Unit 3 Diverse Cultures 读后续写作业设计（含答案）-2024-2025学年高一英语人教版（2019）必修第三册
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人教版必修3 Unit 3Diverse cultures读后续写作业设计
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 In the afternoon I headed to a local museum that showed the historical changes in California. Over 3000,000 people came from all over the world to seek their fortune. To earn a living, some people opened up shops and restaurants in Chinatown. Historically, Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period. Page 28 Para 3 Line 1 Page 28 Para 3 Line 5 Page 28 Para 3 Line 7 Page 32 Para 2 Line 1
场景描写 There are so many beautiful old buildings—many sitting on top of big hills, offering great views of the city, the ocean, and the Golden Gate Bridge. Traditionally,visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China. It has a long and famous history ,with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing here. These days,the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess,and people practising tai chi. Page 28 Para 1 Line 4 Page 32 Para 3 Line 4 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 12 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 13
心理描写 I have to admit that it definitely feels good to be back in the city again. Page 28 Para 1 Line 2
设问 When you think of America, what symbols come to your mind first Perhaps one of the most famous symbols of the US is fast food. Page 76 Para 1 Line 2 Page 76 Para 2 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
树上有3只鸟。(sitting，非谓语动词做后置定语
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2. 我有一个喜欢旅行的朋友，这就是他很少在家的原因。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
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有了家人们的支持，我感到自信和快乐。(with的复合结构)
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面试官在面试中对他的评价很高，他感到很幸运。(fortune)
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书架上有这么多书要看吗，我都不知道从哪里开始？(动词不定式做后置定语)
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我需要一个明确的答复 （definite）
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你不妨去南昌碰碰运气。(seek one’s fortune)
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他们想在繁华的城市中定居。(settle in)
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9. 她今天一大早就出去了。(head )
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10. 为了学习一门新的语言，她前往说这种语言的国家。(动词不定式表目的)
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III 美文体验馆
Mya finished playing a Christmas carol and looked up at her piano teacher.“You played that very well,”Ms. Jackson said. “How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly.“Lots of kids are shy,” Ms. Jackson said,“but the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Remember, our recital （独奏）is going to be right after Christmas. You'll have to play in front of an audience then. Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice.”“I'm sorry. I can't be there,” Mya went on.“My great-grandmother invited my family to the Christmas party at her retirement community that afternoon.”Mya didn't add that she was relieved to have an excuse not to have to play at the mall. The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
On Saturday morning, as Mya wrapped presents for Great-Grandma, she thought about her friends playing piano at the mall.
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store. Some of them would take breaks from shopping to sit on benches and watch the piano players. I'm so glad I won't be there, she thought.
When Mya and her parents arrived at the retirement community, they greeted Great-Grandma with hugs and wishes for a merry Christmas.Mrs.Carmen,the activities director, showed a short holiday movie. After that the residents opened their gifts.“We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.”
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
“Wonderful,”Mrs. Carmen said.She smiled at Mya.“Mya, would you like to play while we sing Mya looked around the room.How could she ever find the courage to play here This would be worse than playing at the mall. At least there,people would be distracted by shopping. But here, everyone was sitting in a big circle facing the piano.
Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. _________________________________________
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As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 Highlights for Children 按照高考读后续写试题的要求，略有修改
词数 正文英文词数353，续写第一段首句8个单词，续写第二段首句11个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2, 3)
Climax (Para.4,5,6)
Resolution (续写第一段) .Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. ……
Ending (续写第二段) As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room ……
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 “Mya” “Great-Grandma”
How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly “Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
场景
语言风格
伏笔/照应 Para 1: But the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you.
Para 1：The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
Para 4: We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.”
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What would be the reason for Mya to change her mind Q2: What would Mya decide to do for the retirement community
问题 素材 功能
Q1 Then she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her. 动作描写 as引导的状语从句
She remembered Ms.Jackson saying that the best way to overcome her fear of playing in public was just to do it . 心理描写 动词不定式做后置定语
With her Great-Grandma standing by her, she thought“Isn’t it time for a change ” With 的复合结构 反问修辞手法 心理描写
Q2 Mya took a deep breath and headed to the piano.She sat down on the bench and played“Silent Night" all the way through without making a mistake. 具体动作和细节描写推进情节发展
Then, with her playing played it again, everyone began to sing. They even made a small stage! With 的复合结构
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What would be the outcome of Mya’s performance Q4: What would Mya learn from this performance
问题 素材 功能
Q3 A wave of applause washed over Mya. Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，比喻的修辞，将掌声比喻波浪，形象地描述了掌声的强烈和连续性，以及它对Mya情感上的冲击。
Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，拟人修辞，将“belonging”和“pride”拟人化，它们看起来像能够，让它们看起来像能够被感觉到的实体。
Your music has touched our hearts today.” 语言描写，强调音乐对听众心灵的深刻影响。
Q4 She not only conquered her fear but also brought joy to these dear souls. Not only...but also结构的运用，强调了Mya不仅克服了自己的恐惧还给别人带来了快乐。
Inspired by her success,Mya felt a newfound confidence about upcoming Christmas recital. She knew that every performance was an opportunity to spread joy and connect with others through the universal language of music. 心理描写，动词不定式做后置定语，运用对比的修辞，Mya演奏前后的情感 进行对比，从恐惧到自信，这种对比突出了她的成长和转变。
【素材积累】
Para 1
the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you 克服（在公共场合演奏的）恐惧的最好方法就是直面恐惧
Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice (现在分词作主语)
Para 3
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store.1.她想象着成百上千的购物者在商店间走来走去，边听边逛。
Para4
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.(现在分词作伴随状语）
IV技能锻造营
设问
定义
设问（Rhetorical Question）是一种修辞手法，它通过提出一个不需要回答或明显答案的问题来强调一个观点或情感。
2. 作用
设问的目的通常不是为了获取信息，而是为了引起听众的思考，强化论点，或增加语言的感染力。设问可以用于多种语境，包括演讲、写作、辩论等。
3.用法
(1)“Who wouldn’t want a world without war .”
(2)"Why should we tolerate discrimination any longer "
4. 实践
英译汉
(1)"Can money really buy happiness "
(2) "Is it fair to judge a book by its cover "
(3)"Don't we all deserve a chance to succeed "
(4)"Isn't it time for a change "
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 In the afternoon I headed to a local museum that showed the historical changes in California. Over 3000,000 people came from all over the world to seek their fortune. To earn a living, some people opened up shops and restaurants in Chinatown. Historically, Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period. Page 28 Para 3 Line 1 Page 28 Para 3 Line 5 Page 28 Para 3 Line 7 Page 32 Para 2 Line 1
场景描写 There are so many beautiful old buildings—many sitting on top of big hills, offering great views of the city, the ocean, and the Golden Gate Bridge. Traditionally,visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China. It has a long and famous history ,with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing here. These days,the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess,and people practising tai chi. Page 28 Para 1 Line 4 Page 32 Para 3 Line 4 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 12 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 13
心理描写 I have to admit that it definitely feels good to be back in the city again. Page 28 Para 1 Line 2
设问 When you think of America, what symbols come to your mind first Perhaps one of the most famous symbols of the US is fast food. Page 76 Para 1 Line 2 Page 76 Para 2 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 树上有3只鸟。(sitting，非谓语动词做后置定语)
There are three birds sitting in the tree.
2. 我有一个喜欢旅行的朋友，这就是他很少在家的原因。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
I have a friend who loves to travel ,which is why he is rarely at home.
有了家人们的支持，我感到自信和快乐。(with的复合结构)
With my family standing by me, I felt confident and cheerful.
面试官在面试中对他的评价很高，他感到很幸运。(fortune)
He felt fortunate that the interviewer spoke highly of him during the interview.
书架上有这么多书要看吗，我都不知道从哪里开始？(动词不定式做后置定语)
There are so many books to see on the shelf that I don’t know where to start.
我需要一个明确的答复 （definite）
I need a definite answer.
你不妨去南昌碰碰运气。(seek one’s fortune)
You may as well go to Nanchang to seek your fortune.
他们想在繁华的城市中定居。(settle in)
They want to settle in the booming city.
9. 她今天一大早就出去了。(head )
She headed out early this morning.
10. 为了学习一门新的语言，她前往说这种语言的国家。(动词不定式表目的)
To learn a new language, she travels to the country where it is spoken..
III 美文体验馆
Mya finished playing a Christmas carol and looked up at her piano teacher.“You played that very well,”Ms. Jackson said. “How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly.“Lots of kids are shy,” Ms. Jackson said,“but the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Remember, our recital （独奏）is going to be right after Christmas. You'll have to play in front of an audience then. Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice.”“I'm sorry. I can't be there,” Mya went on.“My great-grandmother invited my family to the Christmas party at her retirement community that afternoon.”Mya didn't add that she was relieved to have an excuse not to have to play at the mall. The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
On Saturday morning, as Mya wrapped presents for Great-Grandma, she thought about her friends playing piano at the mall.
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store. Some of them would take breaks from shopping to sit on benches and watch the piano players. I'm so glad I won't be there, she thought.
When Mya and her parents arrived at the retirement community, they greeted Great-Grandma with hugs and wishes for a merry Christmas.Mrs.Carmen,the activities director, showed a short holiday movie. After that the residents opened their gifts.“We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.”
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
“Wonderful,”Mrs. Carmen said.She smiled at Mya.“Mya, would you like to play while we sing Mya looked around the room.How could she ever find the courage to play here This would be worse than playing at the mall. At least there,people would be distracted by shopping. But here, everyone was sitting in a big circle facing the piano.
Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. ________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 Highlights for Children 按照高考读后续写试题的要求，略有修改
词数 正文英文词数353，续写第一段首句8个单词，续写第二段首句11个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) Mya's piano teacher, praises her performance and invites her to play carols at the mall, but Mya declines.
Build-up (Para.2, 3) Mya reflects on her friends playing piano at the mall while she is safe from the pressure of performing in public, feeling relieved about her excuse.
Climax (Para.4,5,6) At the retirement community, Mya's great-grandmother proudly announces that Mya plays piano, and Mrs. Carmen asks her to play for the residents' singing of "Silent Night," presenting Mya with a new performance challenge.
Resolution (续写第一段) .Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. ……
Ending (续写第二段) As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room ……
Why 故事主题 文章的主题是关于Mya面对在公共场合演奏钢琴的恐惧和她如何被迫在两个不同的场合——购物中心和养老社区——克服这种恐惧的经历。
How 写作手法 第三人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 “Mya” “Great-Grandma”
How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly 说明Mya很害羞，内向 “Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly. Great-Grandma对Mya的能力非常的自信
The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot. 说明Mya非常抗拒在公众面前表演
场景 敬老院
语言风格 言语优美 情感丰富 温馨美好
伏笔/照应 Para 1: But the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Mya性格内向尽管自己很优秀但是不敢在公众面前表现自己的才艺，但是老师的鼓励在Mya内心产生影响，为后面第一段续写埋下伏笔。
Para 1：The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot. 形象的描写出Mya在公众面前表演时的紧张的情形，为第二段描写她克服内心的恐惧形成鲜明的对比。
Para 4: We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.” 推动故事情节的发展，为后面Mya需要上台演奏做好了铺垫。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What would be the reason for Mya to change her mind Q2: What would Mya decide to do for the retirement community
问题 素材 功能
Q1 Then she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her. 动作描写 as引导的状语从句
She remembered Ms.Jackson saying that the best way to overcome her fear of playing in public was just to do it . 心理描写 动词不定式做后置定语
With her Great-Grandma standing by her, she thought“Isn’t it time for a change ” With 的复合结构 反问修辞手法 心理描写
Q2 Mya took a deep breath and headed to the piano.She sat down on the bench and played“Silent Night" all the way through without making a mistake. 具体动作和细节描写推进情节发展
Then, with her playing played it again, everyone began to sing. They even made a small stage! With 的复合结构
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What would be the outcome of Mya’s performance Q4: What would Mya learn from this performance
问题 素材 功能
Q3 A wave of applause washed over Mya. Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，比喻的修辞，将掌声比喻波浪，形象地描述了掌声的强烈和连续性，以及它对Mya情感上的冲击。
Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，拟人修辞，将“belonging”和“pride”拟人化，它们看起来像能够，让它们看起来像能够被感觉到的实体。
Your music has touched our hearts today.” 语言描写，强调音乐对听众心灵的深刻影响。
Q4 She not only conquered her fear but also brought joy to these dear souls. Not only...but also结构的运用，强调了Mya不仅克服了自己的恐惧还给别人带来了快乐。
Inspired by her success,Mya felt a newfound confidence about upcoming Christmas recital. She knew that every performance was an opportunity to spread joy and connect with others through the universal language of music. 心理描写，动词不定式做后置定语，运用对比的修辞，Mya演奏前后的情感 进行对比，从恐惧到自信，这种对比突出了她的成长和转变。
【素材积累】
Para 1
the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you 克服（在公共场合演奏的）恐惧的最好方法就是直面恐惧
Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice 现在分词作主语
Para 3
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store.1.她想象着成百上千的购物者在商店间走来走去，边听边逛。
Para4
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.现在分词做伴随状语
【参考范文】
Mya was about to say she couldn't do it.Then she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her. She remembered Ms.Jackson saying that the best way to overcome her fear of playing in public was just to do it. With her Great-Grandma standing by her, she thought“Isn’t it time for a change ” Mya took a deep breath and headed to the piano.(with 的复合结构，设问)She sat down on the bench and played“Silent Night" all the way through without making a mistake. Then, with her playing played it again, everyone began to sing.（89词）
As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room, a wave of applause washed over Mya. Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride.（比喻）She not only conquered her fear but also brought joy to these dear souls.（not only...but also...）“Thank you,Mya. Your music has touched our hearts today.”Mya, still seated at the piano ,looked around at the smiling faces and realized that her performance had created a moment of shared happiness.(宾语从句) Inspired by her success,Mya felt a newfound confidence about Upcoming Christmas recital. She knew that every performance was an opportunity to spread joy and connect with others through the universal language of music.（动词不定式做后置定语）（.93词）
IV技能锻造营
设问
定义
设问（Rhetorical Question）是一种修辞手法，它通过提出一个不需要回答或明显答案的问题来强调一个观点或情感。
2. 作用
设问的目的通常不是为了获取信息，而是为了引起听众的思考，强化论点，或增加语言的感染力。设问可以用于多种语境，包括演讲、写作、辩论等。
3.用法
(1)“Who wouldn’t want a world without war .”
(2)"Why should we tolerate discrimination any longer "
4. 实践
(1)"Can money really buy happiness "
(2) "Is it fair to judge a book by its cover "
(3)"Don't we all deserve a chance to succeed "
(4)"Isn't it time for a change "
(1) 金钱真的能买到幸福吗？
(2) 以貌取人公平吗？
(3) 难道我们不都值得拥有成功的机会吗？
(4) 难道不是时候做出改变了吗？
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 In the afternoon I headed to a local museum that showed the historical changes in California. Over 3000,000 people came from all over the world to seek their fortune. To earn a living, some people opened up shops and restaurants in Chinatown. Historically, Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period. Page 28 Para 3 Line 1 Page 28 Para 3 Line 5 Page 28 Para 3 Line 7 Page 32 Para 2 Line 1
场景描写 There are so many beautiful old buildings—many sitting on top of big hills, offering great views of the city, the ocean, and the Golden Gate Bridge. Traditionally,visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China. It has a long and famous history ,with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing here. These days,the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess,and people practising tai chi. Page 28 Para 1 Line 4 Page 32 Para 3 Line 4 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 12 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 13
心理描写 I have to admit that it definitely feels good to be back in the city again. Page 28 Para 1 Line 2
设问 When you think of America, what symbols come to your mind first Perhaps one of the most famous symbols of the US is fast food. Page 76 Para 1 Line 2 Page 76 Para 2 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
树上有3只鸟。(sitting，非谓语动词做后置定语
______________________________________________________________
2. 我有一个喜欢旅行的朋友，这就是他很少在家的原因。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
______________________________________________________________
有了家人们的支持，我感到自信和快乐。(with的复合结构)
______________________________________________________________
面试官在面试中对他的评价很高，他感到很幸运。(fortune)
______________________________________________________________
书架上有这么多书要看吗，我都不知道从哪里开始？(动词不定式做后置定语)
______________________________________________________________
我需要一个明确的答复 （definite）
______________________________________________________________
你不妨去南昌碰碰运气。(seek one’s fortune)
______________________________________________________________
他们想在繁华的城市中定居。(settle in)
______________________________________________________________
9. 她今天一大早就出去了。(head )
______________________________________________________________
10. 为了学习一门新的语言，她前往说这种语言的国家。(动词不定式表目的)
______________________________________________________________
III 美文体验馆
Mya finished playing a Christmas carol and looked up at her piano teacher.“You played that very well,”Ms. Jackson said. “How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly.“Lots of kids are shy,” Ms. Jackson said,“but the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Remember, our recital （独奏）is going to be right after Christmas. You'll have to play in front of an audience then. Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice.”“I'm sorry. I can't be there,” Mya went on.“My great-grandmother invited my family to the Christmas party at her retirement community that afternoon.”Mya didn't add that she was relieved to have an excuse not to have to play at the mall. The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
On Saturday morning, as Mya wrapped presents for Great-Grandma, she thought about her friends playing piano at the mall.
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store. Some of them would take breaks from shopping to sit on benches and watch the piano players. I'm so glad I won't be there, she thought.
When Mya and her parents arrived at the retirement community, they greeted Great-Grandma with hugs and wishes for a merry Christmas.Mrs.Carmen,the activities director, showed a short holiday movie. After that the residents opened their gifts.“We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.”
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
“Wonderful,”Mrs. Carmen said.She smiled at Mya.“Mya, would you like to play while we sing Mya looked around the room.How could she ever find the courage to play here This would be worse than playing at the mall. At least there,people would be distracted by shopping. But here, everyone was sitting in a big circle facing the piano.
Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. _________________________________________
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As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 Highlights for Children 按照高考读后续写试题的要求，略有修改
词数 正文英文词数353，续写第一段首句8个单词，续写第二段首句11个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2, 3)
Climax (Para.4,5,6)
Resolution (续写第一段) .Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. ……
Ending (续写第二段) As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room ……
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 “Mya” “Great-Grandma”
How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly “Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
场景
语言风格
伏笔/照应 Para 1: But the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you.
Para 1：The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
Para 4: We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.”
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What would be the reason for Mya to change her mind Q2: What would Mya decide to do for the retirement community
问题 素材 功能
Q1 Then she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her. 动作描写 as引导的状语从句
She remembered Ms.Jackson saying that the best way to overcome her fear of playing in public was just to do it . 心理描写 动词不定式做后置定语
With her Great-Grandma standing by her, she thought“Isn’t it time for a change ” With 的复合结构 反问修辞手法 心理描写
Q2 Mya took a deep breath and headed to the piano.She sat down on the bench and played“Silent Night" all the way through without making a mistake. 具体动作和细节描写推进情节发展
Then, with her playing played it again, everyone began to sing. They even made a small stage! With 的复合结构
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What would be the outcome of Mya’s performance Q4: What would Mya learn from this performance
问题 素材 功能
Q3 A wave of applause washed over Mya. Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，比喻的修辞，将掌声比喻波浪，形象地描述了掌声的强烈和连续性，以及它对Mya情感上的冲击。
Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，拟人修辞，将“belonging”和“pride”拟人化，它们看起来像能够，让它们看起来像能够被感觉到的实体。
Your music has touched our hearts today.” 语言描写，强调音乐对听众心灵的深刻影响。
Q4 She not only conquered her fear but also brought joy to these dear souls. Not only...but also结构的运用，强调了Mya不仅克服了自己的恐惧还给别人带来了快乐。
Inspired by her success,Mya felt a newfound confidence about upcoming Christmas recital. She knew that every performance was an opportunity to spread joy and connect with others through the universal language of music. 心理描写，动词不定式做后置定语，运用对比的修辞，Mya演奏前后的情感 进行对比，从恐惧到自信，这种对比突出了她的成长和转变。
【素材积累】
Para 1
the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you 克服（在公共场合演奏的）恐惧的最好方法就是直面恐惧
Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice (现在分词作主语)
Para 3
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store.1.她想象着成百上千的购物者在商店间走来走去，边听边逛。
Para4
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.(现在分词作伴随状语）
IV技能锻造营
设问
定义
设问（Rhetorical Question）是一种修辞手法，它通过提出一个不需要回答或明显答案的问题来强调一个观点或情感。
2. 作用
设问的目的通常不是为了获取信息，而是为了引起听众的思考，强化论点，或增加语言的感染力。设问可以用于多种语境，包括演讲、写作、辩论等。
3.用法
(1)“Who wouldn’t want a world without war .”
(2)"Why should we tolerate discrimination any longer "
4. 实践
英译汉
(1)"Can money really buy happiness "
(2) "Is it fair to judge a book by its cover "
(3)"Don't we all deserve a chance to succeed "
(4)"Isn't it time for a change "
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 In the afternoon I headed to a local museum that showed the historical changes in California. Over 3000,000 people came from all over the world to seek their fortune. To earn a living, some people opened up shops and restaurants in Chinatown. Historically, Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period. Page 28 Para 3 Line 1 Page 28 Para 3 Line 5 Page 28 Para 3 Line 7 Page 32 Para 2 Line 1
场景描写 There are so many beautiful old buildings—many sitting on top of big hills, offering great views of the city, the ocean, and the Golden Gate Bridge. Traditionally,visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China. It has a long and famous history ,with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing here. These days,the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess,and people practising tai chi. Page 28 Para 1 Line 4 Page 32 Para 3 Line 4 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 12 .Page 32 Para 3 Line 13
心理描写 I have to admit that it definitely feels good to be back in the city again. Page 28 Para 1 Line 2
设问 When you think of America, what symbols come to your mind first Perhaps one of the most famous symbols of the US is fast food. Page 76 Para 1 Line 2 Page 76 Para 2 Line 1
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 树上有3只鸟。(sitting，非谓语动词做后置定语)
There are three birds sitting in the tree.
2. 我有一个喜欢旅行的朋友，这就是他很少在家的原因。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
I have a friend who loves to travel ,which is why he is rarely at home.
有了家人们的支持，我感到自信和快乐。(with的复合结构)
With my family standing by me, I felt confident and cheerful.
面试官在面试中对他的评价很高，他感到很幸运。(fortune)
He felt fortunate that the interviewer spoke highly of him during the interview.
书架上有这么多书要看吗，我都不知道从哪里开始？(动词不定式做后置定语)
There are so many books to see on the shelf that I don’t know where to start.
我需要一个明确的答复 （definite）
I need a definite answer.
你不妨去南昌碰碰运气。(seek one’s fortune)
You may as well go to Nanchang to seek your fortune.
他们想在繁华的城市中定居。(settle in)
They want to settle in the booming city.
9. 她今天一大早就出去了。(head )
She headed out early this morning.
10. 为了学习一门新的语言，她前往说这种语言的国家。(动词不定式表目的)
To learn a new language, she travels to the country where it is spoken..
III 美文体验馆
Mya finished playing a Christmas carol and looked up at her piano teacher.“You played that very well,”Ms. Jackson said. “How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly.“Lots of kids are shy,” Ms. Jackson said,“but the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Remember, our recital （独奏）is going to be right after Christmas. You'll have to play in front of an audience then. Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice.”“I'm sorry. I can't be there,” Mya went on.“My great-grandmother invited my family to the Christmas party at her retirement community that afternoon.”Mya didn't add that she was relieved to have an excuse not to have to play at the mall. The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot.
On Saturday morning, as Mya wrapped presents for Great-Grandma, she thought about her friends playing piano at the mall.
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store. Some of them would take breaks from shopping to sit on benches and watch the piano players. I'm so glad I won't be there, she thought.
When Mya and her parents arrived at the retirement community, they greeted Great-Grandma with hugs and wishes for a merry Christmas.Mrs.Carmen,the activities director, showed a short holiday movie. After that the residents opened their gifts.“We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.”
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
“Wonderful,”Mrs. Carmen said.She smiled at Mya.“Mya, would you like to play while we sing Mya looked around the room.How could she ever find the courage to play here This would be worse than playing at the mall. At least there,people would be distracted by shopping. But here, everyone was sitting in a big circle facing the piano.
Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. ________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 Highlights for Children 按照高考读后续写试题的要求，略有修改
词数 正文英文词数353，续写第一段首句8个单词，续写第二段首句11个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) Mya's piano teacher, praises her performance and invites her to play carols at the mall, but Mya declines.
Build-up (Para.2, 3) Mya reflects on her friends playing piano at the mall while she is safe from the pressure of performing in public, feeling relieved about her excuse.
Climax (Para.4,5,6) At the retirement community, Mya's great-grandmother proudly announces that Mya plays piano, and Mrs. Carmen asks her to play for the residents' singing of "Silent Night," presenting Mya with a new performance challenge.
Resolution (续写第一段) .Mya was about to say she couldn't do it. ……
Ending (续写第二段) As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room ……
Why 故事主题 文章的主题是关于Mya面对在公共场合演奏钢琴的恐惧和她如何被迫在两个不同的场合——购物中心和养老社区——克服这种恐惧的经历。
How 写作手法 第三人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 “Mya” “Great-Grandma”
How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the mall this Saturday afternoon ”“I can't.”Mya said quickly 说明Mya很害羞，内向 “Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly. Great-Grandma对Mya的能力非常的自信
The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot. 说明Mya非常抗拒在公众面前表演
场景 敬老院
语言风格 言语优美 情感丰富 温馨美好
伏笔/照应 Para 1: But the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Mya性格内向尽管自己很优秀但是不敢在公众面前表现自己的才艺，但是老师的鼓励在Mya内心产生影响，为后面第一段续写埋下伏笔。
Para 1：The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench(紧缩) into a knot. 形象的描写出Mya在公众面前表演时的紧张的情形，为第二段描写她克服内心的恐惧形成鲜明的对比。
Para 4: We usually end by singing‘Silent Night’,” Mrs. Carmen said.“But our piano player wasn't able to make it today.” 推动故事情节的发展，为后面Mya需要上台演奏做好了铺垫。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What would be the reason for Mya to change her mind Q2: What would Mya decide to do for the retirement community
问题 素材 功能
Q1 Then she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her. 动作描写 as引导的状语从句
She remembered Ms.Jackson saying that the best way to overcome her fear of playing in public was just to do it . 心理描写 动词不定式做后置定语
With her Great-Grandma standing by her, she thought“Isn’t it time for a change ” With 的复合结构 反问修辞手法 心理描写
Q2 Mya took a deep breath and headed to the piano.She sat down on the bench and played“Silent Night" all the way through without making a mistake. 具体动作和细节描写推进情节发展
Then, with her playing played it again, everyone began to sing. They even made a small stage! With 的复合结构
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What would be the outcome of Mya’s performance Q4: What would Mya learn from this performance
问题 素材 功能
Q3 A wave of applause washed over Mya. Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，比喻的修辞，将掌声比喻波浪，形象地描述了掌声的强烈和连续性，以及它对Mya情感上的冲击。
Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride 心理描写，拟人修辞，将“belonging”和“pride”拟人化，它们看起来像能够，让它们看起来像能够被感觉到的实体。
Your music has touched our hearts today.” 语言描写，强调音乐对听众心灵的深刻影响。
Q4 She not only conquered her fear but also brought joy to these dear souls. Not only...but also结构的运用，强调了Mya不仅克服了自己的恐惧还给别人带来了快乐。
Inspired by her success,Mya felt a newfound confidence about upcoming Christmas recital. She knew that every performance was an opportunity to spread joy and connect with others through the universal language of music. 心理描写，动词不定式做后置定语，运用对比的修辞，Mya演奏前后的情感 进行对比，从恐惧到自信，这种对比突出了她的成长和转变。
【素材积累】
Para 1
the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you 克服（在公共场合演奏的）恐惧的最好方法就是直面恐惧
Playing at the mall this weekend would be great practice 现在分词作主语
Para 3
She pictured hundreds of shoppers wandering around and listening while going from store to store.1.她想象着成百上千的购物者在商店间走来走去，边听边逛。
Para4
“Mya plays the piano,”Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.现在分词做伴随状语
【参考范文】
Mya was about to say she couldn't do it.Then she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her. She remembered Ms.Jackson saying that the best way to overcome her fear of playing in public was just to do it. With her Great-Grandma standing by her, she thought“Isn’t it time for a change ” Mya took a deep breath and headed to the piano.(with 的复合结构，设问)She sat down on the bench and played“Silent Night" all the way through without making a mistake. Then, with her playing played it again, everyone began to sing.（89词）
As the last note of “Silent Night” echoed through the room, a wave of applause washed over Mya. Mya felt an overwhelming sense of belonging and pride.（比喻）She not only conquered her fear but also brought joy to these dear souls.（not only...but also...）“Thank you,Mya. Your music has touched our hearts today.”Mya, still seated at the piano ,looked around at the smiling faces and realized that her performance had created a moment of shared happiness.(宾语从句) Inspired by her success,Mya felt a newfound confidence about Upcoming Christmas recital. She knew that every performance was an opportunity to spread joy and connect with others through the universal language of music.（动词不定式做后置定语）（.93词）
IV技能锻造营
设问
定义
设问（Rhetorical Question）是一种修辞手法，它通过提出一个不需要回答或明显答案的问题来强调一个观点或情感。
2. 作用
设问的目的通常不是为了获取信息，而是为了引起听众的思考，强化论点，或增加语言的感染力。设问可以用于多种语境，包括演讲、写作、辩论等。
3.用法
(1)“Who wouldn’t want a world without war .”
(2)"Why should we tolerate discrimination any longer "
4. 实践
(1)"Can money really buy happiness "
(2) "Is it fair to judge a book by its cover "
(3)"Don't we all deserve a chance to succeed "
(4)"Isn't it time for a change "
(1) 金钱真的能买到幸福吗？
(2) 以貌取人公平吗？
(3) 难道我们不都值得拥有成功的机会吗？
(4) 难道不是时候做出改变了吗？