Unit 5 First Aid 读后续写作业设计（含答案）-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第二册
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人教版 选修2 Unit 5 First Aid读后续写作业设计
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. Place burns under cool running water, especially within the first ten minutes 2. Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin. 3. Cover the burnt with a loose clean cloth. Applying oil to the injured areas is a bad idea, as it will keep the heat in the wounds and may cause infection. 4. ChenWei,…, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. 5. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friend were slapping him on the back. 1. Page 51 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 51 Para 1 Line 5 3. Page 51 Para 1 Line 7 4. Page 56 Para 1 Line 1 5. Page 56 Para 1 Line 4
场景描写 1. Last night there was a big storm, bringing high winds and blowing roofs off houses. 2. Durant arrived on the night of 24 June and found a battle filled with 40,000 dead and wounded soldiers. 1. Page 90 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 1
外貌描写 Not moving, the boy looked dead and his face was turning blue. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 6
心理描写 1. Unable to see what was happening, Peter was quite worried about the boy. 2.Dunant was horrified by the scene and was filled with compassion for the wounded man. 1. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 26 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 她用桌布覆盖了桌子。(cover…with…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 把乳霜薄薄地抹在脸和脖子上。(apply … to…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________3. 昨天下午我请人补了牙。(have sth. done)
____________________________________________________________________________________________4. 他刚睡着电话就响了。(when)
____________________________________________________________________________________________5. 汤姆很擅长理科，而他的弟弟绝对是不可救药。(while)
____________________________________________________________________________________________6. 那本书好像很有趣。(look)
____________________________________________________________________________________________7. 叶子变黄。(turn)
____________________________________________________________________________________________8. 当她醒来时，发现周围一群陌生人。(find sth. done)
____________________________________________________________________________________________9. 看到他们的生活状况时， 他很震惊。(be horrified )
____________________________________________________________________________________________10. 你的生活总是充满挑战。(be filled with )
III 美文体验馆
Lisa Sweeney is a 32-year-old mail carrier in Staten Island, New York. Four months ago, she noticed that something wasn't right at one of the homes on her route. It was her quick action that made all the difference.
One afternoon in August, an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor.
The next afternoon, her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. Though she and Marie hadn't had much conversation over the years, Lisa knew her habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
“I just had a feeling in my heart that Marie was inside. ” Lisa recalls. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door. There was no answer. She thought that this was very strange, so she knocked on a neighbor's door, but he'd been away on vacation and arrived home just a short time before so he didn't know anything. Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself.
________________________________________________________________________________________
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship.
________________________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 湖南省名校联合体2025届高三上学期开学摸底。
词数 正文英文词数249，续写第一段首句12个单词，第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2)
Rising (Para.3)
Climax (Para.4)
Resolution (续写第一段) “I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself. ……
Ending (续写第二段) Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. ……
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析
…her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone…
Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
场景
语言风格 平实质朴 细腻详尽
伏笔/照应 Lisa, as Marie’s regular mail carrier and knew Marie’s habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
… an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone,…
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: How did Lisa get into Marie’s house What did Lisa see What would Lisa do Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: How did Lisa and Marie develop the friendship Q4: How did they treat each other
【素材积累】
Para 1
1. notice v. 注意到
2. route n. 路线
3. It was her quick action that made all the difference. 强调句型
Para 2
1. …, an old woman named Mari e Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home.
named是过去分词作后置定语；
who引导的非限定性定语从句。
2. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor. unconscious形容词表示伴随的状态
Para 3
regular adj. 常规的，定期的
pass by 走过，经过
conversation n. 交谈，谈话
Para 4
1. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. 现在分词作伴随状语
2. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door.
过去分词做形容词，表伴随的状态。
IV 技能锻造营
Synaesthesia (通感）
1. 定义
Synaesthesia (通感）修辞法是以视、听、触、嗅、味等感觉直接描写事物，把不同感官的感觉沟通起来，借联想引起感觉转移，“以感觉写感觉”。
2. 作用
通感修辞法的巧妙运用，通过不同感官的交融，使得描述更加生动、具体，并丰富了读者的感官体验。
3. 用法
(1)“他的声音如春风拂面，温暖而柔和。”这句话将听觉上的声音与触觉上的春风拂面相结合，形象地描绘了声音的温暖和柔和。
(2)“她的歌声如清泉流淌，清新而自然。”这句话将听觉上的歌声与视觉上的清泉流淌相联系，生动地表现了歌声的清新和自然之美。
(3)“他的钢琴演奏如火焰燃烧，热烈而激情。”这句话将听觉上的钢琴演奏与视觉上的火焰燃烧以及情感上的热烈和激情相结合，形象地传达了钢琴演奏的热烈和激情四溢。
(4)“鸟儿落在树上，倾污出百合花似的声音。”这句话用视觉形容听觉，由鸟落在树上发出的声音联想到百合花。
(5)“品尝Mozart的音乐。”这句话用嗅觉形容听觉。
4. 实践
英译汉
(1) The warm colors of the painting seem to sing a soft melody.
(2) The bright lights on the stage danced to the rhythm of the music.
(3) The harsh sound of the alarm clock scratched at my skin.
(4) The smooth surface of the marble felt like a clear sky.
(5) As I entered her room, I was hit by the heavy perfume and noisy colors.
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. Place burns under cool running water, especially within the first ten minutes 2. Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin. 3. Cover the burnt with a loose clean cloth. Applying oil to the injured areas is a bad idea, as it will keep the heat in the wounds and may cause infection. 4. ChenWei,…, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. 5. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friend were slapping him on the back. 1. Page 51 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 51 Para 1 Line 5 3. Page 51 Para 1 Line 7 4. Page 56 Para 1 Line 1 5. Page 56 Para 1 Line 4
场景描写 1. Last night there was a big storm, bringing high winds and blowing roofs off houses. 2. Durant arrived on the night of 24 June and found a battle filled with 40,000 dead and wounded soldiers. 1. Page 90 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 1
外貌描写 Not moving, the boy looked dead and his face was turning blue. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 6
心理描写 1. Unable to see what was happening, Peter was quite worried about the boy. 2.Dunant was horrified by the scene and was filled with compassion for the wounded man. 1. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 26 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 她用桌布覆盖了桌子。(cover…with…)
She cover the table with a cloth.
2. 把乳霜薄薄地抹在脸和脖子上。(apply … to…)
Apply the cream sparingly to your face and neck.
3. 昨天下午我请人补了牙。(have sth. done)
I had my teeth filled yesterday.
4. 他刚睡着电话就响了。(when)
He had just drifted off to sleep when the phone rang.
5. 汤姆很擅长理科，而他的弟弟绝对是不可救药。(while)
While Tom’s very good at science, his brother is absolutely hopeless .
6. 那本书好像很有趣。(look)
That book looks interesting.
7. 叶子变黄。(turn)
The leaves were turning yellow.
8. 当她醒来时，发现周围一群陌生人。(find sth. done)
When she woke up, she found herself surrounded by a group of strangers.
9. 看到他们的生活状况时， 他很震惊。(be horrified )
He was horrified when he discovered the conditions in which they lived.
10. 你的生活总是充满挑战。(be filled with )
Your life will always filled with challenges.
III 美文体验馆
Lisa Sweeney is a 32-year-old mail carrier in Staten Island, New York. Four months ago, she noticed that something wasn't right at one of the homes on her route. It was her quick action that made all the difference.
One afternoon in August, an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor.
The next afternoon, her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. Though she and Marie hadn't had much conversation over the years, Lisa knew her habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
“I just had a feeling in my heart that Marie was inside. ” Lisa recalls. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door. There was no answer. She thought that this was very strange, so she knocked on a neighbor's door, but he'd been away on vacation and arrived home just a short time before so he didn't know anything. Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself.
________________________________________________________________________________________
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship.
________________________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 湖南省名校联合体2025届高三上学期开学摸底。
词数 正文英文词数249，续写第一段首句12个单词，第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) As a mail carrier, Lisa noticed something unusual on her route and her quick action made all the difference.
Build-up (Para.2) An old and lonely woman fell down, lying unconscious on the floor .
Rising (Para.3) Lisa was surprised when she didn’t saw Marie as usual in the garden.
Climax (Para.4) Lisa tried to find Marie but there was no answer. When she saw the milkbottle on the doorstep, she realized it’s a warning sign.
Resolution (续写第一段) “I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself. ……
Ending (续写第二段) Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. ……
Why 故事主题 伸出援手，邻里守望。
How 写作手法 第三人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 Lisa Sweeney Marie Boyer
…her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. 说明Lisa的细心。 an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone… 年老独居
Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign. Lisa通过一些细节进行合理推断。
场景 老妇人的家里
语言风格 平实质朴 细腻详尽
伏笔/照应 Lisa, as Marie’s regular mail carrier and knew Marie’s habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine. Lisa的身份是一名邮递员，定期给Marie太太递送，这个身份设定就使得她了解Marie太太的习惯合理化。为她后面发现Marie太太的异常做了铺垫。
… an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone,… Marie太太年老且独居，所以会更容易发生意外而又无人发现。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: How did Lisa get into Marie’s house What did Lisa see What would Lisa do Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation
问题 素材 功能
Q1 So she walked round the house until she found an open window through which she managed to get into the house. 动作链推动情节发展，找到方法进入Marie的房子
There, at the foot of the stairs, she found Marie lying unconscious. 现在分词作宾补，描绘了看到的情景
Realizing there was little she could do for Marie, she immediately called the hospital for help. 心理描写为下一步的行动作了决定
Q2 It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived and Marie was taken to hospital without delay. immediately和without delay都说明了行动的迅速，为抢救赢得了时间
Later that day, to her great relief, Lisa learned that Marie was out of danger thanks to the timely rescue. to her relief表明Lisa当得知Marie转危为安后的如释重负
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: How did Lisa and Marie develop the friendship Q4: How did they treat each other
问题 素材 功能
Q3 Since that August day, Lisa and Marie have developed a very special bond. They treat each other as a family member. 由此，两人展开了一段忘年交，像家人般的关系
Q4 Marie always asks Lisa in for a cup of tea whenever she sees her passing by and Lisa never fails to bring Marie things she needs. 用and来连接两个分句说明了相互的付出
【素材积累】
Para 1
1. notice v. 注意到
2. route n. 路线
3. It was her quick action that made all the difference. 强调句型
Para 2
1. …, an old woman named Mari e Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home.
named是过去分词作后置定语；
who引导的非限定性定语从句。
2. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor. unconscious形容词表示伴随的状态
Para 3
regular adj. 常规的，定期的
pass by 走过，经过
conversation n. 交谈，谈话
Para 4
1. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. 现在分词作伴随状语
2. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door.
过去分词做形容词，表伴随的状态。
【参考范文】
“I must get in to see what's happened,” Lisa said to herself. So she walked round the house until she found an open window through which she managed to get into the house. There, at the foot of the stairs, she found Mari e lying unconscious. Realizing there was little she could do for Marie, she immediately called the hospital for help. It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived and Marie was taken to hospital without delay. Later that day, to her great relief, Lisa learned that Marie was out of danger thanks to the timely rescue. (85 words)
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. Since that August day, Lisa and Marie have developed a very special bond. They treat each other as a family member. Marie always asks Lisa in for a cup of tea whenever she sees her passing by and Lisa never fails to bring Marie things she needs. “She's given me a second life and I’ve got a daughter to love,” says Marie. For Lisa, the rescue has completely changed her life. It seems more beautiful and meaningful to her. (83words)
IV 技能锻造营
Synaesthesia (通感）
1. 定义
Synaesthesia (通感）修辞法是以视、听、触、嗅、味等感觉直接描写事物，把不同感官的感觉沟通起来，借联想引起感觉转移，“以感觉写感觉”。
2. 作用
通感修辞法的巧妙运用，通过不同感官的交融，使得描述更加生动、具体，并丰富了
读者的感官体验
3. 用法
(1)“他的声音如春风拂面，温暖而柔和。”这句话将听觉上的声音与触觉上的春风拂面相结合，形象地描绘了声音的温暖和柔和。
(2)“她的歌声如清泉流淌，清新而自然。”这句话将听觉上的歌声与视觉上的清泉流淌相联系，生动地表现了歌声的清新和自然之美。
(3)“他的钢琴演奏如火焰燃烧，热烈而激情。”这句话将听觉上的钢琴演奏与视觉上的火焰燃烧以及情感上的热烈和激情相结合，形象地传达了钢琴演奏的热烈和激情四溢。
(4)“鸟儿落在树上，倾污出百合花似的声音。”这句话用视觉形容听觉，由鸟落在树上发出的声音联想到百合花。
(5)“品尝Mozart的音乐。”这句话用嗅觉形容听觉。
4. 实践
英译汉
(1) The warm colors of the painting seem to sing a soft melody.
(2) The bright lights on the stage danced to the rhythm of the musi
(3) The harsh sound of the alarm clock scratched at my skin.
(4) The smooth surface of the marble felt like a clear sky.
(5) As I entered her room, I was hit by the heavy perfume and noisy colors.
（1）这幅画温暖的色彩似乎在吟唱着轻柔的旋律。
（2）舞台上明亮的灯光随着音乐的节奏起舞。
（3）闹钟刺耳的声音像在刮我的皮肤。
（4）大理石光滑的表面感觉就像晴朗的天空。
（5）我一走进她的房间，浓郁的香气和刺眼的色彩就朝我袭来。
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. Place burns under cool running water, especially within the first ten minutes 2. Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin. 3. Cover the burnt with a loose clean cloth. Applying oil to the injured areas is a bad idea, as it will keep the heat in the wounds and may cause infection. 4. ChenWei,…, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. 5. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friend were slapping him on the back. 1. Page 51 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 51 Para 1 Line 5 3. Page 51 Para 1 Line 7 4. Page 56 Para 1 Line 1 5. Page 56 Para 1 Line 4
场景描写 1. Last night there was a big storm, bringing high winds and blowing roofs off houses. 2. Durant arrived on the night of 24 June and found a battle filled with 40,000 dead and wounded soldiers. 1. Page 90 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 1
外貌描写 Not moving, the boy looked dead and his face was turning blue. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 6
心理描写 1. Unable to see what was happening, Peter was quite worried about the boy. 2.Dunant was horrified by the scene and was filled with compassion for the wounded man. 1. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 26 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 她用桌布覆盖了桌子。(cover…with…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 把乳霜薄薄地抹在脸和脖子上。(apply … to…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________3. 昨天下午我请人补了牙。(have sth. done)
____________________________________________________________________________________________4. 他刚睡着电话就响了。(when)
____________________________________________________________________________________________5. 汤姆很擅长理科，而他的弟弟绝对是不可救药。(while)
____________________________________________________________________________________________6. 那本书好像很有趣。(look)
____________________________________________________________________________________________7. 叶子变黄。(turn)
____________________________________________________________________________________________8. 当她醒来时，发现周围一群陌生人。(find sth. done)
____________________________________________________________________________________________9. 看到他们的生活状况时， 他很震惊。(be horrified )
____________________________________________________________________________________________10. 你的生活总是充满挑战。(be filled with )
III 美文体验馆
Lisa Sweeney is a 32-year-old mail carrier in Staten Island, New York. Four months ago, she noticed that something wasn't right at one of the homes on her route. It was her quick action that made all the difference.
One afternoon in August, an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor.
The next afternoon, her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. Though she and Marie hadn't had much conversation over the years, Lisa knew her habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
“I just had a feeling in my heart that Marie was inside. ” Lisa recalls. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door. There was no answer. She thought that this was very strange, so she knocked on a neighbor's door, but he'd been away on vacation and arrived home just a short time before so he didn't know anything. Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself.
________________________________________________________________________________________
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship.
________________________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 湖南省名校联合体2025届高三上学期开学摸底。
词数 正文英文词数249，续写第一段首句12个单词，第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2)
Rising (Para.3)
Climax (Para.4)
Resolution (续写第一段) “I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself. ……
Ending (续写第二段) Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. ……
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析
…her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone…
Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
场景
语言风格 平实质朴 细腻详尽
伏笔/照应 Lisa, as Marie’s regular mail carrier and knew Marie’s habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
… an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone,…
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: How did Lisa get into Marie’s house What did Lisa see What would Lisa do Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: How did Lisa and Marie develop the friendship Q4: How did they treat each other
【素材积累】
Para 1
1. notice v. 注意到
2. route n. 路线
3. It was her quick action that made all the difference. 强调句型
Para 2
1. …, an old woman named Mari e Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home.
named是过去分词作后置定语；
who引导的非限定性定语从句。
2. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor. unconscious形容词表示伴随的状态
Para 3
regular adj. 常规的，定期的
pass by 走过，经过
conversation n. 交谈，谈话
Para 4
1. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. 现在分词作伴随状语
2. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door.
过去分词做形容词，表伴随的状态。
IV 技能锻造营
Synaesthesia (通感）
1. 定义
Synaesthesia (通感）修辞法是以视、听、触、嗅、味等感觉直接描写事物，把不同感官的感觉沟通起来，借联想引起感觉转移，“以感觉写感觉”。
2. 作用
通感修辞法的巧妙运用，通过不同感官的交融，使得描述更加生动、具体，并丰富了读者的感官体验。
3. 用法
(1)“他的声音如春风拂面，温暖而柔和。”这句话将听觉上的声音与触觉上的春风拂面相结合，形象地描绘了声音的温暖和柔和。
(2)“她的歌声如清泉流淌，清新而自然。”这句话将听觉上的歌声与视觉上的清泉流淌相联系，生动地表现了歌声的清新和自然之美。
(3)“他的钢琴演奏如火焰燃烧，热烈而激情。”这句话将听觉上的钢琴演奏与视觉上的火焰燃烧以及情感上的热烈和激情相结合，形象地传达了钢琴演奏的热烈和激情四溢。
(4)“鸟儿落在树上，倾污出百合花似的声音。”这句话用视觉形容听觉，由鸟落在树上发出的声音联想到百合花。
(5)“品尝Mozart的音乐。”这句话用嗅觉形容听觉。
4. 实践
英译汉
(1) The warm colors of the painting seem to sing a soft melody.
(2) The bright lights on the stage danced to the rhythm of the music.
(3) The harsh sound of the alarm clock scratched at my skin.
(4) The smooth surface of the marble felt like a clear sky.
(5) As I entered her room, I was hit by the heavy perfume and noisy colors.
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. Place burns under cool running water, especially within the first ten minutes 2. Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin. 3. Cover the burnt with a loose clean cloth. Applying oil to the injured areas is a bad idea, as it will keep the heat in the wounds and may cause infection. 4. ChenWei,…, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. 5. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friend were slapping him on the back. 1. Page 51 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 51 Para 1 Line 5 3. Page 51 Para 1 Line 7 4. Page 56 Para 1 Line 1 5. Page 56 Para 1 Line 4
场景描写 1. Last night there was a big storm, bringing high winds and blowing roofs off houses. 2. Durant arrived on the night of 24 June and found a battle filled with 40,000 dead and wounded soldiers. 1. Page 90 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 1
外貌描写 Not moving, the boy looked dead and his face was turning blue. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 6
心理描写 1. Unable to see what was happening, Peter was quite worried about the boy. 2.Dunant was horrified by the scene and was filled with compassion for the wounded man. 1. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 26 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 2
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 她用桌布覆盖了桌子。(cover…with…)
She cover the table with a cloth.
2. 把乳霜薄薄地抹在脸和脖子上。(apply … to…)
Apply the cream sparingly to your face and neck.
3. 昨天下午我请人补了牙。(have sth. done)
I had my teeth filled yesterday.
4. 他刚睡着电话就响了。(when)
He had just drifted off to sleep when the phone rang.
5. 汤姆很擅长理科，而他的弟弟绝对是不可救药。(while)
While Tom’s very good at science, his brother is absolutely hopeless .
6. 那本书好像很有趣。(look)
That book looks interesting.
7. 叶子变黄。(turn)
The leaves were turning yellow.
8. 当她醒来时，发现周围一群陌生人。(find sth. done)
When she woke up, she found herself surrounded by a group of strangers.
9. 看到他们的生活状况时， 他很震惊。(be horrified )
He was horrified when he discovered the conditions in which they lived.
10. 你的生活总是充满挑战。(be filled with )
Your life will always filled with challenges.
III 美文体验馆
Lisa Sweeney is a 32-year-old mail carrier in Staten Island, New York. Four months ago, she noticed that something wasn't right at one of the homes on her route. It was her quick action that made all the difference.
One afternoon in August, an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor.
The next afternoon, her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. Though she and Marie hadn't had much conversation over the years, Lisa knew her habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
“I just had a feeling in my heart that Marie was inside. ” Lisa recalls. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door. There was no answer. She thought that this was very strange, so she knocked on a neighbor's door, but he'd been away on vacation and arrived home just a short time before so he didn't know anything. Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself.
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Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship.
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主题语境 人与社会
文章出处 湖南省名校联合体2025届高三上学期开学摸底。
词数 正文英文词数249，续写第一段首句12个单词，第二段首句13个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) As a mail carrier, Lisa noticed something unusual on her route and her quick action made all the difference.
Build-up (Para.2) An old and lonely woman fell down, lying unconscious on the floor .
Rising (Para.3) Lisa was surprised when she didn’t saw Marie as usual in the garden.
Climax (Para.4) Lisa tried to find Marie but there was no answer. When she saw the milkbottle on the doorstep, she realized it’s a warning sign.
Resolution (续写第一段) “I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself. ……
Ending (续写第二段) Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. ……
Why 故事主题 伸出援手，邻里守望。
How 写作手法 第三人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 Lisa Sweeney Marie Boyer
…her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. 说明Lisa的细心。 an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone… 年老独居
Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign. Lisa通过一些细节进行合理推断。
场景 老妇人的家里
语言风格 平实质朴 细腻详尽
伏笔/照应 Lisa, as Marie’s regular mail carrier and knew Marie’s habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine. Lisa的身份是一名邮递员，定期给Marie太太递送，这个身份设定就使得她了解Marie太太的习惯合理化。为她后面发现Marie太太的异常做了铺垫。
… an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone,… Marie太太年老且独居，所以会更容易发生意外而又无人发现。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: How did Lisa get into Marie’s house What did Lisa see What would Lisa do Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation
问题 素材 功能
Q1 So she walked round the house until she found an open window through which she managed to get into the house. 动作链推动情节发展，找到方法进入Marie的房子
There, at the foot of the stairs, she found Marie lying unconscious. 现在分词作宾补，描绘了看到的情景
Realizing there was little she could do for Marie, she immediately called the hospital for help. 心理描写为下一步的行动作了决定
Q2 It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived and Marie was taken to hospital without delay. immediately和without delay都说明了行动的迅速，为抢救赢得了时间
Later that day, to her great relief, Lisa learned that Marie was out of danger thanks to the timely rescue. to her relief表明Lisa当得知Marie转危为安后的如释重负
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: How did Lisa and Marie develop the friendship Q4: How did they treat each other
问题 素材 功能
Q3 Since that August day, Lisa and Marie have developed a very special bond. They treat each other as a family member. 由此，两人展开了一段忘年交，像家人般的关系
Q4 Marie always asks Lisa in for a cup of tea whenever she sees her passing by and Lisa never fails to bring Marie things she needs. 用and来连接两个分句说明了相互的付出
【素材积累】
Para 1
1. notice v. 注意到
2. route n. 路线
3. It was her quick action that made all the difference. 强调句型
Para 2
1. …, an old woman named Mari e Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home.
named是过去分词作后置定语；
who引导的非限定性定语从句。
2. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor. unconscious形容词表示伴随的状态
Para 3
regular adj. 常规的，定期的
pass by 走过，经过
conversation n. 交谈，谈话
Para 4
1. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. 现在分词作伴随状语
2. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door.
过去分词做形容词，表伴随的状态。
【参考范文】
“I must get in to see what's happened,” Lisa said to herself. So she walked round the house until she found an open window through which she managed to get into the house. There, at the foot of the stairs, she found Mari e lying unconscious. Realizing there was little she could do for Marie, she immediately called the hospital for help. It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived and Marie was taken to hospital without delay. Later that day, to her great relief, Lisa learned that Marie was out of danger thanks to the timely rescue. (85 words)
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. Since that August day, Lisa and Marie have developed a very special bond. They treat each other as a family member. Marie always asks Lisa in for a cup of tea whenever she sees her passing by and Lisa never fails to bring Marie things she needs. “She's given me a second life and I’ve got a daughter to love,” says Marie. For Lisa, the rescue has completely changed her life. It seems more beautiful and meaningful to her. (83words)
IV 技能锻造营
Synaesthesia (通感）
1. 定义
Synaesthesia (通感）修辞法是以视、听、触、嗅、味等感觉直接描写事物，把不同感官的感觉沟通起来，借联想引起感觉转移，“以感觉写感觉”。
2. 作用
通感修辞法的巧妙运用，通过不同感官的交融，使得描述更加生动、具体，并丰富了
读者的感官体验
3. 用法
(1)“他的声音如春风拂面，温暖而柔和。”这句话将听觉上的声音与触觉上的春风拂面相结合，形象地描绘了声音的温暖和柔和。
(2)“她的歌声如清泉流淌，清新而自然。”这句话将听觉上的歌声与视觉上的清泉流淌相联系，生动地表现了歌声的清新和自然之美。
(3)“他的钢琴演奏如火焰燃烧，热烈而激情。”这句话将听觉上的钢琴演奏与视觉上的火焰燃烧以及情感上的热烈和激情相结合，形象地传达了钢琴演奏的热烈和激情四溢。
(4)“鸟儿落在树上，倾污出百合花似的声音。”这句话用视觉形容听觉，由鸟落在树上发出的声音联想到百合花。
(5)“品尝Mozart的音乐。”这句话用嗅觉形容听觉。
4. 实践
英译汉
(1) The warm colors of the painting seem to sing a soft melody.
(2) The bright lights on the stage danced to the rhythm of the musi
(3) The harsh sound of the alarm clock scratched at my skin.
(4) The smooth surface of the marble felt like a clear sky.
(5) As I entered her room, I was hit by the heavy perfume and noisy colors.
（1）这幅画温暖的色彩似乎在吟唱着轻柔的旋律。
（2）舞台上明亮的灯光随着音乐的节奏起舞。
（3）闹钟刺耳的声音像在刮我的皮肤。
（4）大理石光滑的表面感觉就像晴朗的天空。
（5）我一走进她的房间，浓郁的香气和刺眼的色彩就朝我袭来。