Unit 3 Fascinating Parks 读后续写作业设计（含答案）-2024-2025学年高二英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册
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人教版选择性必修1 Unit 3 Fascinating Parks读后续写作业
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent. 2. I leave my tent and walk over to the mountain edge. 3. Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below. 4. Around 9,000 years ago, this ice melted, leaving behind about 100 glaciers. 5. Since reindeer were always on the move, the Sami would pick up their tents and accompany them. 6. Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure. 7. The park was set up in Jilin and Heilongjiang, with boundaries stretching all the way to the border and joining with Russia’s wildlife reserves. 8. At Xixi, taking a boat tour, walking along paths, and experiencing local customs and traditions of the villages in the park are at the top of the list of people’s favorite activities. 1. Page 26 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 26 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 26 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 26 Para 2 Line 1 5. Page 26 Para 3 Line 5 6. Page 27 Para 4 Line 5 7. Page 28 Exe.3 Line 2 8. Page 29 Exe.3 Line 3
场景描写 Even though the sun is brightly shining, telling whether is morning or night is impossible. Page 26 Para 1 Line 2
景物描写 1.Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. 2.Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. 3.Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. 4.People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. 1.Page 31 Para 2 Line 2 2.Page 31 Para 2 Line 6 3.Page 31 Para 2 Line 7 4.Page 32 Para 3 Line 7
心理描写 Being in such a beautiful and wild place makes me feel blessed to be live. In such tranquil surroundings, I could easily believe myself to be standing in James Hilton’s Shangrila. 1. Page 27 Para 4 Line 4 2. Page 78 Para 7 Line 3
II 语言训练场
汉译英
船只在暴风雨中被巨浪拍打。(buffet)
2. 这些花朵在春天绽放，将香气散布到整个花园。(spread out)
她把野餐布铺开在草地上。
3. 随着技术的进步，许多传统工艺被现代机器取代，留下了手工艺的温馨。(leave behind)
4.这条河流穿过整个国家，延伸数百公里。(stretch)
这个新政策将影响到整个社区。
这个村庄被美丽的自然风光所环绕，真是个福地。(blessed)
6. 由于全球变暖，冰川正在以惊人的速度融化。(melt)
7. 一名警官陪同证人到了犯罪现场。(accompany)
8. 小女孩的笑声非常可爱，让整个房间都亮了起来。(adorable)
9. 宁静的湖面映照出周围山峦的美丽。(tranquil)
过山车突然的下坠使得乘坐体验既可怕又刺激。(scary)
III 美文体验馆
Act of Memory
I was a young girl of eleven then, living in Brooklyn. My father had died unexpectedly that summer. Times was suddenly very hard for my mother, my brother, and me.
Papa had always made a big deal out of Christmas. Every Christmas, when we were about to decorate the tree, he would make a little ceremony out of taking a special little Kewpie-doll out of its box, holding it up in front of me, saying, “Maria, this doll is as old as you are.” Then he would hang it on the Christmas tree. Papa bought that little doll when I was born, and it had become a small tradition. But this Christmas we were to have no tree. My mother was a practical woman, saying it was a luxury. I thought, with quiet but strong bitterness and anger, that it had never meant as much to her as it had to Papa anyway.
We had been to church that evening and were walking back home in silence. All I could see were the tree-lit windows we passed. Their cheerful glow made my bitterness even more intense because I pictured happy families in those houses, sharing laughter, exchanging presents, talking, joking. I knew while arriving home, we would be greeted by darkened windows and endless emptiness.
As we passed my friend’s house, I asked my mother to please let me drop in for a while. She nodded. I waited until my mother and brother disappeared around the corner. Then I turned and headed for my friend’s house. Suddenly, a pile of abandoned Christmas trees from the store next to her house came into my sight. Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home. It seemed as if Papa was mixed up in this somehow. It seemed as if he was in the stars above me, in every lighted-house, in the very tree I was carrying.
When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree. _____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
词数 正文英文词数325+3（标题），续写第一段首句17个单词，续写第二段首句22个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2-3)
Climax (Para.4)
Resolution (续写第一段) When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.
Ending (续写第二段) Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ……
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 “我” 妈妈
场景 家里
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永
伏笔/照应 Title: “Act of Memory”指什么？
Para 1: When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.这里的them说明什么？
Para 2: Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. 说明了作者会怎么做？
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did I do after arriving home Q2: What did mum do in Para.1 Did she join us
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did Mum do in front of the tree Q4: What did I think of my mother Did I change my attitude towards her
【素材积累】
Para 1
made a big deal out of Christmas 对圣诞节大做文章
Para 2
their cheerful glow 他们欢快的光芒
Para 5
a pile of abandoned Christmas trees 一堆废弃的圣诞树
Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home.
我又惊讶又兴奋，冲到树上，挑出最好的一个，开始拖着我的宝贝回家。
IV 技能锻造营
Consonance（谐音）
1.定义
在语言学中，"谐音"（consonance）是一种修辞手法，指的是在一组词中重复相同的辅音声音。谐音可以在词的开头、中间或结尾出现，只要这些相同的辅音声音相对接近即可。
2.作用
谐音是一种强大的修辞工具，可以在英语写作中用来增加文本的吸引力和表现力。通过巧妙地使用这种技巧，作者可以创造出更加生动和难忘的文本。
3.用法
As the sun sank slowly, the shadows stretched, and the sea seemed to sigh, a symphony of silence settled over the sands. 当太阳慢慢地下沉时，阴影伸展，大海似乎叹息，一阵寂静的交响乐笼罩在沙滩上。
Ruth reached the riverbank, where the rapids roared, and the raindrops danced on the rippling water, reflecting the rosy glow of the setting sun. 露丝到达了河岸，那里的激流咆哮着，雨点在荡漾的水面上跳舞，反射出夕阳的玫瑰色光芒。
Molly marveled at the moist, mouthwatering muffins, the aroma mingling with the morning mist as the meeting members munched merrily, their moods lifted by the meal. 莫莉对那些湿润、令人垂涎的松饼感到惊奇，松饼的香气与晨雾混合在一起，随着会议成员愉快地咀嚼，他们的情绪因这顿饭而变得高涨4.实践
The clock ticked , the hours as the town slept.
时钟不知疲倦地转动着，计时着城镇睡觉的时间。
这句话中重复了“t”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The mountains large in the landscape,their peaks hidden by the low-lying clouds.
雾蒙蒙的群山在风景中隐约，它们的山峰被低洼的云层遮住着。
这句话中重复了“m”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The bees around the flowers in the garden.
熙熙攘攘的蜜蜂在花园里盛开的花朵周围嗡嗡作响。
这句话中重复了“b”和“u”声音，适合练习辅音和元音的重复。
The soft silently on the trees,blanketing them in white.
柔软的雪花静静地落在沉睡的树上，覆盖着白色。
这句话中重复了“s”声音，适合练习咝音效果。
The swift wind whispered through the , a winter’s tale.
狂风在柳树上低语着，编织着一个冬天的故事。
这句话中重复了“w”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent. 2. I leave my tent and walk over to the mountain edge. 3. Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below. 4. Around 9,000 years ago, this ice melted, leaving behind about 100 glaciers. 5. Since reindeer were always on the move, the Sami would pick up their tents and accompany them. 6. Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure. 7. The park was set up in Jilin and Heilongjiang, with boundaries stretching all the way to the border and joining with Russia’s wildlife reserves. 8. At Xixi, taking a boat tour, walking along paths, and experiencing local customs and traditions of the villages in the park are at the top of the list of people’s favorite activities. 1. Page 26 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 26 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 26 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 26 Para 2 Line 1 5. Page 26 Para 3 Line 5 6. Page 27 Para 4 Line 5 7. Page 28 Exe.3 Line 2 8. Page 29 Exe.3 Line 3
场景描写 Even though the sun is brightly shining, telling whether is morning or night is impossible. Page 26 Para 1 Line 2
景物描写 1.Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. 2.Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. 3.Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. 4.People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. 1.Page 31 Para 2 Line 2 2.Page 31 Para 2 Line 6 3.Page 31 Para 2 Line 7 4.Page 32 Para 3 Line 7
心理描写 Being in such a beautiful and wild place makes me feel blessed to be live. In such tranquil surroundings, I could easily believe myself to be standing in James Hilton’s Shangrila. 1. Page 27 Para 4 Line 4 2. Page 78 Para 7 Line 3
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 船只在暴风雨中被巨浪拍打。(buffet)
The ship was buffeted by huge waves in the storm.
2. 这些花朵在春天绽放，将香气散布到整个花园。(spread out)
The flowers spread out in spring, dispersing their fragrance throughout the garden.
她把野餐布铺开在草地上。
She spread out the picnic blanket on the grass.
3. 随着技术的进步，许多传统工艺被现代机器取代，留下了手工艺的温馨。(leave behind)
With the advancement of technology, many traditional crafts have been replaced by modern machinery, leaving behind the warmth of handicrafts.
4.这条河流穿过整个国家，延伸数百公里。(stretch)
The river stretches across the country, extending for hundreds of kilometers.
这个新政策将影响到整个社区。
The new policy will stretch its impact across the entire community.
这个村庄被美丽的自然风光所环绕，真是个福地。(blessed)
The village is blessed with beautiful natural scenery and is truly a blessed place.
6. 由于全球变暖，冰川正在以惊人的速度融化。(melt)
The glacier is melting at an alarming rate due to global warming.
7. 一名警官陪同证人到了犯罪现场。(accompany)
A police officer accompanied the witness to the crime scene.
8. 小女孩的笑声非常可爱，让整个房间都亮了起来。(adorable)
The little girl's laughter is so adorable that it brightens up the room.
9. 宁静的湖面映照出周围山峦的美丽。(tranquil)
The tranquil lake reflects the beauty of the surrounding mountains.
过山车突然的下坠使得乘坐体验既可怕又刺激。(scary)
The roller coaster's sudden drops made the ride scary and thrilling.
III 美文体验馆
Act of Memory
I was a young girl of eleven then, living in Brooklyn. My father had died unexpectedly that summer. Times was suddenly very hard for my mother, my brother, and me.
Papa had always made a big deal out of Christmas. Every Christmas, when we were about to decorate the tree, he would make a little ceremony out of taking a special little Kewpie-doll out of its box, holding it up in front of me, saying, “Maria, this doll is as old as you are.” Then he would hang it on the Christmas tree. Papa bought that little doll when I was born, and it had become a small tradition. But this Christmas we were to have no tree. My mother was a practical woman, saying it was a luxury. I thought, with quiet but strong bitterness and anger, that it had never meant as much to her as it had to Papa anyway.
We had been to church that evening and were walking back home in silence. All I could see were the tree-lit windows we passed. Their cheerful glow made my bitterness even more intense because I pictured happy families in those houses, sharing laughter, exchanging presents, talking, joking. I knew while arriving home, we would be greeted by darkened windows and endless emptiness.
As we passed my friend’s house, I asked my mother to please let me drop in for a while. She nodded. I waited until my mother and brother disappeared around the corner. Then I turned and headed for my friend’s house. Suddenly, a pile of abandoned Christmas trees from the store next to her house came into my sight. Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home. It seemed as if Papa was mixed up in this somehow. It seemed as if he was in the stars above me, in every lighted-house, in the very tree I was carrying.
When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree. _____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
词数 正文英文词数325+3（标题），续写第一段首句17个单词，续写第二段首句22个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) Times was suddenly very hard for my mother, my brother, and me.
Build-up (Para.2-3) I thought, with quiet but strong bitterness and anger, that it had never meant as much to her as it had to Papa anyway.
Climax (Para.4) Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home.
Resolution (续写第一段) When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.
Ending (续写第二段) Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ……
Why 故事主题 圣诞之夜，追忆父亲，与母亲和解。
How 写作手法 第一人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 “我” 妈妈
quiet but strong bitterness and anger a practical woman
场景 家里
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永
伏笔/照应 Title: “Act of Memory”指什么？ 是指对爸爸的追忆和怀念（爸爸非常重视圣诞节）
Para 1: When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.这里的them说明什么？ 指的是“mother”和“brother”，可见文中第一段要出现这两个人物。
Para 2: Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. 说明了作者会怎么做？ 这里的slip可以推出作者不想被发现，由此可见上一段作者忙着装饰圣诞树，最后去睡觉应该不是出于自己的意愿，那么应该是妈妈坚持让我去睡觉的。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did I do after arriving home Q2: What did mum do in Para.1 Did she join us
问题 素材 功能
Q1 My brother answered the door, with his startled but cheerful look accompanied by his amazed “Where did you get that ” 心理描写表现作者内心活动 过去分词作伴随状语
We dragged the tree inside and immediately started to decorate it. 具体动作描写推进情节发展。
The cheerful glow illuminated every corner of my house, penetrating the darkness and melting away my otherwise bitterness. 环境描写推进情绪发展。
Reluctantly, I withdrew from my treasure tree and edged back into my bedroom. 副词的使用凸显情绪状态，表现出对树的依依不舍。
Q2 Mother came in silence, taking no part, just watching us hanging on it colorful neon lights and ribbons. 非谓语动词的使用增加动作细节。
But my mother insisted we should get ready to bed. 为下文埋下伏笔。
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did Mum do in front of the tree Q4: What did I think of my mother Did I change my attitude towards her
问题 素材 功能
Q3 With misty eyes, she was holding a familiar box. Her hands seemed to tremble as she opened it and took out a familiar doll. 肢体动作+面部表情，表达更具层次
Detecting my approach, she immediately wiped away her tears and turned to me with a long-expectant smile. Then she gently hung the Kewpie-doll on the tree. 非谓语动词+动作链，细节描写使得人物形象更加鲜明。
Q4 I fought back tears and propelled myself towards my mother. 情绪的变化牵动着动作描写，推进情节发展。
This act reminded me of the little ceremony Papa had made. 照应标题
【素材积累】
Para 1
made a big deal out of Christmas 对圣诞节大做文章
Para 2
their cheerful glow 他们欢快的光芒
Para 5
a pile of abandoned Christmas trees 一堆废弃的圣诞树
Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home.
我又惊讶又兴奋，冲到树上，挑出最好的一个，开始拖着我的宝贝回家。
【参考范文】
When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree. My brother answered the door, with his startled but cheerful look accompanied by his amazed “Where did you get that ” We dragged the tree inside and immediately started to decorate it. Mother came in silence, taking no part, just watching us hanging on it colorful neon lights and ribbons. The cheerful glow illuminated every corner of my house, penetrating the darkness and melting away my otherwise bitterness. It seemed as if Papa was engaging with us in the ornament. Seized by exultation, I could have stayed up all night decorating it. But my mother insisted we should get ready to bed. Reluctantly, I withdrew from my treasure tree and edged back into my bedroom.
Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. With misty eyes, she was holding a familiar box. Her hands seemed to tremble as she opened it and took out a familiar doll. I fought back tears and propelled myself towards my mother. Detecting my approach, she immediately wiped away her tears and turned to me with a long-expectant smile, “Maria, This doll is as old as you.” Then she gently hung the Kewpie-doll on the tree. This act reminded me of the little ceremony Papa had made. Choked with emotion, I threw myself into Mum’s arms, uttering in a trembling voice, “Mom, you are making a big deal out of Christmas just like Papa. ”
IV 技能锻造营
Consonance（谐音）
1.定义
在语言学中，"谐音"（consonance）是一种修辞手法，指的是在一组词中重复相同的辅音声音。谐音可以在词的开头、中间或结尾出现，只要这些相同的辅音声音相对接近即可。
2.作用
谐音是一种强大的修辞工具，可以在英语写作中用来增加文本的吸引力和表现力。通过巧妙地使用这种技巧，作者可以创造出更加生动和难忘的文本。
3.用法
As the sun sank slowly, the shadows stretched, and the sea seemed to sigh, a symphony of silence settled over the sands. 当太阳慢慢地下沉时，阴影伸展，大海似乎叹息，一阵寂静的交响乐笼罩在沙滩上。
Ruth reached the riverbank, where the rapids roared, and the raindrops danced on the rippling water, reflecting the rosy glow of the setting sun. 露丝到达了河岸，那里的激流咆哮着，雨点在荡漾的水面上跳舞，反射出夕阳的玫瑰色光芒。
Molly marveled at the moist, mouthwatering muffins, the aroma mingling with the morning mist as the meeting members munched merrily, their moods lifted by the meal. 莫莉对那些湿润、令人垂涎的松饼感到惊奇，松饼的香气与晨雾混合在一起，随着会议成员愉快地咀嚼，他们的情绪因这顿饭而变得高涨。
4.实践
The clock ticked tirelessly, tolling the hours as the town slept.
时钟不知疲倦地转动着，计时着城镇睡觉的时间。
这句话中重复了“t”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The misty mountains loomed large in the landscape,their peaks hidden by the low-lying clouds.
雾蒙蒙的群山在风景中隐约，它们的山峰被低洼的云层遮住着。
这句话中重复了“m”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The bustling bees buzzed busily around the blooming flowers in the garden.
熙熙攘攘的蜜蜂在花园里盛开的花朵周围嗡嗡作响。
这句话中重复了“b”和“u”声音，适合练习辅音和元音的重复。
The soft snowflakes silently settled on the sleeping trees,blanketing them in white.
柔软的雪花静静地落在沉睡的树上，覆盖着白色。
这句话中重复了“s”声音，适合练习咝音效果。
The swift wind whispered through the willows,weaving a winter’s tale.
狂风在柳树上低语着，编织着一个冬天的故事。
这句话中重复了“w”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent. 2. I leave my tent and walk over to the mountain edge. 3. Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below. 4. Around 9,000 years ago, this ice melted, leaving behind about 100 glaciers. 5. Since reindeer were always on the move, the Sami would pick up their tents and accompany them. 6. Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure. 7. The park was set up in Jilin and Heilongjiang, with boundaries stretching all the way to the border and joining with Russia’s wildlife reserves. 8. At Xixi, taking a boat tour, walking along paths, and experiencing local customs and traditions of the villages in the park are at the top of the list of people’s favorite activities. 1. Page 26 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 26 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 26 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 26 Para 2 Line 1 5. Page 26 Para 3 Line 5 6. Page 27 Para 4 Line 5 7. Page 28 Exe.3 Line 2 8. Page 29 Exe.3 Line 3
场景描写 Even though the sun is brightly shining, telling whether is morning or night is impossible. Page 26 Para 1 Line 2
景物描写 1.Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. 2.Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. 3.Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. 4.People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. 1.Page 31 Para 2 Line 2 2.Page 31 Para 2 Line 6 3.Page 31 Para 2 Line 7 4.Page 32 Para 3 Line 7
心理描写 Being in such a beautiful and wild place makes me feel blessed to be live. In such tranquil surroundings, I could easily believe myself to be standing in James Hilton’s Shangrila. 1. Page 27 Para 4 Line 4 2. Page 78 Para 7 Line 3
II 语言训练场
汉译英
船只在暴风雨中被巨浪拍打。(buffet)
2. 这些花朵在春天绽放，将香气散布到整个花园。(spread out)
她把野餐布铺开在草地上。
3. 随着技术的进步，许多传统工艺被现代机器取代，留下了手工艺的温馨。(leave behind)
4.这条河流穿过整个国家，延伸数百公里。(stretch)
这个新政策将影响到整个社区。
这个村庄被美丽的自然风光所环绕，真是个福地。(blessed)
6. 由于全球变暖，冰川正在以惊人的速度融化。(melt)
7. 一名警官陪同证人到了犯罪现场。(accompany)
8. 小女孩的笑声非常可爱，让整个房间都亮了起来。(adorable)
9. 宁静的湖面映照出周围山峦的美丽。(tranquil)
过山车突然的下坠使得乘坐体验既可怕又刺激。(scary)
III 美文体验馆
Act of Memory
I was a young girl of eleven then, living in Brooklyn. My father had died unexpectedly that summer. Times was suddenly very hard for my mother, my brother, and me.
Papa had always made a big deal out of Christmas. Every Christmas, when we were about to decorate the tree, he would make a little ceremony out of taking a special little Kewpie-doll out of its box, holding it up in front of me, saying, “Maria, this doll is as old as you are.” Then he would hang it on the Christmas tree. Papa bought that little doll when I was born, and it had become a small tradition. But this Christmas we were to have no tree. My mother was a practical woman, saying it was a luxury. I thought, with quiet but strong bitterness and anger, that it had never meant as much to her as it had to Papa anyway.
We had been to church that evening and were walking back home in silence. All I could see were the tree-lit windows we passed. Their cheerful glow made my bitterness even more intense because I pictured happy families in those houses, sharing laughter, exchanging presents, talking, joking. I knew while arriving home, we would be greeted by darkened windows and endless emptiness.
As we passed my friend’s house, I asked my mother to please let me drop in for a while. She nodded. I waited until my mother and brother disappeared around the corner. Then I turned and headed for my friend’s house. Suddenly, a pile of abandoned Christmas trees from the store next to her house came into my sight. Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home. It seemed as if Papa was mixed up in this somehow. It seemed as if he was in the stars above me, in every lighted-house, in the very tree I was carrying.
When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree. _____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
词数 正文英文词数325+3（标题），续写第一段首句17个单词，续写第二段首句22个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2-3)
Climax (Para.4)
Resolution (续写第一段) When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.
Ending (续写第二段) Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ……
Why 故事主题
How 写作手法
人物分析 “我” 妈妈
场景 家里
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永
伏笔/照应 Title: “Act of Memory”指什么？
Para 1: When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.这里的them说明什么？
Para 2: Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. 说明了作者会怎么做？
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did I do after arriving home Q2: What did mum do in Para.1 Did she join us
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did Mum do in front of the tree Q4: What did I think of my mother Did I change my attitude towards her
【素材积累】
Para 1
made a big deal out of Christmas 对圣诞节大做文章
Para 2
their cheerful glow 他们欢快的光芒
Para 5
a pile of abandoned Christmas trees 一堆废弃的圣诞树
Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home.
我又惊讶又兴奋，冲到树上，挑出最好的一个，开始拖着我的宝贝回家。
IV 技能锻造营
Consonance（谐音）
1.定义
在语言学中，"谐音"（consonance）是一种修辞手法，指的是在一组词中重复相同的辅音声音。谐音可以在词的开头、中间或结尾出现，只要这些相同的辅音声音相对接近即可。
2.作用
谐音是一种强大的修辞工具，可以在英语写作中用来增加文本的吸引力和表现力。通过巧妙地使用这种技巧，作者可以创造出更加生动和难忘的文本。
3.用法
As the sun sank slowly, the shadows stretched, and the sea seemed to sigh, a symphony of silence settled over the sands. 当太阳慢慢地下沉时，阴影伸展，大海似乎叹息，一阵寂静的交响乐笼罩在沙滩上。
Ruth reached the riverbank, where the rapids roared, and the raindrops danced on the rippling water, reflecting the rosy glow of the setting sun. 露丝到达了河岸，那里的激流咆哮着，雨点在荡漾的水面上跳舞，反射出夕阳的玫瑰色光芒。
Molly marveled at the moist, mouthwatering muffins, the aroma mingling with the morning mist as the meeting members munched merrily, their moods lifted by the meal. 莫莉对那些湿润、令人垂涎的松饼感到惊奇，松饼的香气与晨雾混合在一起，随着会议成员愉快地咀嚼，他们的情绪因这顿饭而变得高涨4.实践
The clock ticked , the hours as the town slept.
时钟不知疲倦地转动着，计时着城镇睡觉的时间。
这句话中重复了“t”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The mountains large in the landscape,their peaks hidden by the low-lying clouds.
雾蒙蒙的群山在风景中隐约，它们的山峰被低洼的云层遮住着。
这句话中重复了“m”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The bees around the flowers in the garden.
熙熙攘攘的蜜蜂在花园里盛开的花朵周围嗡嗡作响。
这句话中重复了“b”和“u”声音，适合练习辅音和元音的重复。
The soft silently on the trees,blanketing them in white.
柔软的雪花静静地落在沉睡的树上，覆盖着白色。
这句话中重复了“s”声音，适合练习咝音效果。
The swift wind whispered through the , a winter’s tale.
狂风在柳树上低语着，编织着一个冬天的故事。
这句话中重复了“w”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
答案解析
I 课文素材库
微技能 语料 出处
动作描写 1. I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent. 2. I leave my tent and walk over to the mountain edge. 3. Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below. 4. Around 9,000 years ago, this ice melted, leaving behind about 100 glaciers. 5. Since reindeer were always on the move, the Sami would pick up their tents and accompany them. 6. Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure. 7. The park was set up in Jilin and Heilongjiang, with boundaries stretching all the way to the border and joining with Russia’s wildlife reserves. 8. At Xixi, taking a boat tour, walking along paths, and experiencing local customs and traditions of the villages in the park are at the top of the list of people’s favorite activities. 1. Page 26 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 26 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 26 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 26 Para 2 Line 1 5. Page 26 Para 3 Line 5 6. Page 27 Para 4 Line 5 7. Page 28 Exe.3 Line 2 8. Page 29 Exe.3 Line 3
场景描写 Even though the sun is brightly shining, telling whether is morning or night is impossible. Page 26 Para 1 Line 2
景物描写 1.Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. 2.Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. 3.Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. 4.People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. 1.Page 31 Para 2 Line 2 2.Page 31 Para 2 Line 6 3.Page 31 Para 2 Line 7 4.Page 32 Para 3 Line 7
心理描写 Being in such a beautiful and wild place makes me feel blessed to be live. In such tranquil surroundings, I could easily believe myself to be standing in James Hilton’s Shangrila. 1. Page 27 Para 4 Line 4 2. Page 78 Para 7 Line 3
II 语言训练场
汉译英
1. 船只在暴风雨中被巨浪拍打。(buffet)
The ship was buffeted by huge waves in the storm.
2. 这些花朵在春天绽放，将香气散布到整个花园。(spread out)
The flowers spread out in spring, dispersing their fragrance throughout the garden.
她把野餐布铺开在草地上。
She spread out the picnic blanket on the grass.
3. 随着技术的进步，许多传统工艺被现代机器取代，留下了手工艺的温馨。(leave behind)
With the advancement of technology, many traditional crafts have been replaced by modern machinery, leaving behind the warmth of handicrafts.
4.这条河流穿过整个国家，延伸数百公里。(stretch)
The river stretches across the country, extending for hundreds of kilometers.
这个新政策将影响到整个社区。
The new policy will stretch its impact across the entire community.
这个村庄被美丽的自然风光所环绕，真是个福地。(blessed)
The village is blessed with beautiful natural scenery and is truly a blessed place.
6. 由于全球变暖，冰川正在以惊人的速度融化。(melt)
The glacier is melting at an alarming rate due to global warming.
7. 一名警官陪同证人到了犯罪现场。(accompany)
A police officer accompanied the witness to the crime scene.
8. 小女孩的笑声非常可爱，让整个房间都亮了起来。(adorable)
The little girl's laughter is so adorable that it brightens up the room.
9. 宁静的湖面映照出周围山峦的美丽。(tranquil)
The tranquil lake reflects the beauty of the surrounding mountains.
过山车突然的下坠使得乘坐体验既可怕又刺激。(scary)
The roller coaster's sudden drops made the ride scary and thrilling.
III 美文体验馆
Act of Memory
I was a young girl of eleven then, living in Brooklyn. My father had died unexpectedly that summer. Times was suddenly very hard for my mother, my brother, and me.
Papa had always made a big deal out of Christmas. Every Christmas, when we were about to decorate the tree, he would make a little ceremony out of taking a special little Kewpie-doll out of its box, holding it up in front of me, saying, “Maria, this doll is as old as you are.” Then he would hang it on the Christmas tree. Papa bought that little doll when I was born, and it had become a small tradition. But this Christmas we were to have no tree. My mother was a practical woman, saying it was a luxury. I thought, with quiet but strong bitterness and anger, that it had never meant as much to her as it had to Papa anyway.
We had been to church that evening and were walking back home in silence. All I could see were the tree-lit windows we passed. Their cheerful glow made my bitterness even more intense because I pictured happy families in those houses, sharing laughter, exchanging presents, talking, joking. I knew while arriving home, we would be greeted by darkened windows and endless emptiness.
As we passed my friend’s house, I asked my mother to please let me drop in for a while. She nodded. I waited until my mother and brother disappeared around the corner. Then I turned and headed for my friend’s house. Suddenly, a pile of abandoned Christmas trees from the store next to her house came into my sight. Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home. It seemed as if Papa was mixed up in this somehow. It seemed as if he was in the stars above me, in every lighted-house, in the very tree I was carrying.
When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree. _____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
主题语境 人与社会
词数 正文英文词数325+3（标题），续写第一段首句17个单词，续写第二段首句22个单词。
What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) Times was suddenly very hard for my mother, my brother, and me.
Build-up (Para.2-3) I thought, with quiet but strong bitterness and anger, that it had never meant as much to her as it had to Papa anyway.
Climax (Para.4) Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home.
Resolution (续写第一段) When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.
Ending (续写第二段) Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. ……
Why 故事主题 圣诞之夜，追忆父亲，与母亲和解。
How 写作手法 第一人称、记叙、描写
人物分析 “我” 妈妈
quiet but strong bitterness and anger a practical woman
场景 家里
语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永
伏笔/照应 Title: “Act of Memory”指什么？ 是指对爸爸的追忆和怀念（爸爸非常重视圣诞节）
Para 1: When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree.这里的them说明什么？ 指的是“mother”和“brother”，可见文中第一段要出现这两个人物。
Para 2: Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. 说明了作者会怎么做？ 这里的slip可以推出作者不想被发现，由此可见上一段作者忙着装饰圣诞树，最后去睡觉应该不是出于自己的意愿，那么应该是妈妈坚持让我去睡觉的。
谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: What did I do after arriving home Q2: What did mum do in Para.1 Did she join us
问题 素材 功能
Q1 My brother answered the door, with his startled but cheerful look accompanied by his amazed “Where did you get that ” 心理描写表现作者内心活动 过去分词作伴随状语
We dragged the tree inside and immediately started to decorate it. 具体动作描写推进情节发展。
The cheerful glow illuminated every corner of my house, penetrating the darkness and melting away my otherwise bitterness. 环境描写推进情绪发展。
Reluctantly, I withdrew from my treasure tree and edged back into my bedroom. 副词的使用凸显情绪状态，表现出对树的依依不舍。
Q2 Mother came in silence, taking no part, just watching us hanging on it colorful neon lights and ribbons. 非谓语动词的使用增加动作细节。
But my mother insisted we should get ready to bed. 为下文埋下伏笔。
谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: What did Mum do in front of the tree Q4: What did I think of my mother Did I change my attitude towards her
问题 素材 功能
Q3 With misty eyes, she was holding a familiar box. Her hands seemed to tremble as she opened it and took out a familiar doll. 肢体动作+面部表情，表达更具层次
Detecting my approach, she immediately wiped away her tears and turned to me with a long-expectant smile. Then she gently hung the Kewpie-doll on the tree. 非谓语动词+动作链，细节描写使得人物形象更加鲜明。
Q4 I fought back tears and propelled myself towards my mother. 情绪的变化牵动着动作描写，推进情节发展。
This act reminded me of the little ceremony Papa had made. 照应标题
【素材积累】
Para 1
made a big deal out of Christmas 对圣诞节大做文章
Para 2
their cheerful glow 他们欢快的光芒
Para 5
a pile of abandoned Christmas trees 一堆废弃的圣诞树
Surprised and excited, I dashed to the trees, picked out the best one and began half-dragging my treasure home.
我又惊讶又兴奋，冲到树上，挑出最好的一个，开始拖着我的宝贝回家。
【参考范文】
When I got home, I rang the doorbell and couldn’t wait to show them the tree. My brother answered the door, with his startled but cheerful look accompanied by his amazed “Where did you get that ” We dragged the tree inside and immediately started to decorate it. Mother came in silence, taking no part, just watching us hanging on it colorful neon lights and ribbons. The cheerful glow illuminated every corner of my house, penetrating the darkness and melting away my otherwise bitterness. It seemed as if Papa was engaging with us in the ornament. Seized by exultation, I could have stayed up all night decorating it. But my mother insisted we should get ready to bed. Reluctantly, I withdrew from my treasure tree and edged back into my bedroom.
Before going to bed, I slipped to see my tree one last time but saw my mother standing in front of it. With misty eyes, she was holding a familiar box. Her hands seemed to tremble as she opened it and took out a familiar doll. I fought back tears and propelled myself towards my mother. Detecting my approach, she immediately wiped away her tears and turned to me with a long-expectant smile, “Maria, This doll is as old as you.” Then she gently hung the Kewpie-doll on the tree. This act reminded me of the little ceremony Papa had made. Choked with emotion, I threw myself into Mum’s arms, uttering in a trembling voice, “Mom, you are making a big deal out of Christmas just like Papa. ”
IV 技能锻造营
Consonance（谐音）
1.定义
在语言学中，"谐音"（consonance）是一种修辞手法，指的是在一组词中重复相同的辅音声音。谐音可以在词的开头、中间或结尾出现，只要这些相同的辅音声音相对接近即可。
2.作用
谐音是一种强大的修辞工具，可以在英语写作中用来增加文本的吸引力和表现力。通过巧妙地使用这种技巧，作者可以创造出更加生动和难忘的文本。
3.用法
As the sun sank slowly, the shadows stretched, and the sea seemed to sigh, a symphony of silence settled over the sands. 当太阳慢慢地下沉时，阴影伸展，大海似乎叹息，一阵寂静的交响乐笼罩在沙滩上。
Ruth reached the riverbank, where the rapids roared, and the raindrops danced on the rippling water, reflecting the rosy glow of the setting sun. 露丝到达了河岸，那里的激流咆哮着，雨点在荡漾的水面上跳舞，反射出夕阳的玫瑰色光芒。
Molly marveled at the moist, mouthwatering muffins, the aroma mingling with the morning mist as the meeting members munched merrily, their moods lifted by the meal. 莫莉对那些湿润、令人垂涎的松饼感到惊奇，松饼的香气与晨雾混合在一起，随着会议成员愉快地咀嚼，他们的情绪因这顿饭而变得高涨。
4.实践
The clock ticked tirelessly, tolling the hours as the town slept.
时钟不知疲倦地转动着，计时着城镇睡觉的时间。
这句话中重复了“t”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The misty mountains loomed large in the landscape,their peaks hidden by the low-lying clouds.
雾蒙蒙的群山在风景中隐约，它们的山峰被低洼的云层遮住着。
这句话中重复了“m”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。
The bustling bees buzzed busily around the blooming flowers in the garden.
熙熙攘攘的蜜蜂在花园里盛开的花朵周围嗡嗡作响。
这句话中重复了“b”和“u”声音，适合练习辅音和元音的重复。
The soft snowflakes silently settled on the sleeping trees,blanketing them in white.
柔软的雪花静静地落在沉睡的树上，覆盖着白色。
这句话中重复了“s”声音，适合练习咝音效果。
The swift wind whispered through the willows,weaving a winter’s tale.
狂风在柳树上低语着，编织着一个冬天的故事。
这句话中重复了“w”声音，适合练习辅音的重复。