Unit 2 Morals and Virtues 读后续写作业设计 （含答案）-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第三册
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人教版必修3 Unit 2morals and virtues 读后续写作业设计
课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
无灵主语 Nothing good can come to a nation whose people only complain and expect others to solve their problems. Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbours from harm Imagine her surprise when she saw the gold coins where the stone had been! Page 20 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Para 7 Line 2
动作描写 1. “Finding a good husband should be their final goal!” her brother complained, thinking of the high tuition fees. 2. She immediately became the first woman ever to be hired as a resident physician in the OB-GYN department of the PUMC Hospital. 3. Thinking of all the people still in need of help, Dr Lin opened a private clinic. 4. At times she was even seen riding a donkey to faraway villages to provide medical care. 5. Though Lin Qiaozhi never married, she was known as the "mother of ten thousand babies", having delivered over 50,000 babies in her lifetime. 6. He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. 7. A group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. 8. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. 9. The girl pushed the stone with all her might. 1. Page 16 Para 2 Line 5 2. Page 16 Para 3 Line 3 3. Page 16 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 16 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 17 Para 6 Line 1 6. Page 20 Para 3 Line 1 7. Page 20 Para 4 Line 1 8. Page 20 Para 4 Line 2 9. Page 20 Para 7 Line 1
心理描写 To a person nothing is more precious than their life, and if they entrust me with that life, how could I refuse that trust, saying I’m cold, hungry, or tired Her heart, however, was elsewhere. She was more interested in tending patients, publishing medical research on care for women and children, and training the next generation of doctors. He picked himself up and angrily went away. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. The king was in despair. Page 16 Para 1 Line 1 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 20 Para 3 Line 2 Page 20 Para 4 Line 3 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2
修辞格 1. The new People's Republic of China saw Dr Lin Qiaozhi playing a key role. 1. Page 17 Para 5 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1.货车失控撞上了一辆公共汽车的尾部。(crash into)
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2. 我说话结结巴巴的，脸也红了，而且回到座位上去的时候还让自己的靴子给绊了一下。(trip over)
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3. 读那些伟大人物创作的杰作最幸福快乐了。(nothing)
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4. 一句严厉的话就会使她陷入极度的绝望之中。(despair)
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5. 我妈妈搂着我，小声安慰我。(whisper)
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6. 她筋疲力尽，用尽全力奔跑。(with all her might)
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困难的时候，我们需要的不是相互抱怨而是相互理解。(complaint)
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8.他双腿颤抖地站了起来，继续沿路慢慢地走着。(leg)
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III 美文体验馆
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once, a poor boy lived in a village with his mother and little sisters. The village was beautiful, but not a highly populated area, since many of its residents had moved to the cities in search of livelihood.
The boy's mother worked very hard to feed her children. His father had passed away a few years ago. One day, as the mother was returning from work, rain started. She was wet through by the time she reached home. She was trembling badly, and fell sick. After a few days of being ill, she passed away.
Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. So finally, the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food. After sometime, he found a part-time job to do. He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible. Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself.Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life.
One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. The boy went to him and asked,“Why are you sitting beside the road all alone May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk.
Paragraph 2: Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man.
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 2024重庆市高三模拟考试英语试题
词数 正文英文词数311个，续写第一段首句12个单词，续写第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para.3-4)
Climax (Para.5)
Resolution (续写第一段) The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk. ...
Ending (续写第二段) Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 A poor boy and two younger sisters The old man
After a few days of being ill, she passed away.... Need help
One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes. ...He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy... Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself. Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life. One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. ...
场景
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永 幽默风趣
伏笔/照应 Para 3 Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. Para4: At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. Para 4: Though he sensed that something was wrong, he made a choice to trust the machine. Para 5: May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy. 以上情节说明了什么？
Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....这是续写第二段的首句，可以推测the poor boy and his two younger sisters 不仅帮助了这位老人，还和这位老人产生了深厚的情感。那三个孩子如何帮助这位老人的？他们之间有什么互动呢？结果是怎样的？
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did the poor boy and his two younger sisters do to help the old man How did the old man feel after getting help Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation writing Why did the poor boy helped the old man
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did the old man do to express gratitude for their kind help Q4: Any more possible help made the old man become more moved How did they feel
【素材积累】
Para 1
Not a highly populated area 不是一个人口稠密的地区
In search of livelihood 为了谋生
Para 2pass away 过世
Para 3
1.Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money.
----“There be”句型，who引导的定语从句。
2.His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
----and 链接的并列句
Para 4
...the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself.
----what引导的宾语从句
...the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food.
----decide to do sth. 决定去做某事
The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible.
----be satisfied with sth. 对...满意
Para 5
The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
----be surprised to do sth. 感到惊讶地做某事。
IV 技能锻造营
重复法（repetition）
定义
重复 修辞也称为 反复修辞，是为了强调某种意思、突出某种情感，特意重复使用某些词语、句子或者段落等。
用法
1. We long for success and we are working hard for success．
2. Embrace change, embrace growth, embrace the future- this is the path to success.
3. Farewell to the mountains high covered with snow! Farewell to the vast valleys below! Farewell to the forests and woods!
实践
英译汉
1. Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to the business. Now it is the time to work hard for the future.
2. We never know the love of the parents until we become parents ourselves.
3. When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
4. Again and again, she tried, never losing faith in her abilities.
5. A beautiful form is better than a beautiful face; a beautiful behavior than a beautiful form.
6. The trees were blown down, the billboards were blown down and the houses were blown down, some of which even lay in pieces.
7. We are now living in a new era，and a new era of reform is always full of ventures and chances．
8. I am convinced that we can succeed，and I am convinced that we must succeed．
答案解析
课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
无灵主语 Nothing good can come to a nation whose people only complain and expect others to solve their problems. Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbours from harm Imagine her surprise when she saw the gold coins where the stone had been! Page 20 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Para 7 Line 2
动作描写 1. “Finding a good husband should be their final goal!” her brother complained, thinking of the high tuition fees. 2. She immediately became the first woman ever to be hired as a resident physician in the OB-GYN department of the PUMC Hospital. 3. Thinking of all the people still in need of help, Dr Lin opened a private clinic. 4. At times she was even seen riding a donkey to faraway villages to provide medical care. 5. Though Lin Qiaozhi never married, she was known as the "mother of ten thousand babies", having delivered over 50,000 babies in her lifetime. 6. He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. 7. A group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. 8. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. 9. The girl pushed the stone with all her might. 1. Page 16 Para 2 Line 5 2. Page 16 Para 3 Line 3 3. Page 16 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 16 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 17 Para 6 Line 1 6. Page 20 Para 3 Line 1 7. Page 20 Para 4 Line 1 8. Page 20 Para 4 Line 2 9. Page 20 Para 7 Line 1
心理描写 To a person nothing is more precious than their life, and if they entrust me with that life, how could I refuse that trust, saying I’m cold, hungry, or tired Her heart, however, was elsewhere. She was more interested in tending patients, publishing medical research on care for women and children, and training the next generation of doctors. He picked himself up and angrily went away. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. The king was in despair. Page 16 Para 1 Line 1 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 20 Para 3 Line 2 Page 20 Para 4 Line 3 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2
修辞格 1. The new People's Republic of China saw Dr Lin Qiaozhi playing a key role. 1. Page 17 Para 5 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 货车失控撞上了一辆公共汽车的尾部。(crash into)
A truck went out of control and crashed into the back of a bus.
2. 我说话结结巴巴的，脸也红了，而且回到座位上去的时候还让自己的靴子给绊了一下。(trip over)
I stammered, blushed and tripped over my own boots on the way to my seat.
3.读那些伟大人物创作的杰作最幸福快乐了。(nothing)
Nothing can bring more joy and happiness than reading those masterpieces created by great figures.
4. 一句严厉的话就会使她陷入极度的绝望之中。(despair)
One harsh word would send her into the depths of despair.
5. 我妈妈搂着我，小声安慰我(whisper)
My mother gathered me in her arms and whispered to comfort me.
6. 她筋疲力尽，用尽全力奔跑。(with all her might)
She was stretched out, running with all her might.
困难的时候，我们需要的不是相互抱怨而是相互理解。(complaint)
In time of difficulty, what we need is not complaint about it to each other but understanding of each other.
8.他双腿颤抖地站了起来，继续沿路慢慢地走着。(leg)
He rose to his feet on shaky legs, and carried on walking slowly down the road.
III 美文体验馆
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once, a poor boy lived in a village with his mother and little sisters. The village was beautiful, but not a highly populated area, since many of its residents had moved to the cities in search of livelihood.
The boy's mother worked very hard to feed her children. His father had passed away a few years ago. One day, as the mother was returning from work, rain started. She was wet through by the time she reached home. She was trembling badly, and fell sick. After a few days of being ill, she passed away.
Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. So finally, the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food. After sometime, he found a part-time job to do. He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible. Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself.Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life.
One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. The boy went to him and asked,“Why are you sitting beside the road all alone May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk.
Paragraph 2: Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man.
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 2024重庆市高三模拟考试英语试题
词数 正文英文词数311个，续写第一段首句12个单词，续写第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para.3-4)
Climax (Para.5)
Resolution (续写第一段) The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk. ...
Ending (续写第二段) Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 A poor boy and two younger sisters The old man
After a few days of being ill, she passed away.... Need help
One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes. ...He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy... Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself. Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life. One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. ...
场景
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永 幽默风趣
伏笔/照应 Para 3 Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. Para 4: At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. Para 4: Though he sensed that something was wrong, he made a choice to trust the machine. Para 5: May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy. 以上情节说明了什么？
Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....这是续写第二段的首句，可以推测the poor boy and his two younger sisters 不仅帮助了这位老人，还和这位老人产生了深厚的情感。那三个孩子如何帮助这位老人的？他们之间有什么互动呢？结果是怎样的？
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did the poor boy and his two younger sisters do to help the old man How did the old man feel after getting help Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation writing Why did the poor boy helped the old man
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did the old man do to express gratitude for their kind help Q4: Any more possible help made the old man become more moved How did they feel
【素材积累】
Para 1
Not a highly populated area 不是一个人口稠密的地区
In search of livelihood 为了谋生
Para 2
pass away 过世
Para 3
1.Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money.
----“There be”句型，who引导的定语从句。
2.His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
----and 链接的并列句
Para 4
...the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself.
----what引导的宾语从句
...the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food.
----decide to do sth. 决定去做某事
The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible.
----be satisfied with sth. 对...满意
Para 5
The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
----be surprised to do sth. 感到惊讶地做某事。
【参考范文】
The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk. The boy looked at him and found that his face was pale and his voice trembled as he spoke. Knowing that he is a lonely old man who is out of strength at this moment because his walking to hospital, the boy immediately realized that the old man needed help and took out a piece of bread from his pocket to him. The old man gratefully accepted the food and slowly ate it. The boy then helped the old man to a nearby hospital where he could rest and recover.
Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man. They visited him every day, bringing him food and water, and chatting with him to keep him cheer up. The old man was deeply touched by their kindness and generosity. He told them stories of his past life and wisdom, which the children eagerly listened to. Over time, the old man recovered from his illness and was able to walk again. He expressed his gratitude to the boy and his sisters, promising to always be there for them whenever they needed help. The bond that had formed between them was strong and unbreakable.
IV 技能锻造营
重复法（repetition）
定义
重复 修辞也称为 反复修辞，是为了强调某种意思、突出某种情感，特意重复使用某些词语、句子或者段落等。
用法
1. We long for success and we are working hard for success．
2. Embrace change, embrace growth, embrace the future- this is the path to success.
3. Farewell to the mountains high covered with snow! Farewell to the vast valleys below! Farewell to the forests and woods!
实践
英译汉
1. Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to the business. Now it is the time to work hard for the future.
2. We never know the love of the parents until we become parents ourselves.
3. When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
4. Again and again, she tried, never losing faith in her abilities.
5. A beautiful form is better than a beautiful face; a beautiful behavior than a beautiful form.
6. The trees were blown down, the billboards were blown down and the houses were blown down, some of which even lay in pieces.
7. We are now living in a new era，and a new era of reform is always full of ventures and chances．
8. I am convinced that we can succeed，and I am convinced that we must succeed．
1. 现在是忘掉过去一切的时候了。现在是言归正传的时候了。现在是为未来而奋斗的时候了。
2. 直到我们自己为人父母,才懂得父母的爱。
3. 当事情变得艰难时，勇者会勇往直前。
4. 她一次又一次地尝试，从未对她的能力失去信心。
5. 美的形体胜过美的脸蛋；而美的行为胜过美的形体。
6. 树木被吹倒了，广告牌被吹倒了，房子被吹倒了,甚至有些变成了碎片。
7. 我们现在生活在一个新的时代，而一个改革的新时代总是充满着风险与机遇。
8. 我相信我们能够成功，我相信我们也一定会成功
课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
无灵主语 Nothing good can come to a nation whose people only complain and expect others to solve their problems. Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbours from harm Imagine her surprise when she saw the gold coins where the stone had been! Page 20 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Para 7 Line 2
动作描写 1. “Finding a good husband should be their final goal!” her brother complained, thinking of the high tuition fees. 2. She immediately became the first woman ever to be hired as a resident physician in the OB-GYN department of the PUMC Hospital. 3. Thinking of all the people still in need of help, Dr Lin opened a private clinic. 4. At times she was even seen riding a donkey to faraway villages to provide medical care. 5. Though Lin Qiaozhi never married, she was known as the "mother of ten thousand babies", having delivered over 50,000 babies in her lifetime. 6. He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. 7. A group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. 8. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. 9. The girl pushed the stone with all her might. 1. Page 16 Para 2 Line 5 2. Page 16 Para 3 Line 3 3. Page 16 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 16 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 17 Para 6 Line 1 6. Page 20 Para 3 Line 1 7. Page 20 Para 4 Line 1 8. Page 20 Para 4 Line 2 9. Page 20 Para 7 Line 1
心理描写 To a person nothing is more precious than their life, and if they entrust me with that life, how could I refuse that trust, saying I’m cold, hungry, or tired Her heart, however, was elsewhere. She was more interested in tending patients, publishing medical research on care for women and children, and training the next generation of doctors. He picked himself up and angrily went away. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. The king was in despair. Page 16 Para 1 Line 1 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 20 Para 3 Line 2 Page 20 Para 4 Line 3 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2
修辞格 1. The new People's Republic of China saw Dr Lin Qiaozhi playing a key role. 1. Page 17 Para 5 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1.货车失控撞上了一辆公共汽车的尾部。(crash into)
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2. 我说话结结巴巴的，脸也红了，而且回到座位上去的时候还让自己的靴子给绊了一下。(trip over)
_________________________________________________________________
3. 读那些伟大人物创作的杰作最幸福快乐了。(nothing)
_________________________________________________________________
4. 一句严厉的话就会使她陷入极度的绝望之中。(despair)
_________________________________________________________________
5. 我妈妈搂着我，小声安慰我。(whisper)
_________________________________________________________________
6. 她筋疲力尽，用尽全力奔跑。(with all her might)
_________________________________________________________________
困难的时候，我们需要的不是相互抱怨而是相互理解。(complaint)
_________________________________________________________________
8.他双腿颤抖地站了起来，继续沿路慢慢地走着。(leg)
_________________________________________________________________
III 美文体验馆
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once, a poor boy lived in a village with his mother and little sisters. The village was beautiful, but not a highly populated area, since many of its residents had moved to the cities in search of livelihood.
The boy's mother worked very hard to feed her children. His father had passed away a few years ago. One day, as the mother was returning from work, rain started. She was wet through by the time she reached home. She was trembling badly, and fell sick. After a few days of being ill, she passed away.
Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. So finally, the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food. After sometime, he found a part-time job to do. He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible. Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself.Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life.
One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. The boy went to him and asked,“Why are you sitting beside the road all alone May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk.
Paragraph 2: Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man.
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 2024重庆市高三模拟考试英语试题
词数 正文英文词数311个，续写第一段首句12个单词，续写第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para.3-4)
Climax (Para.5)
Resolution (续写第一段) The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk. ...
Ending (续写第二段) Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 A poor boy and two younger sisters The old man
After a few days of being ill, she passed away.... Need help
One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes. ...He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy... Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself. Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life. One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. ...
场景
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永 幽默风趣
伏笔/照应 Para 3 Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. Para4: At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. Para 4: Though he sensed that something was wrong, he made a choice to trust the machine. Para 5: May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy. 以上情节说明了什么？
Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....这是续写第二段的首句，可以推测the poor boy and his two younger sisters 不仅帮助了这位老人，还和这位老人产生了深厚的情感。那三个孩子如何帮助这位老人的？他们之间有什么互动呢？结果是怎样的？
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did the poor boy and his two younger sisters do to help the old man How did the old man feel after getting help Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation writing Why did the poor boy helped the old man
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did the old man do to express gratitude for their kind help Q4: Any more possible help made the old man become more moved How did they feel
【素材积累】
Para 1
Not a highly populated area 不是一个人口稠密的地区
In search of livelihood 为了谋生
Para 2pass away 过世
Para 3
1.Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money.
----“There be”句型，who引导的定语从句。
2.His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
----and 链接的并列句
Para 4
...the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself.
----what引导的宾语从句
...the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food.
----decide to do sth. 决定去做某事
The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible.
----be satisfied with sth. 对...满意
Para 5
The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
----be surprised to do sth. 感到惊讶地做某事。
IV 技能锻造营
重复法（repetition）
定义
重复 修辞也称为 反复修辞，是为了强调某种意思、突出某种情感，特意重复使用某些词语、句子或者段落等。
用法
1. We long for success and we are working hard for success．
2. Embrace change, embrace growth, embrace the future- this is the path to success.
3. Farewell to the mountains high covered with snow! Farewell to the vast valleys below! Farewell to the forests and woods!
实践
英译汉
1. Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to the business. Now it is the time to work hard for the future.
2. We never know the love of the parents until we become parents ourselves.
3. When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
4. Again and again, she tried, never losing faith in her abilities.
5. A beautiful form is better than a beautiful face; a beautiful behavior than a beautiful form.
6. The trees were blown down, the billboards were blown down and the houses were blown down, some of which even lay in pieces.
7. We are now living in a new era，and a new era of reform is always full of ventures and chances．
8. I am convinced that we can succeed，and I am convinced that we must succeed．
答案解析
课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
无灵主语 Nothing good can come to a nation whose people only complain and expect others to solve their problems. Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbours from harm Imagine her surprise when she saw the gold coins where the stone had been! Page 20 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Para 7 Line 2
动作描写 1. “Finding a good husband should be their final goal!” her brother complained, thinking of the high tuition fees. 2. She immediately became the first woman ever to be hired as a resident physician in the OB-GYN department of the PUMC Hospital. 3. Thinking of all the people still in need of help, Dr Lin opened a private clinic. 4. At times she was even seen riding a donkey to faraway villages to provide medical care. 5. Though Lin Qiaozhi never married, she was known as the "mother of ten thousand babies", having delivered over 50,000 babies in her lifetime. 6. He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. 7. A group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. 8. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. 9. The girl pushed the stone with all her might. 1. Page 16 Para 2 Line 5 2. Page 16 Para 3 Line 3 3. Page 16 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 16 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 17 Para 6 Line 1 6. Page 20 Para 3 Line 1 7. Page 20 Para 4 Line 1 8. Page 20 Para 4 Line 2 9. Page 20 Para 7 Line 1
心理描写 To a person nothing is more precious than their life, and if they entrust me with that life, how could I refuse that trust, saying I’m cold, hungry, or tired Her heart, however, was elsewhere. She was more interested in tending patients, publishing medical research on care for women and children, and training the next generation of doctors. He picked himself up and angrily went away. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. The king was in despair. Page 16 Para 1 Line 1 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 17 Para 5 Line 3 Page 20 Para 3 Line 2 Page 20 Para 4 Line 3 Page 20 Para 5 Line 2
修辞格 1. The new People's Republic of China saw Dr Lin Qiaozhi playing a key role. 1. Page 17 Para 5 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 货车失控撞上了一辆公共汽车的尾部。(crash into)
A truck went out of control and crashed into the back of a bus.
2. 我说话结结巴巴的，脸也红了，而且回到座位上去的时候还让自己的靴子给绊了一下。(trip over)
I stammered, blushed and tripped over my own boots on the way to my seat.
3.读那些伟大人物创作的杰作最幸福快乐了。(nothing)
Nothing can bring more joy and happiness than reading those masterpieces created by great figures.
4. 一句严厉的话就会使她陷入极度的绝望之中。(despair)
One harsh word would send her into the depths of despair.
5. 我妈妈搂着我，小声安慰我(whisper)
My mother gathered me in her arms and whispered to comfort me.
6. 她筋疲力尽，用尽全力奔跑。(with all her might)
She was stretched out, running with all her might.
困难的时候，我们需要的不是相互抱怨而是相互理解。(complaint)
In time of difficulty, what we need is not complaint about it to each other but understanding of each other.
8.他双腿颤抖地站了起来，继续沿路慢慢地走着。(leg)
He rose to his feet on shaky legs, and carried on walking slowly down the road.
III 美文体验馆
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once, a poor boy lived in a village with his mother and little sisters. The village was beautiful, but not a highly populated area, since many of its residents had moved to the cities in search of livelihood.
The boy's mother worked very hard to feed her children. His father had passed away a few years ago. One day, as the mother was returning from work, rain started. She was wet through by the time she reached home. She was trembling badly, and fell sick. After a few days of being ill, she passed away.
Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. So finally, the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food. After sometime, he found a part-time job to do. He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible. Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself.Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life.
One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. The boy went to him and asked,“Why are you sitting beside the road all alone May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk.
Paragraph 2: Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man.
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 2024重庆市高三模拟考试英语试题
词数 正文英文词数311个，续写第一段首句12个单词，续写第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para.3-4)
Climax (Para.5)
Resolution (续写第一段) The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk. ...
Ending (续写第二段) Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 A poor boy and two younger sisters The old man
After a few days of being ill, she passed away.... Need help
One morning, the boy woke up feeling hungry, but there was nothing to eat. His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes. ...He worked very hard. The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy... Gradually, the boy got enough money to buy items for his sisters and himself. Soon they rode out the storm and lived a happy life. One day, on the way home, the boy saw an old man on the roadside, who looked very sick. ...
场景
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永 幽默风趣
伏笔/照应 Para 3 Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money. The food was over in a few days. Para 4: At first, the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself. He was not strong enough to do heavy jobs.Besides, he had no technique to do skilled work. However, they had to live. Para 4: Though he sensed that something was wrong, he made a choice to trust the machine. Para 5: May I help you ” The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy. 以上情节说明了什么？
Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man....这是续写第二段的首句，可以推测the poor boy and his two younger sisters 不仅帮助了这位老人，还和这位老人产生了深厚的情感。那三个孩子如何帮助这位老人的？他们之间有什么互动呢？结果是怎样的？
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did the poor boy and his two younger sisters do to help the old man How did the old man feel after getting help Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation writing Why did the poor boy helped the old man
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did the old man do to express gratitude for their kind help Q4: Any more possible help made the old man become more moved How did they feel
【素材积累】
Para 1
Not a highly populated area 不是一个人口稠密的地区
In search of livelihood 为了谋生
Para 2
pass away 过世
Para 3
1.Now there was no one at the home who could work and make some money.
----“There be”句型，who引导的定语从句。
2.His two younger sisters were also hungry, and they looked at their brother with sad eyes.
----and 链接的并列句
Para 4
...the boy didn't know what he could do to feed his sisters and himself.
----what引导的宾语从句
...the boy decided to do some work and earn money to buy food.
----decide to do sth. 决定去做某事
The boss was quite satisfied with the intelligent boy and his workmates liked him and cared for him as much as possible.
----be satisfied with sth. 对...满意
Para 5
The old man was surprised to hear the voice of the young boy.
----be surprised to do sth. 感到惊讶地做某事。
【参考范文】
The old man replied that he was sick and could hardly walk. The boy looked at him and found that his face was pale and his voice trembled as he spoke. Knowing that he is a lonely old man who is out of strength at this moment because his walking to hospital, the boy immediately realized that the old man needed help and took out a piece of bread from his pocket to him. The old man gratefully accepted the food and slowly ate it. The boy then helped the old man to a nearby hospital where he could rest and recover.
Soon the boy and his two young sisters got attached to the old man. They visited him every day, bringing him food and water, and chatting with him to keep him cheer up. The old man was deeply touched by their kindness and generosity. He told them stories of his past life and wisdom, which the children eagerly listened to. Over time, the old man recovered from his illness and was able to walk again. He expressed his gratitude to the boy and his sisters, promising to always be there for them whenever they needed help. The bond that had formed between them was strong and unbreakable.
IV 技能锻造营
重复法（repetition）
定义
重复 修辞也称为 反复修辞，是为了强调某种意思、突出某种情感，特意重复使用某些词语、句子或者段落等。
用法
1. We long for success and we are working hard for success．
2. Embrace change, embrace growth, embrace the future- this is the path to success.
3. Farewell to the mountains high covered with snow! Farewell to the vast valleys below! Farewell to the forests and woods!
实践
英译汉
1. Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to the business. Now it is the time to work hard for the future.
2. We never know the love of the parents until we become parents ourselves.
3. When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
4. Again and again, she tried, never losing faith in her abilities.
5. A beautiful form is better than a beautiful face; a beautiful behavior than a beautiful form.
6. The trees were blown down, the billboards were blown down and the houses were blown down, some of which even lay in pieces.
7. We are now living in a new era，and a new era of reform is always full of ventures and chances．
8. I am convinced that we can succeed，and I am convinced that we must succeed．
1. 现在是忘掉过去一切的时候了。现在是言归正传的时候了。现在是为未来而奋斗的时候了。
2. 直到我们自己为人父母,才懂得父母的爱。
3. 当事情变得艰难时，勇者会勇往直前。
4. 她一次又一次地尝试，从未对她的能力失去信心。
5. 美的形体胜过美的脸蛋；而美的行为胜过美的形体。
6. 树木被吹倒了，广告牌被吹倒了，房子被吹倒了,甚至有些变成了碎片。
7. 我们现在生活在一个新的时代，而一个改革的新时代总是充满着风险与机遇。
8. 我相信我们能够成功，我相信我们也一定会成功