinforced the importance of our bond as family members.
Physical assistance:
Help your mother with everyday tasks that she may find difficult due to her injuries. This can include preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy.提供身体上的帮助：帮助母亲完成因伤势而困难的日常任务。这可能包括准备饭菜、协助洗澡和穿衣，并帮助进行运动或物理治疗。
Emotional support:
Offer a listening ear and be there to provide emotional comfort during this difficult time. Encourage her to express her feelings and frustrations, and validate her emotions. Remind her that her recovery is a journey and that progress takes time.提供情感支持：倾听她的倾诉，并在这段困难时期提供情感上的安慰。鼓励她表达自己的感受和挫折，并验证她的情绪。提醒她康复是一个过程，需要时间来取得进展。
Attend medical appointments and communicate with healthcare professionals:
Accompany your mother to doctor’s appointments, therapy sessions, or any other medical visits. Take notes during appointments, ask questions, and stay informed about her treatment plan. Be an advocate for her by communicating her needs and concerns to healthcare professionals.陪同就医并与医疗专业人员沟通：陪同母亲去看医生、治疗或其他医疗事务。在就医过程中做笔记、提问，并了解她的治疗计划。通过向医疗专业人员传达她的需求和关切。
Create a safe and comfortable environment:
Make necessary adjustments in your home to ensure it is accessible and safe for your mother’s recovery. This may involve rearranging furniture, installing grab bars or handrails, or removing tripping hazards.创造一个安全舒适的环境：根据需要在家中进行必要的调整，以确保母亲的康复环境无障碍且安全。这可能包括重新布置家具、安装扶手或扶手，或者清除绊倒隐患。
Encourage a healthy lifestyle:
Promote a nutritious diet and encourage your mother to engage in light exercise or physical activities as recommended by her healthcare provider. Help her maintain a balanced routine that includes rest, relaxation, and proper sleep.鼓励健康的生活方式：推广营养均衡的饮食，鼓励母亲按照医疗专业人员的建议进行轻度运动或体育活动。帮助她保持一个平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。
Seek additional support if needed:
Reach out to support groups or counseling services that specialize in helping individuals recover from traumatic experiences or accidents. They can provide valuable guidance and emotional support for both you and your mother.如有需要，寻求额外的支持：寻找专门帮助个人从创伤经历或事故中康复的支持团体或咨询服务。他们可以为您和母亲提供有价值的指导和情感支持。
III 美文体验馆
It was a chilly Friday night， and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重症监护病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother's ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care，my mother's condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but，because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
第一段：My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
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第二段：My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship too.
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主题语境 人与自我
文章出处 苏州市2024高三上学期英语期初调研考试
词数 正文英文词数 364，续写第一段首句 18 个单词，续写第二段首句 9 个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para. 1) My mother had been in the intensive care unit of nearby hospital due to a car crash.
Build-up (Para.2-5) What happened in the hospital
Climax (续写第一段) ...but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
Resolution & Ending (续写第二段) Our relationship changed for the better.
Why 故事主题 After facing death together, I and my mother understand a new meaning of our life.
How 写作手法 第一人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 “我 ” My doctor
A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling My stomach turned... She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
The cadaverous condition of my mother’s body shocked me. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
My sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me.
场景 in the hospital
语言风格 平实质朴
伏笔 Para 1: a sort of hospital suite set up in our family room这里的 hospital suite 说明作者家里的摆设发生了什么变化？ 更适合患者康复治疗，但是会给家人带来不便。
Para 2:续写第二段的首句 changed our relationship说明了作者 和母亲的关系会怎么样？ 和以前相比，家人的关系更亲近。同时，作者对生活和亲情重要性的新认识和理解。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1:How did the hospital suite function in my family room Q2: What were my responsibilities How was I accustomed to them
问题 素材 功能
Q1 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline/patience and repeatedly take many small steps. 心理描写表现作者内 心活动 动词不定式作目的状语
However, I realized that to succeed in adjusting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. 心理描写作者的心理 活动 However 情节发生转 折
Q2 Preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy were the things I thought of doing instead. 具体动作描写推进情 节发展
It is necessary to be in control of what my mother eat. It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: How do I feel about my mother’s reliance？What kind of change did it bring Q4: What was my reaction and feeling
问题 素材 功能
Q3 It was a difficult adjustment, but I knew that my mother needed me more than ever. That experience changed me in ways I could have never imagined. 心理描写作者的心理 活动
You don’t have to change every thing at once.Slowly facilitate changes in my lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. 心理描写作者的心理 活动
Q4 I had learned how to assist he without her having to ask, such as getting dressed, preparing meals, and taking medication. 动作链推动情节发展， 结合表达情绪的形容 词反应人物情感
It taught me the importance of resilience, gratitude, and the power of love and support. 呼应主旨
【素材积累】
Para 1
My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that...
（as引导时间状语从句）
2. return from 从某地返回
Para 2
Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
（v.ing 作状语）
urge v. 催促；竭力主张 n.强烈的欲望；冲动
Para 3
That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. （ when引导表语从句； it 作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
turn away from 被迫离开；停止参与某事
Para 4
1. From that night on 从那晚开始
2. Up to that point 到那个时候为止
Para 5
1....there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. （whether引导同位语从句）
2. out of danger 脱离危险
【参考范文】
My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. I would feed her, bathe her and help her to the bathroom. I struck me that I was pretty much playing the role of mother to my own mother. The difficult part for me was trying to be always upbeat，and to keep my mother's spirits up when she became frustrated with the pain and her inability to do simple things by herself. Looking after my mother wasn't much fun, but it felt good to be there when my mother really needed me.（84 words）
My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship. In the past, we had more than our share of the strains of mother-daughter relationships. The accident threw us into a relationship of interdependence. To get my mother back, I had to help regain her strength and ability to resume an independent life. She had to accept my help as well as the fact that I was no longer a child. Since then，we have become the closest friends，genuinely listening to one another and truly enjoying each other's company.（81 words）
IV 技能锻造营
Metaphor(暗喻）
1. 定义
暗喻（metaphor）：也称隐喻，是依据比喻和被比喻两种不同事物的相似或相关关系而构成的修辞格。无需借助比喻词，直接将甲事物当作乙事物来描写。例如：
★However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete” button that will help you.
然而，能帮助你的“魔力丸”或删除键并不存在。
2. 作用
这里的magic pill和delete button均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改变坏习惯的良策”。此处的暗喻运用巧妙，让“quick and effective way”的直白意义顿时形象生动起来，给文字平添一份感染力。
3. 用法
★Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.
生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会遇到暴风雨天。
★Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳。
★She is going through a roller coaster of emotions.
她正经历着情感的过山车。
★At once, the Eastern and Western Chang’an Roads became roaring oceans.
霎时间，东西长安街成了喧腾的大海。
由以上各例可知，暗喻没有引导词，这是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大区别。换句话说，有为明喻，没有为暗喻。如：He has a heart of stone. He has a heart like stone.很显然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻时，比喻物和被比喻物之间的相似点较为含蓄，猛一看它们毫无关系，实际却有着某种内在联系。
4. 实践 英译汉
(1) a bed of roses
(2) clean hands
(3) curtain-lecture
(4) mushroom fame/ millionaire
(5) He is a regular oyster.
（1）安乐窝
（2）两袖清风
（3）枕头风
（4） 一夜成名/暴发户
（5） 他总是守口如瓶。