读后续写 手机之外，是生活的旷野 讲义 山东省青岛市即墨区2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题

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A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy would ask for: a cell phone. I lived on that phone all summer. I always texted my friends, even at night. And I paid no attention to the people and things around myself. Being connected to the Internet was more important than being present.
So, you can imagine my displeasure when the time came for our family vacation that year. It was not the Disneyland trip or beach vacation that I had been hoping for. “This year,” my dad said, “we’ll be doing something special, something I used to do with my dad when I was a kid. We’re going camping in the forest!”
His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh, which was my communication style at that age. But he had made the decision and would not change his mind. I comforted myself by telling myself that it was still a vacation. I remained uninfluenced while they were busy preparing for the vacation.
My mind was on my phone, the texts flying back and forth. I focused on the screen in my hands so much that the first time I looked up was when we drove across a bridge on the trip to our campsite.
I looked out of the window and saw a fast-moving river. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot and smelled of trees. But that didn’t matter to me. The reason why I had looked up was something far more serious and annoying. My phone no longer had service. The signal was weak. During the last hour of the drive, there was no signal at all.
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When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face.
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The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun.
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文章大意
在即将上高中前，父母送了 “我” 一部手机，整个夏天 “我” 都沉迷其中，忽视周围的人和事。那年家庭度假，父亲决定去森林露营，这并非 “我” 期待的迪士尼或海滩度假，“我” 满心失望，但父亲主意已定。在去露营地的路上，“我” 一直玩手机，直到车开过一座桥时，发现手机信号变弱，最后一小时车程完全没信号。
故事山分析
开端：父母送 “我” 手机，“我” 沉迷其中，接着父亲决定家庭度假去森林露营，“我” 很失望。
发展：在去露营地的路上，“我” 一直玩手机，途中发现手机信号逐渐变弱直至消失。
高潮（待续写）：到达露营地后，“我” 没有手机可玩，可能会发生一些和露营相关的有趣或有意义的事情，第二天早上醒来也会有新的情节展开。
结局（待续写）：这次露营经历让 “我” 对生活和人际关系有新的认识，不再过度依赖手机。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
“我” 沉迷手机：在续写中可回应为 “我” 因没手机玩而无聊，开始关注露营地周围的事物，从而发现不一样的乐趣。
父亲决定露营：续写中父亲可能会带着 “我” 进行各种露营活动，如搭帐篷、生火做饭等，增进亲子关系。
去露营地路上看到的景色：在续写中可成为 “我” 欣赏自然美景的铺垫，如早上醒来看到美丽的森林景色，感受到大自然的魅力。
手机信号变弱到消失：这是一个关键伏笔，后续可围绕 “我” 没有手机后的反应和经历展开，如学会和家人交流、参与户外活动等。
“我” 对度假的失望：在续写中可通过露营的经历让 “我” 转变态度，从失望到喜欢这次露营。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：到达露营地后，“我” 因没手机不开心，父亲拉着 “我” 去搭帐篷，在过程中 “我” 不小心受伤，父亲细心照顾，让 “我” 感受到亲情的温暖，开始放下对手机的执念。
第二段：第二天早上醒来，“我” 看到美丽的森林景色，和家人一起做早餐，之后去森林里徒步，感受大自然的美好，深刻认识到生活中有比手机更重要的东西。
情感线
一开始 “我” 沉迷手机，对露营失望，到达露营地没手机时烦躁、沮丧。在父亲照顾和露营活动中，“我” 感受到亲情和露营的乐趣，心情逐渐转变为开心、满足。第二天醒来，欣赏自然美景，参与活动，“我” 彻底领悟到生活的美好，不再依赖手机，内心变得充实而快乐。
故事线
“我” 带着沮丧心情到达露营地，面对没手机的情况。
父亲拉 “我” 去搭帐篷，“我” 受伤，父亲照顾 “我”。
晚上 “我” 躺在床上，思考白天的经历。
第二天早上醒来，“我” 欣赏美丽景色。
和家人一起做早餐，之后去森林徒步。
结束露营，“我” 带着对生活新的认识回家。
主旨升华句
This camping trip taught me that true happiness lies not in the virtual world of the phone, but in the real - life experiences and the love shared with family.（这次露营之旅让我明白，真正的幸福不在于手机的虚拟世界，而在于现实生活中的经历以及与家人分享的爱。）
Through this adventure, I realized that disconnecting from the digital world could lead to a deeper connection with nature and the people around me.（通过这次冒险，我意识到与数字世界断开连接能让我与自然以及身边的人建立更深刻的联系。）
The camping experience opened my eyes to the beauty of the real world, reminding me that there is so much more to life than what is on the screen of a phone.（这次露营经历让我看到了现实世界的美好，提醒我生活中有比手机屏幕上更多的东西。）
This trip was not just a vacation, but a journey of self - discovery, making me understand the importance of being present and cherishing every moment with loved ones.（这次旅行不仅仅是一次度假，更是一次自我发现之旅，让我明白活在当下以及珍惜与亲人相处的每一刻的重要性。）
As I left the campsite, I carried with me a new perspective on life, one that valued real - world interactions and the wonders of nature over the constant pull of the digital realm.（当我离开露营地时，我带着对生活的新看法，即重视现实世界的互动和大自然的奇妙，而不是数字世界的无尽诱惑。）
写作示范一
When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face. The lack of phone service felt like a punishment. Dad seemed to notice my mood but said nothing. He handed me a tent and asked me to help him set it up. Reluctantly, I started working. Suddenly, I accidentally cut my finger while handling the tent poles. I let out a cry of pain. Dad rushed to me, his eyes filled with concern. He carefully cleaned the wound and bandaged it. At that moment, I realized how much he cared about me, and my annoyance at the camping trip began to fade.
The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun. The forest was filled with the sweet songs of birds. I stepped out of the tent and saw Mom making breakfast over the campfire. Dad invited me to go on a hike with him. As we walked through the forest, I was amazed by the beautiful scenery around me. The tall trees, colorful flowers, and clear streams made me forget all about my phone. I finally understood that there was a wonderful world waiting for me to explore beyond the screen.
写作示范二
When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face. I sat on a log, sulking, while my parents busied themselves with unloading the car. Dad came over and tried to get me involved in setting up the campsite. I half - heartedly helped, still longing for my phone. As we were building the fire, I lost my balance and almost fell into the fire pit. Dad quickly caught me, saving me from getting hurt. His strong arms around me made me feel safe and loved. I started to think that maybe this camping trip wasn't all bad.
The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun. The fresh air filled my lungs, and I felt refreshed. We had a simple but delicious breakfast together. Then, we decided to explore the forest. Along the way, we found different kinds of plants and even saw a small deer. I was completely absorbed in the beauty of nature. By the end of the trip, I had learned that life without a phone could be just as, if not more, exciting and meaningful.
【答案】
When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face. My phone showed no signal, and I felt like I was cut off from the world. Dad noticed my disappointment and said, “This is a chance to enjoy nature.” I reluctantly followed them, setting up the tent. As I walked around, I began to notice the beauty of the forest. The tall trees and the sound of birds made me feel a bit better. Maybe this trip wouldn’t be so bad after all.
The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun. I opened my eyes and saw the golden light filtering through the trees. The air was fresh, and I felt a sense of peace. Dad was already up, cooking breakfast. We sat around the fire, sharing stories and laughing. I realized that without my phone, I was more connected to my family and nature. This trip taught me that sometimes, disconnecting can help us reconnect with what truly matters.