2025届高三英语八省联考读后续写实例分析 课件(共17张PPT)
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读后续写·实例分析Neverjudge a book by its cover.2025届八省联考读后续写的评分标准综述评分:主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。1.创造情节的质量、续写的完整性及与原文情境的融洽度。2.词汇、语法的准确性、恰当性及多样性。3.上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。01解读文本写作步骤过滤出有效信息，把握文章要素。02缜密构思文章中心内容、段首句相结合。情节发展是主体，细节描写是关键。03打磨写作快速初步成稿，然后升级词汇与丰富句式，最后规范誊写。读什么？情节(plots)语言(language)伏线(clues)1.解读文本，奠定续写基础who; when; where; what; why; how语言风格；体现主题事件或推动情节发展的key words推动情节发展，体现主旨的句子。2.构思情节——依据两段首句推理情节发展（1）研读、翻译好两个段首句。两个段首句是重要的续写提示，在很大程度上指明了情节的发展方向。对段首句分析，可有效地推理续写的主要情节。（2）写好三个衔接句（3）写好升华句。关注与文章开头的遥相呼应（线索/意图），根据具体语境体现正能量。第一段段首句后的衔接句第一段尾句第二段段首句后的衔接句3.打磨写作*适当升级词汇、句式*在不影响主要情节的前提下，可合理地增加部分次要情节*可依据需要增加适当细节描写（环境，心理，外貌等）替换高级词汇、短语、句式表达使用adj/adv/with复合结构/非谓语/复合句等丰富表达使用积累的地道短语和名人名言注意不要添加新角色阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段话。第一步：通读全文，理清脉络，把握语言特色和叙述风格。Iwas in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary(纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room. I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.whenat thenightwherehotel theater , In Philadelphia（费城）why（起因）I, an animal-lover, wanted to see a documentary about saving dogs at a nearby theater, butnobody went with me. Considering my safety, I should have given up it . But after a mental struggle, I decided to goalone.It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers ——very big, tough-looking bikers.I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia that indicated they were in some sort of club-standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event who: I (a woman) ; a group of bikers(big;tough-looking面露凶狠的)空无一人的；废弃的环境描写；心理描写A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.上文的环境描写和此处大量的心里描写，包括地点的变换，表现出主人公“I” 一路上对这群“bikers”的紧张和害怕。Where:从street到了theaterUseful expressions: nevertheless adv.然而instead of代替；而不是by the time到…时候第二步：依据首句，构思框架。Paragraph 1:I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.___________________________________________Paragraph 2:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.____________________________________________________我匆匆冲进剧院，却发现里面甚至有更多车手。当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。注意：（1）翻译完两个段首句可发现，误会是在第二段才解开，因此第一段续写内容不能写解开误会。（2）主人公的心理变化是提示写作的重要线索。写好三个衔接句。Paragraph 1:I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.___________________________________________我匆匆冲进剧院，却发现里面甚至有更多车手。（1）第一段首句后的衔接句：_________________________________________________注意原文最后通过环境描写和心理描写，可以看出主人公已经非常害怕和紧张，觉得进入剧院更安全，但她进入剧院后看到更多的车手，此时她的心里应该是…At that moment, I couldn’t believe my eyes, with my mind immediately getting blank and my mouth opening wide.With的复合结构，更进一步惊慌，到茫然无措。写好三个衔接句。（2）第一段尾句（必须能和第二段首句合理衔接）：_________________________________________________Paragraph 2:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。After a while, the lights in the theater dimmed, the curtain opened, and the people in the theater became quiet, which meant thatthe movie had begun.细节描写——灯光变暗；幕布拉开；人们安静；电影开场写好三个衔接句。Paragraph 2:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。（3）第二段首句后的衔接句：______________________________________________________第二段开头误会解开，本文以“I”的遭遇和心理感受并行展开，此处已有情节发展，那么我们的续写随之则应写… With of start recalling how ridiculous my overreaction had been instantly helped me no longer feel dangerous.写好结尾句：①结局性：________________________________________________________________________________②启示性：________________________________________________________________________________故事的结局，“I”作为一个喜爱小动物的人，发现了这样一个group,可能会捐款？加入？…？“I”前文一直以为bikers很可怕，因为他们big，tough looking，结果却发现他们是爱护动物的好人，这说明 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.At that moment, I couldn’t believe my eyes, with my mind immediately getting blank and my mouth opening wide. So frozen and still at the theater gate was I, which made the bikers inside all throw cast their gazes on me that I felt nothing but my heart pounding even more strongly, completely unaware of what action I would adopt. I was not sure how much time had passed, but only greeted by each of the biker coming in from the outside who I had encountered in the deserted street.....After a while, the lights in the theater dimmed, the curtain opened, and the people in the theater became quiet, which meant that the movie had begun.我匆匆走进电影院，却发现里面还有更多骑机车的人。那一刻，我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛,我的脑海里顿时一片空白，嘴巴张得大大的。我一动不动地站在剧院门口，里面的车手们都向我投来异样的眼光，我只觉得我的心跳得更厉害了，完全不知道我将采取什么行动。我不知道时间过了多久,只看到我在空荡荡的街道上遇到的每一个从外面进来的车手都向我打招呼....不一会儿，剧院里的灯光变暗，幕布也随之拉开，剧场里的人也安静下来,这意味着电影开始了。When the film began, | realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.With of start recalling how ridiculous my overreaction had been instantly helped me no longer feel dangerous. Naturally, by the light from the film, I found a seat and sat next to a tough-look biker. After a short conversation with him, I expressed my wish to save abandoned dogs. Hearing this, he enthusiastically welcomed me to join the animal rescue group. Then, with the film ending, he introduced me to all the members. Seeing so many animal lovers around, I did believe we would find a way to help the wild live with us harmoniously together. At the same time,Ialso developed a new respect for their dedication and realized that never judge a book by its cover.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手应该是一个动物救援组织。一开始,回想起我的过度反应是多么可笑，立刻让我不再感到危险。我借着电影的光线,很顺利的找到了我的座位，坐在一个看起来很强悍的摩托车手旁边。 在和他简短的交谈之后，我表达了我想拯救被遗弃的狗狗的愿望。听到这些，他热情地欢迎我加入动物救助小组。然后，随着电影的结束，他把我介绍给所有的成员。看到周围有这么多动物爱好者,我确实相信我们会找到一种方法来帮助野生动物与我们和谐相处。同时，我也对他们的奉献精神产生了新的敬意，意识到不能以貌取人。Thank you!“Never judge a book by its cover.”
读后续写·实例分析Neverjudge a book by its cover.2025届八省联考读后续写的评分标准综述评分:主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。1.创造情节的质量、续写的完整性及与原文情境的融洽度。2.词汇、语法的准确性、恰当性及多样性。3.上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。01解读文本写作步骤过滤出有效信息，把握文章要素。02缜密构思文章中心内容、段首句相结合。情节发展是主体，细节描写是关键。03打磨写作快速初步成稿，然后升级词汇与丰富句式，最后规范誊写。读什么？情节(plots)语言(language)伏线(clues)1.解读文本，奠定续写基础who; when; where; what; why; how语言风格；体现主题事件或推动情节发展的key words推动情节发展，体现主旨的句子。2.构思情节——依据两段首句推理情节发展（1）研读、翻译好两个段首句。两个段首句是重要的续写提示，在很大程度上指明了情节的发展方向。对段首句分析，可有效地推理续写的主要情节。（2）写好三个衔接句（3）写好升华句。关注与文章开头的遥相呼应（线索/意图），根据具体语境体现正能量。第一段段首句后的衔接句第一段尾句第二段段首句后的衔接句3.打磨写作*适当升级词汇、句式*在不影响主要情节的前提下，可合理地增加部分次要情节*可依据需要增加适当细节描写（环境，心理，外貌等）替换高级词汇、短语、句式表达使用adj/adv/with复合结构/非谓语/复合句等丰富表达使用积累的地道短语和名人名言注意不要添加新角色阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段话。第一步：通读全文，理清脉络，把握语言特色和叙述风格。Iwas in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary(纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room. I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.whenat thenightwherehotel theater , In Philadelphia（费城）why（起因）I, an animal-lover, wanted to see a documentary about saving dogs at a nearby theater, butnobody went with me. Considering my safety, I should have given up it . But after a mental struggle, I decided to goalone.It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers ——very big, tough-looking bikers.I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia that indicated they were in some sort of club-standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event who: I (a woman) ; a group of bikers(big;tough-looking面露凶狠的)空无一人的；废弃的环境描写；心理描写A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.上文的环境描写和此处大量的心里描写，包括地点的变换，表现出主人公“I” 一路上对这群“bikers”的紧张和害怕。Where:从street到了theaterUseful expressions: nevertheless adv.然而instead of代替；而不是by the time到…时候第二步：依据首句，构思框架。Paragraph 1:I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.___________________________________________Paragraph 2:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.____________________________________________________我匆匆冲进剧院，却发现里面甚至有更多车手。当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。注意：（1）翻译完两个段首句可发现，误会是在第二段才解开，因此第一段续写内容不能写解开误会。（2）主人公的心理变化是提示写作的重要线索。写好三个衔接句。Paragraph 1:I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.___________________________________________我匆匆冲进剧院，却发现里面甚至有更多车手。（1）第一段首句后的衔接句：_________________________________________________注意原文最后通过环境描写和心理描写，可以看出主人公已经非常害怕和紧张，觉得进入剧院更安全，但她进入剧院后看到更多的车手，此时她的心里应该是…At that moment, I couldn’t believe my eyes, with my mind immediately getting blank and my mouth opening wide.With的复合结构，更进一步惊慌，到茫然无措。写好三个衔接句。（2）第一段尾句（必须能和第二段首句合理衔接）：_________________________________________________Paragraph 2:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。After a while, the lights in the theater dimmed, the curtain opened, and the people in the theater became quiet, which meant thatthe movie had begun.细节描写——灯光变暗；幕布拉开；人们安静；电影开场写好三个衔接句。Paragraph 2:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。（3）第二段首句后的衔接句：______________________________________________________第二段开头误会解开，本文以“I”的遭遇和心理感受并行展开，此处已有情节发展，那么我们的续写随之则应写… With of start recalling how ridiculous my overreaction had been instantly helped me no longer feel dangerous.写好结尾句：①结局性：________________________________________________________________________________②启示性：________________________________________________________________________________故事的结局，“I”作为一个喜爱小动物的人，发现了这样一个group,可能会捐款？加入？…？“I”前文一直以为bikers很可怕，因为他们big，tough looking，结果却发现他们是爱护动物的好人，这说明 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.At that moment, I couldn’t believe my eyes, with my mind immediately getting blank and my mouth opening wide. So frozen and still at the theater gate was I, which made the bikers inside all throw cast their gazes on me that I felt nothing but my heart pounding even more strongly, completely unaware of what action I would adopt. I was not sure how much time had passed, but only greeted by each of the biker coming in from the outside who I had encountered in the deserted street.....After a while, the lights in the theater dimmed, the curtain opened, and the people in the theater became quiet, which meant that the movie had begun.我匆匆走进电影院，却发现里面还有更多骑机车的人。那一刻，我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛,我的脑海里顿时一片空白，嘴巴张得大大的。我一动不动地站在剧院门口，里面的车手们都向我投来异样的眼光，我只觉得我的心跳得更厉害了，完全不知道我将采取什么行动。我不知道时间过了多久,只看到我在空荡荡的街道上遇到的每一个从外面进来的车手都向我打招呼....不一会儿，剧院里的灯光变暗，幕布也随之拉开，剧场里的人也安静下来,这意味着电影开始了。When the film began, | realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.With of start recalling how ridiculous my overreaction had been instantly helped me no longer feel dangerous. Naturally, by the light from the film, I found a seat and sat next to a tough-look biker. After a short conversation with him, I expressed my wish to save abandoned dogs. Hearing this, he enthusiastically welcomed me to join the animal rescue group. Then, with the film ending, he introduced me to all the members. Seeing so many animal lovers around, I did believe we would find a way to help the wild live with us harmoniously together. At the same time,Ialso developed a new respect for their dedication and realized that never judge a book by its cover.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手应该是一个动物救援组织。一开始,回想起我的过度反应是多么可笑，立刻让我不再感到危险。我借着电影的光线,很顺利的找到了我的座位，坐在一个看起来很强悍的摩托车手旁边。 在和他简短的交谈之后，我表达了我想拯救被遗弃的狗狗的愿望。听到这些，他热情地欢迎我加入动物救助小组。然后，随着电影的结束，他把我介绍给所有的成员。看到周围有这么多动物爱好者,我确实相信我们会找到一种方法来帮助野生动物与我们和谐相处。同时，我也对他们的奉献精神产生了新的敬意，意识到不能以貌取人。Thank you!“Never judge a book by its cover.”