专题09 单元话题满分范文20篇-人教九上英语专题复习（含答案）

专题09 单元话题满分范文20篇
1．最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
1. 内容提示：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；
（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；
（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
2. 写作要求：
（1）内容包含以上要点；
（2）语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，词数：60~80词；
（3）书写工整、规范, 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．请以“My favorite festival” 为题，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的节日。90词左右。
My favorite festival
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．近几年来，人们的交流方式发生了天翻地覆的变化。几年前我们通过写信、打电话和发邮件与他人联系，现在越来越多的人使用微信(WeChat)交流。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对微信的看法。
写作提示：1.使用微信交流的好处；
2. 微信带来的问题；
3. 你对微信的态度。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
4．请以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。
要求：1. 至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
He/She Has Changed a Lot
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．书面表达
我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change I've ever made”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1．要点：1)变化是什么；
2)变化是如何发生的；
3)变化后有何感受。
2．要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数80左右。
The biggest personal change I've ever made
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．我们国家历史悠久，地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民；有绿水青山，美丽的风景；有独特的美食，传统的饮食文化。请以”Beautiful China”为题，写一篇作文，描写大美中国，表达我们对祖国的热爱。
要求：
1.思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
3.词数：80词左右的短文。
Beautiful China
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生，假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢？请根据下面的要点提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
短语提示：1.Get more knowledge.
2．Have an interest.
3．Be creative.
4．Never give up.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假设你是李华，你在英语口语方面很优秀，老师让你向同学们介绍你练习英语口语的方法，请根据下面的提示内容写一篇发言稿。
提示内容：
1. 看英语电影，并尝试跟读；
2. 经常参加英语角等活动；
3. 结交外国朋友并经常打电话聊天。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 需包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m honored to share my learning experience with you. _______________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．亲爱的同学：本堂英语测试完之后，三年的初中学习生活就结束了。请你以“How to learn English”为题写一篇英语短文，把你三年来的英语学习经验介绍给下一届的初一同学，说说英语学习的重要性、谈谈你是如何学习英语的、以及你对他们学习英语的建议。
参考词语：important, as much as possible, write down
提示问题：●Why do you learn English
● How do you learn English
● What is your advice to them
要求：
1、卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）。
2、条理清楚，句式规范。全文词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3、内容尽量包括提示信息，可适当发挥；文中不得出现个人真实信息。
How to learn English
Dear younger sisters and brothers, as we all know, English is used very widely in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．妈妈是我们的第一任老师，她爱护和呵护我们。请根据提示，以 “Mother’s Day”为题写一篇文章，词数80-100词。
1. What do you know about Mother’s Day
2. What do you think of Mother’s Day
3. What can you do for your mom on this day
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．向你的笔友Mike介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来过春节。内容如下：
1. 春节是中国最重要的节日， 它有时在一月份到来,有时在二月份到来。
2. 今年的春节将在10天以后到来，我们全家将会团聚。
3. 我们现在正忙着为它做准备。我每天打扫房子，和妈妈一起购物 ，帮妈妈做一些传统食　　物，例如：元宵（riceballs）,年糕(ricecakes)，豆腐（toufu)。
4. 在除夕夜，我祖父母，我叔叔一家将来我们家吃饭。我们将熬夜迎接新年。我和堂兄弟们将燃放鞭炮(play firecrackers)，看电视。
5 .我希望你能来和我们一起过春节，体会中国的传统文化。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名中学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a Person with Good Manners”为题，写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例(时间、地点、人物、经过以及你的看法)；
2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的学生提出自己的建议(至少两点)。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a Person with Good Manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.___________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．书面表达。
时光如梭，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：1.介绍你生活中的变化：
（1）过去安静内向，现在性格外向开朗；
（2）过去不喜欢运动，现在喜欢打乒乓球、游泳；
（3）过去讨厌学习，害怕考试，现在努力学习。
2.谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
要求：1.包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.100词左右。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies！It has been two years since I went to the middle school.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．初中生活中，你有些什么改变？你是怎样改变的？请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化。写作内容包括兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面。
要求：1.80词左右；
2．任选两方面内容；
3．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
4．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。
How I Have Changed
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．中国传统艺术的遗产极其丰富并且辉煌，透着五千年文明古国深厚的文化底蕴，你最喜欢的一种传统艺术形式是什么？请以“Art in life”为题，写一篇不少于80词的征文。
要求如下：
1.征文必须包含思维导图所有信息，重点谈谈你喜欢这个艺术形式的原因是什么？
2.逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．假如你是李华。你校校刊征稿，请你以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，用英语写一篇稿件，简单介绍中国的茶文化。
内容包括：1.茶是中国最受欢迎的饮料之一，有悠久的历史；
2.茶的种类多，许多地方产茶，如：四川、浙江；
3.茶有益身体健康；
4.一天中的任何时候都可以饮茶，朋友聚会时可以饮茶，一个人独处时也可以饮茶；
5.茶是中国传统文化，可以作为礼物送给亲朋好友。
注意：1.词数80词左右（标题已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不能出现自己的真实信息。
Chinese Tea Culture
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．书面表达
一批外国学生要去参观你学校的剪纸作品，请你根据以下提示用英语向他们介绍中国剪纸艺术。
提示：
1．剪纸在中国的悠久历史；
2．剪纸的目的和文化内涵；
3．剪纸在青少年间的传承情况。
要求：
1．不能照抄原文，不得在文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．为了激发青少年的想象力和创造力， 你们学校将在下周举办以“I want to invent…”为主题的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇发言稿参加该比赛。
写作提示：1.你产生发明的念头的时间；
2. 你想发明的物品；
3. 你想发明该物品的理由。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰， 详略得当， 书写工整；
2. 100词左右，开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Thank you for listening!
19．现在越来越多的外国人开始学习汉语，假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，写信询问你学习汉语的方法。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1.你的认识：汉语有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一。
2.你的建议：看汉语电视节目、听磁带；多阅读汉语书籍；尝试用汉语写作； ……
3.表达祝愿.。
注意：
1.词数80﹣100，开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
2.短文必须包括所有要点,，可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Frank,
How's it going You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
20．书面表达
假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点：1. 端午节的时间（农历五月五日）、来由（纪念屈原）；
2. 活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛（时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况）。
参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar
注意：1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. __________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
专题09 单元话题满分范文20篇参考答案
1．
【答案】My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“我”最喜欢的中国节日。所提供的材料中列举了本次征文活动的主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。主要从（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. 在春节前夕，所有家庭成员都喜欢吃各种各样的食物，如：饺子和鱼。
On the eve of the Spring Festival,是介词短语做时间状语。
different kinds of：不同种类的；such as：例如。这些短语的运用，增加了语感，丰富了文章的内容。
【高分句型二】The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. 春节不仅能让我们感受到爱和幸福，更能让我们感受到家和家庭的重要性。这句话运用了not only…but also…,“不但……而且……”。体现了作者的写作功底扎实。
2．
【答案】My favorite festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar.
Before the festival, we clean the house and prepare some food. We also buy new clothes for the New Year. On the eve, we usually have jiaozi, a traditional Chinese food. On the first day of the New Year, children will get “lucky money”. That’s one of my favorite parts of festival. During the festival, we also visit our relatives and friends.
It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my family. It makes me feel very comfortable and relaxed.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“My favorite festival”为题，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的节日，要求包括节日的时间、这个节日我们会做什么等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍自己最喜欢的节日时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
3．
【答案】范文：
WeChat is becoming more and more popular now. A few years ago, people got in touch with each other by sending letters, calling or writing e-mails, but now more people are using WeChat. By using WeChat, making friends is becoming easier. We can also share our life experiences. However, there are also some problems. If we use WeChat too often, we will have less time to study. Sometimes it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat. I think WeChat is helpful in our life, but we should use it carefully.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示要点写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对微信的看法。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整书，100词左右。
2.写作指导：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
4．
【答案】例文：He Has Changed a Lot
My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.
Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.
Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.
Jimmy used to be shy. His face would turn red when he talked to people. Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public. That makes him more popular.
People sure change! I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.
【详解】题干解读：该题目是话题作文，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。
写作指导：人称用第三人称；时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时，可采用“总分总”的思路来写，先说这个人在过去几年发生了很大的变化，然后具体阐述变化体现的方面，最后进行总结。注意保证内容完整、结构清晰，无语法和拼写错误。
5．
【答案】The biggest personal change I've ever had.
The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn't enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading,I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time. Books are my friends. And they have and will benefit me a lot.
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的个人变化。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The biggest personal change I've ever made is that...，When I was …，my mother always read...，Gradually I began to...，Books are...，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.
写作指导：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的变化就是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我是如何喜欢上读书的，主要是母亲的影响，最后介绍喜欢读书的感受，受益很多。此处fall in love with, not....at all, begin to do sth, feel like doing sth, benefit sb a lot,等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
6．
【答案】例文：Beautiful China
China is a country with a long history and vast land. There are hardworking and kind people, who make China more and more prosperous and strong. There are many clean lakes and green hills, which make China have beautiful scenery. There is rich and unique food that creates its traditional food culture. China is famous as its food tasting tourism resources home and abroad.
This is beautiful China, and I love it very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇英语短文。要求根据题目要求，并以”Beautiful China”为题，写一篇作文，描写大美中国，表达我们对祖国的热爱，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来描述中国的特点；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述中国时，应描写细致、突出亮点；短文需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
7．
【答案】How to Become an Inventor
As a middle school student, I always dream of becoming a great inventor. How to be an inventor The following advice may help us a lot. First, we must study hard to get more knowledge. It's impossible for us to invent anything without knowledge. Second, we should have an interest in inventing. When we are interested in something, we can do it well. Third, we need to be creative. We should always come up with new ideas. Most importantly, we should keep on and never give up. If we work hard, our dream will come true.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文，话题是“怎样才能成为一名发明家”，我们需要把写作重点放在“怎么实现” 即实现的方法。所以作文开头首先摆出自己的梦想是什么，然后再围绕所给提示逐一列出为了实现梦想，需要做的事情。最后可以写出自己对未来的期望。
本篇作文，首先写出自己的梦想是什么“As a middle school student, I always dream of becoming a great inventor.”，接下来怎么成为一个发明家呢，The following advice may help us a lot. First,…., Second,……Third,…Most importantly,…非常有条理有次序地按照题目要求逐一列出我们所要做的事情，最后以“If we work hard, our dream will come true.” 结尾，做到收尾呼应，是一篇非常优秀的作文。
8．
【答案】例文：
Dear classmates,
I’m honored to share my learning experience with you. To improve my spoken English, I have tried many methods. The following three learning tips are worth mentioning.
First, I always watch English movies. And I try repeating the lines while watching. Second, I take part in the activities, such as English Corner, as much as possible. I have met lots of friends there and I can practice English with them. Last, I make friends with English speakers. We talk on the phone or chat online frequently. This is very helpful.
All in all, everyone is different. I hope my learning tips will be helpful for you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求介绍你练习英语口语的方法，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主，作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍看英语电影、经常参加英语角等活动，以及结交外国朋友并经常打电话聊天；第三段表示希望自己的方法对对方有用。注意语言连贯，无语法以及拼写错误。
9．
【答案】参考范文：How to learn English
Dear younger sisters and brothers, as we all know, English is used very widely in the world. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己学习英语的方法以及建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，提出建议可以多用情态动词，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
10．
【答案】参考例文：Mother’s Day
Of all the festivals in western countries, I think Mother’s Day, which is always on the second Sunday in May every year, is better than any other festival.
Not only in foreign countries but also in China, Mother’s Day has become more and more popular in recent years. It’s a special holiday to show our love to mothers. Many children will do some special things for their moms on that day, such as buying a gift of love, helping to do the housework and so on. Sending a pink or red campaign is always the best choice for their moms.
In my opinion, it’s time to take action to do something to let moms enjoy the whole day and feel our love.
【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求根据所给的问题提示，以 “Mother’s Day”为题写一篇文章，谈谈你对母亲节的了解和看法，以及在这一天可以为母亲做些什么。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：文章主要用第三人称和一般现在时来行文，写作时保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。
11．
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China. It is our most important festival. Sometimes it comes in January, and sometimes in February. The Spring Festival this year will come in ten days. Our family will get together. Now we are busy preparing for it. I clean the house and go shopping with my mum every day. Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on. On New Year’s Eve, my grandparents and my uncle’s family will have dinner with us. We will stay up late to welcome the New Year. My cousins and I will set off fireworks and watch TV.
I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们给Mike写一封信，向他介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来中国一起过春节。题目中有非常清楚的提示，我们可以依据这些提示的内容，用正确的英语表达，可以根据需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实。写作前，应仔细阅读题目中的提示，理清文章的主要结构和主体，确定文章应使用的时态、人称等。通过分析可知，这篇作文应使用一般现在时态和一般将来时，第一人称来叙述，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子，选择恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句式结构以简单句为主，使叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求向好友Mike介绍了中国的春节。春节是学生们非常熟悉的节日，因此文章中可能用到的词汇和句型都是学生们比较熟悉的，在写作时，学生们会感觉比较得心应手。这篇短文对这个节日的介绍总体非常的完整，内容也很充实，包含了题目中要求的所有要点。短文中使用了一般现在时和一般将来时，谓语动词形式准确，句式结构简单，叙述清楚，符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范，语言得体，正确使用了名词单复数、形容词和副词以及介词。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.、Now we are busy preparing for it.、Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on.、We will stay up late to welcome the New Year、I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.等等。
12．
【答案】例文：Be a Person with Good Manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be trained to be persons with good manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍文明礼仪的重要性；
第二步，叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例；
第三步，最后是叙述对自己的看法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
① refuse to do 拒绝做
② laugh at 嘲笑
③ In my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
① While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked.（While引导时间状语从句）
② In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.（第一个what引导的主语从句和第二个what引导的宾语从句）
13．
【答案】Some Changes in My Life
How time flies！It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot.
I used to be quiet and shy，but now I'm more outgoing than before because I have made lots of new friends. I used to dislike sports，but now I like playing ping-pong and swimming. I think it's a good chance for me to relax. I used to hate study. What's more，I was afraid of failing the exams. Now I study hard. I believe I can pass the exams.
I'm very glad that everything goes well. The harder I work，the luckier I will be.
【详解】1.题干解读：时光如梭，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
2.例文点评：本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的标题。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：used to be quiet and shy；more outgoing than before；made lots of new friends；be afraid of doing sth.。
句型：It has been two years since I went to the middle school.；I used to be quiet and shy，but now I'm more outgoing than before because I have made lots of new friends.；My life has changed a lot.
14．
【答案】How I Have Changed
How time flies！Three years has quickly passed.And I have changed a lot during these years.
On one hand，I wasn't good at English at first.When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible.Soon I made great progress and became interested in English.
On the other hand，in my first year，I was too weak to do much exercise.But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free.And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys.
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much！Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much！Never will I forget the valuable middle school life!
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍初中生活中我发生的变化。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I wasn't good at……，I was too weak to……，I can……，I have learnt……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了三年飞逝，我发生了很多变化，接下来介绍我具体的变化：兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面，最后我将不会忘记珍贵的中学生活。此处be good at, learn about, as…..as possible, on one hand, on the other hand, with the help of, thanks to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
15．
【答案】例文：Art in life
I’m Li Hua from Beijing, China. I’d like to introduce paper cutting to you, which is my favorite Chinese art form.
Paper cutting has a history of thousands of years and has been passed down generation. People use the red paper to get rid of bad luck and wish for good fortune in the new year. It’s a treasure of Chinese civilization and a symbol of Chinese people’s wisdom. By learning it people can develop a temperament of patience and peace. Have a try, and I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是要求写一篇记叙文，写自己最喜欢的一种传统艺术形式，文中必须包含思维导图所有信息，和喜欢这个艺术形式的原因。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称叙述；时态上用一般现在时。写作时语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致。注意增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。
16．
【答案】例文：Chinese Tea Culture
Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. It has a long history. There are different kinds of tea, such as green tea, Pu’er and Tieguanyin. Tea is produced in many places, such as Sichuan, Zhejiang and Anhui. Tea is good for people’s health. People drink tea in any time of the day. You can drink tea with your friends in the party, or enjoy it on your own. Tea is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. People often offer it as a gift to friends and relatives.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，用英语写一篇稿件。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍中国的茶的种类，茶的好处，并讲述中国的茶文化等。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
17．
【答案】例文
China is famous for paper cutting in the world. As a traditional folk art, paper cutting has a very long history.
It is used mainly for two purposes: celebration or decoration. The most common pictures are flowers, animals and things about Chinese history. Chinese people always put paper cutting on doors and windows to express happiness during the Spring Festivals and to wish for good luck.
In order to protect this traditional art from disappearing, paper cutting lessons are offered in our school and many students are fond of this art.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述剪纸在中国有着悠久的历史。
第二步：陈述人们使用剪纸的目的，及剪纸背后的文化内涵。在这一部分，一定不要只翻译内容提示，必须自己适当增添细节，这样文章的内容才能饱满。
第三步：介绍剪纸在青少年中的传承情况。剪纸作为一种优秀的传统艺术，传承这种艺术就显得尤为重要。
[亮点词汇]
① be famous for 因……而著名
② be used for 被用于……
③ be fond of 喜爱……
④ in order to do sth. 为了做某事
[高分句型]
① Chinese people always put paper cutting on doors and windows to express happiness during the Spring Festivals and to wish for good luck.（动词不定式作目的状语）
18．
【答案】参考范文：
Good morning, everyone!
Without invention, we can't have a happy life. So since I was young, I've dreamed of inventing something that can help to improve the environment. Several days ago, I came up with a good idea for my invention. It's a special box which is used for holding wastes. It can move and speak different languages. As soon as people throw away wastes on the street, they will be cleaned up by the box at once. At the same time, the box will tell people not to do that again. Of course, my box won't cost too much. In this way, more cleaners and money can be saved. What do you think of my invention Will it be helpful in improving the environment
Thank you for listening!
【详解】题干解读：该题目是演讲稿，属于材料写作，以“I want to invent…”为主题。在写作时应承接短文开头，开头和结尾已经给出，主要写主题部分。
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来描述你产生发明的念头的时间，时态应为一般过去时；描述你想发明的物品时，应用第三人称，时态应为一般现在时；描述发明该物品的理由时，应用第三人称，时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。叙述要完整，保证条理清晰。写完以后，注意检查，确保语法、单词拼写和标点正确。
19．
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
How's it going You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter. I think Chinese is useful and interesting. It is one of the most important languages in the world. So it is necessary to learn Chinese well. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese. First, you should spend more time learning Chinese by watching Chinese TV programs and listening to tapes. Second, reading more Chinese books is a good way to improve Chinese. Third, you can try to write in Chinese and don’t be afraid to make mistakes.
I wish you success in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，因此他写了一封信向你询问有关于学习汉语的方法，要求你根据要点提示给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括你对汉语的认识、学习汉语的方法以及你对他的祝愿和希望；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第二、第三人称来展开写作，辅以第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
20．
【答案】Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.
We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.
If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本文属于应用文体，介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
第 页 共 页