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25年1月浙江读续解析及参考范文
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右； 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
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一、知故事大意
阅读材料讲述了凯文在邻居希尔太太家里偶然发现对面邻居格林先生家有异常，在看到一个陌生男人从窗户跳进房子后，凯文立刻拨打电话报警。因担心该男子逃跑，凯文决定自己先去采取行动，他拿着一根树枝冲进屋里，阻止该男子的行动。男人解释自己曾在是这栋房子里住过，他是来找回父亲留下的手表。在凯文还在犹豫是否相信该男人的话时，警察赶到并将这位闯入者带走了。凯文心中有些忐忑，怀疑自己是否做了正确的事。
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二、审篇章段落
阅读材料由五段组成，各段段落大意如下：
段落一：凯文感到无聊，他父母都不在家，临时寄住在邻居老太太希尔太太家里。虽然凯文是个乖孩子，从不惹麻烦，但他渴望能发生一些刺激的事情。突然，他注意到窗外有动静。
段落二：凯文看到邻居格林夫妇家的门口有个陌生男人，他突然跳进了格林夫妇家的窗户。凯文感到非常奇怪并且害怕，于是赶紧用希尔太太家里的电话报了警。
段落三：凯文担心在警方到来前，这个陌生男子已经做完了坏事，于是决定采取行动。他跑出希尔太太的家，拿起一根树枝，跳进格林家窗户，用树枝威胁那名男子住手。
段落四：该男子看到凯文后停住了，他一边解释说自己曾住在这房子里，只是想找回父亲的手表，一边试图撬开一块地板，凯文有所犹豫，但仍坚持要求这位男子离开。
段落五：就在这时，警车的声音传来，男人惊慌失措，急忙跑向窗户逃走。凯文紧随其后，向到来的警察讲述了事件的经过，警方随后追赶并逮捕了该男子。
段落六：凯文回到希尔太太家，困惑自己是否做得对。虽然他报警并采取了行动，但陌生男子的解释听起来似乎有些可信，凯文开始怀疑自己是否把事情搞砸了。
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三、定叙事结构
从结构上看，文章采用了“悬念—揭示”的叙事方式。前半部分通过凯文的心理活动与行动，制造了紧张气氛，而续写部分则要求合理构思凯文与格林夫妇的对话和行动，揭示真相，并澄清凯文内心的迷茫与收获的成长感悟。注意在构思续写情节时，不能把凯文看到的可疑男子写成小偷，同时还要注意全文中的情节协同，要在续写中交代清楚在格林先生家的地板下找到手表等内容。
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四、构写作思路
一）续写第一段写作思路
续写第一段的段落开头语是“当格林夫妇回到家后，凯文去找他们谈话。”这一段需要续写凯文向格林先生介绍发生的事情，以及他从格林先生的反应中获得的反馈。凯文的疑虑和不安应该在这段中继续展现。要构思格林先生从房间地板下找到手表。要通过描写心理活动，揭示凯文对自己决定的怀疑和对事实真相的思考。
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二）续写第二段写作思路
续写第二段的段落开头语是“凯文和格林先生一起带着他们找到的手表去警察局。”在这一段中，要续写他们去警察局汇报真实情况，弄清楚闯入者的真实身份和动机。要展示闯入者对手表的情感，表达行为不当的悔意以及凯文的感受，突出故事的情感描写。结尾句可通过展现善意和理解的重要性来升华主题。
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五、参考范文
范文1
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened, from seeing the man jumping through the window to rushing over to stop him with the branch. He even told them about the man’s story regarding the watch. Mr. Green listened carefully and nodded. “That sounds like a very unusual situation, Kevin,” he said. “I think we need to check out what the man was doing.” The family went inside and found the floorboard the man had been trying to lift. To their surprise, there was a small hidden compartment under the board, and inside it lay an old, gold watch. Kevin’s eyes widened in shock—this could really be the man’s father’s watch.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The officers were able to confirm that the watch was indeed valuable and belonged to the man’s late father. It turned out the man had been trying to recover it after many years, but had been too afraid to explain himself to anyone. The police thanked Kevin for his bravery and for taking action. Kevin felt relieved as he learned an important lesson that day: sometimes, the truth isn’t as simple as it seems, but acting with courage can lead to the right answers. (221 words)
范文2
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained how he had seen a man break into their house, how he called the police, and how he confronted the man with a tree branch. “He said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch,” Kevin added. Mr. Green frowned, “But why break in for a watch ” Kevin shrugged, feeling confused. “I wasn’t sure if I should believe him.” Mrs. Green, after a pause, said, “Let’s go check it.” Mr. Green went inside the room where the man had searched and lifted a floorboard. To Kevin’s surprise, they found the watch hidden underneath. “So he wasn’t lying about that,” Kevin said, relieved. Mr. Green nodded. “It’s strange, but we’ll need to find out more.”
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. After an investigation, the police revealed that the man, Paul, had lost his father’s watch after his father passed away. He had been desperate to get it back but had no other way. “I’m sorry for breaking in,” Paul confessed. Kevin felt a wave of sympathy. “He wasn’t a burglar, just someone in pain,” Kevin thought. As they left the station, Mr. Green said, “You did the right thing, Kevin. It’s not just about bravery, but also understanding.” Kevin smiled, feeling proud of his actions. (232 words)
范文3
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He told them how he had seen the man entering their house and, feeling scared, had called the police. “He said he used to live here and was just looking for his father’s watch,” Kevin explained. “I confronted him with a branch, but when the police arrived, he ran away.” Mrs. Green was shocked. “Why would he break in for a watch ” she wondered. Together, they went inside the room, where Mr. Green lifted up a floorboard and found the watch, confirming the man’s story. “He wasn’t lying about that,” Kevin said, relieved. Mr. Green nodded. “But there’s more to this story.”
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The man, named Paul, had fallen on hard times after his father’s death and wanted the watch for sentimental （情感的）reasons. He regretted his actions. “I didn’t know what else to do,” Paul said. Kevin, realizing the man’s struggles, felt sympathy. As they left the police station, Mr. Green placed a hand on Kevin’s shoulder. “You did the right thing, Kevin,” he said. Kevin smiled, understanding that bravery isn’t just about facing fear—it’s about showing kindness and empathy too. (208 words)