Unit 1 Helping those in need 单元话题书面表达（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）
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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）
Unit 1 Helping those in need 单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 在我国，政府（government）让所有儿童都有机会免费入学，但很多乡村的儿童学习条件还很艰苦。假设你叫Sam， 请给你们学校的学生会（Students`Union）写一封信，提一些建议。
内容：
1.阅读了关于"希望工程"的方案后， 谈谈你的感想；
2.建议学生会组织同学们为当地一所乡村小学筹款，增添图书和教学设备；
3.希望乡村的孩子们能受到很好的教育，长大后为乡村服务。 字数要求80字。
Dear Students` Union,
I have just read an article on "Project Hope" in an English newspaper. ...
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Sam
2． 假如你是李华，是学学校学生会的一名成员，你的学校这周五将组织一批志愿者到敬老院，现在需要你作为学生代表发起一封倡议书，鼓励更多的同学自愿参与到活动中来。根据以下内容完成倡议书。
注意：1. 包括所有要点；2. 词数80词左右；(开头已给出，不计词数）3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
时间 本周五下午2点
地点 开心敬老院
参与对象 全体学生
意义 1. 帮助需要的人； 2. 了解社会，结交朋友； 3. 体验生活； 4. 你的看法
报名方式 到学生会登记
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3．假如你是班长李华，你们班计划去敬老院（nursing home）帮助老人。请给外教Lucy写一封词数为80左右的电子邮件（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数），邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1）出发及返回时间；
2）活动：和老人一起包饺子（make Chinese dumplings）、为老人表演节目等。
Dear Lucy,
Our class plans to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and I would like to invite you to come with us.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4．荆州将举办国际龙舟赛，正在招募志愿者。假如你是王华，你希望成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自荐信，必须包含以下要点：
基本情况 年龄，身高，初中毕业等。
个人优势 英语口语好，爱好体育，善于交朋友，乐于助人等。
承诺 介绍荆州，遵守规则，认真工作等。
要求：
1）可以适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3）词数：80左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
5．假如你是Ben，你们班上的同学Judy不幸身患重病急需救助，你们班决定举行一次捐款活动来帮助她。请向张校长写一封申请信。
计划 目的：为Judy筹款 时间：本周五下午3:00~5:00 地点：学校图书馆前面
活动 举行旧书义卖活动；剪纸和纸花义卖；……
希望 得到校长的批准和支持
要求：1）词数80左右(开头和落款已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2）内容应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当拓展。
Dear Mr Zhang,
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity.
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Yours sincerely,
Ben
6．许多学生喜欢在暑假期间做一些义务性工作。那你想不想在暑假期间做这样的工作呢 请根据以下的内容提示, 写一篇短文, 80词左右, 可适当发挥。
内容包括:
1）你准备在暑假期间去老人院(old people's home)做义工;
2）你将为他们准备一些礼品;
3）另外，你还会准备一些书送给他们, 陪他们聊天和阅读;
4）你准备一周去那里三次；
5）你的感想。
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7．你是一名中学生(Tom)，你和你的同学计划举行筹款活动去帮助有需要的儿童。请你写一封信给你学校的校长(Mr Smith)，希望得到他的批准。
提示：1）举办一次书展，通过卖书募集到钱；2）食品展览，卖自己做的食物；3）周五下午在学校操场上举行活动，希望得到许可。
要求：1）开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2）70～80词。
Dear Mr Smith,
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We are writing to ask permission for the money-raising activities.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
8．根据下面的内容提示，用6个以上完整的英语句子介绍你们班在社区收留中心 (Drop-In Centre) 做义务工作的情况。
【内容提示】
⑴班上很多同学是社区志愿者；
⑵你们每周六下午去收留中心做义务性工作；
⑶老人们白天来收留中心；
⑷你们给老人们读报，陪他们聊天、玩游戏; 帮忙做清洁；
⑸感受。
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答案解析部分
1．
首先，Sam可以表达自己对"希望工程"方案的读后感，可以强调这一方案对于改善乡村儿童教育条件的重要性，以及自己对乡村儿童教育问题的关注和同情。其次，Sam可以提出具体的建议，即建议学生会组织筹款活动，为当地一所乡村小学筹集资金，用于购买图书和教学设备。在描述这一建议时，可以强调通过集体行动，每个同学都能为改善乡村教育环境做出贡献。最后，Sam可以表达对乡村孩子们未来的期望，希望他们能够受到良好的教育，长大后能够服务于乡村，为乡村的发展做出贡献。
考查提纲作文。 建议要具体可行，避免过于笼统或不切实际的提议。可用句式和短语：I was deeply moved by the article on "Project Hope".It highlighted the importance of improving educational conditions for rural children.I strongly believe that every child deserves access to quality education.Therefore, I suggest that our Students' Union organize a fundraising event.By pooling our resources, we can make a significant difference in the lives of rural children.I envision a future where these children receive excellent education and contribute to the development of their communities.
2．Dear schoolmates:
I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to volunteer activity.
We all know that there are many people need our help in this society. We are also responsible for our society. And what do we have in return？First, we can help those in need. Second, we can learn more about the society and make more friends by participating in activities. Third, it's a good chance to experience life, explore more meaningful of our lives. Last but no least, our society needs positive energy to make our world be the world we want. A world is filled with harmony, peace, beauty and love.
We will go to the nursing home at 2 p.m. this Friday. If you want to join us, you can sign up in The Students' Union. I am looking forward to your registration.
Thank you!
The Students' Union
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所提供的提示写一封倡议信，内容包括去参加敬老院活动的时间，地点、重点、对象、报名方式，重点要写参加这个活动的意义。文章主要用第一人称复数来、一般现在时来写，适当使用一般将来时。要注意选择恰当的句型来写，注意主谓一致，上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇作文根据所给内容的提示，按introduction 、body、conclusion三部分将五个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述，思路清晰，内容切题，思想连贯，表达清楚，如在写参加活动意义时使用first，second，third，last，非常有条理。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：pay attention to，be responsible for，in return，learn more about，by participating，make our world be the world we want.，be filled with， look forward to等以及句型结构如、it's a good chance to…，If you want to join us…，I am looking forward to…等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。
3．Dear Lucy,
Our class plans to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and I would like to invite you to come with us. Here is some information about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at eight o'clock in the morning and return at five o'clock in the afternoon. There will be a lot of activities, such as making Chinese dumplings with the old people and giving performances for them. I hope you will like the plan and join us. I'm sure that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my email. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，要求按照所给的提示内容给外教Lucy写一封电子邮件。写作中要包含两方面的内容，一方面是活动出发及返回时间，另一部分是活动内容。时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称复数，注意连词的使用和主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的习惯表达。标点正确，词数符合要求。
本文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态灵活准确。使用了一些好的固定短语to begin with；a lot of；such as；look forward to。高级句型有：there be句型 There will
be a lot of activities, such as making Chinese dumplings with the old people
and giving performances for them.；that引导的宾语从句 I hope you will like the plan and join us. 和 I'm sure that we will have a great time there.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，更上一个档次。
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Wang Hua. I'm 14-years-old. I hear the international dragon boat races will be held in our city. I'd like to work as a volunteer for it. Now I have graduated from junior high school. I'm 1.65 meters tall. I'm good at English and I can speak English very well. I like doing sports too. I'm helpful and easy to get along with. So I like making friends. I can introduce my home town Jingzhou to the visitors well. If I can be a volunteer, I will follow the rules and do my best to work hard for the races.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，根据提示内容可知主要从个人基本信息，个人优势及承诺等方面介绍“我”的情况。由于所给内容非常详细，所以我们要用正确的语言表述，用合适的连词把文章接起来就可以了。所给词汇必须用上，不得遗漏要点及提示语。根据表格内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给表格的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。固定句型结构的运用为文章增色，如：I'd like to work as a volunteer for it.与If I can be a volunteer, I will follow the rules and do my best to work hard for the races.
5．Dear Mr Zhang,
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity. My classmate Judy is badly ill. We are worried about her.
In order to help Judy, we are going to raise money for her. We would like to have the activity in front of our school library. The time is from 3 to 5 pm on Friday.
Some students will have a book fair. They will sell old books. Some students will cut paper and sell paper cuttings. Others will make colorful paper flowers to sell. Our group are going to draw some cartoon characters and sell the pictures. I hope you can support us.
Yours
sincerely,
Ben
这是一篇英文书信，要注意书信的格式。文章在书写时要根据题目的要求，要使用题目所给的所有的信息。文章在书写时要有一定的层次性，文章的逻辑关系要合理，不要出现语法错误。
这篇文章符合题目要求，内容包含了题目中所有信息。短文使用了常用的短语，例如ask permission to do sth.;be worried about; in order to; raise money for sb.; would like to do sth; in front of;from...to...; have a book fair; paper cutting;文章内容简单，容易理解，是一篇不错的文章。
6． Many students like to do some voluntary
work during their summer holidays. I also plan to do it in an old people's home
during my summer holidays.
I will prepare some gifts for the old
people. And I will also send some books to them. What's more, in my free time,
I will chat with them and read books for them. I plan to visit them three times
a week.
I think it is good to help those in need.
It makes me feel happy and it also makes my life meaningful.
这是一篇材料性英语作文，文章在书写时要按照题目的要求书写。文章的内容要包含提示中的所有内容。文章要有条理性，文章的语句要通顺，语言要流畅。语法不要出现任何错误。
这篇文章描写了自己在暑假打工要做的事情。文章使用了固定短语would like to do sth;summer holidays; plan to do sth.; prepare for; send...to...; What's more; in one's free time; chat with sb.; read books; three times a week;It is+形容词+to do sth.; make sb. do sth.;make+名词+形容词。文章句式结构简单，容易理解，是一篇不错的文章。
7．Dear Mr Smith,
We are writing to ask permission for the
money-raising activities.
In order to raise money for the children in
need, we are going to plan some activities. We are going to hold a book fair.
The students will sell old books to raise money. We are also going to organize
a food fair. Students and teachers will sell food they have made themselves.
We would like .to have the activities on the
school playground on Friday afternoon .Could you please give us permission to
organize these activities I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
这是一篇书信的应用文。写作时要注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。说明筹款活动的目的、途径、时间和地点。主要以第一人称和现在进行时和一般将来时来介绍计划。同时也要注意书信的格式。
文章中使用了非常好的固定搭配和委婉语气和客套语及定语从句等短语或句子会给文章增色。如in order to raise money for the children in need ，hold a book fair，We would like to have the activities on the school playground on Friday afternoon. Could you please give us permission to organize these activities I am looking forward to hearing from you. ，Students and teachers will sell food they have made themselves.
8．One possible version:
A lot of my classmates are community volunteers. We go to the Drop-In Centre to do voluntary work every Saturday afternoon. Many old people come here in the daytime. Most of them feel lonely when their children go to work. Some of us read newspapers to them. Some chat with them and play games with them. Others help do the cleaning. We are very happy because we can help people in need.
主要内容包括6个以上完整的英语句子介绍你们班在社区收留中心 (Drop-In Centre) 做义务工作的情况，必须包括内容提示。先介绍班上许多同学是社区志愿者，并且周六去做义务工作，然后介绍老人们白天来收留中心，志愿者给他们读报，陪他们聊天、玩游戏; 帮忙做清洁，最后写自己的感受。时态是一般现在时，注意使用连词，使文章结构更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用了好词好句，如in the daytime；Most of；feel lonelyMost of them feel lonely when their children go to work.；We are very happy because we can help people in need.等，其中连词的使用让文章上下文结构更为紧密。如when、because等。
Unit 1 Helping those in need 单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 在我国，政府（government）让所有儿童都有机会免费入学，但很多乡村的儿童学习条件还很艰苦。假设你叫Sam， 请给你们学校的学生会（Students`Union）写一封信，提一些建议。
内容：
1.阅读了关于"希望工程"的方案后， 谈谈你的感想；
2.建议学生会组织同学们为当地一所乡村小学筹款，增添图书和教学设备；
3.希望乡村的孩子们能受到很好的教育，长大后为乡村服务。 字数要求80字。
Dear Students` Union,
I have just read an article on "Project Hope" in an English newspaper. ...
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Sam
2． 假如你是李华，是学学校学生会的一名成员，你的学校这周五将组织一批志愿者到敬老院，现在需要你作为学生代表发起一封倡议书，鼓励更多的同学自愿参与到活动中来。根据以下内容完成倡议书。
注意：1. 包括所有要点；2. 词数80词左右；(开头已给出，不计词数）3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
时间 本周五下午2点
地点 开心敬老院
参与对象 全体学生
意义 1. 帮助需要的人； 2. 了解社会，结交朋友； 3. 体验生活； 4. 你的看法
报名方式 到学生会登记
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3．假如你是班长李华，你们班计划去敬老院（nursing home）帮助老人。请给外教Lucy写一封词数为80左右的电子邮件（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数），邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1）出发及返回时间；
2）活动：和老人一起包饺子（make Chinese dumplings）、为老人表演节目等。
Dear Lucy,
Our class plans to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and I would like to invite you to come with us.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4．荆州将举办国际龙舟赛，正在招募志愿者。假如你是王华，你希望成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自荐信，必须包含以下要点：
基本情况 年龄，身高，初中毕业等。
个人优势 英语口语好，爱好体育，善于交朋友，乐于助人等。
承诺 介绍荆州，遵守规则，认真工作等。
要求：
1）可以适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3）词数：80左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
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5．假如你是Ben，你们班上的同学Judy不幸身患重病急需救助，你们班决定举行一次捐款活动来帮助她。请向张校长写一封申请信。
计划 目的：为Judy筹款 时间：本周五下午3:00~5:00 地点：学校图书馆前面
活动 举行旧书义卖活动；剪纸和纸花义卖；……
希望 得到校长的批准和支持
要求：1）词数80左右(开头和落款已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2）内容应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当拓展。
Dear Mr Zhang,
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity.
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Yours sincerely,
Ben
6．许多学生喜欢在暑假期间做一些义务性工作。那你想不想在暑假期间做这样的工作呢 请根据以下的内容提示, 写一篇短文, 80词左右, 可适当发挥。
内容包括:
1）你准备在暑假期间去老人院(old people's home)做义工;
2）你将为他们准备一些礼品;
3）另外，你还会准备一些书送给他们, 陪他们聊天和阅读;
4）你准备一周去那里三次；
5）你的感想。
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7．你是一名中学生(Tom)，你和你的同学计划举行筹款活动去帮助有需要的儿童。请你写一封信给你学校的校长(Mr Smith)，希望得到他的批准。
提示：1）举办一次书展，通过卖书募集到钱；2）食品展览，卖自己做的食物；3）周五下午在学校操场上举行活动，希望得到许可。
要求：1）开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2）70～80词。
Dear Mr Smith,
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We are writing to ask permission for the money-raising activities.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
8．根据下面的内容提示，用6个以上完整的英语句子介绍你们班在社区收留中心 (Drop-In Centre) 做义务工作的情况。
【内容提示】
⑴班上很多同学是社区志愿者；
⑵你们每周六下午去收留中心做义务性工作；
⑶老人们白天来收留中心；
⑷你们给老人们读报，陪他们聊天、玩游戏; 帮忙做清洁；
⑸感受。
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答案解析部分
1．
首先，Sam可以表达自己对"希望工程"方案的读后感，可以强调这一方案对于改善乡村儿童教育条件的重要性，以及自己对乡村儿童教育问题的关注和同情。其次，Sam可以提出具体的建议，即建议学生会组织筹款活动，为当地一所乡村小学筹集资金，用于购买图书和教学设备。在描述这一建议时，可以强调通过集体行动，每个同学都能为改善乡村教育环境做出贡献。最后，Sam可以表达对乡村孩子们未来的期望，希望他们能够受到良好的教育，长大后能够服务于乡村，为乡村的发展做出贡献。
考查提纲作文。 建议要具体可行，避免过于笼统或不切实际的提议。可用句式和短语：I was deeply moved by the article on "Project Hope".It highlighted the importance of improving educational conditions for rural children.I strongly believe that every child deserves access to quality education.Therefore, I suggest that our Students' Union organize a fundraising event.By pooling our resources, we can make a significant difference in the lives of rural children.I envision a future where these children receive excellent education and contribute to the development of their communities.
2．Dear schoolmates:
I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to volunteer activity.
We all know that there are many people need our help in this society. We are also responsible for our society. And what do we have in return？First, we can help those in need. Second, we can learn more about the society and make more friends by participating in activities. Third, it's a good chance to experience life, explore more meaningful of our lives. Last but no least, our society needs positive energy to make our world be the world we want. A world is filled with harmony, peace, beauty and love.
We will go to the nursing home at 2 p.m. this Friday. If you want to join us, you can sign up in The Students' Union. I am looking forward to your registration.
Thank you!
The Students' Union
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所提供的提示写一封倡议信，内容包括去参加敬老院活动的时间，地点、重点、对象、报名方式，重点要写参加这个活动的意义。文章主要用第一人称复数来、一般现在时来写，适当使用一般将来时。要注意选择恰当的句型来写，注意主谓一致，上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇作文根据所给内容的提示，按introduction 、body、conclusion三部分将五个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述，思路清晰，内容切题，思想连贯，表达清楚，如在写参加活动意义时使用first，second，third，last，非常有条理。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：pay attention to，be responsible for，in return，learn more about，by participating，make our world be the world we want.，be filled with， look forward to等以及句型结构如、it's a good chance to…，If you want to join us…，I am looking forward to…等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。
3．Dear Lucy,
Our class plans to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and I would like to invite you to come with us. Here is some information about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at eight o'clock in the morning and return at five o'clock in the afternoon. There will be a lot of activities, such as making Chinese dumplings with the old people and giving performances for them. I hope you will like the plan and join us. I'm sure that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my email. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，要求按照所给的提示内容给外教Lucy写一封电子邮件。写作中要包含两方面的内容，一方面是活动出发及返回时间，另一部分是活动内容。时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称复数，注意连词的使用和主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的习惯表达。标点正确，词数符合要求。
本文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态灵活准确。使用了一些好的固定短语to begin with；a lot of；such as；look forward to。高级句型有：there be句型 There will
be a lot of activities, such as making Chinese dumplings with the old people
and giving performances for them.；that引导的宾语从句 I hope you will like the plan and join us. 和 I'm sure that we will have a great time there.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，更上一个档次。
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Wang Hua. I'm 14-years-old. I hear the international dragon boat races will be held in our city. I'd like to work as a volunteer for it. Now I have graduated from junior high school. I'm 1.65 meters tall. I'm good at English and I can speak English very well. I like doing sports too. I'm helpful and easy to get along with. So I like making friends. I can introduce my home town Jingzhou to the visitors well. If I can be a volunteer, I will follow the rules and do my best to work hard for the races.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，根据提示内容可知主要从个人基本信息，个人优势及承诺等方面介绍“我”的情况。由于所给内容非常详细，所以我们要用正确的语言表述，用合适的连词把文章接起来就可以了。所给词汇必须用上，不得遗漏要点及提示语。根据表格内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给表格的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。固定句型结构的运用为文章增色，如：I'd like to work as a volunteer for it.与If I can be a volunteer, I will follow the rules and do my best to work hard for the races.
5．Dear Mr Zhang,
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity. My classmate Judy is badly ill. We are worried about her.
In order to help Judy, we are going to raise money for her. We would like to have the activity in front of our school library. The time is from 3 to 5 pm on Friday.
Some students will have a book fair. They will sell old books. Some students will cut paper and sell paper cuttings. Others will make colorful paper flowers to sell. Our group are going to draw some cartoon characters and sell the pictures. I hope you can support us.
Yours
sincerely,
Ben
这是一篇英文书信，要注意书信的格式。文章在书写时要根据题目的要求，要使用题目所给的所有的信息。文章在书写时要有一定的层次性，文章的逻辑关系要合理，不要出现语法错误。
这篇文章符合题目要求，内容包含了题目中所有信息。短文使用了常用的短语，例如ask permission to do sth.;be worried about; in order to; raise money for sb.; would like to do sth; in front of;from...to...; have a book fair; paper cutting;文章内容简单，容易理解，是一篇不错的文章。
6． Many students like to do some voluntary
work during their summer holidays. I also plan to do it in an old people's home
during my summer holidays.
I will prepare some gifts for the old
people. And I will also send some books to them. What's more, in my free time,
I will chat with them and read books for them. I plan to visit them three times
a week.
I think it is good to help those in need.
It makes me feel happy and it also makes my life meaningful.
这是一篇材料性英语作文，文章在书写时要按照题目的要求书写。文章的内容要包含提示中的所有内容。文章要有条理性，文章的语句要通顺，语言要流畅。语法不要出现任何错误。
这篇文章描写了自己在暑假打工要做的事情。文章使用了固定短语would like to do sth;summer holidays; plan to do sth.; prepare for; send...to...; What's more; in one's free time; chat with sb.; read books; three times a week;It is+形容词+to do sth.; make sb. do sth.;make+名词+形容词。文章句式结构简单，容易理解，是一篇不错的文章。
7．Dear Mr Smith,
We are writing to ask permission for the
money-raising activities.
In order to raise money for the children in
need, we are going to plan some activities. We are going to hold a book fair.
The students will sell old books to raise money. We are also going to organize
a food fair. Students and teachers will sell food they have made themselves.
We would like .to have the activities on the
school playground on Friday afternoon .Could you please give us permission to
organize these activities I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
这是一篇书信的应用文。写作时要注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。说明筹款活动的目的、途径、时间和地点。主要以第一人称和现在进行时和一般将来时来介绍计划。同时也要注意书信的格式。
文章中使用了非常好的固定搭配和委婉语气和客套语及定语从句等短语或句子会给文章增色。如in order to raise money for the children in need ，hold a book fair，We would like to have the activities on the school playground on Friday afternoon. Could you please give us permission to organize these activities I am looking forward to hearing from you. ，Students and teachers will sell food they have made themselves.
8．One possible version:
A lot of my classmates are community volunteers. We go to the Drop-In Centre to do voluntary work every Saturday afternoon. Many old people come here in the daytime. Most of them feel lonely when their children go to work. Some of us read newspapers to them. Some chat with them and play games with them. Others help do the cleaning. We are very happy because we can help people in need.
主要内容包括6个以上完整的英语句子介绍你们班在社区收留中心 (Drop-In Centre) 做义务工作的情况，必须包括内容提示。先介绍班上许多同学是社区志愿者，并且周六去做义务工作，然后介绍老人们白天来收留中心，志愿者给他们读报，陪他们聊天、玩游戏; 帮忙做清洁，最后写自己的感受。时态是一般现在时，注意使用连词，使文章结构更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用了好词好句，如in the daytime；Most of；feel lonelyMost of them feel lonely when their children go to work.；We are very happy because we can help people in need.等，其中连词的使用让文章上下文结构更为紧密。如when、because等。
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