读后续写--未入荣誉社，却揽州奖归：信念的力量 讲义-山西省晋城市2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

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I burst through the back door. “Mum,” I said. “I’ve been nominated (提名) for the State Junior Honour Society.”
My mother gave my shoulders a squeeze. “I’m so proud of you.” she told me.
Mum and I sat together in the family room as I filled out the honour society application. I had to prove that that I had all the characteristics required in a candidate: scholarship, leadership, service, and citizenship. I wrote what I achieved in my study and my lasting efforts in raising money for the community. I was confident that I would make the school honour society. Based on my characteristics, my mum even said I was well qualified for a New York State Award.
The next day, I turned the paperwork into the advisor and didn’t think any more about it. Months went by, and I received a letter from the school about the honour society. As soon as the bus let me off that afternoon, I raced into the house.
“Mum,” I said, “I didn’t make the honour society.” She smiled, “Are you joking ” I felt tears in my eyes. “No, really, they didn’ t pick me,” I said and handed her the letter.
“Oh, honey, I’m sorry. I thought you were kidding,” my mother said. “There must be some mistake.” She grabbed the phone and called the honour society advisor. He told her that no mistake was made, but he couldn’t disclose the reason for my non-selection. Nearly all of my friends were chosen for the honour society except me. It was really hard for me.
Mum told me a story about a high school friend of hers. “He was intelligent and warm-hearted, but for some reason he wasn’t chosen for the State Honour Society. He was hurt and angry.” “Do you know what he does for a living now ” she asked. “He is a world-famous doctor, and he saves lives every day. You can make a difference too.”
I understood what my mum was trying to say. Not being a member of the honour society wasn’t going to ruin my good academic performance and my contribution to community.
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With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference.
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One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee.
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文章大意
“我” 被提名参加州少年荣誉协会，自信满满地填写申请，认为自己具备所有要求的特质，妈妈也觉得 “我” 有资格获得纽约州奖。数月后收到学校关于荣誉协会的通知，却得知自己未被选中，妈妈打电话询问也无果。妈妈给 “我” 讲了她高中朋友未入选荣誉协会，却成为著名医生拯救生命的故事，“我” 因此明白未入选荣誉协会不会影响自己的学业成绩和对社区的贡献。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 被提名参加州少年荣誉协会，认真填写申请，充满期待。
发展：“我” 未被荣誉协会选中，妈妈询问无果，给 “我” 讲朋友的故事开导 “我”，“我” 有所感悟。
高潮：续写部分将围绕 “我” 如何继续努力以及收到纽约州奖委员会信件后的情节展开，是故事的关键转折点。
结局（待续写）：要展现 “我” 在后续的成长和收获，以及纽约州奖委员会信件带来的影响，体现努力终有回报的主题。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
妈妈认为 “我” 有资格获得纽约州奖：在续写中，“我” 收到纽约州奖委员会的信件，可能与妈妈的预测相呼应，暗示 “我” 在其他方面得到认可。
“我” 的自信以及对自身特质的肯定：在后续努力过程中，“我” 会凭借自身的特质，如奖学金、领导力、服务和公民意识等，继续在学习和社区活动中发光发热，取得成绩。
妈妈讲述朋友未入选却成功的故事：“我” 会以妈妈朋友为榜样，不被挫折打倒，坚持努力，在自己的道路上取得成就，回应妈妈的鼓励。
“我” 理解未入选不影响自身价值：在续写中，“我” 会以积极的心态面对，继续保持良好的学术表现和对社区的贡献，用实际行动证明自己的价值。
“我” 决定继续努力并做出改变：在后续情节中，“我” 会通过具体行动，如参加更多学术竞赛、组织社区活动等，来体现自己的努力和改变，为收到纽约州奖委员会信件埋下伏笔。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述 “我” 在妈妈鼓励下的具体行动，如更加努力学习，在学术上取得新成绩；积极参与社区活动，组织公益项目，帮助更多人。展现 “我” 在坚持过程中的付出和收获，以及面对困难时的坚持。
第二段：讲述收到纽约州奖委员会信件的情景，信中的内容，如获奖原因、对自己的肯定等。描述自己的心情，如惊喜、激动、自豪等，以及对未来的展望，强调努力终会得到回报，升华主题。
情感线
起初，“我” 因未入选荣誉协会而感到失落和沮丧，妈妈的故事和鼓励让 “我” 从消极情绪中走出来，重新振作，决定继续努力。在努力的过程中，“我” 保持积极的心态，克服困难，不断成长。当收到纽约州奖委员会信件时，“我” 的心情从期待转为惊喜和自豪，深刻体会到努力的价值，对未来充满信心，完成了从挫折到成功的情感转变。
故事线（6 条）
“我” 被提名参加州少年荣誉协会，自信填写申请。
“我” 未被荣誉协会选中，妈妈询问无果，讲朋友故事开导 “我”。
“我” 在妈妈鼓励下，决定继续努力，在学习和社区活动中积极行动。
“我” 在学习上取得新成绩，在社区活动中组织公益项目，帮助他人。
“我” 收到纽约州奖委员会的信件。
“我” 得知获奖原因，感到惊喜和自豪，对未来充满信心。
主旨升华句
This experience taught me that setbacks are but stepping - stones to success, and as long as we persevere in our efforts, we will surely be recognized in the end.（这次经历告诉我，挫折只是成功的垫脚石，只要我们坚持不懈地努力，最终一定会得到认可。）
Through this journey, I realized that true value lies not in the recognition of a particular society but in the continuous pursuit of self - improvement and contribution to others.（通过这段经历，我意识到真正的价值不在于某个特定协会的认可，而在于不断追求自我提升和对他人的贡献。）
It dawned on me that being overlooked by one organization doesn't mean the end of our journey; instead, it can be the beginning of a more remarkable path filled with unexpected rewards.（我逐渐明白，被一个组织忽视并不意味着我们旅程的结束；相反，它可能是一条充满意外收获的更非凡道路的开始。）
This event served as a reminder that our efforts are always seen and rewarded in some way, and we should never give up on our dreams and the pursuit of excellence.（这件事提醒我们，我们的努力总会以某种方式被看到和回报，我们永远不应放弃梦想和对卓越的追求。）
In the end, I understood that the real victory is not in being selected by a certain group but in having the courage to face failure and the determination to keep moving forward, which will lead us to true success.（最后，我明白了真正的胜利不在于被某个特定群体选中，而在于有勇气面对失败和有决心继续前进，这将引领我们走向真正的成功。）
写作示范一
With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference. I threw myself into my studies, spending more time in the library, participating actively in various academic competitions. In the community, I organized a charity sale to raise funds for the local orphanage. It was tough at times, especially when facing difficulties in getting enough donations. But I remembered my mother's words and persevered. Slowly, my efforts paid off. I got excellent grades in the final exams and received praise from the school. The orphanage also expressed their gratitude for our help.
One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee. My heart pounded with excitement as I opened it. The letter stated that I was being awarded for my outstanding academic achievements and remarkable contributions to the community. I couldn't believe my eyes. All my hard work had finally been recognized. I rushed to share the good news with my mother. We hugged each other tightly, both of us filled with pride and joy. This award was not just a recognition for me but also a testament to the power of perseverance.
写作示范二
With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference. I joined a study group to help my classmates improve their grades. After school, we would gather in the library, discussing difficult problems and sharing learning methods. At the same time, I volunteered to teach kids in a community center. I prepared lessons carefully, trying to make the classes interesting and engaging. Although there were many challenges, such as students' different learning paces, I never gave up.
One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee. When I saw the envelope, I was both nervous and curious. As I unfolded the letter, I found that I was selected for the award because of my dedication to academic progress and community service. I was overjoyed. This award was a huge boost to my confidence. It made me realize that every little effort counts. I knew that no matter what challenges lay ahead, I would always stay true to myself and keep striving for excellence.
【答案】
With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference. I continued volunteering at the local community centre, mentoring younger students, and even started a club at school dedicated to promoting small acts of kindness. I cherished every chance for me to fully immerse myself in my passion for community service and cheered for my personal growth. Through these experiences, I realized that true success isn’t determined by a title. It’s about the impact we have on others’ lives. In the midst of my ongoing journey, an unexpected opportunity presented itself.
One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee. It informed me of being offered a special New York State Award in recognition of my good academic performance and continuous efforts in community service. Receiving the New York State Award was a defining moment for me. It was a reminder that my worth and achievements were not defined by a single society or organization. Seeing my smile, Mum hugged me, whispering, “Your hard work paid off.” At that moment, I truly feel the happiness of making positive impact on others not just for gaining an award.